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专题09 书信邮件类满分范文10篇（详解版）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
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一、书信作文
1．（2022秋·广东广州·九年级校考期中）假设你是九年级学生李华，现在面临着一些困难不知怎么解决。所以，你给“心语屋”的林老师写了一封信，向她请求帮助。请你根据以下内容提示写一封80词左右的信，并进行适当发挥。信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
学业上：1. 每天花费很多时间在作业上，导致休息、锻炼时间剧减；
2. 作业难度大，经常遇到不会做的题目；
3. ......
同学关系上：毕业临近，不舍分离。
家庭关系上：与父母欠缺沟通，父母不理解。
Dear Miss Lin,
Your advice is always helpful to us.
I’ve met some problems these days.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考例文：
Dear Miss Lin,
Your advice is always helpful to us.
I’ve met some problems these days. First of all, I have to spend so much time on homework that I can’t have enough time to sleep or rest. And the homework is quite difficult. I always come across exercises that I can’t work out. My parents are worried about my study and arranging extra-classes for me. I feel stressed. Second, we are going to graduate, so it’s hard for us to say goodbye to each other. What’s more, my parents and I lack communication, therefore they can’t understand me. When I want to relax myself by listening to music, they think it’s a waste of time.
I am looking forward to your early reply to give me some advice on my problems.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇给材料的书信作文，要求根据所给要点提示给林老师写一封信，向她寻求帮助。注意要求点齐全。
2.写作指导：文章采用第一人称，一般现在时来行文，文章开头已给出，中间部分主要描述自己在学业上、同学关系和家庭关系上面临的困难，结尾以期待收到回复收尾。注意行文连贯，条理清晰，文中无单词和语法上的错误。
2．（2022秋·广东广州·九年级广东实验中学校考期中）假如你是格林社区中心（the Green Community Center）的工作人员，许多居民前来投诉小区某些居民的不文明做法。请你写一封公开信给格林社区的居民，信中包含表格中的内容：提出问题，并就社区出现的不文明现象提出建议和说明原因。
problems advice reasons
rubbish everywhere…mess… pick up…three times a day… improve（改善）the environment
pet dogs…bark…night … ...（请你补充） ...（请你补充）
car…park…in the pavement（人行道） ...（请你补充） ...（请你补充）
注意：
1. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含上图所提供的所有信息，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
4. 请在答卷规定范围内写作，超出范围的内容无效。
Dear residents（居民）,
We have noticed the problems in this community.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Green Community Center
【答案】例文
Dear residents（居民）,
We have noticed the problems in this community. The rubbish is everywhere and makes the neighborhood in a mess. Some pet dogs always bark loudly at night. Some people often park their cars in the pavement in the doorway. To deal with these problems, we have the following suggestions.
First, as for those who often leave their rubbish everywhere, they are supposed to throw the rubbish in time. The rubbish must be picked up three times a day. This can improve the environment. Second, for the owners whose dogs are barking at night, they should train his dog to be quiet during the night. In this way, the dog will be quiet. Finally, they must be parked in the parking lot because parking cars on the pavement can be very dangerous for children.
Let’s join our hands together to make the Green Community Center.
Green Community Center
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据表格中的提示信息介绍社区出现的不文明现象，并提出建议和说明原因，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，详细介绍社区出现的不文明现象都有哪里；
第二步，根据不同的不文明现象提出相应的建议并说明原因；
第三步，发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理
②pick up捡起
③in the parking lot在停车场
[高分句型]
①To deal with these problems, we have the following suggestions. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②First, as for those who often leave their rubbish everywhere, they are supposed to throw the rubbish in time. (who引导的定语从句)
3．（2022秋·广东广州·九年级广州市第一一三中学校考期中）假设你是英语校报“答读者问”专栏主笔 Aunt Linda。校报收到初三学生 Ben 的来信，他提出了所面临的问题。请你根据 Ben 的来信和以下提示写一封回信，给 Ben 的问题提出你的建议并陈述理由。
提示：
1.上课专心听讲，课后尽快完成作业。
2.适当放松，比如适当运动、听音乐。
3.睡前喝牛奶，有助睡眠。
4.多和父母沟通，告诉他们你的真实感受。
……请补充更多的建议。
注意
1.回信应包括所有要点；
2.词数 80 左右信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数.。
Dear Ben ,
I am sorry to hear that you have problems with your study, your sleep and your relationship with your parents. But you’re not alone, we all face difficulties sometimes.
