Unit 10 If you go to the party, you'll have a great time! 写作专练（含解析）人教新目标(Go for it)版英语八年级上册

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人教新目标（Go for it）版 英语八年级上册 Unit 10 If you go to the party, you'll have a great time! 写作专练
1．书面表达
假设你的朋友是孙文，今天英语口语课上的话题是“Help Your Friends Solve Problems”。请根据以下提示，跟大家分享以下你是如何帮助朋友解决问题的。
提示：1. What was your friend’s problem
2. How did you solve it
要求：1. 语句通顺，符合逻辑，可适当发挥；
2. 70词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Sun Wen is one of my good friends. He had a problem once. _____________________
I was very happy to help my friend solve his problem.
2．书面表达
寒假即将来临，说说你的打算怎样度过。题目已给出。要求：
尽量使用“be going to”结构；
尽量避免语法和单词拼写方面的错误；
注意书写规范美观；
篇幅在60词以上。
I’m going to have a nice winter vacation
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3．你们学校将举办一次英语角，请你代表学生会（The Student Union）根据提示写一则60词左右的通知。
时间：周五晚7点至9点 地点：学校会议室 参加人员：在校学生
注意事项：不要带食物和饮料；不要中途离开(during the English corner)；
不要带外校同学； 不能穿牛仔裤；别忘记带学生证（school ID card.）。
Notice
All the students:
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The Student Union
4．你校将组织以“争做好学生”为主题的英语作文比赛，请根据所给提示，作适当发挥，写一篇 80 词左右的短文比赛。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Be a Good Student
If you want to be a good student, I think you need to do the following things. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．我们只有一个地球，作为中学生，我们应该为保护地球做一份贡献。请根据下面的图画提示，以“Let’s protect the Earth”为题，写一篇短文。
参考词汇：reduce减少；dustbin垃圾箱；recycle回收利用
要求：
1. 70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
Let’s protect the Earth
We have only one Earth. We can’t live without the Earth.
6．书面表达
寒假即将来临，请根据所给图画，用英语写一篇70个词左右的短文，谈谈小丽的寒假计划。
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7．假如你是Teenager杂志的主编，你叫Dr. Lee最近你收到你的读者Rick的来信，向你倾诉他的苦恼，他因太过肥胖被同学们嘲笑。请你给他一些合理建议帮助他摆托烦恼。80词左右。
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8．你们班召开一个关于环保为主题的班会，请你根据下面表格的内容提示，写一篇70 字左右的发言稿（文章开头已给出），倡议大家保护环境，从我做起！
地球现状 人们每天捕捞很多鱼、往河里倒垃圾
人们砍伐树木、为了获得能量燃烧东西
(自行补充 1-2 点)
应对措施 停止往河流里排放污水
多种树，并保护好它们
(自行补充 1-2 点)
Saving the Earth
Hello, everyone! As we know, our Earth is getting worse and worse. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．你们学校将举办英语角，请你代表学生会根据下表提示写一则通知。词数：60左右，开头和结尾已经给出。不计入总词数。
时间 周五晚7点至9点
地点 学校会议室
参加人员 在校学生
注意事项 不要带食物和饮料；不要中途离开；不要带外校同学；不能穿牛仔裤；别忘记带学生证。
Notice
All the students,
We'll have an Engish corner in the school meeting room on Friday erening._________________________________________________
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The Student Union
参考答案：
1．Sun Wen is one of my food friends. He had a problem once. He dreamed of being a basketball player. He played basketball after school every day. But his parents wanted him to be a pianist. They asked him to take piano lessons and join in different kinds of competitions. He didn’t like them.
I told Sun Wen to have a talk with his parents and tell them about his dream. I also asked him to spend enough time on his studies. In the end, his parents agreed to let him play basketball.
I was very happy to help my friend solve his problem.
【详解】这是一篇命题作文。根据要点提示，短文要围绕两个问题去表达：列举出问题所在以及解决问题的办法，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要围绕要点组织材料，确定时态以及主要词汇等问题，由于是描述如何帮助朋友解决问题的，故时态主要为一般过去时态。写作中，应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构特点，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
2．略
【详解】这篇书面表达是给材料作文，根据提供的信息，写出你的寒假中的打算，特别强调的是用“be going to”结构。避免语法和单词拼写方面的错误。
3．Notice
All the students:
We’ll have an English corner in the school meeting room on Friday evening. All our school students can join it. The English corner will last from 7:00 to 9:00. You should not bring food or drinks to it. Don’t leave during the English corner. And you’d better not invite students from other schools. You should not wear jeans. At last , please remember to bring your school ID card.
The Student Union
【详解】只是一篇应用文体，根据提示写通知，在写作过程中，注意了格式，没有漏掉所给出的提示词，包括时间、地点、参加人员等；也没有漏掉注意事项中的知识点，语法方面，运用所学时态祈使句和将来时，语句通顺，符合逻辑。
4．例文
Be a Good Student
If you want to be a good student, I think you need to do the following things.
First, you should study hard. You need to listen carefully in class and do your homework by yourself.
Also, you should have a colourful life. You can join different clubs to learn new skills, read more books or do other interesting things in your free time.
What’s more, a good student helps people in need. You can be a volunteer at your community centre to help your neighbours. You can also give some of your pocket money to help children in poor areas.
A healthy body is very important for a good student, so you had better enjoy sports like running, jogging and swimming.
