Module 2 Unit 5 The human brain Period 4 Writing（提升效率）主题写作 牛津上海版九年级英语上册 课件 (共21张PPT)
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(共21张PPT)
Unit5 The human brain
Writing
How to improve study efficiency
Para 1: Briefly introduce ___ ideas
Idea 1:
Using various memorizing method
Idea 2:
Taking special care of your health
●Stimulating your brain
●Focusing your attention
●Linking information with pictures
●Taking notes
●Being organized
●Keeping a diary
●Having a healthy diet
●Having enough sleep and rest
●Being relaxed
●Keeping fit
●Having regular health checks
2
Para 2
Para 3
Para 4
Para 5
Supporting details
Supporting details
Para 1: Go straight to the topic
Idea 1: Using various memorizing methods
Idea 2: Taking special care of your health
Para 2:
●Stimulating your brain
Para 3:
●Linking information with pictures
●Focusing your attention
●Taking notes
●Being organized
●Keeping a diary
Para 4:
●Having a healthy diet
●Having enough sleep and rest
Para 5:
●Being relaxed
●Keeping fit
●Having regular health checks
Supporting details
Beginning
Para 2:
●Stimulating your brain
●Focusing your attention
It is important that you regularly stimulate your brain to make your memory more efficient. For example, you can do activities that you do not usually do and change your daily habits. Learning a new skill helps your brain develop. When trying to memorize something, you should focus your attention and concentrate on the most important things about it. Do not allow other thoughts to enter your mind because this will lower your chances of remembering things accurately.
An excellent way to help memory is to link information with pictures. Try to see the images in your mind. Taking notes, being organized and keeping a diary will also be useful tools.
Para 3:
●Linking information with pictures
●Taking notes
●Being organized
●Keeping a diary
Para 2:
●Stimulating your brain
●Focusing your attention
It is important that you regularly stimulate your brain to make your memory more efficient. For example, you can do activities that you do not usually do and change your daily habits. Learning a new skill helps your brain develop. When trying to memorize something, you should focus your attention and concentrate on the most important things about it. Do not allow other thoughts to enter your mind because this will lower your chances of remembering things accurately.
What
Why
Why If not
Example
Counter-example
When
How
Why
Healthy food and plenty of vitamins are essential for your memory to work properly. Drinking a lot of water also helps maintain your memory. You must allow your brain to have enough sleep and rest too. When you are asleep, your brain stores memory. Not enough sleep can, therefore, cause problems with storing information. In addition, being tired will stop you from being able to concentrate well. Caffeine in tea and coffee is very good at preventing sleepiness and helping concentration, but some people believe they may cause problems with memory.
Para 5:
●Being relaxed
●Keeping fit
●Having regular health checks
In order to concentrate well, you must be relaxed. Generally keeping fit and having regular health checks are both important as well, and not just for improving your memory.
Para 4:
●Having a healthy diet
●Having enough sleep and rest
Why
If not
More information
Idea 1
Idea 2
●Stimulating your brain
●Focusing your attention
●Linking information with pictures
●Taking notes
●Being organized
●Keeping a diary
●Having a healthy diet
●Having enough sleep and rest
●Being relaxed
●Keeping fit
●Having regular health checks
2
Para 2
Para 3
Para 4
Para 5
Para 1: Briefly introduce two ideas
Example
Counter-example
Explanation
Counter-example
More information
Idea 2
In addition, it is also essential to ……
Idea 1
To improve efficiency, ……
Para 1: Briefly introduce two ideas to improve efficiency.
Para 1: Briefly introduce two ideas to improve study efficiency.
Idea 2
In addition, it is also essential to apply different study methods.
1. study group
Why is ‘a quiet environment’ important
What if I study in a noisy environment
……
Idea 1
To improve study efficiency, it is of importance to have a good study environment.
A quiet environment
A tidy study
Para 1: Briefly introduce two ideas to improve study efficiency.
2. take notes
3. ask teachers for help
How to improve study efficiency
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Briefly introduce two ideas to improve efficiency.
