中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation？
单元写作指导与演练
近三年考情分析
话题 考查热度
度假
＂三步五要素法＂写游记
本单元主要话题是节日与假期，与本单元相关的写作题目可以与节假日里的旅游相结合。命题内容以游览为主，根据提示记叙在节假日里旅游的大致情况。写作时应注意游记的内容、格式以及事态的运用。
内容一般从以下几方面着手：
1. Where did you go
2. How was the weather
3. What did you do
4. How was the food
5. How was the people
6. How did you feel about the trip
写作步骤
◆ 步骤一：在第一行写明日期（年月日与星期）和天气等信息。
◆ 步骤二：正文用一般过去时态描述当天发生的事情。
◆ 步骤三：在日记的最后描述自己的感受和体会。
游记三个段落内容要点：I.何时与何人到何地；
II.交通方式； 天气； 活动（美食、观光、拍照、购物...）；
III.感受。
【词汇积累】
1 diary(n.日记;记事簿)-(复数)diaries
2 bored(adj.厌倦的,烦闷的)-boring(adj.没趣的,令人厌倦的)
3 enjoy(v.享受······的乐趣;喜爱)-enjoyable(adj.有乐趣的;令人愉快的)-enjoyment(n.乐趣;乐事)
4 activity(n.活动)-(复数)activities
5 decide(v.决定;选定)-decision(n.决定;抉择)
6 build(v.建筑;建造)-building(n.建筑物;房子)-builder(n.建筑者)
7 trade(n.贸易v.做买卖;从事贸易)-trader(n.商人)
8 wonder(v.想知道;琢磨n.惊叹;惊奇)-wonderful(adj.精彩的;绝妙的)-wonderfully(adv.精彩地)
9 different(adj.不同的)-difference(n.差别;差异)
10.like (v.喜欢n.喜好;爱好)-(反义词)dislike［v.& n.不喜爱(的事物);厌恶(的事物)］
11 below(prep.& adv.在······下面;到······下面)-(反义词)above[prep.& adv.在(·····)上面］
12 hunger(n.饥饿;渴望)-hungry(adj.饥饿的;渴望得到)
【句式积累】
总体概括
The best place that I have ever visited is Beijing替换地名. I went to Beijing with my parents last summer. 我去过的最好的地方是北京。去年夏天我和父母去了北京。
It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books. Today, I’d like to share my summer holiday with you. 读万卷书，不如行万里路。今天，我想和大家分享我的暑假。
It was sunny on May 1st. I went on a trip with my parents替换同行人.
5月1日，天气晴朗。我和父母去旅行了。
On the first day of National Day, I went for a trip to Shanghai with my parents.
国庆节的第一天，我和父母去上海旅游。
My family and I went to Xi’an during the May Day holiday. Everything was great.
我和家人在五一假期去了西安。一切都很棒。
I am so excited to tell you something interesting I have experienced in someplace 替换地名.
我很高兴告诉你我在某地有趣的经历。
I had a good time with my family last summer holiday.
去年暑假我和家人玩得很开心。
旅游活动
We went there by train/ plane... We stayed there for five days. We visited some places of interest.
我们是坐火车/飞机去的...我们在那里住了五天。我们参观了一些名胜古迹。
The flowers on the mountain were very beautiful. It was not cold or hot those days. I liked the weather very much. 山上的花很漂亮。那几天不冷不热。我非常喜欢这里的天气。
There was always sunshine and soft wind, which made us so comfortable.
总是有阳光和柔和的风，这使我们如此舒适。
4. It was an excellent vacation. I went there by train and my train trip was relaxing. The weather was sunny and warm.
这是一个极好的假期。我是坐火车去的，我的火车之旅很轻松。天气晴朗温暖。
5. On the first day,... On the second day,... On the third day,...
6. We saw beautiful green hills, clean water and so on.
我们看到了美丽的青山绿水等等。
7. The food in Changchun is very delicious. People are also very friendly/kind and warm.
长春的食物很好吃。人们非常友好和热情。
8. Changchun lies in the north of China and it is a really beautiful place.
长春位于中国的北部，它是一个非常美丽的地方。
9. We went back to Changchun by plane. It was faster and more comfortable than by train.
我们坐飞机回长春。比坐火车更快，更舒适。
10. We enjoyed the trip and ate lots of local snacks. What a wonderful trip we had!
我们很喜欢这次旅行，吃了很多当地的小吃。我们的旅行真是太棒了！
11. I climbed the West Hill. It was a little difficult to climb, but I was very happy.
我爬上了西山。爬起来有点难度，不过还是很开心。
12. We took many photos there. We lived in a five-star hotel at night.
我们在那里拍了很多照片。晚上我们住在五星级酒店。
13. My parents took me to taste all kinds of delicious seafood.
父母带我去品尝了各种美味的海鲜。
旅游感受
1. My vacation there was really exciting. Xi’an is really an ancient city with a long history and I plan to visit there again!
