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一、话题作文
1．（2021秋·上海徐汇·九年级上海市徐汇中学校考期中）Idols can serve as important role models in our lives, so it’s very important to choose the right ones. We should celebrate people who teach us important values that can help guide us on the road ahead. Write at least 60 words on the topic “The importance of choosing the right idol”（偶像是我们生活中重要的榜样, 所以选择一个正确的偶像相当重要。我们应该称赞那些能教会我们正确价值观, 引领我们前行的人。请你结合自身或他人的经历谈谈选择正确偶像的重要性。以“选择正确偶像的重要性”为题, 写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文）。
（ 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息, 否则不予评分。标点符号不占格）
【答案】例文
The importance of choosing the right idol
Idol is a kind of spirit for us, is a model and yardstick to learn. The spirit of our idols influences us.
When I was young, my favorite idol was Lei Feng. His pictures were plastered all over the walls of my room. Whenever I met difficulties in life and study, I would think of uncle Lei Feng’s deeds. When I entered middle school, my grades were not good at first. But inspired by Lei Feng’s spirit, I began to study hard. Finally, I was admitted to the ideal university with excellent results. So I feel it is very important to choose the right idol, it can make a great change in my life.
I think everyone needs an idol to support their beliefs. Because the excellence of our idols drives us forward.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“The importance of choosing the right idol”为题，结合自身或他人的经历谈谈选择正确偶像的重要性。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时文章要紧扣题目的要点，围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
2．（2021秋·上海虹口·九年级上海市民办新复兴初级中学校考期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “That day, I made a/an ________”. (以 “那天我……”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)
生活中的每一次体验，每一段经历都为你的成长助力。那天，你或许交了一个朋友，或许许了一个愿望，或许做了一次新选择……，请分享一段你的经历，并说明这段经历是如何帮助你成长的。
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【答案】例文：
That day, I made a choice
Life is full of choices, and there was an important and memorable choice in my life.
When I graduated from my junior high school, I had to make a choice: to be a through-train student or to be a senior high school student. I was very aware of my strengths and weaknesses. I loved learning history and geography, and I was interested in politics. I didn’t want to leave away from my favorite subjects because I always enjoyed them while I was studying. So through painful thinking, I chose to be a senior high school student.
I never regretted the choice. I am proud of myself — a senior high school student who is enjoying the pleasure of learning, not only textbook knowledge but also other important things. Learn to choose, to change your destiny, to change your life!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：要求以“That day, I made a/an ________”为题，分享一段你的经历，并说明这段经历是如何帮助你成长的，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先补全题目，确定主题，然后开篇点题，引出下文；
第二步，根据主题，分享一段自己的经历；
第三步，书写结语。具体写自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of充满
②graduate from毕业于
③be aware of知道
④be proud of以……而骄傲
[高分句型]
①I didn’t want to leave away from my favorite subjects because I always enjoyed them while I was studying. （because引导的原因状语从句）
②I am proud of myself — a senior high school student who is enjoying the pleasure of learning, not only textbook knowledge but also other important things.（who引导的定语从句）
3．（2021秋·上海黄浦·九年级统考期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Changes of my weekend”（以“我周末生活的变化”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
随着“双减”政策的落实，同学们的周末也发生了欣喜的变化，你们有了更多自主的时间来安排丰富多彩的周末活动，例如：阅读、运动和外出游玩等。请以“Changes of my weekend” 为题写一篇不少于60字的短文。谈谈你的周末生活较之前有了哪些变化，这些变化对你的影响，并给出一些建议和畅想。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、学校及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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【答案】 Changes of my weekend
Some great changes of my weekend have taken place since the double-reduce policy was carried out.
I used to take plenty of courses during the weekend, most of which were related to test. However, my weekend’s life is not occupied by courses any longer now. I can concentrate more on my hobbies, including skating, reading, and swimming. Moreover, I feel much more relaxed than before.
Study is one of the most important part in our life, but not test. In my view, more time should be spent on what you are interested in. In the near future, I wish our weekend’s life will be more colorful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇命题作文，要求以“Changes of my weekend”为题。
②时态：本文时态以“一般现在时”为主，“一般过去时”为辅。
③提示：考生应撰写自己的周末生活较之前发生了哪些变化，这些变化对自己产生了哪些影响，并给出一些建议和畅想。此外，字数应不少于60词。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，撰写受到“双减”政策的影响，自己的周末生活发生了很大的变化。
第二步，撰写周末较之前发生的变化以及这些变化对自己产生了哪些影响。
第三步，给出一些建议以及谈谈自己的畅想。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②be occupied by被占用
③be related to与……相关
④concentrate on 专心于
⑤including包括
[高分句型]
①I used to take plenty of courses during the weekend, most of which were related to test. (定语从句)
② more time should be spent on what you are interested in. (被动语态以及宾语从句)
4．（2022秋·上海奉贤·九年级统考期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I want to have ________”.(以“我想要________”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
在每个人的心中，总会渴望拥有某样东西。在你的生日来临之际，你想拥有什么样的礼物？一个宠物狗/猫，一台手提电脑，一次旅行……用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你想拥有它的理由及你会有怎样的想法或感受。
( 注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
The following is for reference only. (以下内容仅供参考）
（1）I want to have a/an/the/...
