牛津版（深圳·广州） 英语八年级上册期中专练-写作（含解析）
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牛津版（深圳 广州） 英语八年级上册期中专练-写作（含解析）
1．书面表达
以为题写一篇80词左右的文章，文章要包括以下内容：
1 起身晚，所以希望上学迟，放学早。有更多空余时间；
2学校餐厅大而明亮，可以在那吃饭或者聊天；
3 每天上电脑课，每人有台电脑，可以玩游戏；
4 有很多书的图书馆，还有游泳池等；
5希望作业少，课外活动多，周末不要做作业。
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2．践行文明礼仪从我做起。作为一名学生，我们应该不断提升文明素养，做文明礼仪的倡导者。请以“Be a student with good manners”为题， 写一篇短文。内容必须包括以下要点：
1. What kind of bad manners have you seen
2. What’s your opinion about it
3. How can you be a student with good manners
注意：
1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名；
2.词数在80-100之间，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Be a student with good manners
It’s very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
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3．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My Favorite Person/Character”(以《我最喜欢的人/角色》为题写一篇作文，不少于60词）
4．我们每个人都盼望着过生日。在生日那天，我们可以举办生日聚会，并邀请好朋友参加，而且能吃到丰盛的饭菜。玛丽的生日是如何度过的呢？
根据下列提示写一篇50~70词的短文，介绍Mary的生日情况。
1. 上星期日是玛丽的生日。
2. 周六放学后，她邀请同学A、B等参加。
3. 同学给她送礼物。
4. 母亲做了饭，有鱼、肉、水果等。
5. 玛丽和同学们在生日聚会上玩得很开心。
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5．假如你是李玉，你家有一个小花园。春天来了，你妈妈在花园里种植了一些花草、蔬菜，其中有你最喜欢的植物。请你介绍一下这种植物。你为什么喜欢它？它有什么特性或对我们有什么用处？请以“My Favourite Plant”为题，写一篇不少于 60 词的短文。
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6．动物是人类的朋友，保护动物极其重要。请你以 “Let’s Protect ____________”为题，谈一谈你了解的某种需要保护的动物，并写一篇英语小短文。短文应包括以下几个要点：
1. What is the animal’s name What do they look like
2. Why should we protect them
3. What can we do to protect them
要求：
1. 包括全部要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何你的真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等） ；
4. 词数不少于70词。标题已给出，不计入总词数。
Let’s Protect __________________________
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7．根据下面的图片和提示，按故事发展顺序完成作文。
要求：情节完整，语意连贯，可适当发挥。
字数：80~100词左右。
人物：Sammy（男孩），Dudley（恐龙），Mr Lee（恐龙公园工作人员）
Dudley goes to Dinosaur Park
One day, Sammy went for a walk in the mountains. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．童话故事深受孩子们的喜爱，你一定读过《皇帝的新装》这个童话故事。请你根据下图提示，以“The Emperor’s New Clothes”为题，用英语写一篇 80 词左右的短文，在学校广播站“英语之声”栏目播出。
要求：1.语句通顺，没有语法错误；
2.包含图片全部要点；
3.从中你得到哪些启发，可适当发挥；
4.80词左右。（温馨提示：亲，交卷前仔细检查一遍！）
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9．
假定你是李华，请根据下面曲线图所提供的信息，为“英语学习报”写一篇新闻报道，内容包括：
1. 介绍图表大概内容。
2. 描述图表基本变化。
3. 发表个人相关观点。
要求：
1. 词数80—100，开头已写出，不计入总词数。
2. 可以适当增加内容，使行文流畅。
The graph shows that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．假设你的机器人坏了。请你给机器人商店的经理写一封投诉信，要求退货、退款。
内容要点：
1. 上个月，你从机器人商店买了一台名叫Goldfish的机器人；
2. 回家仅仅使用了一个月就出故障了；
3. 电池仅持续两天，每天只肯工作三小时……
4. 去过机器人商店，但是没有得到回复；
5. 要求退款、退货。
要求：
1. 投诉信须包含所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 第3要点须用2—3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3. 词数90左右，投诉信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
4th March, 2018
Robot Shop
25 River Street
Dear Sir or Madam,
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I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Hu Quan
11．上周五，你们班去参观了神奇博物馆（the Amazing Museum）。回来后，你用英语写了一篇日记记述这次神奇之旅。参观经过及感受如下：
1.早上8点在学校大门口集合，乘坐校车前往；
2.在博物馆，你发现了很多神奇的事情：
（1）了解了三明治的历史；
（2）知道了长颈鹿的长脖子里仅有七块骨头；
（3）自拟另一件神奇的事。
3.你的感受……（1-2点）
注意：
1.日记须包括所有要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使日记连贯、通顺；
2.词数70左右，日记的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Friday, April 20th, 2018
Today we had a class trip to the Amazing Museum. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
1．My ideal school starts late because I like sleeping. It finishes early，so we have more free time. We have an hour for lunch .We can eat fruit, vegetables and healthy food. We can even choose any food you like in the dining hall. The dining hall is very big and clean. We can meet our friends and chat there .I think we will have a good time there .We have Computer Studies everyday because I like playing computer very much. I love reading, so we have many libraries. We have a swimming pool. And we don't have homework and exams. Twice a week ,we go on a school trip to a park or any other beautiful city！