我在那里的假期真的很令人兴奋。西安真的是一座历史悠久的古城，我打算再去一次！
2. I’m interested in the traditions in different places. I’m looking forward to going there again.
我对不同地方的传统很感兴趣。我期待着再次去那里。
3. We were tired but really happy. We had a great time.
我们很累，但真的很开心。我们度过了一段美好时光。
4. We had a wonderful time in Changchun. I look forward to going there again./I hope to visit there again some day.
我们在长春度过了一段美好的时光。我期待着再去那里。/我希望有一天再去那儿。
【谚语积累】
1. Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles. 读万卷书，行万里路。
2. A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. 千里之行，始于足下。
3. A bosom friend afar brings a distant land near. 海内存知己，天涯若比邻。
【万能写作模板】
模板
叙事和经历类书面表达通过叙述事件的起因、经过和结果表现主题。
写景状物类书面表达通过对事物和景点的描述表现主题。文章宜采用总—分—总的结构或总—分的结构，模板如下：
写好叙事类文章的开头的四种方式
1. ＂开门见山＂式开头
一般来说，文章的开头应尽量做到＂开门见山＂，即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题，使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。
对于叙事类的文章，可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如＂A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)＂的开头可以是：Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.
2. 回忆性开头
在描述事件或游记类的文章中，采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇，如never forget(永远无法忘记)、 remember (记得)、unforgettable(难以忘怀的)、 exciting(令人激动的)、surprising(令人惊讶的)、sad (难过的)... 如＂A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)＂的开头还以这样写：I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.
3. 疑问性开头
在叙事类或论述性的文章中，都可采用疑问型开头，这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如＂Planting Trees(种树)＂的开头可以是：Have you ever planted trees Don’t you think planting trees is ... 再如＂Traveling Abroad(出国之旅)＂的开头可以是：If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore
4. 倒叙式开头
在有的文章，特别是叙事类的文章中，可以采用倒叙的写作手法，先写出事件的结果，再陈述过程。如＂Catching Thieves (捉贼)＂的开头可以这样写：I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me Let me tell you. It’s a ... story.
写一篇游记。
写作提示：时间、地点、人物、出行方式、游览顺序、感受。
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【参考范文】
时间、地点、人物
Last week I with my parents went to Beijing for a holiday.
出行方式、游览顺序
It is my first time to visit Beijing. The city is the dream city for all the Chinese. It took us about five hours from Changchun to Beijing by train. The weather was sunny and warm during my vacation. On the first day, my family visited the Great Wall and Tian’anmen Square. I was so excited when I climbed The Great Wall. The next day we went to the Palace Museum and Wangfujing. I bought some gifts for my friends. How happy I am! We had Beijing Duck on the last day. It was really delicious.
感受
We really enjoyed this trip and I will take a long tour to Beijing next time.
一、写出下列单词
1. _______________ adj. 厌倦的；烦闷的
2. _______________ pron. 某人
3. _______________ n. 日记；记事簿
4. _______________ adj. 有乐趣的；令人愉快的
5. _______________ n. 活动
6. _______________ v. 决定；选定
7. _______________ v. & n. 尝试；设法；努力
8. _______________ n. 鸟
9. _______________ n. 自行车；脚踏车
10. _______________ n. 建筑物；房子
11. _______________ n. 商人
12. _______________ v. 想知道；琢磨
13. _______________ n. 差别；差异
14. _______________ n. 顶部；表面
15. _______________ v. 等待；等候
16. _______________ n. 伞；雨伞
17. _______________ adj. 湿的；潮湿的；下雨的
18. _______________ prep. & adv. 在……下面；到……下面
19. _______________ adj. & adv. 足够的（地）；充足的（地）；充分的（地）
20. _______________ adj. 饥饿的
答案：
bored 2. someone 3. diary 4. enjoyable 5. activity 6. decide 7. try 8. bird 9. bicycle
10. building 11. trader 12. wonder 13. difference 14. top 15. wait 16. Umbrella 17. wet 18. below 19. enough 20. hungry
重点短语
1. ___________________________ 去度假
2. ___________________________ 待在家
3. ___________________________ 参加夏令营
4. ___________________________ 相当多；不少
5. ___________________________ 当然
6. ___________________________ 大多数时间
7. ___________________________ 玩得愉快
8. ___________________________ 记日记
9. ___________________________ 给……的感觉；感受到
10. ___________________________ 因为
11. ___________________________ 在过去
12. ___________________________ 乘火车
13. ___________________________ 到达
14.____________________________决定做某事
15.____________________________做一个决定
16.___________________________ 尽力做某事
17.________________________ 等待
18.________________________ 足够的钱
19._________________________ 另外两个小时
20.___________________________ 与…相同
答案：1. go on vacation 2. stay at home 3. go to summer camp 4. quite a few
5. of course 6. most of the time 7. have a good time 8. keep a diary 9. feel like
10. because of 11. in the past 12. take the train 13. get to 14. decide to do sth.