If you can follow all the above, I am sure you will be a good student.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示，写一篇以“争做好学生”为主题的英语作文比赛。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示要点，分别就认真学习、拥有丰富多彩的生活、帮助有需要的人、运动等方面提出相关的建议，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，表达以上方法会奏效并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①have a colourful life拥有丰富多彩的生活
[高分句型]
①A healthy body is very important for a good student, so you had better enjoy sports like running, jogging and swimming.（so连接两个并列分句）
②If you can follow all the above, I am sure you will be a good student.（if引导的条件状语从句，省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）
5．例文
Let’s protect the Earth
We have only one Earth. We can’t live without the Earth. The Earth is a beautiful place, but people make much pollution on Earth now. What should we do to protect the Earth
First, let’s go to school on foot. It can reduce the air pollution. Second, don’t throw rubbish everywhere and please put it into the dustbin. Third, let’s recycle the old things like waste paper. Last, as students, we should plant more trees every year. They can make the air clean and our Earth beautiful.
In a word, if everyone tries his best to protect the Earth, it will become better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给图画提示，不要遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明地球上有很多污染，我们应该要采取措施；
第二步，具体阐述具体的措施：步行上学、垃圾放入垃圾箱、回收垃圾以及多植树；
第三步，最后作小结。
[亮点词汇]
①on foot步行
②make sth adj.使得某物……
③in a word总之
[高分句型]
In a word, if everyone tries his best to protect the Earth, it will become better and better.（if引导的条件状语从句）
6．The winter holiday is coming. Here are my plans for it. First, I will keep playing sports.Second ,I am going to spend more time in reading so that I can get good grades next term.Third, I’m going to help my parents do housework and go shopping. At last,I am planning to visit my grandparents.
I am sure I will have a wonderful vacation. I can’t wait.
【详解】（1）弄清图画内容，把握情节线索，根据图画在脑海中串联出完整的故事，注意图画中的细节。
（2）结合提示词，明确考查意图。根据提示，选择正确的时态，运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型，作适当展开，联想，就能比较完整地表达出画面的意思了。
（3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯。
（4）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用。
（5）注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致等。
试题分析：这是一篇看图作文。谈论寒假计划作文，本文时态主要是一般将来时。（1）对于看图作文一定要看清画面，了解图示所表达的主要内容，把握情节线索，根据图画在脑海中串联出完整的故事，注意图画中的细节。 尤其要注意图片中的人物、地点和背景；把握关键词语，积极展开联想；逐图进行描述，综合起来思考。（2）结合提示词，明确考查意图。根据提示，选择正确的时态，运用正确的时态，用自己最熟悉最有把握的句型和词汇来表达。（3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯。尽可能地用多样化的句子结构和句型，使语言丰富、流畅。（4）写完之后要检查修改。要对照题目要求，认真通读全句、对话或短文，检查内容有无遗漏，时态、语态是否妥当，单词的拼写是否正确，主谓是否一致，句子的语序和表达是否符合英文习惯等，尽量减少错误。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的作文。时态运用正确，内容要点完整、应用词汇灵活准确，句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，上下文连贯，字数符合要求。
7．One possible version:
Dear Rick,
I’ve heard from you and I feel sorry about it. I totally understand how you feel when someone laugh at you. Here is my advice.
Firstly, There is no need to care about what others think of you. The most important thing is to be yourself. Secondly, try to eat healthily-keep away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables. It can help you lose weight. Thirdly, I advise you to play sports often. You should get up early and exercise.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Dr. Lee
【详解】1、题干解读：题目假设你是Teenager杂志的主编，最近收到读者Rick的来信，他向你倾诉了他的苦恼，他因太胖被同学们嘲笑，请你给他一些合理的建议帮助他摆脱烦恼，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第二人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍建议时，应详细具体，简单明了，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
8．例文：
Saving the Earth
Hello, everyone! As we know, our earth is getting worse and worse. How to protect the environment is a problem in the world. People catch a lot of fish every day. They also throw rubbish into rivers. This pollutes the water. What’s more, people cut down many trees in the forests. They burn things to make energy. This pollutes the air. It’s time for us to do something to save the earth. We must stop putting waste water into rivers. When we go shopping, we can take our own shopping bags. It’s important for us to plant more trees and protect these trees from cutting down. Everyone should try his best to protect our earth and make our earth more and more beautiful. Let’s take action now.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”倡议大家保护环境，陈述地球现状，谈谈保护环境的措施。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引言，导入正文；
第二步，陈述地球现状；
第三步，谈谈保护环境的措施。
[亮点词汇]
① cut down 砍伐
② stop doing sth 停止做某事
③ protect … from …保护……免于……
[高分句型]
① What’s more, people cut down many trees in the forests.（使用插入语what’s more）
② When we go shopping, we can take our own shopping bags.（when引导的时间状语从句）
9．Notice
All the students,
We'll have an English corner in the school meeting room on Friday evening. All our school students can join it. The English corner will last from 7:00 to 9:00. You should not bring food or drinks to it. Don't leave during your stay here.And you'd better not invite students.from other schools.You should not wear jeans. At last, please remember to bring your school ID card.
The Student Union
【详解】本文是一篇应用文体，根据提示写通知，在写作过程中，注意了格式，没有漏掉所给的要点，包括时间、地点、参加人员等；也没有漏掉注意事项中的提示内容，语法方面，运用所学时态祈使句和将来时，语句通顺，符合逻辑。
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