冀教版 英语九年级上册 期中专练-写作（含解析）

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冀教版 英语九年级 期中专练-写作（含解析）
1．Ⅻ. 书面表达
你校英语俱乐部将举办题为“Great changes in communication”的征文活动。请你根据以下图片提示，写一篇应征稿描述今昔通讯方式的变化，以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。
要求：1. 根据图片提示进行写作，可适当发挥；
2. 运用本单元所学的used to结构(至少两处)；
3. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Great changes in communication
With the rapid development of science and technology, great changes have taken place in the way people communicate with each other.
In a word, people have an easier life nowadays with the development of communication.
2．最近，你随机调查了你校50名同学的课外英语学习现状（结果见下面图表）。请你就此用英语写一篇短文，在英语课上进行汇报，并谈谈你的看法和建议。
注意：
1. 文章必须包括图表中四项内容，可适当增加细节；
2. 看法和建议至少两条；
3. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数，你只需接着写；
4. 词数：80-100。
参考词汇：背诵 recite
I have recently done a survey about how students learn English out of class.
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3．假设你叫Amy，你的台湾朋友Emily刚刚从大陆游学回到桃园，她想要结交更多的大陆中学生，请你通过邮件，把你的同学Kate介绍给她。 Kate的个人信息见下表。
性别 女
年龄 14
外貌 短发，圆脸，又高又苗条，脸上总是挂着微笑；
性格 诚实，幽默，替朋友保守秘密，从不说别人他人坏话，任何时候都乐于助人；
爱好 痴迷于DIY，经常在周末自己动手制作、修理物品；最喜欢法语，觉得学习外语十分有趣；
谈谈你自己对Kate的评价 ……（不少于两点）
要求：1. 注意文章条理，语句通顺；
2. 词数80词左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Emily,
How are you I’m writing to introduce my classmate Kate to you.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Amy
4．大象是陆地上最大的动物，它们喜欢群居，体型较大但性情温和。但是由于人类对象牙制品（ivory products）的追捧，每年都有大量的大象被猎杀，一些种类的大象已濒临灭绝。作为中学生，我们可以为保护大象做点什么呢？请根据提示，写一篇英文倡议书为保护大象助力。
要点提示：
1. What are elephants like
2. What are their living habits
3. Why do they have to be protected
4. How can we protect them
要求：
1. 包含所有要点，条理清楚，意思连贯；
2. 词数80左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
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5．B．大作文：根据要求完成下面内容，并将答案写在答题卡的相应位置。
最近，某英文报刊正在举办征文活动，主题是“弘扬中华传统文化，畅谈中国传统佳节”。请你以“My Favorite Chinese Festival”为题，写一篇英语作文，为本次活动投稿。
1. 内容提示：（1）简单介绍你最喜欢的传统节日：名称及时间等；
（2）讲述该节日有哪些主要庆祝方式：食物及活动等；
（3）说说你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。
2. 写作要求：
（1）内容包含以上要点；
（2）语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯，词数：60~80词；
（3）书写工整、规范, 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
My Favorite Chinese Festival
6．新时代，每一位青少年都应该有理想、有志向、有目标、有抱负，成为中国梦的践行者。现校英文报刊正以“My Dream Job”为主题征稿。请你根据以下提示，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点：1．谈谈你未来想做什么工作；
2．你为什么拥有这样的梦想；
3．打算如何实现你的梦想。
写作要求：1．内容包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．使用正确的词汇和语法结构，书写规范；
3．文中不得透露个人信息；
4．词数80词左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Dream Job
It’s important for teenagers to have their own dreams. For me, I have a dream, too._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter下学期将作为交换生来中国学习，他想利用假期时间学习汉语，并了解遇到困难时如何向人求助等。请你根据以下要点写一封信。
要点提示：
1)学习汉语的方法：看中文电影，听磁带，朗读练习发音，制作字卡，求助老师等；
2)如何求助：要有礼貌的求助，避免太直接，在不同情况下使用不同的语言；
3)……
注意：1)词数不少于80；
2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3)信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4)开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you will come to China next term.