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我理想的学校。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一人称，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：have a good time；Twice a week，等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意本文要根据文章所列出的要点大纲逐个描述，不可遗漏。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了自己理想学校的上课时间，餐厅等设施，接下来指出学校的教学环境，最后指出想要的娱乐活动。
考点：提纲作文。
2．One possible version:
Be a student with good manners
It’s very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
Last Saturday evening, all my family were enjoying dinner in a restaurant when a group of young people came into it. While they were eating their food, they talked loudly and smoked. I tried to stop them doing so, but they refused to listen to me. Instead, they said it was none of my business and laughed at me.
In fact, what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did. In my opinion, we should keep quiet in public. Also, we should be polite to others. Only in this way can we be improved to be persons with good manners.
【详解】[整体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：采用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山，阐述文明礼仪的好处；
第二步：阐述自己的观点；
第三步：阐述如何做一名文明礼仪的倡导者。
[亮点词汇]
①try to do sth尝试做某事
②refuse to do拒绝做某事
③none of my business与……无关
[高分句型]
①While they were eating their food, they talked loudly and smoked.（时间状语从句）
②what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did.（主语从句）
③Only in this way can we be improved to be persons with good manners.（倒装句）
3．Mr. White is my favorite person. He is my math teacher. He is a funny man with small eyes and short curly black hair. He is tall and thin. He likes wearing white T-shirts and jeans. He doesn’t wear glasses. He also likes sports. He is good at playing ping-pong. He is friendly to us. Although he is sometimes strict with us, we all like him.
【详解】1.题干分析：本题要求以《我最喜欢的人/角色》为题写一篇不少于60词的作文。内容要点可自由发挥，但要紧扣主题，突出重点。
2.例文点评：例文开篇点题，描写人物的身份（职业）、外貌、性格等特征，是一篇典型的人物描写记叙文。作文用一般现在时及第三人称进行写作，符合要求。
3.高分亮点：
短语：be good at...，be friendly to sb., be strict with sb.。
句型：He is a funny man with small eyes and short curly black hair.
Although he is sometimes strict with us, we all like him.
4．例文：
It was Mary’s birthday last Sunday. Last Saturday, after school she asked some of her classmates to come to her party on Sunday.
At the party, the classmates gave her some presents. Mary’s mother made dinner for them. There was fish, meat, fruit and some other things. Mary and her classmates had a good time at the party!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示中有关于Mary的生日情况的所有内容，注意正确拼写单词，避免出现语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接表明文章是有关于Mary的生日的，然后引出Mary在生日派对前的准备；
第二步，阐述生日派对的情况，并表示Mary和同学们在派对上玩得很开心。
[亮点词汇]
① after school 放学后
② give sb sth. 给某人某物
③ have a good time 玩得开心
[高分句型]
① Last Saturday, after school she asked some of her classmates to come to her party on Sunday.（“ask sb. to do sth.”句型）
② There was fish, meat, fruit and some other things.（There be句型）
5．例文：
My Favourite Plant
I’m Li Yu. There is a small garden behind my house. Spring is coming. My mother grew some flowers, grass and vegetables in it. Of all the plants, I like the roses best, because they have wonderful and light smell. When they blossom, they can make our garden colourful, and the garden looks very beautiful. The roses stand for love. Our family is full of love and joy, too. I love roses.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：文章要求以“我最喜欢的植物”为题，介绍自家花园中最喜欢的一种植物，并说明原因。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自家花园的情况；
第二步，介绍自己最喜欢花园里的哪种植物；
第三步，阐述为什么喜欢它，以及它的特性或用处。
[亮点词汇]
①blossom开花
②stand for代表
③be full of充满
[高分句型]
①I like the roses best, because they have wonderful and light smell.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②When they blossom, they can make our garden colourful, and the garden looks very beautiful.（when引导的时间状语从句）
6．
Let’s Protect Pandas
Pandas are one of our national treasures. They look lovely with black and white fur. They are fat and have four strong paws. They usually live in bamboo forests and mainly live on bamboo.