Idea 1 + supporting details + further information.
Idea 2 + supporting details × 3+.
Criteria（评分标准） My writing My partner’s
Two ideas are briefly introduced in Para. 1.
Two ideas are related to the topic.
In Idea 1, further information is provided to support and explain.
The further information in Idea 1 is related to the topic sentence.
In Idea 2, various supporting details are used.
The various supporting details in Idea 2 are related to the topic sentence.
There are at most 4 grammatical mistakes.
Excellent expressions/ phrases are used.
Excellent sentence patterns are used.
Clear structure is applied.
Total Score
Using
1．你是英语校报编辑李华，校报收到初一新生Ben的来信，他提出了两个面临的问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，说明Ben的问题，提出你的建议并且陈述理由。
注意：
（1）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）词数100—110；
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名、地名和校名。
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having troubles getting used to life in middle school. Your letter said that ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
Ben’s problems Your advice and reasons
朋友少，感觉孤单 1. 参加学校社团，可以结识更多朋友；2. 对别人友好，这样别人也会同样对待自己
英语单词难记 1. 多读英语故事，多看英语新闻，通过阅读记单词；2. 制作单词卡片，方便记忆3. 应该经常复习所学过的单词。
Sample article
【答案】例文
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having troubles getting used to life in middle school. Your letter said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends. I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school. In this way, you can make more friends who share the same interest with you. Besides, you’d better be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. On the other hand, you found it difficult to remember English words. Reading more English stories and news can help you learn English words in a practical way. In addition, if you make word cards, it will be easier for you to remember more words. What’s more, review the words you have learnt as often as possible. I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出；
第二步，根据对方的问题提出相应的建议；
第三步，表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①have troubles doing sth做某事有困难
②get used to习惯
③because of因为
④be friendly to对……友好
[高分句型]
①I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school.（宾语从句）
②On the other hand, you found it difficult to remember English words.（动词不定式作宾语）
Using
2．假如你叫李华，你的英国朋友尼克（Nick）来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你用英语写一封回信，给他介绍一些学好中文的方法。80 词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。内容必须包含以下提示：
Dear Nick,I’m glad to receive your letter,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
How to learn Chinese Well make friends
take Chinese lessons
be interested in Chinese
listen to Chinese songs
…
Sample article
【答案】例文
Dear Nick,
I’m glad to receive your letter, you asked me how to learn Chinese well. Here are my suggestions.
First, you can make more Chinese friends. Because the purpose of learning Chinese is to use it, you can communicate with Chinese friends more, which will certainly improve the level of Chinese. Second, you have to take Chinese lessons. You can learn some basic grammar and general knowledge from the class. Third, you must be interested in Chinese, because interest is the best teacher. Fourth, you can listen to some Chinese songs and watch some Chinese TV and books.
I hope my suggestions will help you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先承接短文开头。
第二步，介绍一些学好中文的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①the purpose of……的目的
②the level of……的水平
③be interested in对……感兴趣
④listen to听
[高分句型]
①Because the purpose of learning Chinese is to use it, you can communicate with Chinese friends more, which will certainly improve the level of Chinese.（Because引导的原因状语从句）
②Third, you must be interested in Chinese, because interest is the best teacher.（because引导的原因状语从句）
③I hope my suggestions will help you.（省略that的宾语从句）
Using
3．假如你是李华，你的笔友Sally的班级正在开展“Good learning habits we should develop”的调研活动。于是Sally给你写了一封邮件想询问你有哪些好的学习习惯。请你结合下面图示信息，根据自身经历给Sally回一封邮件，分享你的学习习惯。
写作要求：
1)文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3)词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：effective 有效的
Dear Sally,
I’m very glad to hear from you. ______________________________________________________________________________
——————————————————————————————————————————————————
——————————————————————————————————————————————————
Yours，
Li Hua
Sample article
【答案】范文：
Dear Sally,
I’m very glad to hear from you. To be honest, good learning habits play an important role in my study. Firstly, by making a study plan, I can know what to study every day clearly and make full use of my time. In addition, I try to take notes while having a class, which makes me focus on the lessons instead of paying attention to things that aren’t important. What’s more, preparing lessons before class can improve my self-learning ability, and I am able to understand some key points and the goals of the lessons better. The last but not least, I usually review what I’ve learnt. It’s quite effective.
