Unit 4 What's the best movie theater 写作专练（含解析）人教新目标(Go for it)版英语八年级上册

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人教新目人教新目标（Go for it）版 英语八年级上册 Unit 4 What's the best movie theater 写作 专练
1．近年来，选秀节目越来越受欢迎，许多年轻人热衷于参加此类比赛，希望能实现自己的梦想，也有人持不同的观点，就这一话题写一篇80词左右的短文。
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2．假设你家附近有许多商店，请你从中选出两家进行介绍。
提示内容如下：
Name of the store Service Quality Price
Funny Clothing Store best best highest
Family Fruit Store worst best lowest
要求：1.必须包括表格中的所有信息。
2. 表达你是否喜欢这两家店。
3. 词数：70－80。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Let me tell you about two stores near my home. One is Funny Clothing Store and
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3．友谊是人生的一个重要组成部分。你喜欢交和你相似的朋友还是互补的朋友呢？请你以 My best friend and I 为题，写一篇作文，分别从外貌、性格、爱好、生活习惯，学习成绩等方面描述你和好朋友的相同点 和不同点。
要求：
1、80 词左右；
2、包含上述内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3、文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
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4．上周，我们进行了一次“我们城市的一些好场所”的问卷调查，请你根据下面表格所提供的信息写一篇调查报告。
要求：
1.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写规范；
2.表格内容全部体现在文章中；
3.100词以上。
Places Names Reasons
high school No.10 High School good teachers, beautiful
hospital People’s Hospital comfortable beds, good service.
movie theater Modern Cinema big screens
clothes store Xiwang Clothes Store good quality, popular
radio station Hefei 168 FM much news, beautiful music
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5．书面表达
把镇上的三家书店(Huojiao Book Store,Dongfang Book Store, Xinhua Book Store)按照service, quality(质量),prices及到我们学校的距离几方面来全面比较一下。选出你最喜欢的书店。要求使用比较级和最高级以及下面的短语：the best ,the worst,the cheapest, the most expensive,be close to, far from
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6．书面表达
81.假如你是Ana,你最好的朋友叫Lisa, 请写-篇短文，简单比较2人的外貌，个性，并谈谈你们习惯和喜欢的电视节目及你们的朋友观.
要求: 1.条例清楚，语句通顺,书写规范
2.表格中内容要全部体现在文章中
3.不少于70词（提示词不计入词数）
Appearance Personality hobbies Favorite TV program Opinions on friends
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Lisa
My name is Anna, and my best friend is Lisa___________________________________________
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7．你的朋友将要到你的家乡游玩，请根据下面的内容 提示，向你的朋友介绍一下你的家乡有特色的地方。
要求：
1.开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.包括所有的内容要点，不要逐句翻译，可适当 发挥；
3.语句通顺、逻辑清晰，语法正确,80词左右；
4.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、地点和所在学校 的名称。
In my hometown, there are some good places.
8．假如你的外国朋友Tom下个月要来北京旅游，作为一个北京人，请你给他写一封信，介绍一下北京最值得去的一些地方，并阐述原因。字数：70词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：
1. What’s the most beautiful scenic spot in Beijing
2. What’s the best shopping mall in Beijing
3. What’s the nicest restaurant in Beijing
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you are coming to Beijing. Let me tell you something about it.
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I hope you will have a good time in Beijing.
Yours,
Li Ming
9．书面表达
你的笔友David 给你来信，他要来你家乡度假。请你给他回信，告知如何安排。
提示：
1.很高兴，欢迎到来；
2.刚好也有一个月的假期；　
3.做许多有趣的事情，如游览海滩，在海里游泳、冲浪，去野营，吃各种食物，互相学习语言...
4.到来时到机场迎接，一起坐的士到我家。
(你以林东为名，60-70.字左右)
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参考答案：
1．Possible version:
Talent shows become more and more popular. Lots of young people join the shows. Some people become famous through this way. But different people have different ideas about the shows. Some people think these shows are interesting. They can make people happy. But some students give up their studies just for the shows. The shows are just a way for people to show their talents. The shows are just a way for people to show their talents. The shows are not a good way for young people to make a success.
【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生结合选秀话题写一篇短文，谈一谈人们对选秀节目的看法，属于话题作文。
2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第三人称和一般现在时为主展开陈述，写作时先要写出选秀节目越来越受欢迎的现状，然后重点介绍人们对选秀节目的不同看法。行文注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
2．Let me tell you about two stores near my home. One is Funny Clothing Store and the other one is Family Fruit Store.
