Unit 5 Do you want to watch a game show 写作专练（含解析）人教新目标(Go for it)版英语八年级上册

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人教新目标（Go for it）版 英语八年级上册 Unit 5 Do you want to watch a game show 写作 专练
1．书面表达
规划人生,成就未来。请以 “My Dream”为题写一篇英语短文,描述你梦想的工作。
参考词汇：be friendly to, help, study hard, come true
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2．写出你所喜欢和不喜欢的电视节目、音乐或衣物，并简单写出理由，不少于60字。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．书面表达。
写出你所喜欢的一部电影，并对此片做一些介绍及发表自己的评论。
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4．根据表格中的信息,介绍一下四个人对各种节目的看法。
love:like:don’t likecan’t stand:
Sitcoms Soap operas Talk shows Game shows Sports shows
Diana
Alan’s father
My teacher
Leo’s mother
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5．梦想是一盏灯，给我们指引方向；梦想是一支笔，助我们描绘未来蓝图。假如你们学校英语俱乐部正在举办以“My Dream”为题的征文比赛，请根据以下提示，把你的梦想写下来。
写作提示：
1.What's your dream
2.Why is it your dream
3.What will you do to make your dream come true
写作要求：
1.语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；
2.100词左右，题目已给出，不计入总词数。
My Dream
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6．话题写作
假如你是学校英文周刊的特约小记者，刚刚采访了丹尼（Danny）一家对电视节目的喜好。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇调查报告。
提示：
1. What programs does your father love
2. What programs can’t your mother stand
3. What programs don’t you mind ...
要求：
1. 语句通顺、符合逻辑，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
What do Danny’s family think of different TV shows Let’s have a look. ______________________
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7．今天的英语课上，老师让你们谈一谈最喜欢的电影类型及原因。下图的统计结果反映了你班同学对各种电影的喜好，请据此写一篇短文并在分享交流环节将此结果向大家汇报。
要求：
1. 短文内容应包括图中的所有提示；
2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
3. 80词左右，可适当发挥。短文的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
Today in English class we talked about our favorite kinds of movies and the reasons. Here are the results.
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8．根据表格内容，用英语写一篇不少于60词的短文，要求条理清楚。
English Today Healthy Living Animal World Different Movement
Jim
Mike
Jane
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9．请根据汉语提示， 向你的外国朋友David介绍一下中国的传统节日端午节及相应的习俗，字数80-100字左右。
提示：
端午节Dragon Boat Festival
节日介绍 端午节起源于中国，是为了纪念屈原。人们吃粽子，赛龙舟(Dragon Boat race)。
粽子的制作过程 1. 原料：粽叶(bamboo leaves)、稻米、红枣(date) 2. 步骤：1）将稻米、红枣、粽叶洗干净； 2）将稻米、三颗红枣放在两片粽叶上； 3）用线将粽子绑好(Tie it up with a small and thin rope（细绳）)； 4）放在锅里高温煮50分钟 5）和家人一起享用
Dear David,
I am glad to hear from you. Today I want to tell you some information about the Dragon Boat Festival.
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Li Hua
10．提示：假如你是一位在中国学习的英国学生，请你根据以下要点给在英国的祖母写一封信，介绍你的一位好朋友（Wang Lin)和你在一起的生活情况。
要点：
1.Wang Lin比你更开朗更风趣，总给你讲些有趣的故事；
2. 你们都喜欢运动，每周锻炼三四次;你们每天放学后打篮球；
3. 你们都喜欢听音乐，看动作片，但Wang Lin还喜欢看新闻，他认为从中可以弄清楚世界各地发生的事 情;他不喜欢肥皂剧；
4. 上周日Wang Lin带你去华夏影院看了 Blunt Force Trauma，影片很精彩，你觉得这是最好的一家影院，有最舒适的座位和最佳的音效。
要求：
1.以上要点不要逐字翻译，结合内容适当 发挥；
2. 词数在80左右（已给出的不计入总词数）；
3. 注意书信格式和人称。
提示词：outgoing 开朗的；funny 风趣的；tell stories 讲故事;exercise锻炼;times次数；although尽管;short矮的；together 一'起；music 音乐；action movie 动作片；news 新闻；find out 弄清楚；go on 进行;soap opera 肥皂剧；Huaxia Cinema 华夏影院;wonderful 精彩的;sound effect 音效
Dear Grandma,
How is everything going Now I’m studying in China. I have a good friend, Wang Lin._________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
David
参考答案：
1．My Dream
Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I'm very healthy. Since then, I have hoped to become a doctor. I will study hard to get more knowledge in order to achieve my dream. I'll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.