In a word, without the help of these good habits, I can’t learn better. I hope my learning habits can be helpful to you.
Yours,
LiHua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，主要是一封电子邮件；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：结合图片，适当增加细节使行文连贯，注意不要遗漏图片所给的关键信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步：点明主题，引出下文；
第二步：从图片提供的三个方面进行介绍，并补充自己的另外一个方面；
第三步：总结全文，表明自己对好的学习习惯的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①to be honest老实讲，老实说
②make full use of充分利用
③pay attention to关注
[高分句型]
①I try to take notes while having a class, which makes me focus on the lessons instead of paying attention to things that aren’t important. (定语从句)
②I usually review what I’ve learnt. (宾语从句)
Using
4．“以史为鉴、察往知来”，作为中学生的我们，学好历史非常重要，怎样让它变得更加有趣呢？为此，你班同学昨天进行了讨论。请你根据下面的表格要点提示及要求，以“Ways to make history study more interesting”为题写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿，介绍你班同学和你的想法和原因（补充你的想法和原因）。
要求：1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数80~120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Ways to make history study more interesting
Yesterday, we had a discussion on how to make history study more interesting. Here are our ideas.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We can find many useful ways to make history study more interesting as long as we try our best.
写作要点 具体内容
What’s your classmates’ idea to make history study more interesting ①go to the library（many interesting history books there）②visit the museum（exhibitions on history there is very lively）
What’s your idea to make history study more interesting ……
Sample article
【答案】例文
Ways to make history study more interesting
Yesterday, we had a discussion on how to make history study more interesting. Here are our ideas.
Some of my classmates think going to the library to read some books on history is a good way. In the library, there are lots of history books that we’re interested in. Others think visiting the museum often can help us have a better understanding of the past history because the exhibitions on history there is very lively.
As for me, I think going traveling and visiting some places of interest can help us learn history while having fun because interest is the best teacher.
We can find many useful ways to make history study more interesting as long as we try our best.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇征文，为话题作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：文章为第一人称，介绍班级同学关于怎样学习历史更有趣的意见和自己的建议，要点阐述清楚，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述昨天的讨论，引出主题；
第二步，具体介绍班上同学的观点关于怎样学习历史更有趣；
第三步，介绍自己的观点关于怎样学习历史更有趣。
第四步，总结。
[亮点词汇]
① be interested in对……感兴趣
② places of interest名胜古迹
③ having fun玩得高兴
④ as long as只要
⑤ try one’s best尽最大的努力
⑥ as for me依我之见
[高分句型]
①Some of my classmates think going to the library to read some books on history is a good way.（宾语从句）
②In the library, there are lots of history books that we’re interested in.（there be句型+定语从句）
③Others think visiting the museum often can help us have a better understanding of the past history because the exhibitions on history there is very lively.（宾语从句+动词ing作主语+原因状语从句）
Using
5．假如你是李华，以前你学习兴趣不足，习惯不好，因此学习成绩不理想，后来你制定计划、有效学习，成绩发生了改变。请你分享一下你的学习经历，介绍一下你的学习经验。
要求：
1. 语言通顺，语法正确，全文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息；
3. 短文不少于80词。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sample article
【答案】例文
A year ago, I was not interested in learning and my study habits were not good. This led to my poor learning. And every exam made me feel nervous and worried. In order to improve my grades, I made some study plans.
Firstly, preview before class. Secondly, I spent time reviewing what I learned that day after class. Finally, I also found some exercises to deepen my understanding.