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Have a good time!
Li Hua
8．书面表达
本周一是端午节，你校外教Tony对中国文化很感兴趣，你陪他去槐荫公园观看了龙舟比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇日记。
写作要点：
1.现场情况。人多拥挤，16支龙舟队竞争激烈，人们欢呼，队员们团队合作，最终“勇气队”获胜。
2.赛后活动：我给Tony介绍端午节，下午带他参加有关端午节的其它活动，如……
3.感想：Tony……，我……
写作要求：
1.短文内容必须包括所有要点、语句通顺，条理清晰；
2.省略号处须作适当发挥(1-2句即可)；
3.100词左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
June 18th
Today is the Dragon Boat Festival.
9．学校为了呼吁人们保护野生动物，将举行一个主题为Let’s take action的演讲比赛。假如你是Mike，请根据以下提示内容，写一篇演讲稿谈谈你的观点!
要求：不少于 80 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数提示：
1. What’s the situation (情况) of wild animals
2. Why are wild animals in danger
3. How can we help wild animals
Animals are our friends____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．书面表达
假设你是李明，本周班会上，你将代表老师用英语通知学生参加一次敬老院的公益活动。
要点如下：
1. 星期天早上8：30在校门口集合，乘公共汽车前往；
2. 给老人们赠送班级礼物---一本相册(album)； 打扫卫生，整理房间；唱歌、跳舞、讲故事、聊天，给老人们 带去快乐；
中午为老人们做饭，和他们共进午餐。
回家后写出对这次活动的感悟。（如：老人经常会感到孤单，我们应该经常看望他们...）活动很有意义，希望积极参与.
注意：
字数60--80，书面表达的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：tidy v. 整理；meaningful adj. 有意义的
Fellow students,
We will pay a visit to the old people’s home this Sunday. _____________ _______________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
1．Great changes in communication
With the rapid development of science and technology, great changes have taken place in the way people communicate with each other.
People used to keep in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone. But now everyone has his own mobile phone. People can communicate with each other anywhere and anytime. They send and receive e-mails by Internet. They send and receive messages on QQ or WeChat. With these changes, people's life has improved a lot. They know more about the outside world. It used to take several days or weeks to hear from each other, but now it takes only several minutes, even if they're in different countries.
In a word, people have an easier life nowadays with the development of communication.
【详解】试题分析：本次作文为看图作文，根据图片提示，写一篇应征稿描述今昔通讯方式的变化，以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。要求：1．以“Great changes in communication”为题，根据图片提示进行写作，可适当发挥；2．中心突出，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；3．运用本单元所学的used to结构(至少两处)；4.词数90字左右（开头已给出，不计入词数）。要注意时态运用，表达清楚，语法正确，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不要出现单词拼写错误。
【写作亮点】：本篇习作成功地完成了写作任务，表达顺畅，结构连贯，字数符合要求。准确运用时态，要点全面，语法正确，上下文意思连贯，适当发挥了想象。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动，例如keep in touch with，anywhere and anytime，days or weeks，hear from each other等。特别是运用了used to结构，例如People used to keep in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone.，It used to take several days or weeks to hear from each other, but now it takes only several minutes,使文章形成对比，能够彰显通讯方式带给人们的变化，凸显了中心，是一篇优秀的习作。
2．例文：
I have recently done a survey about how students learn English out of class. Almost all students read and recite English words. They think vocabulary is the most important for English learning. More than 40 students do a lot of written exercises. Some students go over their notes they have taken in class. However, only a few students spend time practicing listening and speaking.
