仁爱版 英语九年级上册期中专练-写作（含解析）

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仁爱版 英语九年级上册期中专练-写作（含解析）
1．书面表达。
根据图示，用英语写一篇题为“Changes in People’ s Life”的短文，介绍过去和现在人们生活的变化。
要求：1. 书写要规范，词数在80词左右；
2. 把图中所示内容表达完整，条理清晰，意思连贯；
3. 开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数。
Great changes have taken place in people’s life in the past 20 years. In the past people kept in touch with friends mainly by sending letters.
2．根据图片提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的作文。
要求:1)结合图意,围绕出行方式、通讯工具及空气质量展开叙述,可适当发挥；
2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
Fifteen years ago Now
Great changes have taken place since I was born.
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3．近几年，淮安承办了几项全国性活动，尤其是2021年，淮安举办了“马拉松”赛事, 给人们留下了深刻的印象。这些大型活动的成功举办都得益于淮安形象的提升。假如你是中学生李明，请向全市人民写一封倡议书，呼吁人们维持好新淮安形象，争做文明市民，展示文明修养。内容必须包括表格中的提示要点。
应该做 保持环境卫生，遵守交通规则； 选择绿色环保生活，列举具体方式（至少两种）；
不应该做 乱扔垃圾，讲不文明用语等；
做有意义的事 做志愿者帮助别人，分类垃圾减少污染等；
你的期望 ……（自拟一点）
参考词汇：文明的 civilized
要求：
1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
2.词数在80—100之间。已给出的文字不计入总词数。
Dear citizens,
In order to make our city more civilized, we should try our best to act every day in small ways. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．假如你是李雷，上周参观了以“Working the Waste into Magic”为主题的环保作品展。请你根据以下信息，写一篇短文，在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。
What were on show What they are made of/from What you think
clothes chairs model planes … waste paper plastic bottles used wood and glass … creative save … …
注意：
（1）短文须介绍至少两项展品，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（3）词数：80—100。短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about the show “Working the Waste into Magic” . _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．春节是我国的传统节日。请你结合下面的汉语提示为外国友人介绍春节的习俗及我们的庆祝活动。
提示：
1、打扫房间以扫除坏运气。
2、吃年夜饭庆祝新年的到来。
3、家人们观看春节晚会。
4、穿上新衣去拜年。
5、孩子们会收到压岁钱。
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6．（注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和老师名，否则不给分）
现在环境污染尤其是空气污染越来越严重，近年来我国多地出现雾霾（smog）天气，更引发了人们对环境污染的关注。请你围绕环境保护这一主题，谈谈家乡存在什么环境问题，作为中学生该如何保护环境。
要求：
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
2. 词数：60—80。
It’s important to protect the environment.
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7．请阅读Tony从美国发来的电子邮件，并根据所给提示和要求，以李华的名义回复。
Hey Li Hua! How are you going I’ve been busy since I came back from China. Guess what! I’m learning Chinese cooking, and really enjoy it. One more thing, I hear you have Mid-Autumn Festival in China. What’s the date of the festival How do you celebrate it
提示：1.Ask Tony something about his Chinese cooking. 2. Answer his questions about Mid-Autumn Festival.
要求：1.邮件必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。2.词数80-100。
Hi,Tony,
Good to hear from you! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
8．假如你叫李华，5月11日母亲节那天，你为母亲做了很多有意义的事情。请你根据表格中所给的信息，用英语写一篇日记。
上午 你用零花钱给母亲买了些鲜花，放在花瓶里
下午 你去市场买菜，为全家人做了一顿简单可口的饭菜
晚饭后 你送给母亲自己制作的贺卡，并祝她节日快乐；告诉母亲要多注意自己的健康，不要过度劳累；你还保证今后会帮助她做一些家务劳动；母亲感动得流下了眼泪
注意：1. 词数80～100。
2.日记的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
3.日记必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐句翻译，可以增减适当情节，使其通顺、连贯。
参考词汇：pocket money 零花钱，vase 花瓶，overwork 过度劳累，be moved to tears 感动得流泪
11th May Sunday
Today is Mother's Day. I love mother so much that I've done many things for her. In the morning, I bought ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Today is a special day, warm and meaningful.