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【答案】例文
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you have problems with your study, your sleep and your relationship with your parents. But you’re not alone, we all face difficulties sometimes.
The first problem you face is that you have too much homework and have to stay up late. You feel sleepy in class. I think you should listen to teachers in class carefully and finish your homework quickly. You can also ask your teachers for help. Maybe they’ll give you less homework. Drinking milk, listening to music and doing some sports can relax you and have a good sleep. The other problem is that your parents are too strict with you. You’d better talk with them about your ideas. You can tell your parents that too much pressure is not good for your study. They’ll understand you.
I hope you think my advice is worth taking．
Yours,
Aunt Linda
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“请补充更多的建议”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出对方遇到的问题；
第二步，具体阐述为解决对方问题而提出的建议；
第三步，书写结语，希望自己的建议能帮到对方。
[亮点词汇]
①stay up late熬夜
②listen to teachers听老师讲课
③ask for help求助
④be strict with sb.对某人要求严格
[高分句型]
①The first problem you face is that you have too much homework and have to stay up late. (包含定语从句和表语从句)
② You can tell your parents that too much pressure is not good for your study. (包含宾语从句)
4．（2022秋·广东广州·九年级广东实验中学统考期中）假设你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信，他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，说明Ben的问题，提出你的建议并陈述理由。
Ben’s problems Your advice and reasons
朋友少，感觉孤独 1. 参加学校社团（club）——结识更多朋友
2. ？（请你补充）
英语单词难记，学习英语有困难 1. 多阅读英语故事、新闻——在运用中学单词
2. ？（请你补充至少两点）
词数80左右（信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数）。
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Good luck in everything!
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends. I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school. In this way, you can make more friends who share the same interest with you. Besides, you’d better be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. On the other hand, you found it difficult to remember English words. Reading more English stories and news can help you learn English words in a practical way. In addition, if you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary everyday, it will be easier for you to remember more words. I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封信；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中的提示内容，适当添加细节，并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。以“很抱歉听说你无法适应中学生活”来引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别从“朋友、学习”两个方面进行描述；
第三步，书写结语。祝福对方好运。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to对……友好
②in return作为回报
③On the other hand另一方面
④In addition另外
[高分句型]
①In this way, you can make more friends who share the same interest with you.（who引导定语从句）
②Reading more English stories and news can help you learn English words in a practical way.（动名词作主语）
③In addition, if you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary everyday, it will be easier for you to remember more words.（if引导条件状语从句）
5．（2021秋·广东广州·九年级校考期中）假如你是Simon，你的朋友李华近来非常烦恼，他在英语学习方面有困难，他很焦虑，每次英语考试都很紧张。因此，他写信向你求助，请你写一封回信给他一些建议帮助他解决问题。
提示要点：
1. 培养学习英语的兴趣，兴趣是最好的老师。
2. 养成良好的英语学习习惯，如：多读英语，做好笔记等。
3. 请补充1—2点建议。
要求：
1. 词数80—120词左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 包括所有的提示要点，并根据你自己的英语学习经验，进行适当的拓展。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail. I’d like to give you some advice on how to learn English well._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail. I’d like to give you some advice on how to learn English well.
First of all, it’s necessary to develop an interest in English study, because interest is the best teacher to learn a foreign language. What’s more, having a good habit of learning English helps things easier to make a success, such as reading English more often, taking down notes in detail, and listening to your teachers carefully. Besides, listening to English songs which can make yourself relaxed is helpful to fall asleep. As we know, a good sleep quality is essential to your study. At the same time, don’t forget to ask your teachers for help. They are professional and always offer some useful advice. Last but not least, you are supposed to listen and speak English as often as possible. Both watching English movies and communicating with foreigners can improve your oral English.
Practice makes perfect. Only by listening more, speaking more, and reading more can you make good progress in English study.