15. make a decision 16. try to do sth 17 wait for 18. enough money
19. another two hours 20.the same as
三、重点句子
1. 很久不见了。_______________________________
2. 在那里我们拍了大量的照片。_______________________________
3. 我给父母买了一些东西，但是什么也没给自己买。_______________________________
4. 我真的没有看到我喜欢的东西。_______________________________
5. _______________________________似乎仍然没有人觉得无聊。
6. _______________________________天气晴朗炎热，因此我们决定到我们旅馆附近的沙滩去。
7. _______________________________ 我感觉自己就像是一只鸟儿。
8._______________________________我想知道过去这里的生活是什么样子的。
9. _______________________________ 一天的差异是多么大啊！
10. _______________________________我的双腿很累，我想停下来。
答案：
1. Long time no see.
2. We took quite a few photos there.
3. I bought something for my parents, but nothing for myself.
4. I didn’t really see anything I liked.
5. Still no one seemed to be bored.
6. It was sunny and hot, so we decided to go to the beach near our hotel.
7. I felt like I was a bird.
8. I wonder what life was like here in the past.
9. What a difference a day makes!
10. My legs were so tired that I wanted to stop.
四、连句成文
上个月2号(8月2号)，周五，天气晴朗，你和父母去北京观光旅游，游览了北京天安门广场、紫禁城和长城等几个地方，玩得非常开心。
要求：1. 写一篇英语日记，注意格式；
2. 词数不少于70。
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材料分析：
日记就是把自己当天经历的有意义的事情以及见闻感受记录下来，通常用第一人称来写，且时态为一般过去时。注意日记的格式：正文上方自左起写上星期几、日期和天气情况，正文另起一行。写作时，要注意必须按照时间顺序来描述当天的活动，这样会显得层次分明、有条理性。在写作过程中，不要忘记写出自己的真实感受，灵活运用各种所学句型，使文章显得更加生动。
佳句欣赏与模仿：
1. It is my first time to visit the Great Wall.
【one's first time to do sth. 意为“某人第一次做某事”】
这是他第一次赢得了这个比赛。
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2. I always go to school with my sister on weekdays.
【go to...意为“去……地方”，with介词表示“伴随，跟着”】
上个月，我和我的家人去了贵州度假。
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3. In the evening, we went to the beach and enjoyed ourselves there.
【and连接并列的谓语】
下午，我们去爬山了，在那里我们欣赏到一些特别的东西。
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4. The book is so interesting that I decide to read it again.
【so...that...意为“如此……以至于……”】
他是如此好的一个老师，以至于我们都喜欢他。
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答案：
1. This is his first time to win the game.
2. Last month, I went to Guizhou on vacation with my family.
3. In the afternoon, we went to the mountain and enjoyed something special there.
4. He is so good a teacher that we all like him.
参考范文
Friday, August 2nd, Sunny
The weather was sunny and warm.①I went to Beijing with my parents on vacation. It was my first time to go there，so everything was really interesting.② We visited three places and took quite a few photos. First we went to Tian'anmen Square. It was beautiful. Then we went to the Palace Museum.③ We saw many old things there. It was cool. In the afternoon，we went to the Great Wall and saw many beautiful things from the top.④ It was so great and enjoyable that we all decide to visit it again.⑤
[亮点分析]
①go to...意为“去……地方”，with介词表示“伴随，跟着”。
②one's first time to do sth. 意为“某人第一次做某事”，so在此连接并列句，表示因果关系。
③用first，then等词来叙述事情发生的经过，是写日记的常用模式。
④and连接并列的谓语，使句子更饱满。
⑤so...that...意为“如此……以至于……”，引导结果状语从句。
（一）
1．假如你是Li Ming，你第一次收到美国笔友Paul的来信，信中他提了一些问题想要了解你。请你仔细阅读下面的邮件，针对邮件中的问题进行回复。
要求：语言通畅得体，词数80左右。
Dear Li Ming,
It’s so exciting to be your pen pal. We haven’t seen each other, would you like to share your life with me What do you usually do in your free time How often do you do them Which activity do you like best and why As I know, you had a 7-day holiday in October. What did you do and how was your holiday
Looking forward to your reply!
Paul
Dear Paul,
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Yours,
Li Ming
【解题思路】
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括和对方分享自己的生活，空闲时间做的事情，最喜欢哪个活动以及原因，同时叙述十一假期7天的情况。
【写作步骤】
第一步，介绍自己收到对方来信的心情和想要分享自己生活的意愿；
第二步，具体阐述自己的日常生活情况，以及十一假期7天的情况；
第三步，最后是叙述自己希望对方到来。
【满分作文】
Dear Paul,
I am so glad to hear from you. I will share my life with you.
In my free time, I usually play computer games with my friends. I think it is so relaxing. I often play them once a week. Playing too many games may be bad for my study. Besides, I like climbing the mountains with my classmates best, because it can build my body. In October, I went to the Mount Hua with my parents, because I had a 7-day holiday in October. This trip was so exciting. When we reached the top of the mountain, I felt so happy. You couldn’t imagine how comfortable I was. Fresh air and beautiful scenery made me fascinated.
I hope you can come here and I will show you around.
Yours,
Li Ming
【亮点词汇】
① be bad for对……有害
② once a week一周一次
③ make sb adj使某人……
【高分句型】
① Playing too many games may be bad for my study.（动名词作主语）
② When we reached the top of the mountain, I felt so happy.（when引导的时间状语从句）
2．寒假即将来临，你一定想做一些有意义的事情来度过一个轻松、愉快的假期，例如锻炼放松，拜访亲友，陪父母聊天、做家务，认识更多的人等等！请 以“My Winter Vacation”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。
参考词汇：knowledge 知识 social activities社会活动
提示：
1. Where are you going to spend your winter vacation
2. What are you going to do for yourself, your family or others
要求：
1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2. 词数80个左右；
3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。
My Winter Vacation
The winter vacation is coming.