However, the cute animals are in danger now. It’s difficult for pandas to have babies, and many baby pandas die when they are very young. What’s worse, the bamboo forests are getting smaller now. As a result, pandas are becoming fewer and fewer.
In order to provide pandas with enough food and living places, we should set up more nature reserves with lots of bamboo. We should give them more care in their daily life. Anyway, let’s work hard to protect pandas together.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题是一篇材料作文，结合要点提示，谈谈你了解的某种需要保护的动物。
2. 写作指导：本文时态用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主；写作时首先需补全题目，然后可分为三段式进行写作：首先介绍这种动物的情况，然后说明我们为什么要保护它们，最后是如何保护它们。注意主谓一致，条理清晰，无拼写和语法使用错误。
7．例文：
Dudley goes to Dinosaur Park
One day, Sammy went for a walk in the mountains. He found a stone. It looked like a big egg. He took it home and put it by the window.
One morning, Sammy heard some noise. The stone broke open. It was really an egg! A small animal climbed out and looked at Sammy. It was a baby dinosaur. Sammy called it “Dudley”.
Dudley was always hungry. He ate and ate and grew and grew. Soon he was bigger than Sammy. A man from Dinosaur Park read about Sammy and Dudley in the newspaper.
He phoned Sammy and said, “Hello, Sammy. This is Mr Lee from Dinosaur e with Dudley and meet the children here. I’ll give you 10,000 dollars.” Sammy said, “OK.”
A week later, Sammy got the money.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“图片提示”的内容，可适当再添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。从“Sammy去山上散步”引出要叙述的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“Sammy去山上散步发现一块石头、把石头带回家、从石头里爬出一个恐龙、恐龙长大、李先生给Sammy打电话、Sammy把恐龙卖给恐龙公园”来叙述事件的过程。
第三步，书写结语。Sammy最后拿到钱。
[亮点词汇]
①went for a walk 去散步
②looked at看……
③in the newspaper在报纸上
[高分句型]
①Soon he was bigger than Sammy.（形容词比较级的运用）
②I’ll give you 10,000 dollars.（will+do，一般将来时）
8．例文
The Emperor’s New Clothes
Once upon a time, there was an emperor who spent several hours changing clothes every morning. Two cheaters came one day. They made a magical dress for the king and asked him for a lot of money. They told the emperor this dress could only be seen by wise people, not by foolish people. When the emperor put on the clothes, all he could see was his underwear. But he didn’t want people to think he was stupid, so he said the clothes was beautiful. And officials all said they could see this dress in order to cover up their “foolishness”. Finally, the emperor wore this invisible “clothes” and went to the street. A child said, “He’s not wearing anything!”
This story tells us to be honest with everything. And then we can become a true gentleman.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据图片要点，介绍《皇帝的新装》，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据图片叙述故事《皇帝的新装》；
第二步，总结自己的启发。
[亮点词汇]
①once upon a time从前
②spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事
③ask sb...for sth.向某人要某物
④cover up掩盖
⑤in order to为了
[高分句型]
①Once upon a time, there was an emperor who spent several hours changing clothes every morning.（who引导的定语从句）
②They told the emperor this dress could only be seen by wise people, not by foolish people.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）
9．范文：
The graph shows that the numbers of traffic accidents in our city from July to November.
In August, the number rises to 234 and then falls to 220 in September. In October, the number increases again to 239. It falls to 224 in November. There are the most traffic accidents in October and the fewest in July.