Strictly following these plans has made great progress in my grades. It also fills me with confidence.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己过去的学习情况；
第二步，分享制定的学习计划；
第三步，总结收获。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②lead to导致
③deepen understanding加深理解
④make progress取得进步
[高分句型]
①In order to improve my grades, I made some study plans.（不定式表目的）
②Strictly following these plans has made great progress in my grades.（动名词作主语）
Unit5 The human brain
Writing
How to improve study efficiency
Para 1: Briefly introduce ___ ideas
Idea 1:
Using various memorizing method
Idea 2:
Taking special care of your health
●Stimulating your brain
●Focusing your attention
●Linking information with pictures
●Taking notes
●Being organized
●Keeping a diary
●Having a healthy diet
●Having enough sleep and rest
●Being relaxed
●Keeping fit
●Having regular health checks
2
Para 2
Para 3
Para 4
Para 5
Supporting details
Supporting details
Para 1: Go straight to the topic
Idea 1: Using various memorizing methods
Idea 2: Taking special care of your health
Para 2:
●Stimulating your brain
Para 3:
●Linking information with pictures
●Focusing your attention
●Taking notes
●Being organized
●Keeping a diary
Para 4:
●Having a healthy diet
●Having enough sleep and rest
Para 5:
●Being relaxed
●Keeping fit
●Having regular health checks
Supporting details
Beginning
Para 2:
●Stimulating your brain
●Focusing your attention
It is important that you regularly stimulate your brain to make your memory more efficient. For example, you can do activities that you do not usually do and change your daily habits. Learning a new skill helps your brain develop. When trying to memorize something, you should focus your attention and concentrate on the most important things about it. Do not allow other thoughts to enter your mind because this will lower your chances of remembering things accurately.
An excellent way to help memory is to link information with pictures. Try to see the images in your mind. Taking notes, being organized and keeping a diary will also be useful tools.
Para 3:
●Linking information with pictures
●Taking notes
●Being organized
●Keeping a diary
Para 2:
●Stimulating your brain
●Focusing your attention
It is important that you regularly stimulate your brain to make your memory more efficient. For example, you can do activities that you do not usually do and change your daily habits. Learning a new skill helps your brain develop. When trying to memorize something, you should focus your attention and concentrate on the most important things about it. Do not allow other thoughts to enter your mind because this will lower your chances of remembering things accurately.
What
Why
Why If not
Example
Counter-example
When
How
Why
Healthy food and plenty of vitamins are essential for your memory to work properly. Drinking a lot of water also helps maintain your memory. You must allow your brain to have enough sleep and rest too. When you are asleep, your brain stores memory. Not enough sleep can, therefore, cause problems with storing information. In addition, being tired will stop you from being able to concentrate well. Caffeine in tea and coffee is very good at preventing sleepiness and helping concentration, but some people believe they may cause problems with memory.
Para 5:
●Being relaxed
●Keeping fit
●Having regular health checks
In order to concentrate well, you must be relaxed. Generally keeping fit and having regular health checks are both important as well, and not just for improving your memory.
Para 4:
●Having a healthy diet
●Having enough sleep and rest
Why
If not
More information
Idea 1
Idea 2
●Stimulating your brain
●Focusing your attention
●Linking information with pictures
●Taking notes
●Being organized
●Keeping a diary
●Having a healthy diet
●Having enough sleep and rest
●Being relaxed
●Keeping fit
●Having regular health checks
2
Para 2
Para 3
Para 4
Para 5
Para 1: Briefly introduce two ideas
Example
Counter-example
Explanation
Counter-example
More information
Idea 2
In addition, it is also essential to ……
Idea 1
To improve efficiency, ……
Para 1: Briefly introduce two ideas to improve efficiency.
Para 1: Briefly introduce two ideas to improve study efficiency.
Idea 2
In addition, it is also essential to apply different study methods.
1. study group
Why is ‘a quiet environment’ important
What if I study in a noisy environment
……
Idea 1
To improve study efficiency, it is of importance to have a good study environment.
A quiet environment
A tidy study
Para 1: Briefly introduce two ideas to improve study efficiency.
2. take notes
3. ask teachers for help
How to improve study efficiency
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Briefly introduce two ideas to improve efficiency.
Idea 1 + supporting details + further information.