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【解题思路】
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示内容介绍自己将要怎样过一个有意义的假期生活。注意不要遗漏要点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，告知自己的假期将要来临，自己打算做一些想做的事。
第二步，从放松读书，陪父母聊天、做家务及参加社会活动三个方面来说明自己打算怎样过一个有意义的假期。
第三步，最后祝大家都能过一个愉快的假期。
【满分作文】
My Winter Vacation
The winter vacation is coming. I’m going to do what I want to do.
First, I’m going to have a good rest and relax at home. I will read some good books. Reading books is useful because it can help me get more knowledge. It can open up my eyes to the world. Next, I’m going to spend more time talking with my parents. I will also try my best to help them do some housework. Then, I’m going to take part in social activities so that I can know more people.
What do you think of my vacation I hope you will have a happy winter vacation.
【亮点词汇】
①have a good rest好好休息
②spend more time talking with my parents花更多的时间和父母交谈
③take part in social activities参加社会活动
【高分句型】
①Reading books is useful because it can help me get more knowledge.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②I hope you will have a happy winter vacation.(省略that的宾语从句)
3．三年初中生活即将结束，近期毕业生QQ群里正在谈论关于即将来临的暑假活动安排, 请你根据QQ群里采集的信息以及你自己的想法，写一篇英语短文。
注意事项：
1. 词数100个左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
Recently we had a discussion on how to spend our coming summer holiday in the QQ group. Here are the results.
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【解题思路】
写作时要以第三人称为主，时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时相结合。可分三段写作：第一段以已给出开头引出话题；第二段介绍群里学生们的打算；第三段介绍自己的想法。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
【满分作文】
Recently we had a discussion on how to spend our coming summer holiday in the QQ group. Here are the results.
Some students plan to travel around China and visit many places of interest. They think it can not only reduce the stress of study but also learn more about our country. Some students are going to read books at home. They think reading can help open up their eyes and relax themselves. Others prefer to do some voluntary work so that they can help more people. What’s more, they can get some working experience.
In order to make my holiday meaningful as well as happy, I decide to get a part-time job to experience a different lifestyle.
4．在新学期开始之际，校英语报发起了题为“A Wonderful Vacation”的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的暑假中一次难忘的经历，向校报投稿。
内容提示：
l. Where did you go
2. What did you do there
3. How did you like it
要求：90词左右。
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【解题思路】
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“去哪度假了，做了什么，有什么感受”的要点，同时可适当添加细节，使文章内容丰富。
【写作步骤】
第一步，开篇点题，介绍自己去哪里度假；
第二步，具体介绍度假期间都去了哪里，做了什么事情；
第三步，表明度假感受。
【满分作文】
A Wonderful Vacation
I went to Qingdao with my sister this summer vacation. We had a good time there.
Qingdao has many places of interest. First, we went to the beach. The sea was as blue as the sky. And there was always sunshine and soft wind, which made us so comfortable. We also took many photos there. Later we went to sea life center. We saw many amazing sea creatures and learned more about them. Also, I bought many beautiful souvenirs for my parents and friends. And my sister took me to taste all kinds of delicious seafood.
Although we were tired, we wanted to visit Qingdao again.
【亮点词汇】
①places of interest名胜古迹
②as…as和……一样……
③all kinds of各种各样的
【高分句型】
①And there was always sunshine and soft wind, which made us so comfortable.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
②Although we were tired, we wanted to visit Qingdao again.（Although引导让步状语从句）
5．三年的初中学习生活就要结束，暑假即将来临。你打算过一个什么样的暑假呢？放松的(relaxing)？忙碌的(busy)？有意义的(meaningful)？……你准备在这个暑假做些什么？(吃喝玩乐？学习？做志愿者？旅行？……)请你以My Summer Vacation为题写一篇短文，说说你的计划和安排。
写作要求：
1、先填好标题，再围绕标题展开作文；
2、100词左右；
3、文中不得出现真实姓名及校名；
4、短文内容与标题相符，文章逻辑结构合理，字、词、句、语法使用正确。
My ________ Summer Vacation
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【解题思路】
本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般将来时和一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言通畅，语法正确，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。
【满分作文】
My meaningful Summer Vacation
With the summer vacation coming, I will make a plan for it. First, I plan to relax myself, such as watching movies and traveling with my parents. I’ll exercise every day because it is good for our health. Then I am going to spend some time learning cooking, swimming and bike riding. And I want to communicate with my parents more. In my opinion, these skills will be useful and helpful in my future life.At the same time, I’ll read some books to open up my eyes. I also plan to take part in some social activities to prepare for future study.
I think I’ll have a meaningful summer vacation.
（2022·广东深圳·统考中考真题）
假定你是李华，你和同学们拍了一个毕业活动视频，打算做成视频日志（vlog），参加主题为“青春飞扬”的国际中学生vlog作品展。请给该视频写一段解说词。
内容包括：
1. 海边活动：
下午：①沙滩排球；②……；
晚上：搭帐篷；聚餐和清理垃圾；分享会。
2. 活动感言。
注意：
1. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
参考词汇：冲浪surf 帐篷tent
Hi, everyone! I am Li Hua. It’s my great pleasure to present my vlog to you.
Last Saturday, we went to the seaside to celebrate our graduation. In the afternoon, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
So much for my video. I hope you have enjoyed it. Thank you.
