2024届高考英语作文复习专项 读后续写：独唱（浙南名校联盟第一次联考2023.10）讲义
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读后续写：独唱（浙南名校联盟第一次联考2023.10）
浙江省浙南名校联盟2023- 2024学年高三上学期第一次联考英语读后续写题目:
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was in middle school, my family moved to Seattle, where my parents started their new business-a small grocery store downstairs my house. As a girl of shy and reserved nature, I had to take a fresh start to fit into the sophisticated city life.
One sunny day, my school announced an exciting event, a talent show for the local food bank. Students were encouraged to showcase their unique talents in front of the public in the city hall on National Day. A buzz of excitement filled the school as everyone began preparing for the big day. Deep down, I felt a spark of curiosity and a desire to participate. However, my self-doubt held me back, “I don't have any special skills to share.”
Days turned into weeks, and the talent show drew closer. I couldn't shake the upsetting feeling until one day Emma, one of the most popular girls in my class, came to me while I was helping in the grocery store after class. “How about singing together in the talent show ” She grinned, “I heard you singing a tune, along the way back home. I can't help following you here.” Gosh, I couldn't believe my ears. Emma, with personality and popularity, acknowledged my little talent. Since Emma had the world's prettiest voice, I felt like being favoured by fortune.
“You two The talent show for the food bank ”My mum bent towards us and her face lit up.“ A big occasion.” Then a light bulb seemed to go in her head. “Why not practise right now upstairs I bet you'll be a perfect match.” Winking at us, she seemed to know we were thinking alike.
Emma and I embarked on rehearsing almost every single day after school. We brainstormed, exchanged ideas and rehearsed the scene. As the days rolled by, I was feeling pretty good about our act. But the day before the performance, Emma called that she had an acute stomachache and was not in any shape to perform.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I was completely knocked out by the news.
Finally came the big moment.
文本分析：
故事大意：
本文叙述了一位性格内向害羞的女孩随父母迁到西雅图后开始努力适应复杂的城市生活。在一个阳光明媚的日子里，学校宣布了一项激动人心的活动一一为当地食物银行举办的才艺表演。在内心深处，女孩感到一丝好奇和参与的渴望。然而她的自我怀疑让她退缩了。直到有一天，班上最受欢迎的女孩之一艾玛，发现她的才能，鼓励并邀请女孩一起参加唱歌的才艺表演，准备一起表演唱歌，且排练的很好，但表演前，Emma打电话说她胃痛得厉害。
本次学生习作问题阐述：本次写作话题较为常见，但学生要写出上等习作也不容易。一些学生在叙事节奏上的把握不够合理，在两段落衔接上也出现了一些自相矛盾的情节处理。
主题意义：通过叙述作者第一次参加才艺表演，在朋友Emma和妈妈的帮助下克服舞台恐惧症，获得自信，实现个人成长的故事。自信和努力能战胜困难的必要条件。
Conflict1:
Deep down, I felt a spark of curiosity and a desire to participate.vs However,my self-doubt held me back,“I don't have any special skills to share.”
Conflict2:
we rehearsed almost every single day after school.Emma called that she vs had an acute stomachache and was not in any shape to perform.
衔接：
Para1: I was completely knocked out by the news.
时间:The day before the performance
空间:at home
主要人物: mother and I
关键情节:
1.How did I feel after I got the news (情绪+心理描写) 衔接 1
2.What did I decide to do --quit or continue (情绪+心理措写) 过渡1
3.Who persuaded me to keep on And how did she/he comfort me 衔接2
Para2: Finally came the big moment.
时间:on the talent show
空间:on the stage
主要人物: I audience /mother
关键事件 衔接3
1 .How did I feel when I stood on the stage (情绪+心理描写)
2. What did I perform at the very beginning (情绪+心理描写) 过渡2
3. what made me overcame the stage fright and finish the performance successfully 主题升华
4.Ending --- What did I realize after the performance
Read for theme:
How I overcame stage fright, went beyond oneself to achieve personal growth.
