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Unit5 What are the shirts made of ？
人教新目标版 九年级上
Section B3a-Selfcheck
写作优质公开课课件
Learning objectives
1.围绕家乡的特色物品的话题，能够正确使用相关词汇和被动语态句型介绍产品的原材料和用途等。
2. 通过头脑风暴，提纲罗列，修改提升等认识写作的步骤，学习写作与家乡特色的有关中文章，保持学习英语的兴趣。
3.了解一些地方知名产品或传统艺术品的制作过程以及制作材料，培养学生的民族自豪感及爱国主义精神。
Have a look at some Chinese traditional art forms.
Each different part of China has its own special forms of traditional art.
Beijing
Facial
makeup
Tianjin
Chinese clay art
Hebei
Shadow figures
Sichuan
Sugar art
Hunan
Embroidery
Hainan
Sky lantern
Can you think of the most famous or special thing
in your hometown
Write notes about how you have changed in your appearance, personality and hobbies. Then talk with a partner about your changes.
3a
What the product is
What it is made of/ from
Who it is made by
Where it is made
What it can do
Why it is special
china
clay
craftsman
Jingdezhen in Jiangxi province
It is a symbol of traditional Chinese culture.
It is used for containing things.
Write a paragraph about the product. Use your notes in 3a.
3b
Use the following expressions to help you:
My town/city is famous for…
…is famous in my town/city.
…is/are made of/from/with/by/in...
…is/are used for...
…is/are special because...
写作思路引导
一、审题：
（1）体裁和话题是什么？
（2）时态和人称用什么？
（3）段落的布局（例如：开篇点题→介绍→表达感受）
二、素材准备：
（1）词汇 ( be famous for, be made of, be used to do sth. , all over the world, keep sth. +adj.)
（2）句子 ( it is made of…, this is my favorite…)
审题
第一人称
一般
现在时
应用文
（演讲稿）
审体裁
审人称
审时态
被动语态
审语态
审话题
介绍家乡的一种知名产品
列提纲
Beginning
1. greetings
2. introduction
1. functions
2. examples
1. opinions
2. feelings
Development
Ending
Outline
列提纲 写句子
引出介绍的产品 (1) My city, Jingdezhen in Jiangxi Province, ___________________.
介绍产品 意义 (2) China is special. China is an example of exquisite Chinese craftsmanship (精美的中国工艺). _____________________________________________ (瓷器是中国传统文化的一个象征).
原材料 (3) ______________________.
is known for its china
The china is a symbol of traditional
Chinese culture
The china is made from clay
写句子
列提纲 写句子
介绍产品 用途 (4) _______________________________.
(5) _______________________________. Many things are made of china in our everyday life, such as cups, bowls and plates.
最佳 推荐 (6) _______________________________ __________________(每天有许多不同种类的瓷器被生产) in my city. Blue and white porcelain is the most famous one. You can buy some for your friends and relatives.
邀请及祝愿 Welcome to my city! I hope you will have a good time here!
The china is used for containing things
The china is made to be enjoyed by people
Every day many different kinds of
chinas are produced
写句子
因……而出名
一种……的形式
传统艺术
由……制成
被……覆盖
手工；用手
短语储备
be famous/known for
a form of
traditional art
be made of/from
be covered with
by hand
根据；按照
据我所知
全世界；世界各地
被用来……
不同种类的
在……中起作用
……的象征
被视为；被看作
according to
as far as I know
all over the world
be used for
different kinds of
play a role/part in
a symbol of
be seen/regarded/considered as
开头句：
As we all know, it is a tradition to …
… has its own special forms of traditional art.
In my country, one of the most famous … is …
More and more foreigners are interested in traditional Chinese art.
句型荟萃
中间句：
According to Chinese history, … was/were first made by people in …
We can use different kinds of materials to make …
People hung lanterns in front of their doors to drive away…
… play(s) an important role/part in…
结尾句：
… has/have become a symbol of …
Now it is seen/regarded/considered as…
I’m proud of ……
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
开门见山，直接表述你要介绍的对象
介绍物品的产地，原料，外观，制作方式，用途等
谈感受
is popular in my city.
物品名称
产地
It is made in
地点
原料
It is made of / from
材料
外观
制作方式
There are different kinds of pictures on it，such as
举例
It is made by
方式
用途
It is used for
用途
It is good for ，we should
优点
美好祝愿
常用模板
Key points Check (2 points for each)
Good framework
Good sentences
Correct grammar/spelling
Good logic
Tidy writing
互评
常用修改符号： 删除 \；增补号 ；更正__；好句 ；分段// ，对调
Check List
As a Chinese , we should be proud of Chinese traditional art forms.
Enjoy our traditional art!
Love our country!
Sample:
【参考范文】
Dear Marcus,
How are you doing these days I’m excited to hear from you. I’d like to introduce something special in my city to you.
My city, Jingdezhen in Jiangxi Province, is famous for its china. China is special because it is an example of exquisite Chinese craftsmanship and it is a symbol of traditional Chinese culture. It is made from clay. It is made to be enjoyed by people. And it is used for containing things. Many things
are made of china in our everyday life, such as cups, bowls and plates. Every day many different kinds of china are produced here. Blue and white porcelain is the most famous one. It is known to people around the world. You can buy some for your friends and relatives.
Welcome to my city! I hope you will have a good time here!
Best wishes!
Yours,Li Hua
Things Made of/ from... Made in…
1 List some things you use every day. Write down what
they are made of/ from and where they were made.
Things Made of/ from... Made in…
Shanghai
Yiwu
Harbin
Tianjing
steel
wood
wood
plastic and steel
bike
desk
pencil
knife
shoes
Hangzhou
leather and cloth
1. My pencil is made of wood and it was made in Shanghai.
2. My knife is made of plastic and steel, it was made in Yiwu.
2 Use the information above to write full sentences.
4. His bike is made of steel, and it was made in Tianjin.
3. Our desks are made of wood, they were made in Harbin.
5. My shoes are made of leather and cloth, they were
made in Hangzhou.
3 Complete the sentences using the correct forms of
the words in brackets.
1. Cheese ________ (make) from milk.
2. Parents and students ___________ (invite) to school
concert last night.
3. The underground parking lot _______ (close) at
midnight every day.
4. There is a lot of research on how languages ___________ (learn).
5. Some classic films __________ (show) at that cinema last week.
is made
were invited
is closed
are learned
were shown
Homework
2. Preview the new words and expressions in Unit 6.
1. Rewrite your compositions.
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