译林版(2020)必修第一册Unit 2Let's talk teens Integrated Skills 建议信课件 (共22张PPT)

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名称 译林版(2020)必修第一册Unit 2Let's talk teens Integrated Skills 建议信课件 (共22张PPT)
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版本资源 牛津译林版(2019)
科目 英语
更新时间 2023-10-06 00:00:00

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(共22张PPT)
英语应用文写作
英语应用文
日 记
演讲稿
通 知
推荐信
感谢信
求职信
慰问信
求助信
投诉信
建议信
道歉信
邀请信
誊写
查单词拼写、时态
主谓一致等
①用过渡词(句)
连接句子和段落
②首尾段
审体裁、人称、时态
抓住要点
扩展要点
应用文写作
A letter of advice
高考应用文写作之建议信
写作步骤: 1. 审
怎么审题?
建议信特点及写作步骤
题型特点:建议信是针对某事或某个问题向收信人提出建议和忠告的信件,建议信通常简明扼要,目的明确,具有合理性和说服性。
写作思路与框架 :“三段式”
第一段:陈述事由+写信目的
第二段:提出具体建议及理由
第三段:表达本人愿望
【篇首句】
①Knowing that you have some trouble in learning English, I am writing to give some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
② You are going to university in Beijing, so I’d like to express my warmest welcome to you. Here are some suggestions about choosing university and preparations for it.
1. You’d better do / You are supposed to do/You should do …
2. You need to do …
3. You can do …
4. It’s a good way to …
【篇中句】
【篇尾句】
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
①Thinking (审题)
②Outlining(列提纲,写要点)
③Expanding(扩词成句)
④Linking(连句成篇)
⑤Polishing(润色定稿)
How to Write a composition
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Simon写信告诉你他沉迷于打篮球,每天花很多时间打球,结果家庭作业不能准时上交。父母和老师很不满,要他放弃这个爱好,他很生气。根据以下提示,请你就Simon的问题给他提一些有用的建议。
1.认真计划好自己的时间;
2.不要放弃自己的爱好,也不要忘记学习;
3.保持学习和爱好之间的平衡。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Thinking (审题)
Step 1
Para.1 开头
Para.2 正文
Para.3 结尾
Outlining (列出提纲,写要点)
Step 2
要点二
要点一
表示理解并给予安慰+写信目的
建议及原因
表达愿望
正文:
建议及原因
Outlining (列出提纲,写要点)
Step 2
2. Don’t give your hobbies. Don’t forget to study;
1. Plan your time carefully;
3. Keep a balance between study and hobbies.
Thank you for your letter. You say you spend time playing basketball, so you don’t have enough time to do your homework. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
=The following are my suggestions.
=My suggestions are as follows.
Para 1(Beginning)
Expanding (扩词成句)
Step 3
You’d better do / You are supposed to do…, which will help you…
It would be a good idea to do…,by doing this you will
I highly recommend that…
If I were you, I would do…,
Why not do… In this way, you will not only… but also….
1.Firstly, I think you should plan your time carefully. It will be a good choice to make a list of all the homework you have to do. This will tell you how much free time you can have to play basketball. 2.Secondly, don’t give up your hobbies and do not forget about your study, either.
3.Thirdly/Last but not least, you should keep a balance between your study and hobbies.
Para2:建议及原因
Expanding (扩词成句)
Step 3
Para. 3(Ending)
Expanding (扩词成句)
Step 3
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forwarding to your reply.
首先,……
To begin with, …
Firstly …
其次,……
Secondly/Thirdly
What’s more, …
In addition, …
最后,……
Finally/Last but not least, …
Linking (连句成篇)
Step 4
添加合适的过渡词:
Dear Simon,
Knowing that , I’m writing to give you some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
Firstly, you’d better (建议1) . (建议1相关的做法及原因)Secondly, you should (建议2) . (建议2相关的做法及原因) Last but not the least, you need to (建议3) . (建议3相关的做法及原因)
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Simon,
Firstly, I think you should plan your time carefully. It will be a good choice to make a list of all the homework you have to do. This will tell you how much free time you can have to play basketball. Secondly, don’t give up your hobbies and do not forget about your study, either. Thirdly/Last but not least, you should keep a balance between your study and hobbies.
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Polishing(润色定稿)
Step 5
表示理解,给予安慰
建议及原因
Thank you for your letter. You say you spend much time playing basketball, so you don’t have enough time to do your homework. I am writing to give some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
写信目的
表达愿望
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Jack来信向你求助,说进入高中后因为考试压力大。晚上常要难以入睡或半夜易醒,睡眠问题对健康和学习产生了不良影响。请你用英语给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1.表示理解和安慰;
2.提出至少2条建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
Knowing that , I’m writing to give you some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
Firstly, you’d better (建议1) . (建议1相关的做法及原因)Secondly, you should (建议2) . (建议2相关的做法及原因) Last but not the least, you need to (建议3) . (建议3相关的做法及原因)
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Jack,
Knowing that you are having trouble getting a good night’s sleep as a result of stress from exams, I’m writing to give you some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
Firstly, you'd better have a balanced lifestyle with the right attitude. Go to bed and wake around the same time each day and avoid drinks that may keep you from sleeping, such as coffee and tea. Secondly, clear your head of stress and worry from your day before bedtime. Last but not the least, an exam is just a way to find the weaknesses in your learning process. Therefore, you don't have to worry too much about the results.
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
THANKS