最幸运或最不幸的一天
写作任务 (Section B 3a & 3b)
假如你校英文报Sharing栏目正面向全体学生征文,题目为“My Luckiest / Unluckiest Day”。请你写一篇英语短文参加此次活动,向大家讲述你最幸运或最不幸的一天。
【审清题目】
内容:记叙最幸运或最不幸的一天
文体:记叙文
人称:以第一人称为主
时态:以一般过去时为主
【头脑风暴】
【提供素材】
常用单词和短语
在横线上填写单词或短语。
幸运的事 不幸的事
相 关 表 达 ▲ find the lost things ● look around for ..., ask ... about my ..., give ... back to me ... ● be excited / surprised / glad ... ▲ lose things ● be careless / (1)________________(沮丧的) / worried ...
▲ arrive at the school early ● rush out of the door, be out of breath (上气不接下气) after running, give me a lift, get help from the police, drive me to school, get a gift ... ▲ be late for school ● get caught in rush-hour traffic, be stuck in heavy traffic, forget to set the alarm (clock), rain / snow heavily, (2)________________(得了重感冒), forget to take my ID card / homework ...
▲ win a competition / game ● (3)________________(尽可能多练习), get enough sleep the night before, have a good team spirit, (4)________________(对……有天赋) ... ● be confident (自信的) / positive (乐观的) / well-prepared ... ▲ lose a competition / game ● be out of practice, make stupid mistakes, look down upon the opponents (对手), not take sb. / sth. seriously, get hurt the day before ... ● be (5)________________(紧张的) / bigheaded ...
Key: 1. upset 2. have / get / catch a bad cold 3. practice as much as possible
4. have a talent for ... 5. nervous
常用句型
1. It was the (un)luckiest day of my life.
2. By then, I realized that ...
3. I couldn't believe that ...
4. I don't regret ... because ...
5. Since then, I have learned that ...
6. How (un)lucky I was / What good luck / bad luck!
【谋篇布局】
将括号内的汉语翻译成英语,补全短文。
My Luckiest Day
介绍最幸运的一天的日期 I will never forget the date October 11th, 2022. That was the luckiest day of my life.
叙述这一天发生的事件 On that day, I got up at 6:50 a.m. as usual. (1)____________________________(早饭后我爸爸开车送我去学校). I couldn't believe that I was the first to get to the classroom. Then I saw a box with a note on it. It read, “A gift for the first student to get to the classroom.” Later my teacher explained to us that (2)____________________________(她想鼓励我们早起). Her pet phrase was “The early bird catches the worm.” I was lucky enough to get the gift. In the afternoon, (3)____________________________(我们队赢得了篮球比赛). At first, the two teams were neck and neck. But in the last minute, I scored three points, which completely changed the result of the game. I had never played so well before that day. My coach said I was a lucky dog. The school was over at 5:30 p.m. By the time I got to the bus station,(4)________________________ (我意识到我没有带钱). It was embarrassing to ask strangers for help. At that time, my classmate Jack saw me and he helped me.
总结感受 After getting home, I told my parents (5)____________________________(这一天所发生的事). Mom said I was very lucky. How I wish my good luck would always be so great.
Key:
1. After breakfast my dad / father drove me to school
2. she wanted to encourage us to get up / rise early
3. our team won the basketball game
4. I had realized I had no money with me
5. what had happened in the day过去完成时
一、过去完成时的构成
助动词had+过去分词
二、过去完成时的用法
1. 表示在过去某一时间或动作之前已经发生或完成了的动作或状态,即这一动作或状态发生的时间是“过去的过去”。如:
I forgot to tell you that I had read this novel before.
2. 表示一个动作或状态在过去某时之前已经开始,一直延续到这一过去时间,而且到那时还未结束,仍有继续下去的可能性。如:
Luke had been in China for seven years by the end of last year.
三、一些使用过去完成时的常见情况
1. 由by(在某时前,到某时)构成的短语表示过去的时间时,句子常用过去完成时。如:
By ten o'clock yesterday evening, she had finished her homework.
2. 由by the time (在……以前)和when / before引导的时间状语从句使用了一般过去时,而主句的动作发生在从句动作之前,此时主句用过去完成时。如:
By the time I got home, my father had left for New York.
Ann had been at the bus stop for 20 minutes when a bus finally came.
Tim had rushed out of the door before I could stop him.
3. 在含有宾语从句的复合句中,主句使用了一般过去时,而从句的动作发生在主句动作之前,此时从句用过去完成时。如:
The Smiths were glad to know that their son had won the competition.
【链接】现在完成时与过去完成时的区别
现在完成时表示的动作发生在说话之前某个没有明确说出的过去时间,侧重过去发生的动作对现在产生的影响或造成的结果,与现在有关;过去完成时的动作发生在“过去的过去”,它是一个相对的时态,不能离开过去的时间而独立存在。如:
We have lived here for ten years.
We had lived here for ten years when we had to move last year.
【运用】
Ⅰ. 根据提示词语填空
1. My father _______(work) as a teacher for 10 years before he decided to take up writing.
2. Jack _______(clean) the classroom before his classmates arrived.
3. I didn't know the woman who spoke to me. I _______(never see) her before.
4. I _______(set out) for school by the time Lisa called me.
5. Peter was hungry because he _______(not eat) for over 8 hours.
Ⅱ. 完成句子
1. 在我到达电影院之前,电影已经开始了。
The film _______ _______ by the time I arrived at the cinema.
2. Susan生我的气了,因为我迟到了。她已经等了我20分钟。
Susan was angry with me because I was late and she _______ _______ _______ me for 20 minutes.
3. 当我看到Lisa时,她父母已经告诉了她那个坏消息。
When I saw Lisa, her parents _______ _______ _______ about that bad news.
4. 到上学期期末,你读完了多少本书?
How many books _______ _______ _______ _______ by the end of the last term
5. 她说她以前没有参观过故宫博物院。
She said that she _______ _______ the Palace Museum before.
【答案】
Ⅰ. 1. had worked 2. had cleaned 3. had never seen 4. had set out 5. hadn't eaten
Ⅱ. 1. had begun / started 2. had waited for 3. had told her 4. had you finished reading
5. hadn't visited