Yours,
Simon
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，告诉对方要培养学习英语的兴趣，兴趣是最好的老师；
第二步，建议对方养成良好的英语学习习惯并做适当补充；
第三步，最后作总结。
[亮点词汇]
①What’s more而且
②fall asleep入睡
③at the same time同时
④last but not least最后也是最重要的
[高分句型]
①First of all, it’s necessary to develop an interest in English study, because interest is the best teacher to learn a foreign language（because引导原因状语从句）
②Besides, listening to English songs which can make yourself relaxed is helpful to fall asleep.（which引导定语从句）
③Only by listening more, speaking more, and reading more can you make good progress in English study.（部分倒装结构）
6．（2022秋·广东广州·九年级广州市天河中学校考期中）假如你叫李华，你的美国朋友Tim下学期将以交换生的身份来广州生活学习，为了帮助他更好地了解广州的文化，你打算邀请他暑假来广州并寄宿到你家。请根据以下内容提示写一封信向他介绍一下你的家庭生活，可进行适当发挥。（注意：字数80词左右，信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。）
family members 爸爸、妈妈、我的弟弟和我
family rules 1. 早睡早起，锻炼身体； 2. 我要分担家务，比如：洗碗、烫衣服； 3. 周一至周五不能使用电子产品，周末玩电脑游戏不能超过1小时； ……（请补充1—2点）
family activities ……（请补充2点）
feelings 相亲相爱、互相支持； ……（请补充）
Dear Tim,
I am so glad that you will visit Guangzhou as an exchange student next term. To help you get used to the life in Guangzhou, I want to invite you to come to my home during summer vacation. Now _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Tim,
I am so glad that you will visit Guangzhou as an exchange student next term. To help you get used to the life in Guangzhou, I want to invite you to come to my home during summer vacation. Now I would like to introduce my family to you.
There are four people in my family, my parents, my brother and I. In my family, we should follow some rules. First, we must go to bed and get up early, do exercise. I have to share the housework, such as washing dishes and ironing clothes. I can’t use electronic products during weekdays or play computer games for more than one hour at weekends. Besides, I can not go out after 8 o’clock. There are some activities in my family. We have a family game every Friday night. I think my family members love each other and support each other. So be sure to come to my house.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中家庭成员，家庭规则，家庭活动，感受这些要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，讲述写信是为了介绍家庭生活；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，重点讲述家庭成员，家庭规则，家庭活动，感受；
第三步，书信结语，表达“希望对方来我家寄宿”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth.想做某事
②follow some rules遵循一些规则
③share the housework分担家务
④be sure to do一定要做某事
[高分句型]
①There are some activities in my family.（there be句型）
②I think my family members love each other and support each other.（“I think”引导的宾语从句）
二、电子邮件
7．（2022秋·广东广州·九年级广州科学城中学校考期中）Betty在生活中遇到了问题，父母都忙于工作，没有时间陪她。Betty认为父母根本不爱她。她很伤心，所以她给某青少年杂志的专栏Linda’s Advice Column写信，向Linda寻求帮助。假如你是Linda，请你根据以下内容提示，给她写一封回信，提出一些建议。
1. 试着理解父母：并非不爱你，只是忙着挣钱养家。
2. 帮着做些家务活，能体验共处的乐趣，关系更密切。
3. 遇到困难多和父母聊聊，学会跟父母分享你的感受。
4. 其他建议（至少两点）。
要求：
1. 词数：80左右（信件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
2. 适当发挥，内容充实，结构完整。
Dear Betty,
I’m glad to receive your letter. In fact, you’re facing a common problem, and there are some things you can do to solve it. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Linda
【答案】例文：
Dear Betty,
I’m glad to receive your letter. In fact, you’re facing a common problem, and there are some things you can do to solve it.
To begin with, try to understand your parents. Instead of not loving you, they’re just busy earning money to support the family. What’s more, helping with the housework not only can bring you lots of fun for being together but also makes your relationship even closer. In addition, you’d better talk to your parents and share your feelings with them when you get into trouble. Most importantly, you have to keep in mind that your parents will always love you. Last but not least, you must learn to be independent enough not to rely on your parents to do everything for you.
Hope my advice will help you out and make you feel better.