【解题思路】
①题材：本文是一篇解说词，属于演讲稿写作；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示的要点介绍在海边的活动，包括下午和晚上的具体活动，要列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发活动带来的感悟并书写结语。
【满分作文】
Hi, everyone! I am Li Hua. lt’s my great pleasure to present my vlog to you.
Last Saturday, we went to the seaside to celebrate our graduation. In the afternoon, we had a beach volleyball game. Then, we enjoyed the fun of surfing in the sea. Before dark, we picked up the litter on the beach. How meaningful it was! At night, we put up two tents and had a picnic. The food cooked by us was so delicious. Finally, all of us shared our feelings about this fantastic experience. Not only can it promote our friendship, but also it leaves us a valuable experience.
So much for my video. I hope you have enjoyed it.
Thank you.
【亮点词汇】
①pick up the litter捡垃圾
②not only…but also…不仅……而且……
【高分句型】
①How meaningful it was!（how引导的感叹句）
②The food cooked by us was so delicious.（过去分词作定语）
③Not only can it promote our friendship, but also it leaves us a valuable experience.（部分倒装结构）
（2022·宁夏·统考中考真题）
暑假临近，你有什么计划吗？你校英语社团正在开展以“My Summer Vacation Plan”为主题的征文活动。请根据思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的暑假计划。
要求：1. 文中须包含思维导图中的所有信息；
2. 补充至少两条计划；
3. 合理增加细节，以使行文连贯。
注意：1. 词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
提示词语： take part in参加 social practice activities社会实践活动
My Summer Vacation Plan
The summer vacation is coming.
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【解题思路】
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：本文以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据题干中的提示信息介绍自己的暑期计划，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，引入话题，表示自己暑期有很多事情要做；
第二步，根据思维导图中的提示信息详细介绍自己暑期要做的事情；
第三步，表达期待。
【满分作文】
My Summer Vacation Plan
The summer vacation is coming. There are so many things I plan to do.
First, I’m going to read some meaningful books, because I believe books are our best friends. I love my grandparents. I’m going to visit them more often. Then I plan to take part in social practice activities. For example, I will go to a farm to pick apples. My favourite sport is playing basketball. I’m going to play basketball with my best friends on weekends. Finally, I want to go to a summer camp if possible.
I’m really looking forward to the summer vacation.
【亮点词汇】
①plan to do sth.计划做某事
②take part in参加
③look forward to doing sth.期待做某事
【高分句型】
①First, I’m going to read some meaningful books, because I believe books are our best friends. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②My favourite sport is playing basketball.(动名词作表语)
（2018·四川泸州·统考中考真题）
暑期将至，我们都应该制定合理的假期计划。请你根据以下要点提示，以“My Summer Vacation Plan”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示：1.放松自己：听音乐，看电影，锻炼身体等；
2.陪伴家人：旅行，散步，与父母交流等；
3.做志愿者：看望老人，赠送礼物，为他们唱歌等；
4.努力学习：阅读书籍，复习知识，为以后学习做准备等；
5.个人观点：……。
要求：1.词数110词左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容；
3.字迹工整，卷面整洁，文意连贯，语言流畅；
4.不用真实姓名、校名、地名。
参考词语：relax myself, spend time with…, volunteer, review, prepare for
My Summer Vacation Plan
With the summer vacation coming, I will make a plan for it. First, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【解题思路】
写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般将来时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
【满分作文】：
My Summer Vacation Plan
With the summer vacation coming, I will make a plan for it. First, I plan to relax myself, such as listening to music, watching movies and so on. I’ll exercise every day. I think it is good for our health to play sports. Then, I am going to spend some time with my parents, such as traveling, taking a walk and communicating with them. Third, I’m going to be a volunteer. I want to visit the old people, give them gifts and sing for them. At the same time, I’ll read some books to open my eyes. I also plan to review knowledge to prepare for future study.
I think I’ll have a good summer vacation.
（2022·湖南邵阳·统考中考真题）
“双减”政策实施后的第一个暑假即将来临，假如你是Zhang Wei，你的英国笔友Tom来信询问你今年的暑期计划，请你给他写一封回信，内容要点如下：
要求：1. 至少写四点暑期计划，可适当发挥；2.语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯；
3. 词数80左右。书信开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;
4. 请勿在文中出现其实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Tom,
How is everything going with you In your letter, you asked me about my summer holiday resolutions. Now I’m writing to tell you some details.
Firstly,
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All in all, I hope I’ll spend a meaningful and colorful summer holiday.
Yours,
Zhang Wei
【解题思路】
本文时态以一般将来时为主。人称以第一人称为主。写作时包含要点，且自己需要再加一点暑期计划，可使用过渡词Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly以及Finally使文章更通畅，最后确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
【满分作文】
Dear Tom,
How is everything going with you In your letter, you asked me about my summer holiday resolutions. Now I’m writing to tell you some details.
Firstly, I want to have a good rest and relax myself. I will listen to some music or watch some TV. Secondly, I will read some books. I like reading very much. So I read a book every week to broaden my horizons. Thirdly, I will be a volunteer to help those in need. Finally, I will help my parents do some housework at home.
All in all, I hope I’ll spend a meaningful and colorful summer holiday.