通过叙述作者第一次参加才艺表演，在朋友Emma和妈妈的帮助下克服舞台恐惧症，获得自信，实现个人成长的故事。自信和努力是能战胜困难的必要条件。
舞台表演语料积累
过去分词作状语
1. Seized/Consumed/Overcome by nervousness, I felt my heart was pounding so hard that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.
2. Overwhelmed by a sudden surge of anxiety I grabbed/squeezed my costume tightly.
3.Extraordinarily/Extremely worried the audience,that I would lose face in front of
I could feel my heart pounding fast.
倒装
1. So restless was I that my blood rushed to my face. I stood still, not knowing what to do next.
2.Hardly had I reviewed my lines when a flush of nervousness deepened the red of my cheeks.
优秀范文：
I was completely knocked out by the news. A shiver of gloomy feeling passed through my stomach as I heard the news.The idea of being left alone onstage made me tremble, let alone singing in front of so many audience. Without Emma's company, I murmured to myself，this talent show would definitely be an impossible task. When I thought all the efforts to rehearsal would be in vain.sadness came in waves in my heart Suddenly out of nowhere appeared mother before me. Affectionately stroking my hair , she looked at me with a soft, determined glow in her eyes, as if by magic giving me a strength with which to conquer all difficulties and fears . She said quietly but firmly: “I believe you can make it” So I nodded and made a decision.
Finally came the big moment.Standing backstage, nervousness came flooding over me . The moment my name was called , I could feel butterflies in my stomach flying wildly. My trembling legs brought me onstage , palms sweating and heart racing. I cast my eyes randomly to the audience and spotted a familiar face at the corner. It was Emma who came to watch my performance. Pale as she appeared, she nodded and exchanged a determined glance with me which timely put my heart back in place. With the music rising , I began my singing and immersed myself in it completely . When I finished , the auditorium erupted into a sea of cheers eventually realized where the real sources of confidence came form . Actually, every cloud has a silver lining and every individual possesses talents ..
浙江省浙南名校联盟2023- 2024学年高三上学期第一次联考英语读后续写题目:
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was in middle school, my family moved to Seattle, where my parents started their new business-a small grocery store downstairs my house. As a girl of shy and reserved nature, I had to take a fresh start to fit into the sophisticated city life.
One sunny day, my school announced an exciting event, a talent show for the local food bank. Students were encouraged to showcase their unique talents in front of the public in the city hall on National Day. A buzz of excitement filled the school as everyone began preparing for the big day. Deep down, I felt a spark of curiosity and a desire to participate. However, my self-doubt held me back, “I don't have any special skills to share.”
Days turned into weeks, and the talent show drew closer. I couldn't shake the upsetting feeling until one day Emma, one of the most popular girls in my class, came to me while I was helping in the grocery store after class. “How about singing together in the talent show ” She grinned, “I heard you singing a tune, along the way back home. I can't help following you here.” Gosh, I couldn't believe my ears. Emma, with personality and popularity, acknowledged my little talent. Since Emma had the world's prettiest voice, I felt like being favoured by fortune.
“You two The talent show for the food bank ”My mum bent towards us and her face lit up.“ A big occasion.” Then a light bulb seemed to go in her head. “Why not practise right now upstairs I bet you'll be a perfect match.” Winking at us, she seemed to know we were thinking alike.
Emma and I embarked on rehearsing almost every single day after school. We brainstormed, exchanged ideas and rehearsed the scene. As the days rolled by, I was feeling pretty good about our act. But the day before the performance, Emma called that she had an acute stomachache and was not in any shape to perform.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I was completely knocked out by the news.
Finally came the big moment.