Best wishes,
Linda
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：明确主题，围绕主题给出合理的解决问题的建议，不要遗漏要点内容，并且在列举建议时注意衔接词语的使用，使前后过渡自然，行文流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山，提到上封邮件所了解到的问题，进而引出话题和写作意图，即提出应该如何做。
第二步：具体陈述解决问题的建议。根据要点内容从不同的角度或方面提出具体的做法，并且补充自己的建议。
第三步：进行总结，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①to begin with首先
②get into trouble陷入麻烦
③rely on依靠
[亮点句型]
①What’s more, helping with the housework not only can bring you lots of fun for being together but also makes your relationship even closer.（动名词作主语及not only...but also的应用）
②Most importantly, you have to keep in mind that your parents will always love you.（that引导的宾语从句）
8．（2022秋·广东广州·九年级广州白云广雅实验学校校考期中）最近，初三学生李华写了一封邮件给心理咨询老师Anna，以下是邮件的内容：
Dear Anna, My name is Li Hua. I am a Grade 9 student in Zhixin High School. Recently, I feel really upset. School work is too much and I have no time to relax myself. But every day when I go back home feeling tired, my parents keep nagging (唠叨) about everything, cellphone, homework, exams .... It seems that they don’t understand me at all. I feel so breathless that I just avoid talking to them. But this makes our relationship even worse. I don’t know what to do. Can you give me some advice
假如你是 Anna，请从提高学习效率 (efficiency)、劳逸结合、多与父母沟通这几个方面，给李华提一些建议。
注意：
1. 词数 80-100 词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
2. 内容完整，语法正确，语篇连贯；
3. 考生不得透露个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to learn about your problems. ..
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【答案】例文
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to learn about your problems. Don’t worry about your study too much.
First, you should learn how to relax yourself. Doing more sports such as running and playing table tennis is good for your health and listening to music is also a good way to relax. These ways can help you reduce your pressure. Second, I think it’s necessary to have healthy eating habits. Please remember to have breakfast on time every morning. It can give you enough energy to study for the whole day. Third, you’d better go to bed early and have enough sleep. It will keep you active during the day. Besides, I think you should talk with your friends, parents or teachers often. Sharing your thoughts and feelings with them will be helpful to get on well with others. Finally, I advise you to read more books. Reading can not only give you knowledge but also open your eyes to the world.
I hope you can stay in good spirits, and study better.
Yours,
Anna
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，安慰对方不要担心；
第二步，分别从提高学习效率、劳逸结合、多与父母沟通这几个方面给出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①worry about 担心
②such as 例如
③be good for 对……有好处
④on time 按时
[高分句型]
①First, you should learn how to relax yourself（“疑问词+动词不定式”结构）
②I think it’s necessary to have healthy eating habits.（宾语从句）
9．（2022秋·广东广州·九年级校联考期中）假如你是李华，学校的心理咨询老师。最近，你收到Kate的邮件，来信说她跟父母沟通有困难。请你给她回一封邮件，就如何与父母沟通相处提出建议。内容如下：
要求：1.包含以上全部要点。
2.词数80左右，文章开头及结尾已经给出，不计入总词数内。
3.文章文中不得透露学校、姓名等任何信息，否则不予评分。
参考词汇：argue with 与……争吵
Dear Kate,
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble communicating with your parents. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my suggestions can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Kate,
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble communicating with your parents.
Nowadays, arguments between teenagers and parents have been a serious problem, which is mainly because of the lack of communication. Besides, many rules are set by parents like forbidding their kids from going out or watching TV. What’s worse, it is the generation gap that leads to lots of misunderstandings between each other.
In order to solve this problem, first of all, it’s necessary for both of you and your parents to listen to each other carefully when you are about to argue with each other. Second, you need to join some activities with your parents together. It can help you know more about their lives and thoughts.
I hope my suggestions can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作内容已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容”中的要点，务必写全，在适当的地方使用参考词汇。可适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写出青少年与父母争吵的现象。
第二步，针对这一现象进行原因分析，注意要补充一个理由；
第三步，写出针对这些问题的解决办法，注意要补充一个建议；
[亮点词汇]
① a serious problem 一个严重的问题
② the lack of communication 缺少沟通
③ forbid sb. from doing sth. 禁止某人做某事
④ lead to 导致
⑤ generation gap 代沟
[高分句型]
① Nowadays, arguments between teenagers and parents have been a serious problem, which is mainly because of the lack of communication. （which引导非限定性定语从句。）
② What’s worse, it is the generation gap that leads to lots of misunderstandings between each other.（“it is ... that ...”是强调句结构）
10．（2022秋·广东广州·九年级校考期中）假设你是李华。你的笔友Tim在数学课上回答了同学的一个问题，老师误认为他们在聊天而批评了他们，Tim觉得不公平，从此在数学课上紧张不安，也不喜欢这位老师的课了。但Tim很希望能把数学学好。不知如何是好的他写了封邮件向你咨询意见。
请根据以下要点提示给Tim回信。字数80左右。信开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥。
要点：
1.每个老师都想他的学生努力学习；
2.我认为你应该与数学老师谈谈，告诉他真相；
3.他会理解你的，并为你想学好数学感到高兴；
4.你应该知道老师所做是为你好；
……（至少补充两点。）
Dear Tim,
I am sorry that you are having trouble with your math teacher._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope things will be better soon!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Tim,
I am sorry that you are having trouble with your math teacher. I think every teacher wants his students to work hard. They want their students to be better and they are always proud of their students. So I think you should talk to your math teacher and tell him the truth. I’m sure he will understand you. He will be pleased if you want to learn math well. Most importantly, you should know what the teacher does is to make you better. If you feel shy, you can write to the teacher. You can also ask your parents to talk to the teacher about your problems.
