Unit 6 I'm going to study computer science.写作专练（含解析）人教新目标(Go for it)版英语八年级上册

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人教新目标（Go for it）版 英语八年级上册 Unit 6 I'm going to study computer science.写作专练
1．Wasfia Nazreen does a great job as a mountaineer. She has overcome a lot of difficulties and she has also done something special. Many people in your life have done quite well in their jobs as well. Please write about one of them with the topic “A good ______ (complete the topic with a job)”. What is his or her job How does he or she do the job What can you learn from him/her There need to be at least 60 words in your article.
上一篇文章中介绍的人物Wasfia Nazreen是一名出色的登山者，她克服种种困难登上七大洲的最高峰并且在那里转呼啦圈，以此鼓励自己国家的妇女儿童。你肯定也认识或者知道不少工作干得非常出色的人，请你以“一个好_______(用某一职业名称将标题补充完整)”为题，例如：“一个好医生、一个好老师、一个好警察……”，写一篇不少于60词的文章，写一写其中的一位。他/她做什么工作，他/她做得怎么样？你从他/她身上可以学到什么？
A good ________
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2．假如你的爸爸是一名警察。以“My dad”为题，根据下面的中文提示，为你的爸爸写一篇短文，表达一下对爸爸的敬爱之情。要求：80词左右, 可适当发挥。
提示：
1. 在家时，每天晚上吃完饭就看报纸或电视，然后就去睡觉，是个无聊的人。
2. 工作时，非常努力，帮助每个需要帮助的人，很勇敢，从不害怕坏人，是个超人。
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3．以 My English Teacher 为题目，写一篇短文。要求不少于 50 词。注意书写，表达流畅。
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4． 2022年初，我们看到许多运动员在北京冬奥会的赛场上奋力超越自我，为实现理想而拼搏。理想是人生航程的灯塔，指引着我们前进的方向，有了理想便有了努力的动力。你的理想是什么？请根据提示以“My Dream”为题，写一篇英语短文。
提示：
1.你的理想是什么？
2.为什么会有这样的理想？
要求：
1.包含提示中的内容，可适当增加细节；
2. 用词准确，意思完整，表达流畅。
3.词数：80词左右。
My dream
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5．根据汉语提示及要求,以“My Dream Job”为题用英语写一篇短文。
提示:1.想成为一名记者。2.打算给报纸、杂志写文章。3.高中毕业后想去北京上大学。4.想在一家电视台工作并环游世界。
要求:1.条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范。2.提示内容全部体现在文章中。3.不少于60词。
6．你的好朋友约翰是一名九年级的学生，目前他遇到了不少麻烦。请根据提示内容，用英语写一篇介绍好朋友约翰的短文。
Personality 有条理，注意细节，富有爱心
Hobby 痴迷于画画，擅长用色彩来表达自己的想法；最喜欢黄色，因为……
Problems 1. 父母对自己很严格, 太在乎考试分数 2. 经常熬夜做作业，疑惑是否值得花费如此多的时间
Your advice 1. ...... 2. ......
注意：1.短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2.要点须用展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3.词数在100个左右，短文首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
John, a Grade 9 student, is my best friend. He is
7．
假如这是一张你爸爸妈妈的照片，请根据照片，写一篇80个单词左右的英语短文，向大家介绍一下你的爸爸妈妈吧。
内容包括：长相、衣着及职业。
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8．某英语网站开设“走基层”栏目，征集介绍新农村农民生活的英语文章。请根据下图提示，以“My Uncle”为题，用英语介绍图中农民Li Xiang。
要求：
1. 充分利用图片内容，做适当发挥；
2. 词数：70词左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Uncle
My uncle Li Xiang is a young farmer.