In my opinion, there are so many traffic accidents in our city. So it is important for us to obey traffic rules, and we should educate people about road safety and protect ourselves better in the life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，要求写一篇新闻报道。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作信息和要点已给出，考生应注意观察曲线图所提供的的信息，并将其完整地表达，可适当增加内容，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，概括曲线图的信息，即为“7月至10月的交通事故数量”。
②第二步，具体阐述曲线图信息，表达出7月至10月交通事故数量及变化情况。
③第三步，发表个人相关观点并总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①increase 增加
②obey traffic rules 遵守交通规则
③educate sb. about sth. 教育某人关于某事
[高分句型]
①There are the most traffic accidents in October and the fewest in July. （形容词最高级）
②So it is important for us to obey traffic rules, and we should educate people about road safety and protect ourselves better in the life. （It’s adj. for sb. to do sth.）
10．例文
4th March, 2018
Robot Shop
25 River Street
Dear Sir or Madam,
Last month, I bought a robot named Goldfish in your robot shop. But it went wrong only one month after I got it back. The batteries can only last for two days. And it can only work for three hours a day. The room is always in a mess though it is designed to do housework for its master. What is worse, it knocks everything over. I have been to your robot shop, but there is no reply. I hope I can return it to your shop and have my money back.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Hu Quan
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于书信写作，按记叙文格式来写。根据题目要求，内容要点要依次写出来，特别是第三点要用两到三句话展开叙述。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称单数叙述故事，在叙述购买过程采用一般过去时，描述机器的使用现状主要采用一般现在时。写作时直接按内容要点叙述相关事件，注意简单扼要，表达时倾注情感，要体现投诉不满的情绪。
11．例文：
Friday, April 20th, 2018
Today we had a class trip to the Amazing Museum. We met at the school gate at 8:00 a.m. and took a school bus there. At the museum, I found a lot of amazing things. I learned about the history of sandwiches, and I knew that giraffes have only seven bones inside their long necks. Also, I learned that fish sleep with their eyes open.
We live in a world with so many wonderful things. When we think of these things, we will feel that our life is getting more and more colourful.
【详解】1.题干解读：题干要求写一篇日记，内容是参观神奇博物馆的经过和感受。提示中给出了简单的要点，写作时注意描述齐全，并适当添加细节。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时叙述事件的经过，讲述客观真理事实时采用一般现在时，以第一人称进行写作。承接所给开头，先写参观博物馆的经过，重点描述了解到的神奇事实。然后另起一段表达感想，可用一般现在时。注意时态的切换，同时做到无语法和拼写错误。
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牛津版（深圳 广州） 英语八年级上册期中专练-写作（含解析）
1．书面表达
以为题写一篇80词左右的文章，文章要包括以下内容：
1 起身晚，所以希望上学迟，放学早。有更多空余时间；
2学校餐厅大而明亮，可以在那吃饭或者聊天；
3 每天上电脑课，每人有台电脑，可以玩游戏；
4 有很多书的图书馆，还有游泳池等；
5希望作业少，课外活动多，周末不要做作业。
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2．践行文明礼仪从我做起。作为一名学生，我们应该不断提升文明素养，做文明礼仪的倡导者。请以“Be a student with good manners”为题， 写一篇短文。内容必须包括以下要点：
1. What kind of bad manners have you seen
2. What’s your opinion about it
3. How can you be a student with good manners
注意：
1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名；
2.词数在80-100之间，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Be a student with good manners
It’s very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
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3．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My Favorite Person/Character”(以《我最喜欢的人/角色》为题写一篇作文，不少于60词）
4．我们每个人都盼望着过生日。在生日那天，我们可以举办生日聚会，并邀请好朋友参加，而且能吃到丰盛的饭菜。玛丽的生日是如何度过的呢？
根据下列提示写一篇50~70词的短文，介绍Mary的生日情况。
1. 上星期日是玛丽的生日。
2. 周六放学后，她邀请同学A、B等参加。
3. 同学给她送礼物。
4. 母亲做了饭，有鱼、肉、水果等。
5. 玛丽和同学们在生日聚会上玩得很开心。
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5．假如你是李玉，你家有一个小花园。春天来了，你妈妈在花园里种植了一些花草、蔬菜，其中有你最喜欢的植物。请你介绍一下这种植物。你为什么喜欢它？它有什么特性或对我们有什么用处？请以“My Favourite Plant”为题，写一篇不少于 60 词的短文。
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6．动物是人类的朋友，保护动物极其重要。请你以 “Let’s Protect ____________”为题，谈一谈你了解的某种需要保护的动物，并写一篇英语小短文。短文应包括以下几个要点：
1. What is the animal’s name What do they look like
2. Why should we protect them
3. What can we do to protect them
要求：
1. 包括全部要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何你的真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等） ；
4. 词数不少于70词。标题已给出，不计入总词数。
Let’s Protect __________________________