Yours,
Zhang Wei
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation？
单元写作指导与演练
近三年考情分析
话题 考查热度
度假
＂三步五要素法＂写游记
本单元主要话题是节日与假期，与本单元相关的写作题目可以与节假日里的旅游相结合。命题内容以游览为主，根据提示记叙在节假日里旅游的大致情况。写作时应注意游记的内容、格式以及事态的运用。
内容一般从以下几方面着手：
1. Where did you go
2. How was the weather
3. What did you do
4. How was the food
5. How was the people
6. How did you feel about the trip
写作步骤
◆ 步骤一：在第一行写明日期（年月日与星期）和天气等信息。
◆ 步骤二：正文用一般过去时态描述当天发生的事情。
◆ 步骤三：在日记的最后描述自己的感受和体会。
游记三个段落内容要点：I.何时与何人到何地；
II.交通方式； 天气； 活动（美食、观光、拍照、购物...）；
III.感受。
【词汇积累】
1 diary(n.日记;记事簿)-(复数)diaries
2 bored(adj.厌倦的,烦闷的)-boring(adj.没趣的,令人厌倦的)
3 enjoy(v.享受······的乐趣;喜爱)-enjoyable(adj.有乐趣的;令人愉快的)-enjoyment(n.乐趣;乐事)
4 activity(n.活动)-(复数)activities
5 decide(v.决定;选定)-decision(n.决定;抉择)
6 build(v.建筑;建造)-building(n.建筑物;房子)-builder(n.建筑者)
7 trade(n.贸易v.做买卖;从事贸易)-trader(n.商人)
8 wonder(v.想知道;琢磨n.惊叹;惊奇)-wonderful(adj.精彩的;绝妙的)-wonderfully(adv.精彩地)
9 different(adj.不同的)-difference(n.差别;差异)
10.like (v.喜欢n.喜好;爱好)-(反义词)dislike［v.& n.不喜爱(的事物);厌恶(的事物)］
11 below(prep.& adv.在······下面;到······下面)-(反义词)above[prep.& adv.在(·····)上面］
12 hunger(n.饥饿;渴望)-hungry(adj.饥饿的;渴望得到)
【句式积累】
总体概括
The best place that I have ever visited is Beijing替换地名. I went to Beijing with my parents last summer. 我去过的最好的地方是北京。去年夏天我和父母去了北京。
It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books. Today, I’d like to share my summer holiday with you. 读万卷书，不如行万里路。今天，我想和大家分享我的暑假。
It was sunny on May 1st. I went on a trip with my parents替换同行人.
5月1日，天气晴朗。我和父母去旅行了。
On the first day of National Day, I went for a trip to Shanghai with my parents.
国庆节的第一天，我和父母去上海旅游。
My family and I went to Xi’an during the May Day holiday. Everything was great.
我和家人在五一假期去了西安。一切都很棒。
I am so excited to tell you something interesting I have experienced in someplace 替换地名.
我很高兴告诉你我在某地有趣的经历。
I had a good time with my family last summer holiday.
去年暑假我和家人玩得很开心。
旅游活动
We went there by train/ plane... We stayed there for five days. We visited some places of interest.
我们是坐火车/飞机去的...我们在那里住了五天。我们参观了一些名胜古迹。
The flowers on the mountain were very beautiful. It was not cold or hot those days. I liked the weather very much. 山上的花很漂亮。那几天不冷不热。我非常喜欢这里的天气。
There was always sunshine and soft wind, which made us so comfortable.
总是有阳光和柔和的风，这使我们如此舒适。
4. It was an excellent vacation. I went there by train and my train trip was relaxing. The weather was sunny and warm.
这是一个极好的假期。我是坐火车去的，我的火车之旅很轻松。天气晴朗温暖。
5. On the first day,... On the second day,... On the third day,...
6. We saw beautiful green hills, clean water and so on.
我们看到了美丽的青山绿水等等。
7. The food in Changchun is very delicious. People are also very friendly/kind and warm.
长春的食物很好吃。人们非常友好和热情。
8. Changchun lies in the north of China and it is a really beautiful place.
长春位于中国的北部，它是一个非常美丽的地方。
9. We went back to Changchun by plane. It was faster and more comfortable than by train.
我们坐飞机回长春。比坐火车更快，更舒适。
10. We enjoyed the trip and ate lots of local snacks. What a wonderful trip we had!
我们很喜欢这次旅行，吃了很多当地的小吃。我们的旅行真是太棒了！
11. I climbed the West Hill. It was a little difficult to climb, but I was very happy.
我爬上了西山。爬起来有点难度，不过还是很开心。
12. We took many photos there. We lived in a five-star hotel at night.
我们在那里拍了很多照片。晚上我们住在五星级酒店。
13. My parents took me to taste all kinds of delicious seafood.
父母带我去品尝了各种美味的海鲜。
旅游感受
1. My vacation there was really exciting. Xi’an is really an ancient city with a long history and I plan to visit there again!