In my opinion, listening and speaking are the secrets of becoming a good language learner. We need to do lots of listening and speaking practice, such as watching English movies and listening to English songs. Also, chatting with foreigners can be helpful.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于看图作文。要求我们根据学校50名同学的课外英语学习现状，用英语写一篇短文，在英语课上进行汇报，并谈谈我们的看法和建议。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称和第三人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；本文是对当下学生学英语现状的阐述，已经给出了调查柱状图，注意图表中的各项内容；然后表达自己的观点，如进行听说训练等，并表明你持有此观点的理由。
3．例文
Dear Emily,
How are you I’m writing to introduce my classmate Kate to you.
She is a 14-year-old girl. She has short hair and a round face. She is thin and tall. She always wears a smile on her face. She is honest and humorous. She always keeps secrets for her friends. She never says bad words about others. She is always ready to help others. She is crazy about DIY. She often makes and repairs things by herself at weekends. She likes French best. She thinks it is very interesting to study foreign language.
I think she is friendly and understanding. I like to stay with her. I hope you can make friends with her. Maybe you can show her around your country when she visits you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Amy
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据提示材料介绍同学Kate的个人信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍她的年龄，性别，外貌和性格。
第二步，介绍她的爱好。
第三步，谈谈对Kate的评价。
[亮点词汇]
① say bad words about sb 说某人坏话
② be ready to do sth乐于做某事
③ be crazy about痴迷于……
[高分句型]
① She thinks it is very interesting to study foreign language（that引导宾语从句，that已省略）
② I like to stay with her（动词不定式作宾语）
4．例文
Boys and girls,
Elephants are our good friends, but how much do you know about them
Elephants are big and strong and they’re the biggest animals on land. Elephants live in groups and they’re friendly. However, a large number of elephants are killed every year because people want their ivories. The number of elephants is falling quickly and some kinds of elephants are in danger of extinction. Elephants need our help! What can we students do Firstly, we can help people learn more about elephants and tell them the importance of protecting elephants. Secondly, we should say no to ivory products. No buying, no killing. Finally, we should protect the living environment of elephants.
Let’s do something to make a difference!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，根据题目要点提示，完成倡议书，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充，同时要紧扣主题。
2. 写作指导：本文主要使用一般现在时态，人称主要使用第三人称。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，注意连词的使用；保证全文要点明确，结构严谨，语法运用准确，意思连贯。
5．My Favorite Chinese Festival
As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China. Among them, I like the Spring Festival best.
It comes in January or February. It is a time for family members to get together. On the eve of the Spring Festival, all family members enjoy different kinds of food, such as dumplings and fish. We also watch the Spring Festival Gala and stay up late, hoping to have a new start in the following year.
The Spring Festival can not only make us feel love and happiness, but also the importance of home and family.
【详解】这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下“我”最喜欢的中国节日。所提供的材料中列举了本次征文活动的主题是“弘扬中华传统文化，畅谈中国传统佳节”。主要从（1）简单介绍你最喜欢的传统节日：名称及时间等；（2）讲述该节日有哪些主要庆祝方式：食物及活动等；（3）说说你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】On the eve of the Spring Festival, all family members enjoy different kinds of food, such as dumplings and fish. 在春节前夕，所有家庭成员都喜欢吃各种各样的食物，如：饺子和鱼。
On the eve of the Spring Festival,是介词短语做时间状语。
different kinds of：不同种类的；such as：例如。这些短语的运用，增加了语感，丰富了文章的内容。
【高分句型二】The Spring Festival can not only make us feel love and happiness, but also the importance of home and family. 春节不仅能让我们感受到爱和幸福，更能让我们感受到家和家庭的重要性。这句话运用了not only…but also…,“不但……而且……”。体现了作者的写作功底扎实。
6．例文
My Dream Job
It’s important for teenagers to have their own dreams. For me, I have a dream, too. I want to be a doctor in the future.
I think it’s a great and interesting job. I could save many people’s lives. I could also find a lot of happiness in this job.