文本分析：
故事大意：
本文叙述了一位性格内向害羞的女孩随父母迁到西雅图后开始努力适应复杂的城市生活。在一个阳光明媚的日子里，学校宣布了一项激动人心的活动一一为当地食物银行举办的才艺表演。在内心深处，女孩感到一丝好奇和参与的渴望。然而她的自我怀疑让她退缩了。直到有一天，班上最受欢迎的女孩之一艾玛，发现她的才能，鼓励并邀请女孩一起参加唱歌的才艺表演，准备一起表演唱歌，且排练的很好，但表演前，Emma打电话说她胃痛得厉害。
本次学生习作问题阐述：本次写作话题较为常见，但学生要写出上等习作也不容易。一些学生在叙事节奏上的把握不够合理，在两段落衔接上也出现了一些自相矛盾的情节处理。
主题意义：通过叙述作者第一次参加才艺表演，在朋友Emma和妈妈的帮助下克服舞台恐惧症，获得自信，实现个人成长的故事。自信和努力能战胜困难的必要条件。
Conflict1:
Deep down, I felt a spark of curiosity and a desire to participate.vs However,my self-doubt held me back,“I don't have any special skills to share.”
Conflict2:
we rehearsed almost every single day after school.Emma called that she vs had an acute stomachache and was not in any shape to perform.
衔接：
Para1: I was completely knocked out by the news.
时间:The day before the performance
空间:at home
主要人物: mother and I
关键情节:
1.How did I feel after I got the news (情绪+心理描写) 衔接 1
2.What did I decide to do --quit or continue (情绪+心理措写) 过渡1
3.Who persuaded me to keep on And how did she/he comfort me 衔接2
Para2: Finally came the big moment.
时间:on the talent show
空间:on the stage
主要人物: I audience /mother
关键事件 衔接3
1 .How did I feel when I stood on the stage (情绪+心理描写)
2. What did I perform at the very beginning (情绪+心理描写) 过渡2
3. what made me overcame the stage fright and finish the performance successfully 主题升华
4.Ending --- What did I realize after the performance
Read for theme:
How I overcame stage fright, went beyond oneself to achieve personal growth.
通过叙述作者第一次参加才艺表演，在朋友Emma和妈妈的帮助下克服舞台恐惧症，获得自信，实现个人成长的故事。自信和努力是能战胜困难的必要条件。
舞台表演语料积累
过去分词作状语
1. Seized/Consumed/Overcome by nervousness, I felt my heart was pounding so hard that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.
2. Overwhelmed by a sudden surge of anxiety I grabbed/squeezed my costume tightly.
3.Extraordinarily/Extremely worried the audience,that I would lose face in front of
I could feel my heart pounding fast.
倒装
1. So restless was I that my blood rushed to my face. I stood still, not knowing what to do next.
2.Hardly had I reviewed my lines when a flush of nervousness deepened the red of my cheeks.
优秀范文：
I was completely knocked out by the news. A shiver of gloomy feeling passed through my stomach as I heard the news.The idea of being left alone onstage made me tremble, let alone singing in front of so many audience. Without Emma's company, I murmured to myself，this talent show would definitely be an impossible task. When I thought all the efforts to rehearsal would be in vain.sadness came in waves in my heart Suddenly out of nowhere appeared mother before me. Affectionately stroking my hair , she looked at me with a soft, determined glow in her eyes, as if by magic giving me a strength with which to conquer all difficulties and fears . She said quietly but firmly: “I believe you can make it” So I nodded and made a decision.
Finally came the big moment.Standing backstage, nervousness came flooding over me . The moment my name was called , I could feel butterflies in my stomach flying wildly. My trembling legs brought me onstage , palms sweating and heart racing. I cast my eyes randomly to the audience and spotted a familiar face at the corner. It was Emma who came to watch my performance. Pale as she appeared, she nodded and exchanged a determined glance with me which timely put my heart back in place. With the music rising , I began my singing and immersed myself in it completely . When I finished , the auditorium erupted into a sea of cheers eventually realized where the real sources of confidence came form . Actually, every cloud has a silver lining and every individual possesses talents ..