Idea 2 + supporting details × 3+.
Criteria（评分标准） My writing My partner’s
Two ideas are briefly introduced in Para. 1.
Two ideas are related to the topic.
In Idea 1, further information is provided to support and explain.
The further information in Idea 1 is related to the topic sentence.
In Idea 2, various supporting details are used.
The various supporting details in Idea 2 are related to the topic sentence.
There are at most 4 grammatical mistakes.
Excellent expressions/ phrases are used.
Excellent sentence patterns are used.
Clear structure is applied.
Total Score
Using
1．你是英语校报编辑李华，校报收到初一新生Ben的来信，他提出了两个面临的问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，说明Ben的问题，提出你的建议并且陈述理由。
注意：
（1）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）词数100—110；
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名、地名和校名。
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having troubles getting used to life in middle school. Your letter said that ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
Ben’s problems Your advice and reasons
朋友少，感觉孤单 1. 参加学校社团，可以结识更多朋友；2. 对别人友好，这样别人也会同样对待自己
英语单词难记 1. 多读英语故事，多看英语新闻，通过阅读记单词；2. 制作单词卡片，方便记忆3. 应该经常复习所学过的单词。
Sample article
【答案】例文
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having troubles getting used to life in middle school. Your letter said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends. I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school. In this way, you can make more friends who share the same interest with you. Besides, you’d better be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. On the other hand, you found it difficult to remember English words. Reading more English stories and news can help you learn English words in a practical way. In addition, if you make word cards, it will be easier for you to remember more words. What’s more, review the words you have learnt as often as possible. I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出；
第二步，根据对方的问题提出相应的建议；
第三步，表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①have troubles doing sth做某事有困难
②get used to习惯
③because of因为
④be friendly to对……友好
[高分句型]
①I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school.（宾语从句）
②On the other hand, you found it difficult to remember English words.（动词不定式作宾语）
Using
2．假如你叫李华，你的英国朋友尼克（Nick）来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你用英语写一封回信，给他介绍一些学好中文的方法。80 词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。内容必须包含以下提示：
Dear Nick,I’m glad to receive your letter,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
How to learn Chinese Well make friends
take Chinese lessons
be interested in Chinese
listen to Chinese songs
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【答案】例文
Dear Nick,
I’m glad to receive your letter, you asked me how to learn Chinese well. Here are my suggestions.
First, you can make more Chinese friends. Because the purpose of learning Chinese is to use it, you can communicate with Chinese friends more, which will certainly improve the level of Chinese. Second, you have to take Chinese lessons. You can learn some basic grammar and general knowledge from the class. Third, you must be interested in Chinese, because interest is the best teacher. Fourth, you can listen to some Chinese songs and watch some Chinese TV and books.
I hope my suggestions will help you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先承接短文开头。
第二步，介绍一些学好中文的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①the purpose of……的目的
②the level of……的水平
③be interested in对……感兴趣
④listen to听
[高分句型]
①Because the purpose of learning Chinese is to use it, you can communicate with Chinese friends more, which will certainly improve the level of Chinese.（Because引导的原因状语从句）
②Third, you must be interested in Chinese, because interest is the best teacher.（because引导的原因状语从句）
③I hope my suggestions will help you.（省略that的宾语从句）
Using
3．假如你是李华，你的笔友Sally的班级正在开展“Good learning habits we should develop”的调研活动。于是Sally给你写了一封邮件想询问你有哪些好的学习习惯。请你结合下面图示信息，根据自身经历给Sally回一封邮件，分享你的学习习惯。
写作要求：
1)文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3)词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：effective 有效的
Dear Sally,
I’m very glad to hear from you. ______________________________________________________________________________
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Yours，
Li Hua
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【答案】范文：
Dear Sally,
I’m very glad to hear from you. To be honest, good learning habits play an important role in my study. Firstly, by making a study plan, I can know what to study every day clearly and make full use of my time. In addition, I try to take notes while having a class, which makes me focus on the lessons instead of paying attention to things that aren’t important. What’s more, preparing lessons before class can improve my self-learning ability, and I am able to understand some key points and the goals of the lessons better. The last but not least, I usually review what I’ve learnt. It’s quite effective.