9．你们班要举行一场环保方面的主题班会。老师让你们从空气、水和土壤这三项中选择一种，写一封倡议书，呼吁大家采取措施来保护环境。
要求：1. 80-120词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称等相关信息。
My dear friends,
_______________ is very important to human beings.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．为庆祝共青团百年华诞，校团委组织青年团员下沉社区参加“清洁家园”活动。请你代为草拟一份书面通知，要点如下：
1. 周六早九点学校集合，步行前往； 2. 穿校服，戴口罩，携带劳动工具；
3. 拍照记录，向校报投稿报道活动； 4. 清扫垃圾，张贴宣传画，摆放共享单车；
5. 补充一到两点相关内容。
表达要求: 书写整洁、整齐、清晰； 语句自然流畅； 不得出现真实个人信息；
词数80左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词汇： sharing bike 共享单车； mask n. 口罩； rubbish n. 垃圾。
Notice
May 25, 2022
In order to celebrate the 100th birthday of the Communist Youth League, the committee will organize members to take part in the “Clean Home” activity in the community. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
School Youth League Committee
参考答案：
1．Changes in People’s Life
Great changes have taken place in people’s life in the past 20 years. In the past people kept in touch with friends mainly by sending letters. They would listen to the radio for news and other information. Children used to go to school by bike. A big family had to share small rooms.?
Now people can talk to others by telephone or on the Internet at home. When they are free, they will watch the news and other programs on TV. And children usually go to school by bus. Some families are rich enough to live in big apartments.
【详解】该书面表达属于图片材料作文，主要表达的过去和现在的生活的对比变化。时态主要以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。
亮点词汇短语：take place发生；in the past过去；keep in touch with sb与某人保持联系；send letters寄信；used to do sth过去常常做某事；talk to sb与某人交流；rich enough足够富有。
加分句型：
(1) Great changes have taken place in people’s life in the past 20 years. 在过去的20年里，人们的生活发生了巨大的变化。运用现在完成时（have/has + been）表示动词从过去一直持续到现在。
(2) In the past people kept in touch with friends mainly by sending letters. 过去，人们主要通过写信与朋友保持联系。By+ doing通过做某事。
(3) When they are free, they will watch the news and other programs on TV. 当他们有空的时候，他们会在电视上看新闻和其他节目。条件状语从句(主将从现)。
2． Great changes have taken place since I was born.
Fifteen years ago, most people rode bikes when travelling for a short distance. Because there weren’t many cars, the air was fresh. And people kept in touch with each other mainly by telephone.
Now, many people own cars as well as cellphones which are widely used to chat on QQ, do shopping, etc. Lives seem easier than before, but too many cars make traffic heavier, and air pollution is getting worse.
To live a better life, we still have a lot to do.
【详解】这篇作文要求我们以Great changes have taken place since I was born为题目，介绍15年来我们的社会发生的变化。题目中用图片的形式给我们展示了这些变化，从三个方面来介绍：出行方式、通讯工具和空前质量，我们应用正确的英语将图片的内容表达出来。写作时，需要注意文章的结构，这篇作文可以分段写，先介绍15年前人们的生活情况，另起一段介绍现在的情况。这样文章的结构比较清晰，层次比较清楚。注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译。英语的句子结构主要为主谓宾结构和主系表结构，写作时要从句子的整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型表达。通过审题可知，这篇作文应以一般过去时态和一般现在时态为主，根据表达的需要使用正确的时态。文章中使用一些较好的句型和短语，语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章意思连贯，表达流畅，提升文章档次。
点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文主题明确，符合题目要求。内容完整、充实，包含了题目要求的所有信息。其次短文结构清晰，层次清楚，文章共分成两段，第一段介绍了过去人们的生活状态，从题目要求的三个方面进行了介绍。第二段介绍了现在的变化，跟第一段的内容对应。另外短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章第一段使用了一般过去时态，第二段用了一般现在时态，语法规范，谓语动词的形式变化也很准确。短文中还使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如Fifteen years ago, most people rode bikes when travelling for a short distance.中连词when后加现在分词形式作状语；Because there weren’t many cars, the air was fresh中使用了Because引导的原因状语从句；And people kept in touch with each other mainly by telephone、Now, many people own cars as well as cellphones which are widely used to chat on QQ, do shopping, etc.中短语keep in touch和as well as以及定语从句的使用等等。这些复合句和复杂句式提升了文章的档次，使文意连贯、流畅。
3．例文
Dear citizens.