In order to make my dream come true, I am going to try my best to work hard at my subjects especially biology and chemistry. I believe I will be a good doctor in the future and I will be proud of it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，谈谈你未来想做什么工作；
第二步，介绍你为什么拥有这样的梦想；
第三步，介绍打算如何实现你的梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①want to be想成为
②in the future在未来
③a lot of happiness很多幸福
④come true（愿望、梦想等）成真，实现
⑤be proud of为……感到骄傲
[高分句型]
①I think it’s a great and interesting job.（省略that的宾语从句）
②In order to make my dream come true, I am going to try my best to work hard at my subjects especially biology and chemistry.（In order to make my dream come true作状语）
③I believe I will be a good doctor in the future and I will be proud of it. （省略that的宾语从句）
7．例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you will come to China next term. I will give you some advice on how to learn Chinese.
First of all, you can watch Chinese movies and listen to some tapes to improve your Chinese. Then you can practice pronunciation through reading aloud and make character cards. What’s more, when you are in trouble, you can ask your teachers for help. When you ask for help, you should be polite and avoid being too direct. And you should use different languages in different situations.
Hope my suggestions can be of help. Looking forward to your coming.
Have a good time!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示内容给他提出一些学习汉语的建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍学习汉语的方法以及如何求助；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①listen to听
②in trouble有麻烦
③be of help有帮助
[高分句型]
When you ask for help, you shoud be polite and avoid being too direct.(when引导时间状语从句)
8．Today is the Dragon Boat Festival For the reason that Tony has a strong interest in Chinese traditional culture. I invited him to come to watch the dragon boat races which was held in Huaiyin Park this morning When we arrived, it was crowded. There were 16 colorful dragon boats floating in the river. During the race, the dragon boat teams competed with each other, while people on each bank cheered up. Both Tony and I felt the exciting atmosphere. At last, the Courage Team won.
After the competition, I introduced the Dragon Boat Festival to Tony and welcomed him to many other activities about the festival. We went to learn how to make zongzi and admire a picture exhibition.
At the end of the day, tired as we were, we felt excited. Tony though our traditional Chinese culture was so amazing and I am proud of my great motherland.
【详解】试题分析：本书面表达以“端午节”为话题的日记。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般过去时态，用第一人称来表达。注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练、要点齐全。文中invite sb.to do, during the race, compete with, cheere up, at last, both…and…; at the end of the day, be proud of等词汇的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如：运用了there be句型；定语从句、宾语从句、时间状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。
9．例文
Animals are our friends. However, many of them like pandas and tigers are now in danger. People cut down the forests to build houses or to turn them into farmland. As a result, animals don’t have a place to live or enough food to eat. What’s even worse is that people also kill them for money. That’s really terrible. So, we should have pity on them and do something to protect them. We can plant trees to make the forests larger or we can raise some money for WWF.
Let’s take action before they die out!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给英文问题提示写一篇作文，介绍你对保护野生动物的观点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍目前野生动物的情况；
第二步，说明野生动物处于危险的原因；
第三步，最后介绍我们应该如何保护野生动物。
[亮点词汇]
①in danger处于危险之中
②as a result因此
③what’s even worse更糟糕的是
[高分句型]
①What’s even worse is that people also kill them for money.（that引导的表语从句）
②We can plant trees to make the forests larger.（动词不定式作目的状语）
10．We will pay a visit to the old people’s home this Sunday. We’ll have to meet at the school gate at 8:30 on Sunday morning and then go there by bus. There we will do some cleaning and tidy the rooms. After that we will have many activities, such as singing, dancing, telling stories and chatting to cheer up the old. At noon, we will cook for them and have lunch with them, too. Before we leave, we’ll give our presents to them.
I hope all of us can take an active part. Through the meaningful activity, we can learn to care for the old.
【详解】试题分析：首先要认真审题，结合本题所给的写作信息，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性; 还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。
写作亮点: 本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中使用了pay a visit to, by bus，do some cleaning，After that，such as, cheer up，take an active part.，care for等词或固定搭配，使上下文意连接紧密, 过渡自然。同时，本文最大亮点是叙事条理、表达清晰，时态运用恰当；还使用了时间状语从句、宾语从句等，为文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。
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