（2）With..., I can...
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【答案】例文
I want to have a magic paintbrush
I want to have a paintbrush with magic power. It can make whatever I draw become a reality.
With the paintbrush, I can draw a new earth. There will be no pollution on it. The rivers will be clean and the sky will be blue. With the paintbrush, I also want to draw a nice home where people can live happily together like a big family.
I also want to have the magic paintbrush to draw a beautiful new world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇半命题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求补充题目“I want to have ________”进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“简单介绍想要拥有一个魔法画笔”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。阐述想用魔法画笔做什么；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①want to do想要做某事
②live happily together幸福地生活在一起
[高分句型]
With the paintbrush, I also want to draw a nice home where people can live happily together like a big family.（where引导的定语从句）
5．（2022秋·上海普陀·九年级统考期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “________ can make a difference”. (以“……起重要作用”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
提示：在学习或生活中，我们有时候会遇到棘手的局面。什么因素帮助你度过了难关？什么因素对自身、他人或者周围环境产生了影响？请补全标题，并结合自身经历，谈谈它的重要性。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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【答案】例文
Love can make a difference
In our study or in our life, we sometimes meet difficult situations. However, love from parents can help you out. I had a hard time last spring. I always felt bored and lost interest in everything. What was worse, I refused to communicate with my parents. Luckily, my parents tried every possible way to cheer me up. They cooked delicious food every day and talked about my favorite TV programs with me. I was moved deeply and shared my difficulty with them. Thanks to my parents, I’m getting better and better. I may have more difficulties in the future. But I will not be afraid of any difficulties, because my parents’ love makes me a difference. I’m sure they are always there to give me a hand.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：首先补全题目，然后介绍在学习或生活中帮助你度过了难关的一些因素，并结合自身经历，谈谈它的重要性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明在学习或生活中，我们有时候会遇到棘手的局面；
第二步，具体阐述是什么让你度过难关，结合自身经历进行介绍；
第三步，最后表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb out帮助某人摆脱困境
②refuse to do拒绝做某事
③Thanks to多亏
[高分句型]
①I was moved deeply and shared my difficulty with them.（and连接连个并列结构）
②I’m getting better and better.（比较级句型的使用）
③But I will not be afraid of any difficulties, because my parents’ love makes me a difference. （because引导的原因状语从句）
6．（2022秋·上海奉贤·九年级校联考期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Is it necessary to reduce sports time while preparing for the test”. (以”复习准备期间有没有必要减少体育活动时间”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
期中检测即将来临，同学们都在认真复习准备，有些同学认为复习时间紧张，可以减少一部分体育活动时间，有些同学认为没有必要。请你谈谈你的看法。
注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
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【答案】例文
Is it necessary to reduce sports time while preparing for the test
Is it necessary to reduce sports time while preparing for the test Different students have different ideas.
Some students think that the mid-term test is coming, which can reduce part of the time for sports activities. But I think it is very necessary for students to play sports. We shouldn’t reduce sports time. Playing sports can help us have a strong body and learn more knowledge and enter a better university in the future. So we must exercise more.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文，属于议论文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，要写出自己的意见。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体引出“在准备考试的时候有必要减少运动时间吗”这个话题；
第二步，具体阐述不同人的意见以及自己的意见；
第三步，写出自己持有此意见的原因。
[亮点词汇]
① play sports做运动
② help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③ in the future在将来
[高分句型]
① Some students think that the mid-term test is coming, which can reduce part of the time for sports activities.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
② But I think it is very necessary for students to play sports.（省略that的宾语从句，不定式作主语的句子）
7．（2022秋·上海徐汇·九年级上海市西南位育中学校考期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “His/Her/Their ________ Warmed My Heart.”(以“他/她/他们的 ________ 温暖了我”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个字的短文，标点符号不占格)
困难时期，志愿者们的帮助；孤独时，朋友的陪伴；沮丧时，师长的鼓励……
我们总是被很多善意围绕着, 让我们感到温暖。请先补全题目，然后结合自己的经历，谈谈你的感悟。
（注意：短文中不得出现姓名、班级等个人信息，否则不予评分。）
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【答案】例文：
Her Actions Warmed My Heart
Today, I want to say thanks to my best friend Tina.
