2024届高考英语读后续写训练2（poppy）学案（含答案）
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2024届高考英语读后续写训练2（poppy）
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 续写的词数为150左右。
“I’m going to miss you so much, Poppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions get the better of him.
His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.
The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it.” he said. “I’ll see you back home in a month, okay ” His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy’s mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.”
The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week. Poppy didn’t seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit. Poppy didn’t.
They offered the dog some of her favourite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried, “ What should we do to cheer Poppy up ” asked Dad. “We’ve tried everything.”
“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mom. “Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Let’s get a little dog for Poppy.”
It didn’t take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them home as usual, but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging（摆动）ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.
Paragraph 1
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. _______________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. _________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Review of the original story:
1. Theme:
2. Setting:
3. Character (major & minor)
4. Plots & Emotion
I other freshmen
5. Foreshadowing: (should be related to _________________________________)
1)
2)
3)
4)
6. Analysis of given sentences
Paragraph 1
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. _______________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. _________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
II. Paragraph 1:
the puppy 刚到家的描写：
王艺*：It had a pair of big eyes, two watery eyes, brown nose and yellow fur. It barked at the parents slightly like saying “Hello” to them. Then Poppy walked to it, sniffing its tail curiously.
王文*：At the beginning, the puppy was so scared that he stayed in the box, but with the parents’ laughter, he jumped out of the box and barked as Poppy had done.
陈*：The little dog seemed to be frightened as it was her first time to have come to this family. But Poppy seemed to be very interested in the new family member. She approached the little dog with her tail wagging faster.
唐文*：The puppy seemed shy at first, but after Poppy shared her favourite toys with him, they quickly became close friends.
郑子*： “He is the new member of our family,” said Dad with a smile. Then Poppy rushed to the puppy, and wagged his tail faster than ever before and smelled him.
温慧*：Poppy shook her tail as a way of welcoming, only to find the little dog jumping out of the box quickly and running around her.
潘晟*：The little dog walked out of the box with the tail wagging and a big smile on the face.
Poppy 初见小狗
郑*：Poppy was excited and surprised, barking to show her welcome to Bobby.
...Poppy kindly showed him around and helped him adapt to the new environment.
唐文*：Poppy was shocked and stared at the puppy for a while, but soon she began wagging her tail again, barking and jumping happily around the box.
吴昱*：The big dog blinked her eyes and stepped toward the puppy, smelling him all around.
钟骏*：Poppy caught sight of the puppy with her tail wagging faster.
吴东*：Poppy began jumping up and down and a smile appeared on her face.
潘晟*: Poppy was amazed by the puppy and got his nose close to him, smelling him carefully.
The parents反应：
郑*: “That’s your new friend Bobby,” Dad smiled, “Go and make his acquaintance and show him around.”
王文*：The parents were also delighted to witness the scene.
罗新*：Dad and mom were happy to see the harmonious scene and took out their present, two big bowls of peanut butter treats. The two friends had a wonderful dinner. Her owners looked at the happy scene with a big smile, “See Poppy will not feel lonely any more,” said Mom. “Yes, and our son must be satisfied with this,” answered Dad.
吴昱*：”Look! They are getting close,” Mom said happily.
郑子*：Dad and Mom also relaxed themselves to enjoy this calm and happy daily life.
吴东*： “Poppy looks very excited and your idea seems to work.” Dad said to Mum.
温慧*：“What a lovely dog!” said the boy’s mother. “Well, let’s name it Sherry. Ok ” Asked Dad. As mom nodded her head, the two dogs quickly found their shared hobby, the ball. They played it together happily and became familiar with each other. They walked together and ate peanut together. The parents smiled when they found the change of Poppy.
Poppy and the puppy play together: 两只小狗一起玩
刘俊*：The old lady shared her attractive toy with his new friend. They played the lovely toy up and down all day.
张梓*：To get along well with each other, Poppy always led the little puppy to run around and shared her favourite food together. Because of the coming of the little puppy, Poppy became cheerful as usual and lived a happy life day by day.
吴昱*：The next day, when the parents got home, they found that Poppy was playing with the little dog, rolling all around together in the living room.
郑子*：After that, Poppy did everything with the puppy every day. She ate dinner with him, played toys as well as took daily walks with him.
陈*：The next few days, Poppy and Shelly got familiar with each other soon and became good friends. They played together, ate together and slept together.
承上启下：
罗新*：Since then, Poppy was back to her usual cheerful self and even happier with her new friend. It seemed that she would never be sad again.
郑*：They gradually became good friends and Poppy was no longer lonely. The parents were also happy as the idea worked.