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7．根据下面的图片和提示，按故事发展顺序完成作文。
要求：情节完整，语意连贯，可适当发挥。
字数：80~100词左右。
人物：Sammy（男孩），Dudley（恐龙），Mr Lee（恐龙公园工作人员）
Dudley goes to Dinosaur Park
One day, Sammy went for a walk in the mountains. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．童话故事深受孩子们的喜爱，你一定读过《皇帝的新装》这个童话故事。请你根据下图提示，以“The Emperor’s New Clothes”为题，用英语写一篇 80 词左右的短文，在学校广播站“英语之声”栏目播出。
要求：1.语句通顺，没有语法错误；
2.包含图片全部要点；
3.从中你得到哪些启发，可适当发挥；
4.80词左右。（温馨提示：亲，交卷前仔细检查一遍！）
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9．
假定你是李华，请根据下面曲线图所提供的信息，为“英语学习报”写一篇新闻报道，内容包括：
1. 介绍图表大概内容。
2. 描述图表基本变化。
3. 发表个人相关观点。
要求：
1. 词数80—100，开头已写出，不计入总词数。
2. 可以适当增加内容，使行文流畅。
The graph shows that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．假设你的机器人坏了。请你给机器人商店的经理写一封投诉信，要求退货、退款。
内容要点：
1. 上个月，你从机器人商店买了一台名叫Goldfish的机器人；
2. 回家仅仅使用了一个月就出故障了；
3. 电池仅持续两天，每天只肯工作三小时……
4. 去过机器人商店，但是没有得到回复；
5. 要求退款、退货。
要求：
1. 投诉信须包含所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 第3要点须用2—3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3. 词数90左右，投诉信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
4th March, 2018
Robot Shop
25 River Street
Dear Sir or Madam,
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I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Hu Quan
11．上周五，你们班去参观了神奇博物馆（the Amazing Museum）。回来后，你用英语写了一篇日记记述这次神奇之旅。参观经过及感受如下：
1.早上8点在学校大门口集合，乘坐校车前往；
2.在博物馆，你发现了很多神奇的事情：
（1）了解了三明治的历史；
（2）知道了长颈鹿的长脖子里仅有七块骨头；
（3）自拟另一件神奇的事。
3.你的感受……（1-2点）
注意：
1.日记须包括所有要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使日记连贯、通顺；
2.词数70左右，日记的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Friday, April 20th, 2018
Today we had a class trip to the Amazing Museum. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
1．My ideal school starts late because I like sleeping. It finishes early，so we have more free time. We have an hour for lunch .We can eat fruit, vegetables and healthy food. We can even choose any food you like in the dining hall. The dining hall is very big and clean. We can meet our friends and chat there .I think we will have a good time there .We have Computer Studies everyday because I like playing computer very much. I love reading, so we have many libraries. We have a swimming pool. And we don't have homework and exams. Twice a week ,we go on a school trip to a park or any other beautiful city！
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我理想的学校。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一人称，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：have a good time；Twice a week，等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意本文要根据文章所列出的要点大纲逐个描述，不可遗漏。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了自己理想学校的上课时间，餐厅等设施，接下来指出学校的教学环境，最后指出想要的娱乐活动。
考点：提纲作文。
2．One possible version:
Be a student with good manners
It’s very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
Last Saturday evening, all my family were enjoying dinner in a restaurant when a group of young people came into it. While they were eating their food, they talked loudly and smoked. I tried to stop them doing so, but they refused to listen to me. Instead, they said it was none of my business and laughed at me.
In fact, what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did. In my opinion, we should keep quiet in public. Also, we should be polite to others. Only in this way can we be improved to be persons with good manners.
【详解】[整体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：采用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山，阐述文明礼仪的好处；
第二步：阐述自己的观点；
第三步：阐述如何做一名文明礼仪的倡导者。
[亮点词汇]
①try to do sth尝试做某事
②refuse to do拒绝做某事
③none of my business与……无关
[高分句型]
①While they were eating their food, they talked loudly and smoked.（时间状语从句）
②what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did.（主语从句）
③Only in this way can we be improved to be persons with good manners.（倒装句）
3．Mr. White is my favorite person. He is my math teacher. He is a funny man with small eyes and short curly black hair. He is tall and thin. He likes wearing white T-shirts and jeans. He doesn’t wear glasses. He also likes sports. He is good at playing ping-pong. He is friendly to us. Although he is sometimes strict with us, we all like him.