She is a lovely girl with big eyes. She’s always friendly to everyone. Also, she enjoys reading in her free time. One day, I cried sadly because I found it difficult to learn English well. When Tina saw that, she started to help me with my English after class. With her help, I am good at English now.
Thank you, my dear friend. Her actions warmed my heart.
【详解】[总体分析]
①本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括基本信息、具体的事例和对自己的影响，注意不得出现个人真实信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍温暖自己的这个人是谁；
第二步，具体介绍这个人的基本信息以及温暖自己的事情；
第三步，书写结语，表达对朋友的感谢，呼应标题。
[亮点词汇]
①say thanks to sb向某人说谢谢
②be friendly to sb对某人友好
③help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①One day, I cried sadly because I found it difficult to learn English well.(find it +adj+to do结构)
②When Tina saw that, she started to help me with my English after class.(when引导时间状语从句)
8．（2022春·上海长宁·九年级统考期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Ways to improve my online learning”
（以“提高我在线学习效率的方法”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）.
（注意： 抄袭试卷中内容不得分。 文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息，否
则不予评分。）
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【答案】例文
Ways to improve my online learning
Because of the coronavirus, almost all of the students took online classes during the winter vacation. But the learning effects vary from one the another. Therefore, we should find ways to improve online learning. And I have some pieces of advice about it.
First of all, we need a peaceful environment. Online learning takes strong self-discipline. For example, my mom likes to offer me snacks, which sometimes interrupts me. I have asked her to stop doing so. A quiet and peaceful room can help us stay focused. What’s more, we should catch every chance to communicate with our teachers online. Different from school learning, we can’t easily find our teachers to ask questions, so we have to solve all our problems during the classes. By doing this, we can have no confusion after class.
I think these suggestions can help you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，因为疫情学生们在寒假上网课，以此引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍如何提高网课学习的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①because of因为
②first of all首先
③what’s more并且
④communicate with沟通
[高分句型]
①By doing this, we can have no confusion after class（动名词作宾语）
②I think these suggestions can help you（省略that的宾语从句）
9．（2022秋·上海长宁·九年级上海市新泾中学校考期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “ My dream will come true” ( 以“ 我的未来不是梦”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
你对自己的未来一定有美好的梦想；但梦想的实现取决于勤奋、努力等诸多因素。请结合你自己的梦想，谈谈你将如何使美梦成真。
参考词或短语:
The following words or phrases are only for reference.
My dream is to be/do… with the help of …
come true take part in
hardworking realize
【答案】例文
My dream will come true
Everybody has a dream. Somebody wants to become a doctor, and somebody wants to become a teacher. If someone asks what my dream is, it will be to become a scientist. When I was a little boy, I always liked to read stories about famous and great scientists. To make my dream come true, I should be confident and hardworking, take active part in all kinds of activities about scientists, as well as study harder from now on. With the help of my teachers , I will realize my dream.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于记叙文，也是话题作文，话题是“My dream will come true”。本文表达自己的梦想，以及通过什么方式实现自己的理想，时态主要是一般现在时和一般将来时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，根据提示要点列出提纲，短文必须包含提示词。
2. 例文点评：本文包含了提示内容，运用了所有的提示词，使用了各种高级句型，时态使用正确，表达条理清楚，运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。
3. 高分亮点：
短语和连词的使用：want to，with the help of ，To make my dream come true/ as well as等。
句型：1.条件状语从句，例如，If someone asks what my dream is, it will be to become a scientist.等。2.时间状语从句，例如，Since when I was a little boy, I always liked to read stories about famous and great scientists.3.动词不定式作状语，宾语和表语，例如，Somebody wants to become a doctor,/ it will be to become a scientist./ To make my dream come true。
【点睛】书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。
10．（2023·上海嘉定·统考二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
滴水穿石，铁杵成针，都向我们展示了坚持的力量。坚持，定会给我们带来收获。请回忆在过去一年里你坚持做的一件事，以“One thing I kept doing”为题，简单描述，并谈谈收获和感受。
(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。照抄语篇不得分)
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【答案】例文
One thing I kept doing
Knowledge may be acquired through many ways, the best of which is reading. In the age of high technology, reading deserves to be paid attention to. So I keep reading every day.
To begin with, it is the most flexible way of getting information. Many people think it not only helps them better understand society as well as nature, but also broaden their horizon. Additionally, reading, to some degree, is of great benefit to interpersonal communication apart from self-improvement. It can also enrich our life and bring people pleasure. What’s more, reading is also regarded by many as a means of better survival.