Funny Clothing Store is the best in our city. It has the best service and it has clothes of the best quality. But the clothes are the most expensive. I like Funny Clothing Store and I often buy clothes there.
Let's look at Family Fruit Store. Its fruits are of the best quality. There are many different kinds of fruits in Family Fruit Store and the fruits are the cheapest. I like the fruit store although it has the worst service.
【详解】这篇作文要求我们根据所给商店信息介绍两家商店的情况，根据所给信息可知，在写作时要用到形容词的比较等级。因为是介绍两家不同的商店，所以可以对他们分段进行，这样使文章有次序性。另外注意题目的另一个要求，那就是表达出自己对这家店的喜好，最后可以对文章做出总结或写出自己的期望。
本篇作文首先第一段提出文章要写的内容Let me tell you about two stores near my home. One is….and the other is…..接下来利用题目所给信息对两家商店进行分别介绍，包括服务，商品质量，价格以及自己对商店的喜好。思路很清晰，语言运用也正确，所给信息概括全面。如果最后能够加上总结及自己的期望会更好，例如，These are the two stores near my home. I hope you can also come here to choose the things that you like best.
3．例文
My best friend and I
As we all know, everybody needs friends. Friendship plays an important part in our studies, work and everyday life. I think friends should be similar, because in this way, we have a common hobby.
My best friend is Li Lan. She has a pair of speaking eyes. She is kind and helpful. Her favorite sport is basketball. So am I. She is used to getting up early. But I'm a little lazy. She often encourages me to get up early. We often play basketball on Saturday. She studies very well. She often helps me with my English.
Once our friends are in trouble, we should try our best to help them out. Just as the famous saying goes: A friend in need is a friend indeed. Only in this way can our friendship last long. With friends around us, we are sure to enjoy a happier life.
【详解】1. 题干解读：这是一篇话题作文。内容是根据“My best friend and I”这个话题谈一谈你需要怎样的一位朋友，分别从外貌、性格、爱好、生活习惯，学习成绩等方面描述你和好朋友的相同点和不同点。
2. 例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态主要为一般现在时。人称主要为第一和第三人称。第一段介绍朋友的重要性以及喜欢相似的朋友。第二段介绍好朋友李兰的外貌、性格、爱好、生活习惯，学习成绩等方面描述她和自己的相同点和不同点。第三段介绍朋友之间应该互相帮助。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：play an important part in；in this way；help …with；be in trouble；try one’s best to；help out；last long。
句型：1. Her favorite sport is basketball. So am I. 她最喜欢的运动是篮球。我也是。
该句话是由so引导的倒装句。
2. Only in this way can our friendship last long. 只有这样，我们的友谊才能长久。
该句话是由Only引导的倒装句。
4．例文
Last week we did a survey of the readers about good places in our city. And this is what we learned. Most of the high schools are good， and No. 10 High School is the best in our city. It has the best teachers and it’s the most beautiful. People’s Hospital is the best of all the hospitals. It has the most comfortable beds and the best service. Modern Cinema is the best movie theater. It has the biggest screens. The best clothes store in our city is Xiwang Clothes Store. It has the best quality and it’s the most popular. As for radio stations, most young people think Hefei 168 FM is the best radio station. It has the most news and the most beautiful music.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇表格作文。本文要求按照所给的题目结合表格中的内容完成这篇调查报告，我们要用恰当的语言把所列举的内容准确地表达出来。写作中要包含被调查的几个方面将超市、影院、广播站和医院等四个方面进行陈述，表达出人们的观点等。
2.例文点评：根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要是第三人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点：
短语：did a survey ；Most of the high schools；he most comfortable beds；he most beautiful music句型：文中多出用到了形容词最高级；Modern Cinema is the best movie theater. It has the biggest screens.；As for radio stations, most young people think Hefei 168 FM is the best radio station. It has the most news and the most beautiful music.
5．There are three bookshops in our town. They are Huojiao Book Store, Dongfang Book Store, and Xinhua Book Store. Huojiao Book Store is the closest to my home. Dongfang Book Store is the farthest. Xinhua Book Store offers the best service and has the cheapest books. Huojiao Book Store has the worst service.So I don’t want to go there.I would like to go to Xinhua Book Store because it not only supplies emotionless goods, but also provides knowledge and outlet for stress.. When I had bought what I liked very much, I would feel good and forget all my trouble.
