人教版九年级英语Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to. Section B Writing 课件(共28张PPT)

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writing
Unit 9
I like music that I can dance to.
Section B 3a~Self Check
To review key phrases and sentences that express
preferences.
To learn to write a passage about your favorite kind
of music/movie and your favorite song/movie.
To check yourself.
Learning objectives
What kind of music do you like
pop music
I like music that I can dance to it.
I like music that can make me relax.
What kind of music do you like
light music
I like music that is quiet.
I like music that can make me comfortable.
What kind of music do you like
rock music
I like music that is loud and energetic.
I like music that can make me excited.
What kind of music do you like
Children's songs
I like music that is lively.
I like music that can make me happy.
What kind of music do you like
Chinese folk music
I like music that I can sense both beauty and the sadness.
I like music that can make me think about the pain and wounds.
What kind of movie do you like
action movies
I like movies that make me excited.
I like movies that teach me to face difficulties bravely .
What kind of movie do you like
comedies
I like movies that make me relaxed.
I like movies that help me to keep the good mood.
What kind of movie do you like
cartoons
I like movies that is interesting.
I like movies that give me something to think about.
What kind of movie do you know
scary movies
I like movies that make me scared but excited.
I like movies that can help me replease my presssure.
What kind of movie do you know
documentaries
I like movies that provide plenty of information.
I like movies that I can learn more about history.
Favorite kind of music/movie Why I like this song/movie
Why I like this kind of music/movie How this song/movie makes me feel
Favorite song/movie Why I think others should listen to/watch this song/movie
Historical drama
Makes me aware of some important historical events and how they affected people’s lives
Gone with the Wind
It has a very interesting storyline and an excellent cast.
Deeply moved-sad about the effects of war, but I'm hopeful for the human spirit.
It’s one of the best movies of all time.
What kind of music or movies do you like best What is your favorite song/ movie Make notes in the chart below.
3a
Use your notes to write an article for a newspaper or magazine to tell people about your favorite kind of music/movie and your favorite song/movie.
Useful expressions：
My favorite kind of music/movie is…
I like… because …
It was…by…
When I listen to /watch it, I feel…
I think you should listen to/watch it too because …
3b
本单元以“Music and Movies”为话题，通过对音乐和电影等相关材料的学习，学生能够学会谈论自己的兴趣、爱好，准确地表达自己对某事物的好恶，感悟生活的愉悦与精彩。
话题分析
person
人称
第一人称:
I like…best.
I feel…when I listen to/watch…
第三人称：
My favorite movie/song is …….
It is about….
注意主次人称，避免导致人称混乱
tense
时态
一般现在时
I like movies/songs that …….
一般过去时
When I first watched /listened to it , I felt……
写作思路点拨
引入话题：My favorite song changes depending on how I feel that day.
介绍自己喜欢的音乐：When I’m down and tired, I prefer songs which can cheer me up…
表达自己的观点：Life without songs will be empty and meaningless. If you feel like listening to something, choose a song that you like best.
主要用定语从句来表达自己偏爱的音乐和事物，并阐述自己的观点。
My Favorite Song
My favorite song changes depending on how I feel that day. Usually I like songs that have great lyrics or rhythm.
When I’m down and tired, I prefer songs which can cheer me up, songs like Big Big World are my first choice because they are delightful and easy to follow. The lyrics may be simple, but very cheerful, and the rhythm, too.When I sing along with them, I feel refreshed and relaxed. If I’m stressed out or uneasy, I love to listen to songs that are gentle and quiet, Our Canon in D is my favorite, which is performed by two people, a guitarist and a singer. The guitar player is great, the lyrics are comforting and the singer sings perfectly. After listening to it, I’ll calm down and gain my strength again.
Life without songs will be empty and meaningless. If you feel like listening to something, choose a song that you like best.
Sample writing:
开篇点题
展开描述
结尾总述
It's time to write!
一阶段：审题立意
某英语报社正在向学生征稿，题目是“my favorite movies”。
假如你是李华，请你写一篇英语短文向该报社投稿，谈谈你最喜欢的电影并说明理由。
要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，不少于80字。
人称：第一人称
体裁：应用文 时态：一般现在时
二阶段：谋篇布局
总述
具体介绍
表达感情
My name is...
In my spare time, I like movies which...
My favorite movie is...
The story is about...
He is born to...
However, his tries his best to...
It makes me...
... influence me a lot.
What's more, the songs...
In short/In a word, the movie...
It is well worth watching.
Outline:
sing along with 跟着……—起唱
in spare time 在空闲时间
cheer up（使)变得更高兴;振奋起来
plenty of 大量;充足
depend on 视……而定;取决于
be born in/on 出生于
try one ‘s best to do sth. 尽全力做某事
stick to 坚持;固守
not only ... but also... 不但……而且……
in this way 这样;通过这种方法
remind... of .../ make... recall... 提醒……;使……想起……
be full of/ be filled with 充满;装满
短语储备
三阶段：积句成篇
范文欣赏
My Favorite Movie
I'm Li Hua. My favorite movie is Transformers. This film was made by a famous director who is named Michael Bay in America. I am shocked by the high-techs and computer special effects that it uses. I like it very much because it has plenty of huge scenes and famous movie stars.
Besides, when I see it I feel very happy for its wonderful story, and it teaches me to respect anybody who protects us. This film tells us that we should be brave to fight the enemies and have the courage to live in the danger. It also has a lot of robot toys that I like. I think you should watch it because it not only can cheer you up but also gives you a strong heart and confidence.
In a word, the movie is really fantastic. It is well worth watching.
Key points Check
Good Structure 3’
Good sentences 3’
Correct grammar/spelling 5’
Good logic 2’
Tidy writing 2’
互评
Check List
中考
第一档（13-15分）
信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。
第二档（10-12分）
信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思达。
第三档（7-9分）
能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本读。
第四档（4-6分）
只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子读。
第五档（1-3分）
只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。
Peer-editing
1. Fill in the blanks with the words in the box.
plenty of, suppose, war, electronic, actor, spare
1. The comedy has ________ dialogs which are very humorous.
2. Since you prefer music that is relaxing, I don’t ________ you
would want to buy this __________ music CD.
3. Christmas is a time for spreading joy, so you should find some
_______ time to spend with your loved ones.
4. Although he is an _____ who does not have much experience, he
did an excellent job in the new ____ film.
plenty of
suppose
electronic
Self Check
actor
war
spare
2. Fill in the blanks with who, that or which. More than one answer may be possible.
A: Hi, Cindy! Would you like to see Sky High in 2050 this weekend
B: Hmm…no, I don’t think movies __________ try to describe the future are very interesting. Could we see City Danger instead
A: You mean, the new police story _________ was filmed in five countries
B: Yes, that’s the one. The actor ________ plays the hero used to be a schoolteacher!
A: OK, sure. It sounds like something _______ we both will enjoy!
that/which
that/which
who/that
that
1. I don’t like music
_______________________.
2. I enjoy spending time in places
___________________________.
3. I have friends
______________________________.
4. I like movie stars
__________________________________.
3. Complete the sentences about yourself.
that/which is too loud
that/which are relaxing
who/that are friendly and helpful
who/that are beautiful or handsome
Homework
1. Review the words and expressions in Unit 9.
2. Polish your writing according to your group members’ advice.
3. Finish the exercises in workbooks.
4. Preview the new words in Unit 10.