In a word, without the help of these good habits, I can’t learn better. I hope my learning habits can be helpful to you.
Yours,
LiHua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，主要是一封电子邮件；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：结合图片，适当增加细节使行文连贯，注意不要遗漏图片所给的关键信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步：点明主题，引出下文；
第二步：从图片提供的三个方面进行介绍，并补充自己的另外一个方面；
第三步：总结全文，表明自己对好的学习习惯的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①to be honest老实讲，老实说
②make full use of充分利用
③pay attention to关注
[高分句型]
①I try to take notes while having a class, which makes me focus on the lessons instead of paying attention to things that aren’t important. (定语从句)
②I usually review what I’ve learnt. (宾语从句)
Using
4．“以史为鉴、察往知来”，作为中学生的我们，学好历史非常重要，怎样让它变得更加有趣呢？为此，你班同学昨天进行了讨论。请你根据下面的表格要点提示及要求，以“Ways to make history study more interesting”为题写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿，介绍你班同学和你的想法和原因（补充你的想法和原因）。
要求：1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数80~120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Ways to make history study more interesting
Yesterday, we had a discussion on how to make history study more interesting. Here are our ideas.
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We can find many useful ways to make history study more interesting as long as we try our best.
写作要点 具体内容
What’s your classmates’ idea to make history study more interesting ①go to the library（many interesting history books there）②visit the museum（exhibitions on history there is very lively）
What’s your idea to make history study more interesting ……
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【答案】例文
Ways to make history study more interesting
Yesterday, we had a discussion on how to make history study more interesting. Here are our ideas.
Some of my classmates think going to the library to read some books on history is a good way. In the library, there are lots of history books that we’re interested in. Others think visiting the museum often can help us have a better understanding of the past history because the exhibitions on history there is very lively.
As for me, I think going traveling and visiting some places of interest can help us learn history while having fun because interest is the best teacher.
We can find many useful ways to make history study more interesting as long as we try our best.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇征文，为话题作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：文章为第一人称，介绍班级同学关于怎样学习历史更有趣的意见和自己的建议，要点阐述清楚，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述昨天的讨论，引出主题；
第二步，具体介绍班上同学的观点关于怎样学习历史更有趣；
第三步，介绍自己的观点关于怎样学习历史更有趣。
第四步，总结。
[亮点词汇]
① be interested in对……感兴趣
② places of interest名胜古迹
③ having fun玩得高兴
④ as long as只要
⑤ try one’s best尽最大的努力
⑥ as for me依我之见
[高分句型]
①Some of my classmates think going to the library to read some books on history is a good way.（宾语从句）
②In the library, there are lots of history books that we’re interested in.（there be句型+定语从句）
③Others think visiting the museum often can help us have a better understanding of the past history because the exhibitions on history there is very lively.（宾语从句+动词ing作主语+原因状语从句）
Using
5．假如你是李华，以前你学习兴趣不足，习惯不好，因此学习成绩不理想，后来你制定计划、有效学习，成绩发生了改变。请你分享一下你的学习经历，介绍一下你的学习经验。
要求：
1. 语言通顺，语法正确，全文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息；
3. 短文不少于80词。
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【答案】例文
A year ago, I was not interested in learning and my study habits were not good. This led to my poor learning. And every exam made me feel nervous and worried. In order to improve my grades, I made some study plans.
Firstly, preview before class. Secondly, I spent time reviewing what I learned that day after class. Finally, I also found some exercises to deepen my understanding.
Strictly following these plans has made great progress in my grades. It also fills me with confidence.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己过去的学习情况；
第二步，分享制定的学习计划；
第三步，总结收获。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②lead to导致
③deepen understanding加深理解
④make progress取得进步
[高分句型]
①In order to improve my grades, I made some study plans.（不定式表目的）
②Strictly following these plans has made great progress in my grades.（动名词作主语）