I hope things will be better soon!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表示安慰，表达老师的本意；
第二步，建议汤姆与老师谈心；
第三步，建议Tim写信或让父母代为沟通的方式化解矛盾。
[亮点词汇]
①be proud of为……感到自豪
②work hard努力学习
[高分句型]
①If you feel shy, you can write to the teacher. （if引导条件状语从句）
②You can also ask your parents to talk to the teacher about your problems.（ask sb to do sth）
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专题09 书信邮件类满分范文10篇（学生版）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
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一、书信作文
1．（2022秋·广东广州·九年级校考期中）假设你是九年级学生李华，现在面临着一些困难不知怎么解决。所以，你给“心语屋”的林老师写了一封信，向她请求帮助。请你根据以下内容提示写一封80词左右的信，并进行适当发挥。信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
学业上：1. 每天花费很多时间在作业上，导致休息、锻炼时间剧减；
2. 作业难度大，经常遇到不会做的题目；
3. ......
同学关系上：毕业临近，不舍分离。
家庭关系上：与父母欠缺沟通，父母不理解。
Dear Miss Lin,
Your advice is always helpful to us.
I’ve met some problems these days.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2022秋·广东广州·九年级广东实验中学校考期中）假如你是格林社区中心（the Green Community Center）的工作人员，许多居民前来投诉小区某些居民的不文明做法。请你写一封公开信给格林社区的居民，信中包含表格中的内容：提出问题，并就社区出现的不文明现象提出建议和说明原因。
problems advice reasons
rubbish everywhere…mess… pick up…three times a day… improve（改善）the environment
pet dogs…bark…night … ...（请你补充） ...（请你补充）
car…park…in the pavement（人行道） ...（请你补充） ...（请你补充）
注意：
1. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含上图所提供的所有信息，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
4. 请在答卷规定范围内写作，超出范围的内容无效。
Dear residents（居民）,
We have noticed the problems in this community.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Green Community Center
3．（2022秋·广东广州·九年级广州市第一一三中学校考期中）假设你是英语校报“答读者问”专栏主笔 Aunt Linda。校报收到初三学生 Ben 的来信，他提出了所面临的问题。请你根据 Ben 的来信和以下提示写一封回信，给 Ben 的问题提出你的建议并陈述理由。
提示：
1.上课专心听讲，课后尽快完成作业。
2.适当放松，比如适当运动、听音乐。
3.睡前喝牛奶，有助睡眠。
4.多和父母沟通，告诉他们你的真实感受。
……请补充更多的建议。
注意
1.回信应包括所有要点；
2.词数 80 左右信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数.。
Dear Ben ,
I am sorry to hear that you have problems with your study, your sleep and your relationship with your parents. But you’re not alone, we all face difficulties sometimes.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．（2022秋·广东广州·九年级广东实验中学统考期中）假设你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信，他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，说明Ben的问题，提出你的建议并陈述理由。
Ben’s problems Your advice and reasons
朋友少，感觉孤独 1. 参加学校社团（club）——结识更多朋友
2. ？（请你补充）
英语单词难记，学习英语有困难 1. 多阅读英语故事、新闻——在运用中学单词
2. ？（请你补充至少两点）
词数80左右（信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数）。
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Good luck in everything!