我在那里的假期真的很令人兴奋。西安真的是一座历史悠久的古城，我打算再去一次！
2. I’m interested in the traditions in different places. I’m looking forward to going there again.
我对不同地方的传统很感兴趣。我期待着再次去那里。
3. We were tired but really happy. We had a great time.
我们很累，但真的很开心。我们度过了一段美好时光。
4. We had a wonderful time in Changchun. I look forward to going there again./I hope to visit there again some day.
我们在长春度过了一段美好的时光。我期待着再去那里。/我希望有一天再去那儿。
【谚语积累】
1. Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles. 读万卷书，行万里路。
2. A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. 千里之行，始于足下。
3. A bosom friend afar brings a distant land near. 海内存知己，天涯若比邻。
【万能写作模板】
模板
叙事和经历类书面表达通过叙述事件的起因、经过和结果表现主题。
写景状物类书面表达通过对事物和景点的描述表现主题。文章宜采用总—分—总的结构或总—分的结构，模板如下：
写好叙事类文章的开头的四种方式
1. ＂开门见山＂式开头
一般来说，文章的开头应尽量做到＂开门见山＂，即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题，使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。
对于叙事类的文章，可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如＂A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)＂的开头可以是：Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.
2. 回忆性开头
在描述事件或游记类的文章中，采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇，如never forget(永远无法忘记)、 remember (记得)、unforgettable(难以忘怀的)、 exciting(令人激动的)、surprising(令人惊讶的)、sad (难过的)... 如＂A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)＂的开头还以这样写：I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.
3. 疑问性开头
在叙事类或论述性的文章中，都可采用疑问型开头，这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如＂Planting Trees(种树)＂的开头可以是：Have you ever planted trees Don’t you think planting trees is ... 再如＂Traveling Abroad(出国之旅)＂的开头可以是：If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore
4. 倒叙式开头
在有的文章，特别是叙事类的文章中，可以采用倒叙的写作手法，先写出事件的结果，再陈述过程。如＂Catching Thieves (捉贼)＂的开头可以这样写：I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me Let me tell you. It’s a ... story.
写一篇游记。
写作提示：时间、地点、人物、出行方式、游览顺序、感受。
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【参考范文】
时间、地点、人物
Last week I with my parents went to Beijing for a holiday.
出行方式、游览顺序
It is my first time to visit Beijing. The city is the dream city for all the Chinese. It took us about five hours from Changchun to Beijing by train. The weather was sunny and warm during my vacation. On the first day, my family visited the Great Wall and Tian’anmen Square. I was so excited when I climbed The Great Wall. The next day we went to the Palace Museum and Wangfujing. I bought some gifts for my friends. How happy I am! We had Beijing Duck on the last day. It was really delicious.
感受
We really enjoyed this trip and I will take a long tour to Beijing next time.
一、写出下列单词
1. _______________ adj. 厌倦的；烦闷的
2. _______________ pron. 某人
3. _______________ n. 日记；记事簿
4. _______________ adj. 有乐趣的；令人愉快的
5. _______________ n. 活动
6. _______________ v. 决定；选定
7. _______________ v. & n. 尝试；设法；努力
8. _______________ n. 鸟
9. _______________ n. 自行车；脚踏车
10. _______________ n. 建筑物；房子
11. _______________ n. 商人
12. _______________ v. 想知道；琢磨
13. _______________ n. 差别；差异
14. _______________ n. 顶部；表面
15. _______________ v. 等待；等候
16. _______________ n. 伞；雨伞
17. _______________ adj. 湿的；潮湿的；下雨的
18. _______________ prep. & adv. 在……下面；到……下面
19. _______________ adj. & adv. 足够的（地）；充足的（地）；充分的（地）
20. _______________ adj. 饥饿的
重点短语
1. ___________________________ 去度假
2. ___________________________ 待在家
3. ___________________________ 参加夏令营
4. ___________________________ 相当多；不少
5. ___________________________ 当然
6. ___________________________ 大多数时间
7. ___________________________ 玩得愉快
8. ___________________________ 记日记
9. ___________________________ 给……的感觉；感受到
10. ___________________________ 因为
11. ___________________________ 在过去
12. ___________________________ 乘火车
13. ___________________________ 到达
14.____________________________决定做某事
15.____________________________做一个决定
16.___________________________ 尽力做某事
17.________________________ 等待
18.________________________ 足够的钱
19._________________________ 另外两个小时
20.___________________________ 与…相同
三、重点句子
1. 很久不见了。_______________________________
2. 在那里我们拍了大量的照片。_______________________________
3. 我给父母买了一些东西，但是什么也没给自己买。_______________________________
4. 我真的没有看到我喜欢的东西。_______________________________
5. _______________________________似乎仍然没有人觉得无聊。
6. _______________________________天气晴朗炎热，因此我们决定到我们旅馆附近的沙滩去。
7. _______________________________ 我感觉自己就像是一只鸟儿。
8._______________________________我想知道过去这里的生活是什么样子的。
9. _______________________________ 一天的差异是多么大啊！
10. _______________________________我的双腿很累，我想停下来。
四、连句成文
上个月2号(8月2号)，周五，天气晴朗，你和父母去北京观光旅游，游览了北京天安门广场、紫禁城和长城等几个地方，玩得非常开心。
要求：1. 写一篇英语日记，注意格式；
2. 词数不少于70。
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佳句欣赏与模仿：
1. It is my first time to visit the Great Wall.
【one's first time to do sth. 意为“某人第一次做某事”】
这是他第一次赢得了这个比赛。
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2. I always go to school with my sister on weekdays.