Personally, I appreciate reading classical literature in my spare time, which provides me with a thorough understanding of life and society. Through practicing reading between the lines and beyond the lines, I find my comprehension ability stably improved.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，介绍自己坚持做的事情是什么；
第二步，介绍阅读的好处；
第三步，表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①to some degree在某种程度上
②What’s more并且
③be regarded as被认为是
④in my spare time在我闲暇时间
[高分句型]
①So I keep reading every day.（动名词作宾语）
②Additionally, reading, to some degree, is of great benefit to interpersonal communication apart from self-improvement.（动名词作主语）
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专题09 名校话题作文范文10篇（学生版）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
牛津上海版期中好题精刷系列资料，助力期中冲刺！
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一、话题作文
1．（2021秋·上海徐汇·九年级上海市徐汇中学校考期中）Idols can serve as important role models in our lives, so it’s very important to choose the right ones. We should celebrate people who teach us important values that can help guide us on the road ahead. Write at least 60 words on the topic “The importance of choosing the right idol”（偶像是我们生活中重要的榜样, 所以选择一个正确的偶像相当重要。我们应该称赞那些能教会我们正确价值观, 引领我们前行的人。请你结合自身或他人的经历谈谈选择正确偶像的重要性。以“选择正确偶像的重要性”为题, 写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文）。
（ 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息, 否则不予评分。标点符号不占格）
2．（2021秋·上海虹口·九年级上海市民办新复兴初级中学校考期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “That day, I made a/an ________”. (以 “那天我……”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)
生活中的每一次体验，每一段经历都为你的成长助力。那天，你或许交了一个朋友，或许许了一个愿望，或许做了一次新选择……，请分享一段你的经历，并说明这段经历是如何帮助你成长的。
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3．（2021秋·上海黄浦·九年级统考期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Changes of my weekend”（以“我周末生活的变化”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
随着“双减”政策的落实，同学们的周末也发生了欣喜的变化，你们有了更多自主的时间来安排丰富多彩的周末活动，例如：阅读、运动和外出游玩等。请以“Changes of my weekend” 为题写一篇不少于60字的短文。谈谈你的周末生活较之前有了哪些变化，这些变化对你的影响，并给出一些建议和畅想。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、学校及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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4．（2022秋·上海奉贤·九年级统考期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I want to have ________”.(以“我想要________”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
在每个人的心中，总会渴望拥有某样东西。在你的生日来临之际，你想拥有什么样的礼物？一个宠物狗/猫，一台手提电脑，一次旅行……用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你想拥有它的理由及你会有怎样的想法或感受。
( 注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
The following is for reference only. (以下内容仅供参考）
（1）I want to have a/an/the/...
（2）With..., I can...
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5．（2022秋·上海普陀·九年级统考期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “________ can make a difference”. (以“……起重要作用”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
提示：在学习或生活中，我们有时候会遇到棘手的局面。什么因素帮助你度过了难关？什么因素对自身、他人或者周围环境产生了影响？请补全标题，并结合自身经历，谈谈它的重要性。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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6．（2022秋·上海奉贤·九年级校联考期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Is it necessary to reduce sports time while preparing for the test”. (以”复习准备期间有没有必要减少体育活动时间”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
期中检测即将来临，同学们都在认真复习准备，有些同学认为复习时间紧张，可以减少一部分体育活动时间，有些同学认为没有必要。请你谈谈你的看法。
注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
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7．（2022秋·上海徐汇·九年级上海市西南位育中学校考期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “His/Her/Their ________ Warmed My Heart.”(以“他/她/他们的 ________ 温暖了我”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个字的短文，标点符号不占格)
困难时期，志愿者们的帮助；孤独时，朋友的陪伴；沮丧时，师长的鼓励……
我们总是被很多善意围绕着, 让我们感到温暖。请先补全题目，然后结合自己的经历，谈谈你的感悟。
（注意：短文中不得出现姓名、班级等个人信息，否则不予评分。）
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8．（2022春·上海长宁·九年级统考期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Ways to improve my online learning”
（以“提高我在线学习效率的方法”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）.
（注意： 抄袭试卷中内容不得分。 文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息，否
则不予评分。）
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9．（2022秋·上海长宁·九年级上海市新泾中学校考期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “ My dream will come true” ( 以“ 我的未来不是梦”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
你对自己的未来一定有美好的梦想；但梦想的实现取决于勤奋、努力等诸多因素。请结合你自己的梦想，谈谈你将如何使美梦成真。
参考词或短语:
The following words or phrases are only for reference.
My dream is to be/do… with the help of …
come true take part in
hardworking realize
10．（2023·上海嘉定·统考二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
滴水穿石，铁杵成针，都向我们展示了坚持的力量。坚持，定会给我们带来收获。请回忆在过去一年里你坚持做的一件事，以“One thing I kept doing”为题，简单描述，并谈谈收获和感受。
(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。照抄语篇不得分)
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