To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.
【分析】这是一篇话题作文，以 “My Dream”为题写一篇英语短文,描述我梦想的工作。
【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Everyone has……，My dream is……，The doctors were……，Now I'm……，I think……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我梦想的工作是成为一名医生，接下来介绍我想成为一名医生的原因，最后指出我希望梦想成真。此处be friendly to, cheer sb up, with the help of, since then, in order to, as…as possible, come true等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
2．I like watching the ball games on TV,especially basketball games,such as NBA.These games are real and interesting,and they can make me happy.I like the TV operas made in HongKong too,which are quite enjoyable.I don't like the TV operas made on the mainland.They are very boring and horrible.I think making a TV opera on mainland is just a waste of time and money.
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，结合所给信息，要把自己喜欢和不喜欢的电视节目、音乐或衣物表达出来，并要有条理地简单写出理由，注意一些常见句式的应用，注意把握时态与人称。还要注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开篇直奔主题，对于电视节目，发表了自己的观点和看法，内容翔实、句型丰富。文中使用了especially ,such as；make me happy,a waste of time and money等词汇，以及动名词作主语、定语从句和宾语从句等多种句式交替运用，使文章增色不少,是一篇不错的范文。
3．Transformers
My favourite movie is Transformers 3. This film was made in America. It uses a lot of high-techs and computer special effects. I like it very much. This film has huge scenes and famous movie stars. Besides, it has a good story, and it tells me to respect anybody who protects us. This film asks us to be brave to fight the enemies and have the courage to live even though we are in danger. It also has a lot of robot troys I like. This is my favourite movie.
【详解】英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。
be made in由---生产
4．Diana likes sitcoms and game shows, but she doesn’t like sports shows. Alan’s father can’t stand soap operas, but he loves sports shows. My teacher doesn’t like soap operas, but he likes talk shows and sports shows. Leo’s mother likes sitcoms and soap operas, but she can’t stand game shows.
【详解】本题是一篇材料作文，根据表格中的信息,介绍一下四个人对各种节目的看法。本书面表达比较简答，只需写出四个人对各种节目的看法。认真阅读表格内容，表格提供的要点必须写全。本文时态是一般现在时，注意主谓一致。写作时，首先列好提纲要点，同时注意连词的使用和表达的顺序，语言表达要符合英语习惯，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（名词单复数，主谓一致等）。本文提纲：戴安娜喜欢情景喜剧和游戏节目，但她不喜欢体育节目。艾伦的父亲不能忍受肥皂剧，但他喜欢体育节目。我的老师不喜欢肥皂剧，但他喜欢脱口秀和体育节目。利奥的母亲喜欢情景喜剧和肥皂剧，但她不能忍受游戏节目。
5．例文：
My Dream
Everybody has his own dream and so do I. My dream is to be a kung fu star. I was able to do kung fu when I was five years old and I am interested in acting. So I want to be a kung fu star when I grow up.
To make my dream come true, I'm going to spend at least two hours practicing kung fu every day. I also plan to take acting lessons and join an acting club.
I am sure I will be a famous kung fu star one day.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“My Dream”为题，根据所给提示把自己的梦想写下来，要包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文主要用第一人称来描述写作内容；时态采用一般现在时来描述“我的梦想是什么”，“我的梦想的理由”和“我要怎样做来实现我的梦想”；描述梦想的原因和理由时需描写细致，并要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
6．What do Danny’s family think of different TV shows Let’s have a look. Danny’s father loves the news and talk shows. He thinks talk shows are educational. He doesn’t mind sports shows or soap operas. Danny’s mother can’t stand the news or sports shows. She thinks they are boring. She doesn’t mind talk shows. Her favorite shows are soap operas. What about Danny Sports shows and talk shows are his favorite shows. He doesn’t mind the news. As for soup operas, he can’t stand them.
