Unit 9 Can you come to my party 写作专练（含解析）人教新目标(Go for it)版英语八年级上册

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人教新目标（Go for it）版 英语八年级上册 Unit 9 Can you come to my party 写作 专练
1．请根据下列提示，以"The Friends and Friendship"为题用英文写一篇短文。
提示:
1每个人都需要朋友，没有朋友的人生就像失去了阳光;
2朋友是可以分享(share)快乐( happiness)和痛苦(sadness)的人;
3朋友之间要互相帮助。
要求:条理清晰，语言流畅;时态正确;不少于70词。
The Friends and Friendship
2．书面表达
你的初中生活即将结束,结束也意味着成长。在你的成长过程中,一定有什么东西起到了重要的作用。请以“ makes me grow up”为题用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的看法。
要求:1.语言表达准确,短文连贯通顺;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.80词左右。
makes me grow up
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3．书面表达
Mike乔迁新居，他邀请Jenny下周的某个晚上到新居共进晚餐。由于Jenny下周日程已排满，不能前往。请以Jenny的口吻替Jenny回信婉拒，并表示谢意。词数在60个左右。
September
Sunday Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday Friday Saturday
Dinner with my cousin and uncle Class Music club with Jim Need to work late Need to work late Office party Amy’s birthday party
4．根据提示写一封60-80字的信。Tom 邀请Li Ping 参加他这周日的生日宴会，但Li Ping的父母出差要到下个月回来，奶奶又卧病在床，需要人照顾。再说英语考试即将来临，因此，无法前去参加生日宴会。Li Ping感到很抱歉，只好写信辞谢。
Dear Tom,
Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party. I'd love to go but I can't. My parents _______
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5．书面表达
寒假即将来临，请根据所给图画，用英语写一篇70个词左右的短文，谈谈小丽的寒假计划。
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6．请根据汉语提示， 向你的外国朋友David介绍一下中国的传统节日端午节及相应的习俗，字数80-100字左右。
提示：
端午节Dragon Boat Festival
节日介绍 端午节起源于中国，是为了纪念屈原。人们吃粽子，赛龙舟(Dragon Boat race)。
粽子的制作过程 1. 原料：粽叶(bamboo leaves)、稻米、红枣(date) 2. 步骤：1）将稻米、红枣、粽叶洗干净； 2）将稻米、三颗红枣放在两片粽叶上； 3）用线将粽子绑好(Tie it up with a small and thin rope（细绳）)； 4）放在锅里高温煮50分钟 5）和家人一起享用
Dear David,
I am glad to hear from you. Today I want to tell you some information about the Dragon Boat Festival.
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Li Hua
7．假如你是李研。你校将举行新年聚会，并允许你带一个亲朋或好友前来参加。你的朋友张阳喜欢音乐。请你给张阳写一张便条，邀请他来参加你校的新年聚会。
内容包括：
Name Zhang Yang
Like to do play the guitar
Activity New Year Party
Date on January 1st
要求：
1.便条须包括所有提示中的内容，可适当发挥并注意便条格式。
2.文中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名。
3.词数：60词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Zhang Yang,
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参考答案：
1．As we all know, everybody needs friends and friendship plays an important part in our studies, work and
everyday life. As friends we should help and trust each other and share not only joys but sorrows as well. To
keep our friendship, we shouldn't only think of ourselves. Think of what we have done for our friends instead
of what they have done for us. Once our friends are in trouble, we should try our best to help them out. Just
as the famous saying goes: A friend in need is a friend indeed. Besides, as friends we should be honest to each
other, and never tell lies. Otherwise, our friendship will end soon.
As it is with everything else, friendship also needs to be taken good care of. Once we become friends with
someone, we should help, value, and respect each other. Only in this way can our friendship last long. With
friends around us, we are sure to enjoy a happier life.
【详解】文章可以写每个人都需要朋友，友谊在日常生活中很重要important part ，朋友是可以分享(share)快乐( happiness)和痛苦(sadness)的人;朋友之间要互相帮助help each other,友谊需要小心照顾take good care of.英语作文要注意句子的时态和语态，谓语动词的正确形式，要注意句子的连贯性。
2．Love makes me grow up
I am a 15-year-old teenager now. During the past days and nights, I have learned and got many things. Many things make me grow up, especially love.
There is no doubt that love is all around. My parents take care of me all the time and they give me all their love. My friends are always nice to me, too. When I am happy, they are also happy. When I am in trouble, they help me out. And when I face difficulties, they always stand behind me and support me. I want to say that nothing is more important than love from my parents and friends.
With their love, I grow up. And because of their love, I become stronger and stronger.
