人教版(2019)必修第一册 Unit 1 Teenager Life Reading for Writing(共15张ppt)

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(共15张PPT)
Reading for Writing
人教(2019)必修第一册
Unit 1 Teenage Life
Lead in
Free Talk
1. If you were her, what would you do
2. Can you write a letter of advice to her to offer her your advice
3. How to write a letter of advice
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Read for details
Read the letter of advice and answer the questions below.
1. What is Worried Friend’s problem
2. What suggestions does Susan Luo give to Worried Friend
3. Besides suggestions, what else does Susan Luo say in her letter
Worried Friend is worried that his or her friend, Chen Lei, plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
Talk to your friend about his behaviour; encourage your friend to try new hobbies; discuss the problem together
She expresses her understanding for Worried Friend’s problem and feelings.
She also talks about the harmful effects of computer addiction.
Read for structure
1. What are the necessary parts of a
letter of advice
Find and mark the parts of the letter that match the following points.
A. I know what the problem is
B. I understand how you feel.
C. This is my advice and reasons.
D. I think my advice will help.
2. What is included in Body Part
Find and mark the parts of the letter that match the following points.
A I know what the problem is.
B I understand how you feel.
C This is my advice and reason(s).
D I think my advice will help.
Read for structure
Read for structure
A letter of advice should include the four parts:
1. I know what the problem is.
2. I understand how you feel.
3. This is my advice and reason (s).
4. I think my advice will help.
点明问题
表示理解
提出建议和理由
表达愿望
文章开头
文章主体段
文章结尾
Useful sentences structures
首段:先明确来信人的问题,表达理解来信人的感受,注意语气。
I am sorry to know/hear that...
I have met the same problems as you before so I totally understand your feelings.
You have asked for my advice about... and I will try to make some suggestions.
I am writing to express my views concerning(关于)...
…Here are a few suggestions about ...
Here come some tips for you.
You wrote that you are very worried about...I understand quite well that...
Useful sentences structures
第二段:提出建议,说明建议的理由和对解决问题的期望。
As far as I am concerned.../In my opinion...
If I were you, I would…
It would be a good idea if you...
You’d better do...
I’d like to suggest...
It’s a wise choice if you...
Why don’t you...
Maybe you’re supposed to do.
I recommend that you should do sth
I think you should...
Why not do sth
过渡衔接语,让文章更具条理。
1.Firstly ,Besides,in addition.
2.Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly/Finally.
3.First,Then, Finally.
4.First of all,What’more, last but not least.
Useful sentences structures
结尾段:希望建议得到采纳并祝愿,或盼望回复。
In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.
I believe you will take my advice into consideration.
I feel that it would be helpful if you stick to (坚持)it.
I am looking forward to your reply/hearing from you.
I believe that if you follow my advice, you will...
Discussion
What suggestions will you offer to her and what are the reasons
Drafting
Draft your letter
Evaluation scores
1.Are all the parts of a letter included and organized in good order? 1 2 3 4 5
2.Does the writer give reasons for the advice? 1 2 3 4 5
3.Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions? 1 2 3 4 5
4.Does the writer use commas and stops correctly 1 2 3 4 5
5.Is the handwriting easy to read? 1 2 3 4 5
Work in pairs and exchange your drafts. Use the checklist to give feedback on your partner’s draft.
Evaluation
Sample writing
Dear Xu Ting,
You wrote that you always feel lonely after school because your parents work in another city. I understand how you feel. It is common for teenagers to feel lonely when they live away from their parents.
Firs of all, I recommend you try joining a volunteer group that helps other people, because this will give you a chance to meet and be around others. It will also help you realise that you are not alone in having problems and that many other people have problems, too. Besides, I think you can connect with your parents online. Just because your parents are far away, it doesn’t mean you can’t talk to them. Last but not least, why not concentrate on your study instead of being stuck in(陷入...) the loneliness. I am sure that you will feel better.
I hope you can find my suggestions helpful.
Best wishes,
Susan Luo
Summary
problems and understanding
Advice and reasons
A letter of advice
Wish and Hope
Homework
Write a letter of advice to one of the following two boys.