In order to make our city more civilized, we should try our best to act every day in small ways.
First of all, we should keep the environment clean and follow the traffic rules when in public. Next, it’s a good choice to live green. For example, we can choose public transport, ride bicycles to get around or recycle water at home.
At the same time, there’re some things that we can’t do. Firstly, it’s not right to drop litter everywhere. Secondly, we should behave politely instead of saying bad words.
As a citizen, we can also be volunteers or social workers to help others in need. What’s more, it’s our duty to learn to separate waste into different groups to help reduce the pollution.
I believe if everyone takes action, our city will become more civilized and attractive.
Yours
Li Ming
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。按照所给的提示内容，写一封呼吁人们维持好新淮安形象的短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。分为五段式：第一段引出主题；第二段至第四段就争做文明市民，展示文明修养提出相应的建议；最后一段总结概括。写作时多用first of all，secondly，what’s more等词使整篇文章看起来很有层次感，并做到无标点和语法错误。
4．例文：
Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about the show “Working the Waste into Magic”.
A number of creative works were on show, including clothes made from waste paper and model planes made of used wood and glass. Another fascinating work is a chair that is made of plastic bottles. They are glued together and painted in different colors.
I was most interested in a backpack for computers. It is made out of a pair of old jeans! With the zipper of jeans on the top, two pockets on two sides, the backpack looks both useful and fashionable. It even has a logo!
I felt amazed at how waste could be put to such good use. It really helps to save energy and build a greener future.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中对环保作品展的感受的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图借用“简单介绍对环保作品展的感受”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容,从“分布、环境、藏书等”几个方面重点介绍对环保作品展的感受的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语表达“废物确实有助于节约能源和建设更绿色的未来”的感叹。
[亮点词汇]
①be made of由……制成
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③save energy节约能约
[高分句型]
①I felt amazed at how waste could be put to such good use.（how引导的感叹句）
②Another fascinating work is a chair that is made of plastic bottles.（that引导的定语从句）
5．例文：
As you know, the Spring Festival is one of the most important in China. It’s also a traditional festival. It is usually called the Chinese New Year. To celebrate it, people always do a lot of preparations for it.
A few days before the festival, People usually have a thorough cleaning everywhere in order to get rid of bad luck. On the eve of the Spring Festival, the whole family are sitting together, having a big dinner and enjoying the TV programmes until midnight. And children are especially happy because they can get lucky money that wrapped in red paper from their elders. On the first day of the New Year, all the people, the old and the young, wear new clothes to pay a visit to their relatives and friends and wish each other good luck in the coming New Year.
Everybody has a good time and feels happy during the festival.
【详解】1. 题干解读：文章是一篇话题作文。主要是以“春节”为主题，向外国友人介绍春节的一些习俗和我们在春节要做的一些事情和庆祝活动，要把题目中的要点都要写出来，要注意语言的连贯性。
2. 例文点评：文章分三段描写。第一段总体描述春节是最重要的节日，人们会为此会做很多准备；第二段分别具体的描写在春节要做的一些事情以及庆祝活动；第三段总结在春节每个人都会过的很愉快。整个文章结构完整思路清晰，语言表达准确，用词恰当，意思明确易懂。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：one of the+最高级+复数名词；a lot of；in order to；get rid of；pay a visit to；have a good time。
句型：because引导的原因状语从句；and引导的并列句；that引导的定语从句。
6．例文
It’s important to protect the environment.
Now pollution is getting worse and worse, especially air pollution. So more and more people start to realize the importance of environment.
In my hometown, Qiqihar, the air is fresh and we feel comfortable every day. It’s pleasant for us to work and study. It’s our duty to protect the environment.
As a student, we should do what we can to protect the environment. We can drive less and take the bus to school or walk to school. We can reuse the paper and try not to throw the rubbish away. We can turn off the lights when it’s bright enough in the room.