吴昱*：“It seems that we don’t have to worry about her any more,” said Dad. “Aye, but we have to hope that they won’t break anything.” laughed mom.
刘俊*：Happy time always passed quickly. As time went on, it was time for the boy to go back home.
精彩描写和表达：
何晴*：Poppy was first surprised and stared at the little dog with her curious eyes.
Poppy sniffed the little dog instantly and barked in a delightful voice as if she was saying welcome to the puppy.
刘美*：She observed around with her black eyes which looked like beans. Poppy stepped forward to smell her white fur, but the puppy stepped back, stared at Poppy for a while and finally accepted her.
何佳*：As Poppy made eye contact with the little dog, it seemed as if something broke the firm gap that separated Poppy from others.
陆嘉*：The sweet puppy seemed curious, looking and smelling around. Later, his attention was attracted by Poppy, while his tail was wagging quickly as Poppy’s was.
郭宝*：It was a cute baby dog with golden fur, wagging its tail to Poppy as if saying “Hello” to her. Poppy was excited too. And it just took a few days / seconds before the two lovely dogs became friends and refreshed the house with warm and happy atmosphere.
于安*：The little dog was so active that Dad called it “Lucky”, hoping it could bring happiness to Poppy.
王文*：The old girl was barking and running around the box. Her wagging tail was like a fan. This was the first time that she had become so happy since the boy’s last playing with her.
邹郁*：Poppy got close to the puppy. The puppy blinked her beautiful eyes, looking at mom, dad and Poppy purely.
7.Possible writing:
Paragraph 1
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. The little dog was very cute but was afraid of the new environment. Poppy ran around the box and looked happy. A few minutes later, the little dog got out of the box. Poppy led it to her playing place. At first, the little dog was shy, but an hour later, they became friends and played with each other cheerfully. After that, Poppy wasn’t unhappy at all. She played with the little dog all day. ---罗宇*
Paragraph 2
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Poppy first saw a white and small head, and then its round body. Poppy’s tail wagged faster and faster. She touched the little the puppy carefully and used her nose to smell it lightly. The parents left the room quietly with a smile after seeing that. That evening, Poppy took her daily walk with her new and lovely friend.
-- 陈诗*
Paragraph 1
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. The puppy seemed to be curious about everything. He jumped out of the box and walked around clumsily. Poppy kept following him with her eyes staring at his movement. At the beginning, Poppy didn’t allow him to touch any stuff she owned. But gradually, to mom’s and dad’s delight, she began to share her favourite toy, her comfortable bed, her delious food, and her love with the puppy. Day by day, Poppy and the puppy enjoyed a happy life. --- 丘睿*
Paragraph 1
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Poppy jumped with joy at the sight of the little dog. She lowered her head to watch it curiously. Then she became so excited that she accidentally knocked over the box, out came the little one, who was not shy and instantly got familiar with Poppy. It didn’t take long before the two palyed around the house, cheerfully running after each other.
II. Paragraph 2
Possible writing：
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. He couldn’t wait to meet with Poppy. When he opened the door, he saw Poppy playing toys with the puppy. Seeing the boy, Poppy rushed to him, licking his leg, and then ran around him. Suddenly, she went back, inviting the puppy to meet her host. Dad and Mom said, “Without you, Poppy is very lonely, so we have bought the puppy to accompany her. Now, as you see, they have become good friends.” The boy was excited to have such two cute dogs.
--- 关学*
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. Stepping into the house, he received two big hugs from two cute dogs in surprise and excitement. Knowing the reason for the little puppy’s coming, he treated him as his precious gift. After dinner, he took the dogs for a walk and played with them in the park. Since then, the house has been filled with happiness. And there were two dogs waiting for the boy’s coming back.
--- 陈诗*
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. “I’m back!” he shouted. The answer was the coming of two excited dogs. As his parents hadn’t informed him of the puppy, he was so surprised that he turned back to check if it was the right house. When he finally calmed down, he sat down to give a huge hug to both of them. “The puppy haven’t had a name yet, and we want you to decide.” his parents came over and said. “What about ‘Bobby’ ” asked the boy. “That is a great one!” Two days later, it was time to say goodbye. The boy hugged his parents as well as his dogs, saying, “I’m going to miss you so much, Mum, Dad, Poppy and Bobby.”
-- 丘睿*
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. He had been missing his parents and the dog since it was the first time that he had been away from home for such a long time. When the boy caught sight of Poppy, he went rushing toward the dog and bent down to give her a big hug. Suddenly, the boy noticed the little dog. “Oh my god, who is this ” His parents laughed at the look of surprise on his face. “It’s Poppy’s new companion.” said Mom.