【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，把镇上的三家书店进行比较，选出我最喜欢的书店。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：There are……；They are……，Huojiao Book Store has…….，So I don’t want to……，I would like to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头比较镇上的三家书店，接下来介绍我喜欢的书店，最后解释喜欢这家书店的原因。此处close to, want to do sth, would like to do sth, not only, but also等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
6．In some ways, we are the same. She is as thin as me. We both have long straight hair. Both of us like sports. We are both hard-working and good at our subjects. We both like reading and we usually go to the library together on the weekend.
But in some ways, we are different. She is taller and more outgoing than me. She is better at singing and dancing. She likes going to the concert. For me, I like suffering the Internet and I love traveling. As for TV programs, we have different opinions. She likes talent shows. However, I really like sports shows.
In fact, we don’t really care if our friends are the same as us or different from us.
【详解】本文是一篇材料作文，其要求是简单比较你和最好的朋友Lisa在外貌、个性、习惯、喜欢的电视节目、朋友观几方面并谈谈你们的相同点和不同点。首先，要根据表格信息，可以结合自己的实际情况填写表格内容。其次，根据写作要求可知本文应使用一般现在时态，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主，句中主要使用形容词的比较级。再次，可按照表格信息逐条对比你与最好朋友之间的异同点。最后，要注意表达准确，语义连贯，符合逻辑。再检查单词是否有拼写错误，标点符号是否有使用错误等。本文分为三段，段首使用In some ways, we are the same. But in some ways, we are different. 使结构层次分明，且句中也使用了大量形容词及形容词的比较级或短语，为文章增色不少。如：hard-working, more outgoing, be better at, the same as, be different from等。
7．In my hometown, there are some good places. Greenwood Park is the best place to go to on weekends. I think it is the most beautiful park. The air is fresh. You can take a walk or play games with your friends. The People’s Library is the most quiet place. You can read and enjoy your time. Modem Cinema is the best movie theater because it has the newest movies. The best clothes store is Mr. Cool’s Clothes Store. It has the most popular clothes. And the service is the best.
【详解】文章要求介绍自己的家乡，基本句型使用最高级句型，时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意以下事情：
1.仔细审题，明确要求。审读所给信息，弄清楚所要表达的内容要点，然后对所给的信息进行梳理，可根据内容要点适当调整写作顺序，使文章行文连贯。
2. 列全要点，即提纲要点化，然后写作成文。
此时我们就必须在大脑中将各种信息点补充完整，适时使用高级词汇和复杂句式。要根据提示将要点表达清楚，使文章的内容完整、饱满、要点齐全，注意适当增加细节。同时注意句子与句子之间，段落与段落之间要有合理的过渡衔接。
3.检查核实，确保无误。
8．One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you are coming to Beijing. Let me tell you something about it.
As a Beijinger, I think the most beautiful scenic spot in Beijing is the Great Wall. It’s the longest wall in the world. You can not only enjoy the views but also learn about Chinese history and culture. Taking photos there is a great idea. Besides, you can go to Joy City Shopping Mall. It’s one of the biggest shopping malls in Beijing. In the end, remember to taste the food in Quanjude. It has the most delicious food—Beijing Roast Duck.
I hope you will have a good time in Beijing.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】1.题干解读：本文为书信写作，要按书信格式书写。在写作时，第二段着重向Tom介绍北京值得去的地方，比如：长城、故宫、西单等地方，并同时阐述相关原因。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来介绍北京著名的地方；时态以一般现在时为主。在介绍地点时，侧重阐述介绍该地点的缘由。同时，注意地点等专有名词的书写。
9．Dear David,
Welcome to my hometown. I also have a month for vacation when you come here. In my hometown, we can do many interesting things. We can have a visit to the beach and go surfing and swimming in the sea. We can go camping, too. We have different kinds of food to eat and we can study languages with each other. This is really wonderful! I’m going to the airport to meet you, then we take a taxi home.
Yours
Lin Dong
【详解】这是一篇给定材料的书信作文。谈论的话题是假期计划。人称为第一人称，可以用情态动词can告知对方假期如何安排，当然还会用到be going to结构。注意写作时必须包含所有要点提示，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【点睛】写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1.认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想。2. 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络。3. 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。4. 最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
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