In a word, we should try our best to protect the environment. We can have a beautiful world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：考试应紧扣环境保护这一主题进行发挥，不要遗漏要点，表达清楚。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，强调保护环境的重要性；
②第二步，描述家乡存在的环境问题；
③第三步，介绍中学生保护环境的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①start to do sth.开始做某事
②turn off the lights关灯
③try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大的努力做某事
④in a word总而言之
[高分句型]
①As a student, we should do what we can to protect the environment.（what引导的宾语从句）
②We can turn off the lights when it’s bright enough in the room.（when引导的时间状语从句）
7．例文
Hi, Tony,
Good to hear from you! It's amazing that you're learning Chinese cooking. You know there are so many kinds of food in China, so I am wondering what kind of food you are learning to cook, spicy or sweet food
Yes, we really have Mid-Autumn Festival. It is celebrated on August 15th of the lunar calendar. Chinese people often eat moon cakes and enjoy the full moon together with their families on that day. The full moon is the symbol of reunion. Many Chinese poets have written some beautiful poems for it. You can search for them on the internet if you have the interest.
If you have any other questions about the festival, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Bye for now
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于书信类写作，开头已给出。要求根据所给提示和要求，以李华的名义给托尼回信，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文是回信，除了回应对方学做中国菜以外，需以第一人称重点介绍中秋节的习俗，时态采用一般现在时；写邮件需注意格式正确，所以最后不要忘记署名，做到表达流畅，叙述条理。
8．例文
11th May Sunday
Today is Mother’s Day. I love mother so much that I’ve done many things for her.
In the morning I bought many flowers with pocket money and put them in the vase. In the afternoon I went to the market to buy vegetables and cooked a simple but delicious dinner for my family. After supper ,I gave mother the card that I made myself and said “Happy Mother’s Day” to her. Then I told her to pay more attention to her health and not to overwork. I also promised to help her do some housework from today on. Hearing the words, Mother was moved to tears.
Today is a special day, warm and meaningful
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按日记的格式写。第一段和第二段题干已经给出，重点在于第三段的书写，详细叙述为母亲做的具体的事情，写作应该涉及题干给出的内容。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述事情，时态采用一般过去时为主，用来描述具体为母亲做的事情。根据题干提示，可以按照时间先后来写：上午、下午、晚上。
9．例文：
My dear friends,
Water is very important to human beings, so let’s do something to protect and save it.
First, we should protect our water resources and not pollute them. The government should pass laws against water pollution. Second, we should save water in our daily life, turn off the taps in time, take a shower instead of a bath, and always remember to collect and reuse water. Third, let’s try to spread the message about protecting and saving water. The more people around us know the problem of water shortage, the more water problems we will help to solve.
Let’s try our best to save water and our planet.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为倡议书；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作时要从空气、水和土壤中选一种，来写倡议书，呼吁大家保护环境，要在文中介绍具体该怎么做。
[写作步骤]
第一步，将所给出的开头补齐，用“空气、水和土壤”中的一种填空，然后引出要保护它。
第二步，介绍具体该怎么做；
第三步，呼吁大家保护环境。
[亮点词汇]
①daily life 日常生活
②turn off 关掉
③take a shower 洗淋浴
④instead of 代替，而不是
[高分句型]
①Water is very important to human beings, so let’s do something to protect and save it.（so连接表因果关系的并列句；let sb. do sth.祈使句的常用句式）
②The more people around us know the problem of water shortage, the more water problems we will help to solve.（the+比较级 ... , the+比较级 ... 固定句式，意为“越……就越……”）
10．例文
Notice
May 25, 2022
In order to celebrate the 100th birthday of the Communist Youth League the committee will organize members to take part in the “Clean Home” activity in the community.
You should assemble at school at 9:00 a.m. on Sunday morning and walk there. Please wear school uniforms and masks, and take labor tools with you. During the activity, remember to take some photos so as to report it to the school newspaper. The things you need to do include: cleaning the rubbish, posting posters and putting sharing bikes in right places. When you finish the work, please clean up the place and take away the things you’ve brought.
Hope you have a meaningful day.
School Youth League Committee
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