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 续写的词数为150左右。
“I’m going to miss you so much, Poppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions get the better of him.
His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.
The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it.” he said. “I’ll see you back home in a month, okay ” His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy’s mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.”
The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week. Poppy didn’t seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit. Poppy didn’t.
They offered the dog some of her favourite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried, “ What should we do to cheer Poppy up ” asked Dad. “We’ve tried everything.”
“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mom. “Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Let’s get a little dog for Poppy.”
It didn’t take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them home as usual, but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging（摆动）ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.
Paragraph 1
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. _______________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. _________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Review of the original story:
1. Theme:
2. Setting:
3. Character (major & minor)
4. Plots & Emotion
I other freshmen
5. Foreshadowing: (should be related to _________________________________)
1)
2)
3)
4)
6. Analysis of given sentences
Paragraph 1
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. _______________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. _________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
II. Paragraph 1:
the puppy 刚到家的描写：
王艺*：It had a pair of big eyes, two watery eyes, brown nose and yellow fur. It barked at the parents slightly like saying “Hello” to them. Then Poppy walked to it, sniffing its tail curiously.
王文*：At the beginning, the puppy was so scared that he stayed in the box, but with the parents’ laughter, he jumped out of the box and barked as Poppy had done.
陈*：The little dog seemed to be frightened as it was her first time to have come to this family. But Poppy seemed to be very interested in the new family member. She approached the little dog with her tail wagging faster.
唐文*：The puppy seemed shy at first, but after Poppy shared her favourite toys with him, they quickly became close friends.
郑子*： “He is the new member of our family,” said Dad with a smile. Then Poppy rushed to the puppy, and wagged his tail faster than ever before and smelled him.
温慧*：Poppy shook her tail as a way of welcoming, only to find the little dog jumping out of the box quickly and running around her.
潘晟*：The little dog walked out of the box with the tail wagging and a big smile on the face.
Poppy 初见小狗
郑*：Poppy was excited and surprised, barking to show her welcome to Bobby.
...Poppy kindly showed him around and helped him adapt to the new environment.
唐文*：Poppy was shocked and stared at the puppy for a while, but soon she began wagging her tail again, barking and jumping happily around the box.
吴昱*：The big dog blinked her eyes and stepped toward the puppy, smelling him all around.
钟骏*：Poppy caught sight of the puppy with her tail wagging faster.
吴东*：Poppy began jumping up and down and a smile appeared on her face.
潘晟*: Poppy was amazed by the puppy and got his nose close to him, smelling him carefully.
The parents反应：
郑*: “That’s your new friend Bobby,” Dad smiled, “Go and make his acquaintance and show him around.”
王文*：The parents were also delighted to witness the scene.
罗新*：Dad and mom were happy to see the harmonious scene and took out their present, two big bowls of peanut butter treats. The two friends had a wonderful dinner. Her owners looked at the happy scene with a big smile, “See Poppy will not feel lonely any more,” said Mom. “Yes, and our son must be satisfied with this,” answered Dad.
吴昱*：”Look! They are getting close,” Mom said happily.
郑子*：Dad and Mom also relaxed themselves to enjoy this calm and happy daily life.
吴东*： “Poppy looks very excited and your idea seems to work.” Dad said to Mum.
温慧*：“What a lovely dog!” said the boy’s mother. “Well, let’s name it Sherry. Ok ” Asked Dad. As mom nodded her head, the two dogs quickly found their shared hobby, the ball. They played it together happily and became familiar with each other. They walked together and ate peanut together. The parents smiled when they found the change of Poppy.
Poppy and the puppy play together: 两只小狗一起玩
刘俊*：The old lady shared her attractive toy with his new friend. They played the lovely toy up and down all day.
张梓*：To get along well with each other, Poppy always led the little puppy to run around and shared her favourite food together. Because of the coming of the little puppy, Poppy became cheerful as usual and lived a happy life day by day.
吴昱*：The next day, when the parents got home, they found that Poppy was playing with the little dog, rolling all around together in the living room.
郑子*：After that, Poppy did everything with the puppy every day. She ate dinner with him, played toys as well as took daily walks with him.
陈*：The next few days, Poppy and Shelly got familiar with each other soon and became good friends. They played together, ate together and slept together.
承上启下：
罗新*：Since then, Poppy was back to her usual cheerful self and even happier with her new friend. It seemed that she would never be sad again.
郑*：They gradually became good friends and Poppy was no longer lonely. The parents were also happy as the idea worked.