Li Hua
5．（2021秋·广东广州·九年级校考期中）假如你是Simon，你的朋友李华近来非常烦恼，他在英语学习方面有困难，他很焦虑，每次英语考试都很紧张。因此，他写信向你求助，请你写一封回信给他一些建议帮助他解决问题。
提示要点：
1. 培养学习英语的兴趣，兴趣是最好的老师。
2. 养成良好的英语学习习惯，如：多读英语，做好笔记等。
3. 请补充1—2点建议。
要求：
1. 词数80—120词左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 包括所有的提示要点，并根据你自己的英语学习经验，进行适当的拓展。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail. I’d like to give you some advice on how to learn English well._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．（2022秋·广东广州·九年级广州市天河中学校考期中）假如你叫李华，你的美国朋友Tim下学期将以交换生的身份来广州生活学习，为了帮助他更好地了解广州的文化，你打算邀请他暑假来广州并寄宿到你家。请根据以下内容提示写一封信向他介绍一下你的家庭生活，可进行适当发挥。（注意：字数80词左右，信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。）
family members 爸爸、妈妈、我的弟弟和我
family rules 1. 早睡早起，锻炼身体； 2. 我要分担家务，比如：洗碗、烫衣服； 3. 周一至周五不能使用电子产品，周末玩电脑游戏不能超过1小时； ……（请补充1—2点）
family activities ……（请补充2点）
feelings 相亲相爱、互相支持； ……（请补充）
Dear Tim,
I am so glad that you will visit Guangzhou as an exchange student next term. To help you get used to the life in Guangzhou, I want to invite you to come to my home during summer vacation. Now _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
二、电子邮件
7．（2022秋·广东广州·九年级广州科学城中学校考期中）Betty在生活中遇到了问题，父母都忙于工作，没有时间陪她。Betty认为父母根本不爱她。她很伤心，所以她给某青少年杂志的专栏Linda’s Advice Column写信，向Linda寻求帮助。假如你是Linda，请你根据以下内容提示，给她写一封回信，提出一些建议。
1. 试着理解父母：并非不爱你，只是忙着挣钱养家。
2. 帮着做些家务活，能体验共处的乐趣，关系更密切。
3. 遇到困难多和父母聊聊，学会跟父母分享你的感受。
4. 其他建议（至少两点）。
要求：
1. 词数：80左右（信件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
2. 适当发挥，内容充实，结构完整。
Dear Betty,
I’m glad to receive your letter. In fact, you’re facing a common problem, and there are some things you can do to solve it. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Linda
8．（2022秋·广东广州·九年级广州白云广雅实验学校校考期中）最近，初三学生李华写了一封邮件给心理咨询老师Anna，以下是邮件的内容：
Dear Anna, My name is Li Hua. I am a Grade 9 student in Zhixin High School. Recently, I feel really upset. School work is too much and I have no time to relax myself. But every day when I go back home feeling tired, my parents keep nagging (唠叨) about everything, cellphone, homework, exams .... It seems that they don’t understand me at all. I feel so breathless that I just avoid talking to them. But this makes our relationship even worse. I don’t know what to do. Can you give me some advice
假如你是 Anna，请从提高学习效率 (efficiency)、劳逸结合、多与父母沟通这几个方面，给李华提一些建议。
注意：
1. 词数 80-100 词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
2. 内容完整，语法正确，语篇连贯；
3. 考生不得透露个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to learn about your problems. ..
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．（2022秋·广东广州·九年级校联考期中）假如你是李华，学校的心理咨询老师。最近，你收到Kate的邮件，来信说她跟父母沟通有困难。请你给她回一封邮件，就如何与父母沟通相处提出建议。内容如下：
要求：1.包含以上全部要点。
2.词数80左右，文章开头及结尾已经给出，不计入总词数内。
3.文章文中不得透露学校、姓名等任何信息，否则不予评分。
参考词汇：argue with 与……争吵
Dear Kate,
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble communicating with your parents. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my suggestions can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
10．（2022秋·广东广州·九年级校考期中）假设你是李华。你的笔友Tim在数学课上回答了同学的一个问题，老师误认为他们在聊天而批评了他们，Tim觉得不公平，从此在数学课上紧张不安，也不喜欢这位老师的课了。但Tim很希望能把数学学好。不知如何是好的他写了封邮件向你咨询意见。
请根据以下要点提示给Tim回信。字数80左右。信开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥。
要点：
1.每个老师都想他的学生努力学习；
2.我认为你应该与数学老师谈谈，告诉他真相；
3.他会理解你的，并为你想学好数学感到高兴；
4.你应该知道老师所做是为你好；
……（至少补充两点。）
Dear Tim,
I am sorry that you are having trouble with your math teacher._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope things will be better soon!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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