【详解】题干解读：这篇短文主要介绍丹尼一家对电视节目的喜好，所以用一般现在时，注意第三人称单数形式的使用。根据提示必须介绍丹尼父亲喜好什么节目，她的妈妈不喜欢什么节目，丹尼不能忍受的节目，其他可以适当扩展。
例文点评：这篇短文采用一般现在时对丹尼一家对电视节目的喜欢进行了介绍，注意到了第三人称单数形式的变化，不仅介绍了提示内容而且进行了适当的扩展。通过What about Danny 及As for soup operas,的使用，使得短文结构清晰，行文连贯。
高分亮点：
短语：talk shows；soap operas；one’s favorite；As for soup operas
对事物看法的句式：主语+ love/like…; can’t stand…; don’t/doesn’t mind; 宾语从句：He thinks talk shows are educational.
7．例文
Today in English class we talked about our favorite kinds of movies and the reasons. Here are the results.
30% of the students like cartoon movies best. They think cartoon movies can always make them relaxed. And some educational cartoon movies can make them think about their dreams. 25% like action movies because it is exciting to watch lots of action. Only 5% choose scary movies because of their meaningless and scary edies are the most popular. 40% like comedies. They say comedies can make them laugh. They also expect to learn some great jokes from comedies.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干提示信息，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开头点出主题：同学对各种电影的喜好的结果；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详细地介绍同学对各种电影的喜好的结果；
[亮点词汇]
①think about考虑
②expect to do sth.期望做某事
[高分句型]
They think cartoon movies can always make them relaxed.（“make+宾语+宾补”结构）
8．例文
Jim doesn’t like English Today. He likes Healthy Living and Animal World. Different Movement is his favorite. Mike likes English Today very much, and he watches it every day. But he dislikes Animal World. He also likes Healthy Living and Different Movement. Jane can’t stand English Today. She likes both Animal World and Different Movement very much. She doesn’t like Healthy Living because she thinks it’s boring.
【详解】题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时要把三个人的喜好写出来，注意合理的运用喜欢和不喜欢的动词。
例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用的是一般现在时；描述每个人喜欢的节目时，描写细致；逻辑性强，条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：both…..and…..；can’t stand；favourite show。
句型：She likes both Animal World and Different Movement very much；She doesn’t like Healthy Living because she thinks it’s boring。
【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如both…..and…..；can’t stand；favourite show以及宾语从句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
9．例文：
Dear David,
I am glad to hear from you. Today I want to tell you some information about the Dragon Boat Festival.
There is a special holiday in China—Dragon Boat Festival. It is very famous because people want to remember the famous man called Qu Yuan. In our hometown, people usually eat zongzi and have Dragon Boat races on that day. Let me tell you how to make zongzi.
We need some bamboo leaves, red dates and some rice. First, wash the rice, dates, bamboo leaves. Put some rice and three dates on two pieces of bamboo leaves. Next, tie it up with a small and thin rope. Then, put zongzi into a pot. And cook it at a very high temperature for about fifty minutes. When it is ready, serve it to your family members.
I think if you come here on that day, you will like it.
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求介绍端午节的起源和习俗，并讲述粽子的制作原料和具体过程。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述端午节的习俗，粽子的原料和具体制作过程，要叙述完整，条理清晰。
10．Dear Grandma,
How is everything going Now I’m studying in China.I have a good friend, Wang Lin. He’s more outgoing and funnier than me. He always tells me interesting stories. The stories often make me laugh. Wang Lin and I both like sports. We exercise three or four times every week. And we play basketball together after school. Also, we like to listen to music and watch action movies very much. And Wang Lin likes to watch the news, too. He thinks he can find out what’s going on around the world. But he doesn’t like soap operas. He thinks they’re boring.
Last Sunday, Wang Lin took me to the best movie theater in town—Huaxia Cinema. We saw Blunt Force Trauma. It was exciting and wonderful. I think the cinema has the most comfortable seats and the sound effect is the best. I hope to go there next time!
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
David
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，提示中给出四个写作要点。这四个要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
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