【详解】1.题干分析：本题要求以《我最喜欢的人/角色》为题写一篇不少于60词的作文。内容要点可自由发挥，但要紧扣主题，突出重点。
2.例文点评：例文开篇点题，描写人物的身份（职业）、外貌、性格等特征，是一篇典型的人物描写记叙文。作文用一般现在时及第三人称进行写作，符合要求。
3.高分亮点：
短语：be good at...，be friendly to sb., be strict with sb.。
句型：He is a funny man with small eyes and short curly black hair.
Although he is sometimes strict with us, we all like him.
4．例文：
It was Mary’s birthday last Sunday. Last Saturday, after school she asked some of her classmates to come to her party on Sunday.
At the party, the classmates gave her some presents. Mary’s mother made dinner for them. There was fish, meat, fruit and some other things. Mary and her classmates had a good time at the party!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示中有关于Mary的生日情况的所有内容，注意正确拼写单词，避免出现语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接表明文章是有关于Mary的生日的，然后引出Mary在生日派对前的准备；
第二步，阐述生日派对的情况，并表示Mary和同学们在派对上玩得很开心。
[亮点词汇]
① after school 放学后
② give sb sth. 给某人某物
③ have a good time 玩得开心
[高分句型]
① Last Saturday, after school she asked some of her classmates to come to her party on Sunday.（“ask sb. to do sth.”句型）
② There was fish, meat, fruit and some other things.（There be句型）
5．例文：
My Favourite Plant
I’m Li Yu. There is a small garden behind my house. Spring is coming. My mother grew some flowers, grass and vegetables in it. Of all the plants, I like the roses best, because they have wonderful and light smell. When they blossom, they can make our garden colourful, and the garden looks very beautiful. The roses stand for love. Our family is full of love and joy, too. I love roses.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：文章要求以“我最喜欢的植物”为题，介绍自家花园中最喜欢的一种植物，并说明原因。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自家花园的情况；
第二步，介绍自己最喜欢花园里的哪种植物；
第三步，阐述为什么喜欢它，以及它的特性或用处。
[亮点词汇]
①blossom开花
②stand for代表
③be full of充满
[高分句型]
①I like the roses best, because they have wonderful and light smell.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②When they blossom, they can make our garden colourful, and the garden looks very beautiful.（when引导的时间状语从句）
6．
Let’s Protect Pandas
Pandas are one of our national treasures. They look lovely with black and white fur. They are fat and have four strong paws. They usually live in bamboo forests and mainly live on bamboo.
However, the cute animals are in danger now. It’s difficult for pandas to have babies, and many baby pandas die when they are very young. What’s worse, the bamboo forests are getting smaller now. As a result, pandas are becoming fewer and fewer.
In order to provide pandas with enough food and living places, we should set up more nature reserves with lots of bamboo. We should give them more care in their daily life. Anyway, let’s work hard to protect pandas together.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题是一篇材料作文，结合要点提示，谈谈你了解的某种需要保护的动物。
2. 写作指导：本文时态用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主；写作时首先需补全题目，然后可分为三段式进行写作：首先介绍这种动物的情况，然后说明我们为什么要保护它们，最后是如何保护它们。注意主谓一致，条理清晰，无拼写和语法使用错误。
7．例文：
Dudley goes to Dinosaur Park
One day, Sammy went for a walk in the mountains. He found a stone. It looked like a big egg. He took it home and put it by the window.
One morning, Sammy heard some noise. The stone broke open. It was really an egg! A small animal climbed out and looked at Sammy. It was a baby dinosaur. Sammy called it “Dudley”.
Dudley was always hungry. He ate and ate and grew and grew. Soon he was bigger than Sammy. A man from Dinosaur Park read about Sammy and Dudley in the newspaper.
He phoned Sammy and said, “Hello, Sammy. This is Mr Lee from Dinosaur e with Dudley and meet the children here. I’ll give you 10,000 dollars.” Sammy said, “OK.”