吴昱*：“It seems that we don’t have to worry about her any more,” said Dad. “Aye, but we have to hope that they won’t break anything.” laughed mom.
刘俊*：Happy time always passed quickly. As time went on, it was time for the boy to go back home.
精彩描写和表达：
何晴*：Poppy was first surprised and stared at the little dog with her curious eyes.
Poppy sniffed the little dog instantly and barked in a delightful voice as if she was saying welcome to the puppy.
刘美*：She observed around with her black eyes which looked like beans. Poppy stepped forward to smell her white fur, but the puppy stepped back, stared at Poppy for a while and finally accepted her.
何佳*：As Poppy made eye contact with the little dog, it seemed as if something broke the firm gap that separated Poppy from others.
陆嘉*：The sweet puppy seemed curious, looking and smelling around. Later, his attention was attracted by Poppy, while his tail was wagging quickly as Poppy’s was.
郭宝*：It was a cute baby dog with golden fur, wagging its tail to Poppy as if saying “Hello” to her. Poppy was excited too. And it just took a few days / seconds before the two lovely dogs became friends and refreshed the house with warm and happy atmosphere.
于安*：The little dog was so active that Dad called it “Lucky”, hoping it could bring happiness to Poppy.
王文*：The old girl was barking and running around the box. Her wagging tail was like a fan. This was the first time that she had become so happy since the boy’s last playing with her.
邹郁*：Poppy got close to the puppy. The puppy blinked her beautiful eyes, looking at mom, dad and Poppy purely.
7.Possible writing:
Paragraph 1
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. The little dog was very cute but was afraid of the new environment. Poppy ran around the box and looked happy. A few minutes later, the little dog got out of the box. Poppy led it to her playing place. At first, the little dog was shy, but an hour later, they became friends and played with each other cheerfully. After that, Poppy wasn’t unhappy at all. She played with the little dog all day. ---罗宇*
Paragraph 2
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Poppy first saw a white and small head, and then its round body. Poppy’s tail wagged faster and faster. She touched the little the puppy carefully and used her nose to smell it lightly. The parents left the room quietly with a smile after seeing that. That evening, Poppy took her daily walk with her new and lovely friend.
-- 陈诗*
Paragraph 1
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. The puppy seemed to be curious about everything. He jumped out of the box and walked around clumsily. Poppy kept following him with her eyes staring at his movement. At the beginning, Poppy didn’t allow him to touch any stuff she owned. But gradually, to mom’s and dad’s delight, she began to share her favourite toy, her comfortable bed, her delious food, and her love with the puppy. Day by day, Poppy and the puppy enjoyed a happy life. --- 丘睿*
Paragraph 1
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Poppy jumped with joy at the sight of the little dog. She lowered her head to watch it curiously. Then she became so excited that she accidentally knocked over the box, out came the little one, who was not shy and instantly got familiar with Poppy. It didn’t take long before the two palyed around the house, cheerfully running after each other.
II. Paragraph 2
Possible writing：
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. He couldn’t wait to meet with Poppy. When he opened the door, he saw Poppy playing toys with the puppy. Seeing the boy, Poppy rushed to him, licking his leg, and then ran around him. Suddenly, she went back, inviting the puppy to meet her host. Dad and Mom said, “Without you, Poppy is very lonely, so we have bought the puppy to accompany her. Now, as you see, they have become good friends.” The boy was excited to have such two cute dogs.
--- 关学*
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. Stepping into the house, he received two big hugs from two cute dogs in surprise and excitement. Knowing the reason for the little puppy’s coming, he treated him as his precious gift. After dinner, he took the dogs for a walk and played with them in the park. Since then, the house has been filled with happiness. And there were two dogs waiting for the boy’s coming back.
--- 陈诗*
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. “I’m back!” he shouted. The answer was the coming of two excited dogs. As his parents hadn’t informed him of the puppy, he was so surprised that he turned back to check if it was the right house. When he finally calmed down, he sat down to give a huge hug to both of them. “The puppy haven’t had a name yet, and we want you to decide.” his parents came over and said. “What about ‘Bobby’ ” asked the boy. “That is a great one!” Two days later, it was time to say goodbye. The boy hugged his parents as well as his dogs, saying, “I’m going to miss you so much, Mum, Dad, Poppy and Bobby.”
-- 丘睿*
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. He had been missing his parents and the dog since it was the first time that he had been away from home for such a long time. When the boy caught sight of Poppy, he went rushing toward the dog and bent down to give her a big hug. Suddenly, the boy noticed the little dog. “Oh my god, who is this ” His parents laughed at the look of surprise on his face. “It’s Poppy’s new companion.” said Mom.