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9．假如你是图中的Bi11或者图中任何一位其他成员，请你向大家介绍你的一家人。(参考词汇：farmer 农民，worker 工人，teacher 教师，doctor 医生，housewife 家庭主妇，student 学生)
要求：
1. 语句通顺，语意连贯；
2. 完整地介绍图片中的内容，可以适当发挥；
3. 不少于60词。
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10．暑假就要到了，Mike想应聘一份做老师的社会实践工作，请你根据提示帮他设计一份60词左右的应聘信，要点如下：
1.想得到这份工作，自我形象介绍。
2.你的能力：会说英语，擅长运动，如篮球，足球，游泳等。
3.去年暑假你曾经在少年宫(Children’s Palace) 担任过老师，教他们学英语，跟他们玩游戏，和孩子们相处得很好。
Dear Sir,
My name is Mike. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
1．范文：
A good teacher
I won’t forget my English teacher. His name is Zhang Lei. He is forty years old. He is very handsome. He likes his job very much. He is friendly to his students. His classes are always interesting. We all like English. He always helps us. He treats all of us as his own children. We should learn from our English teacher’s love for his own job. We all like our English teacher very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：标题要补充完整，要求包含提示的所有内容，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍此人的个人信息以及工作；
第二步，介绍他/她的工作做得怎么样；
第三步，介绍你从他/她身上学到的东西。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to sb对某人友好
②treats all of us as his own children把我们都当自己的孩子看待
③learn from向……学习
[高分句型]
①We should learn from our English teacher’s love for his own job.（含有情态动词的句型）
2．One possible version
My dad
Today I want to talk something about my dad.
My dad is forty years old. He is a policeman. At home, he often reads newspapers or watches TV after dinner every day. Then he goes to bed early. I think he is a boring man. However, he is very different when he is working. He works very hard. He helps everyone who needs help. He is very brave. He is never afraid of the bad men. I think he is a superman in my heart.
I want to say: “I love you! I am proud of you, my dad!”
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇写人的记叙文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：文章为第三人称，主要介绍自己的父亲，从在家和工作两个方面来介绍，提示内容表达完整，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明主题，介绍我的爸爸；
第二步，具体描述我的爸爸在家和工作时的两种不同的状态；
第三步，表达自己对爸爸的敬爱之情。
[亮点词汇]
① goes to bed睡觉
② is afraid of害怕
③ am proud of骄傲
④ work hard努力工作
⑤ in my heart在我心里
[高分句型]
① I think he is a boring.（宾语从句）
② He helps everyone who needs help.（定语从句）
③ However, he is very different when he is working. （时间状语从句）
3．例文：
My English Teacher
My English teacher is Miss Liu. She is 30 years old. Her birthday is on March 5th. She comes from Shanghai. She has two big eyes and a round face. She is tall and has long black hair. Miss Liu’s class is very interesting. She often helps me with my English. We all love her because she is like a friend to us.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文，以“My English Teacher”为题目，写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文要求以第三人称进行写作，时态以一般现在时为主。本文可以采用一段式写作，介绍人物时，可以描述人物的年龄，生日，籍贯以及外貌和性格等。注意主谓一致，不能有单词拼写错误等。
4．One possible version:
My dream
I have had a dream since I was 10 years old. I want to work as a teacher in the future.
I used to be a shy girl, afraid of answering questions in class. But my teachers were so kind that they often encouraged me to speak out. Then I started to feel more confident. I became quite outgoing. I am so thankful to them that I have decided to be a good teacher like them.
Working as a teacher is not a relaxing or easy job, but I will work hard in my studies and learn from my teachers. I’m sure I will make my dream come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的梦想是什么；
第二步，具体阐述为什么会有这个梦想；
第三步，最后表达为梦想要做的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be过去是
②be afraid of害怕
③work hard努力工作
[高分句型]
①I have had a dream since I was 10 years old（since引导的时间状语从句）
②I am so thankful to them that I have decided to be a good teacher like them.（so...that引导的结果状语从句）
③Working as a teacher is not a relaxing or easy job（动名词作主语）
5．My Dream Job
When I grow up, I'm going to be a reporter. Next year, I'm going to write articles for magazines and newspapers. I'm going to a university in Beijing after senior school. Maybe I'm going to find a part -time job and save some money. Then, I'm going to work for a TV station as a reporter and travel all over the world.