【详解】这篇作文要求我们以…makes me grow up为题，介绍一下在自己的成长过程中，对自己起到重要作用的东西。写作前，应仔细审题，先把题目补充完整，在学生们的成长过程中，有影响的事情是很多的，如爱、朋友、老师、家长等，可以根据自己的实际生活，选择其中一个，然后围绕所选主题，进行详细的阐述。这是一篇开放性的作文，题目中并没有规定必须写的内容，这给了学生们足够的发挥空间，学生们可以尽情发挥想象力，但注意一定要切合主题，论据要充分。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体考虑，写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为主，穿插并列句和复合句，使叙述简洁、明了，也能调整文章节奏，提升文章档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使上下文意连贯。
【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文根据题目要求介绍了自己成长过程中起重要作用的东西。作者写的是Love爱，并围绕这一主题进行了阐述。短文内容完整、充实，叙述有条理，论据充分。文章以一般现在时为主，第一人称叙述，语法规范，用词准确，符合英语的表达习惯。文章句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了宾语从句、状语从句等复合句的句式，使文章富有节奏的变化，也提升了文章的档次。短文中使用了较丰富的句型和短语During the past days and nights, I have learned and got many things.、 Many things make me grow up, especially love、There is no doubt that love is all around. My parents take care of me all the time and they give me all their love、When I am happy, they are also happy. When I am in trouble, they help me out.、I want to say that nothing is more important than love from my parents and friends等。
3．例文：
Dear Mike,
Thank you for inviting me to have dinner at your new house. I hope that I can have dinner with you. But I have to say sorry to you. I’m really busy next week!
On Monday, I have to have class. On Tuesday, I have to go the music club with Jim. On Wednesday and Thursday I need to work late. On Friday, I have to attend the office party. On Saturday, I will go to Amy’s birthday party. On Sunday, I will have dinner with my cousin and uncle.
Have a good time! You can live a happy life at your new house.
Yours,
Jenny
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时开头表示感谢迈克的邀请；第二段解释我不能去参加聚会的愿意，我下周要做的很多事；第三段祝他玩得愉快。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时，用一般将来时解释我下周要做的事，叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点：
短语：invite sb to do sth，say sorry to sb，need to do sth，have a good time。
句型：宾语从句that I can have dinner with you。
4．Dear Tom,
Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party.I'd love to go but I can't.My parents are out on business.They are coming back next month.And now I have to look after my grandma because she is ill in bed.And I also need to study for my coming English exam.I'm very sorry but I can't go to your party.Thank you for asking me.I hope you can have a good time.
Li Ping
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，提示内容就是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
5．The winter holiday is coming. Here are my plans for it. First, I will keep playing sports.Second ,I am going to spend more time in reading so that I can get good grades next term.Third, I’m going to help my parents do housework and go shopping. At last,I am planning to visit my grandparents.
I am sure I will have a wonderful vacation. I can’t wait.
【详解】（1）弄清图画内容，把握情节线索，根据图画在脑海中串联出完整的故事，注意图画中的细节。
（2）结合提示词，明确考查意图。根据提示，选择正确的时态，运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型，作适当展开，联想，就能比较完整地表达出画面的意思了。
（3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯。
（4）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用。
（5）注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致等。
试题分析：这是一篇看图作文。谈论寒假计划作文，本文时态主要是一般将来时。（1）对于看图作文一定要看清画面，了解图示所表达的主要内容，把握情节线索，根据图画在脑海中串联出完整的故事，注意图画中的细节。 尤其要注意图片中的人物、地点和背景；把握关键词语，积极展开联想；逐图进行描述，综合起来思考。（2）结合提示词，明确考查意图。根据提示，选择正确的时态，运用正确的时态，用自己最熟悉最有把握的句型和词汇来表达。（3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯。尽可能地用多样化的句子结构和句型，使语言丰富、流畅。（4）写完之后要检查修改。要对照题目要求，认真通读全句、对话或短文，检查内容有无遗漏，时态、语态是否妥当，单词的拼写是否正确，主谓是否一致，句子的语序和表达是否符合英文习惯等，尽量减少错误。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的作文。时态运用正确，内容要点完整、应用词汇灵活准确，句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，上下文连贯，字数符合要求。
6．例文：
Dear David,
I am glad to hear from you. Today I want to tell you some information about the Dragon Boat Festival.
There is a special holiday in China—Dragon Boat Festival. It is very famous because people want to remember the famous man called Qu Yuan. In our hometown, people usually eat zongzi and have Dragon Boat races on that day. Let me tell you how to make zongzi.
We need some bamboo leaves, red dates and some rice. First, wash the rice, dates, bamboo leaves. Put some rice and three dates on two pieces of bamboo leaves. Next, tie it up with a small and thin rope. Then, put zongzi into a pot. And cook it at a very high temperature for about fifty minutes. When it is ready, serve it to your family members.
I think if you come here on that day, you will like it.
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求介绍端午节的起源和习俗，并讲述粽子的制作原料和具体过程。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述端午节的习俗，粽子的原料和具体制作过程，要叙述完整，条理清晰。
7．Dear Zhang Yang,
Our school will hold a New Year Party and allow us to bring a family or friend to attend. I know you like music and guitar. I’d like to invite you to our school’s New Year Party. The date is January 1st. You must be very happy to come.
I look forward to your performance.
Yours,
Li Yan
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一张便条；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意结合便条的提示要点进行写作，邀请张阳来参加学校的新年聚会，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。首先介绍学校将举办新年聚会，并邀请其来参加，从而引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。邀请张阳参加学校的新年聚会，并介绍新年聚会的日期。
第三步，书写结语。表达“我期待你的表演。”的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①invite sb to…邀请某人
②look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①Our school will hold a New Year Party and allow you to bring a family or friend to attend.（一般将来时）
②I’d like to invite you to our school’s New Year Party.（I’d like to结构）
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