A week later, Sammy got the money.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“图片提示”的内容，可适当再添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。从“Sammy去山上散步”引出要叙述的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“Sammy去山上散步发现一块石头、把石头带回家、从石头里爬出一个恐龙、恐龙长大、李先生给Sammy打电话、Sammy把恐龙卖给恐龙公园”来叙述事件的过程。
第三步，书写结语。Sammy最后拿到钱。
[亮点词汇]
①went for a walk 去散步
②looked at看……
③in the newspaper在报纸上
[高分句型]
①Soon he was bigger than Sammy.（形容词比较级的运用）
②I’ll give you 10,000 dollars.（will+do，一般将来时）
8．例文
The Emperor’s New Clothes
Once upon a time, there was an emperor who spent several hours changing clothes every morning. Two cheaters came one day. They made a magical dress for the king and asked him for a lot of money. They told the emperor this dress could only be seen by wise people, not by foolish people. When the emperor put on the clothes, all he could see was his underwear. But he didn’t want people to think he was stupid, so he said the clothes was beautiful. And officials all said they could see this dress in order to cover up their “foolishness”. Finally, the emperor wore this invisible “clothes” and went to the street. A child said, “He’s not wearing anything!”
This story tells us to be honest with everything. And then we can become a true gentleman.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据图片要点，介绍《皇帝的新装》，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据图片叙述故事《皇帝的新装》；
第二步，总结自己的启发。
[亮点词汇]
①once upon a time从前
②spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事
③ask sb...for sth.向某人要某物
④cover up掩盖
⑤in order to为了
[高分句型]
①Once upon a time, there was an emperor who spent several hours changing clothes every morning.（who引导的定语从句）
②They told the emperor this dress could only be seen by wise people, not by foolish people.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）
9．范文：
The graph shows that the numbers of traffic accidents in our city from July to November.
In August, the number rises to 234 and then falls to 220 in September. In October, the number increases again to 239. It falls to 224 in November. There are the most traffic accidents in October and the fewest in July.
In my opinion, there are so many traffic accidents in our city. So it is important for us to obey traffic rules, and we should educate people about road safety and protect ourselves better in the life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，要求写一篇新闻报道。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作信息和要点已给出，考生应注意观察曲线图所提供的的信息，并将其完整地表达，可适当增加内容，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，概括曲线图的信息，即为“7月至10月的交通事故数量”。
②第二步，具体阐述曲线图信息，表达出7月至10月交通事故数量及变化情况。
③第三步，发表个人相关观点并总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①increase 增加
②obey traffic rules 遵守交通规则
③educate sb. about sth. 教育某人关于某事
[高分句型]
①There are the most traffic accidents in October and the fewest in July. （形容词最高级）
②So it is important for us to obey traffic rules, and we should educate people about road safety and protect ourselves better in the life. （It’s adj. for sb. to do sth.）
10．例文
4th March, 2018
Robot Shop
25 River Street
Dear Sir or Madam,
Last month, I bought a robot named Goldfish in your robot shop. But it went wrong only one month after I got it back. The batteries can only last for two days. And it can only work for three hours a day. The room is always in a mess though it is designed to do housework for its master. What is worse, it knocks everything over. I have been to your robot shop, but there is no reply. I hope I can return it to your shop and have my money back.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Hu Quan
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于书信写作，按记叙文格式来写。根据题目要求，内容要点要依次写出来，特别是第三点要用两到三句话展开叙述。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称单数叙述故事，在叙述购买过程采用一般过去时，描述机器的使用现状主要采用一般现在时。写作时直接按内容要点叙述相关事件，注意简单扼要，表达时倾注情感，要体现投诉不满的情绪。
11．例文：
Friday, April 20th, 2018
Today we had a class trip to the Amazing Museum. We met at the school gate at 8:00 a.m. and took a school bus there. At the museum, I found a lot of amazing things. I learned about the history of sandwiches, and I knew that giraffes have only seven bones inside their long necks. Also, I learned that fish sleep with their eyes open.
We live in a world with so many wonderful things. When we think of these things, we will feel that our life is getting more and more colourful.
【详解】1.题干解读：题干要求写一篇日记，内容是参观神奇博物馆的经过和感受。提示中给出了简单的要点，写作时注意描述齐全，并适当添加细节。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时叙述事件的经过，讲述客观真理事实时采用一般现在时，以第一人称进行写作。承接所给开头，先写参观博物馆的经过，重点描述了解到的神奇事实。然后另起一段表达感想，可用一般现在时。注意时态的切换，同时做到无语法和拼写错误。
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