【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如grow up，be going to，next year，after senior school，a part time job，save some money，work for a TV station，as a reporter，all over the world等。而时间状语从句When I grow up, I'm going to be a reporter. 和Maybe I'm going to find a part time job and save some money./ Then, I'm going to work for a TV station as a reporter and travel all over the world.等并列句的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
6．John, a Grade 9 student, is my best friend. He is well-organized and pays attention to details. Besides, he has a heart full of love.John is crazy about drawing and he is good at expressing his own thoughts by using colors. His favourite color is yellow as it is the color of the sun and it represents success.
However, he has some problems at present. First, his parents are strict with him and they care too much about marks after each exam. Then, he often stays up so late to finish his homework that he even doubts whether it is worth spending so much time on it.
My suggestions are as follows. I think he’d better communicate more with his parents. It’s also a good idea for him to plan his time carefully so that he can finish his homework on time. In addition, maybe he should make a list of all the homework that he needs to do and work out how much time he needs.
I really hope my advice can be valuable to him.
【详解】这是一篇图表，要求介绍自己的朋友。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第三人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
7．例文：
Look at this picture. There are two people in it. They are my parents. My father is on the left. He is wearing a pair of jeans and a grey T-shirt. He has short and black hair and he has a friendly smile. My mother is wearing a pink skirt. She has long hair. She has big eyes. She is very pretty. My father works in a hospital. He is a doctor. My mother is an English teacher. She teaches in No. 1 Middle School. They both love their work.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点和相应图片已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“长相、衣着及职业”的提示内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍照片，引出主题；
第二步，具体介绍父母的长相、衣着及职业。
[亮点词汇]
①look at看
②a pair of jeans一条牛仔裤
③both两者都
[高分句型]
①There are two people in it.（there be句型）
②He has short and black hair and he has a friendly smile.（and连接的并列结构）
8．例文
My Uncle
My uncle Li Xiang is a young farmer. He is kind of tall and quite strong. He has big eyes and short straight hair.
From Monday to Sunday, he works hard on the farm. He usually gets up early and feeds pigs at around 8:00 in the morning. Then he does some cleaning there. It usually takes him about 2 hours to clean up the farm. In the afternoon, he is busy milking the cows. In the evening, he either plays the guitar in his room or plays basketball with his friends to relax himself.
He really enjoys his job and life .
【详解】题干解读：本题是一篇看图作文，以“My Uncle”为题，结合图片内容，介绍农民Li Xiang的情况。
写作指导：时态为一般现在时，人称用第三人称。写作时首先承接开头，介绍Li Xiang的外貌；然后介绍他的工作情况和娱乐方式；最后进行总结。注意叙述完整、条理清晰，无标点和单词拼写错误。
9．例文
Hello, everyone. My name is Bill. I have a big family.
Look, these are my grandparents, George and Mary. They are old. They have 3 children, my mother and two uncles. My mother is Laura. She is a teacher. My father’s name is Henry, he is 40, he is a doctor. My two uncles are Tom and Michael. Martha is my aunt. She is a housewife. These are my 3 cousins：Hannah, Rachel and David. We go to the same school. Do you know this girl Yes, she is my sister, Sue. She is 10. She is lovely. I love my family very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点在图片中已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山说明有一个大家庭；
第二步，具体阐述家庭成员的信息；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①a big family一个大家庭
②go to the same school去同一所学校
③be lovely可爱的
④very much非常
[高分句型]
①My father’s name is Henry. (运用名词所有格)
②I love my family very much. (副词修饰动词)
10．例文
Dear Sir,
My name is Mike. I am a student from No.1 Middle School, and I am an outgoing boy. I know that you want a teacher, and I think that I can do that work well. Because I can speak English very well. I am tall and very healthy, and I do well in playing sports. My favorite sport is basketball and football. I also like swimming. Last year, I worked as a teacher in Children’s Palace. I taught the children English and played games with them. Those children were good with me. I like them very much, and they love me, too.
If you want me, please tell me soon.　
Best wishes,
Mike
【详解】题目解读：本文是一篇应用文写作，要求根据提供要点，自我介绍，介绍自己的能力以及过往经历。注意时态的转换。
写作指导：本文以第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时和一般过去时。可分为两段，第一段介绍自己，以及经历，第二段结束语。文中涉及多个内容并列关系，注意连词和动词短语的使用。
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