【go to...意为“去……地方”，with介词表示“伴随，跟着”】
上个月，我和我的家人去了贵州度假。
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3. In the evening, we went to the beach and enjoyed ourselves there.
【and连接并列的谓语】
下午，我们去爬山了，在那里我们欣赏到一些特别的东西。
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4. The book is so interesting that I decide to read it again.
【so...that...意为“如此……以至于……”】
他是如此好的一个老师，以至于我们都喜欢他。
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（一）
1．假如你是Li Ming，你第一次收到美国笔友Paul的来信，信中他提了一些问题想要了解你。请你仔细阅读下面的邮件，针对邮件中的问题进行回复。
要求：语言通畅得体，词数80左右。
Dear Li Ming,
It’s so exciting to be your pen pal. We haven’t seen each other, would you like to share your life with me What do you usually do in your free time How often do you do them Which activity do you like best and why As I know, you had a 7-day holiday in October. What did you do and how was your holiday
Looking forward to your reply!
Paul
Dear Paul,
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Yours,
Li Ming
2．寒假即将来临，你一定想做一些有意义的事情来度过一个轻松、愉快的假期，例如锻炼放松，拜访亲友，陪父母聊天、做家务，认识更多的人等等！请 以“My Winter Vacation”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。
参考词汇：knowledge 知识 social activities社会活动
提示：
1. Where are you going to spend your winter vacation
2. What are you going to do for yourself, your family or others
要求：
1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2. 词数80个左右；
3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。
My Winter Vacation
The winter vacation is coming.
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3．三年初中生活即将结束，近期毕业生QQ群里正在谈论关于即将来临的暑假活动安排, 请你根据QQ群里采集的信息以及你自己的想法，写一篇英语短文。
注意事项：
1. 词数100个左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
Recently we had a discussion on how to spend our coming summer holiday in the QQ group. Here are the results.
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4．在新学期开始之际，校英语报发起了题为“A Wonderful Vacation”的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的暑假中一次难忘的经历，向校报投稿。
内容提示：
l. Where did you go
2. What did you do there
3. How did you like it
要求：90词左右。
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5．三年的初中学习生活就要结束，暑假即将来临。你打算过一个什么样的暑假呢？放松的(relaxing)？忙碌的(busy)？有意义的(meaningful)？……你准备在这个暑假做些什么？(吃喝玩乐？学习？做志愿者？旅行？……)请你以My Summer Vacation为题写一篇短文，说说你的计划和安排。
写作要求：
1、先填好标题，再围绕标题展开作文；
2、100词左右；
3、文中不得出现真实姓名及校名；
4、短文内容与标题相符，文章逻辑结构合理，字、词、句、语法使用正确。
My ________ Summer Vacation
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1. （2022·广东深圳·统考中考真题）假定你是李华，你和同学们拍了一个毕业活动视频，打算做成视频日志（vlog），参加主题为“青春飞扬”的国际中学生vlog作品展。请给该视频写一段解说词。
内容包括：
1. 海边活动：
下午：①沙滩排球；②……；
晚上：搭帐篷；聚餐和清理垃圾；分享会。
2. 活动感言。
注意：
1. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
参考词汇：冲浪surf 帐篷tent
Hi, everyone! I am Li Hua. It’s my great pleasure to present my vlog to you.
Last Saturday, we went to the seaside to celebrate our graduation. In the afternoon, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
So much for my video. I hope you have enjoyed it. Thank you.
2. （2022·宁夏·统考中考真题）暑假临近，你有什么计划吗？你校英语社团正在开展以“My Summer Vacation Plan”为主题的征文活动。请根据思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的暑假计划。
要求：1. 文中须包含思维导图中的所有信息；
2. 补充至少两条计划；
3. 合理增加细节，以使行文连贯。
注意：1. 词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
提示词语： take part in参加 social practice activities社会实践活动
My Summer Vacation Plan
The summer vacation is coming.
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3. （2018·四川泸州·统考中考真题）暑期将至，我们都应该制定合理的假期计划。请你根据以下要点提示，以“My Summer Vacation Plan”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示：1.放松自己：听音乐，看电影，锻炼身体等；
2.陪伴家人：旅行，散步，与父母交流等；
3.做志愿者：看望老人，赠送礼物，为他们唱歌等；
4.努力学习：阅读书籍，复习知识，为以后学习做准备等；
5.个人观点：……。
要求：1.词数110词左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容；
3.字迹工整，卷面整洁，文意连贯，语言流畅；
4.不用真实姓名、校名、地名。
参考词语：relax myself, spend time with…, volunteer, review, prepare for
My Summer Vacation Plan
With the summer vacation coming, I will make a plan for it. First, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4. （2022·湖南邵阳·统考中考真题）“双减”政策实施后的第一个暑假即将来临，假如你是Zhang Wei，你的英国笔友Tom来信询问你今年的暑期计划，请你给他写一封回信，内容要点如下：
要求：1. 至少写四点暑期计划，可适当发挥；2.语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯；
3. 词数80左右。书信开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;
4. 请勿在文中出现其实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Tom,
How is everything going with you In your letter, you asked me about my summer holiday resolutions. Now I’m writing to tell you some details.
Firstly,
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All in all, I hope I’ll spend a meaningful and colorful summer holiday.
Yours,
Zhang Wei
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