Unit 1 Stay Healthy 写作专练（含解析）冀教版 英语九年级上册

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Unit 1 Stay Healthy 写作专练（含解析）冀教版 英语九年级上册
1．假如你是Susan，来自加拿大，现在与父母一起居住在中国。请根据你们一家的饮食爱好写一篇英语短文。
要求：
1）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
2）词数60左右。
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2．书面表达
请以Do you think breakfast is important 为题写一篇短文，词数60-80词。内容必须包括提示中的四项要求，不要使用真实姓名及所在学校名称。
提示：1. Does everyone have breakfast in the morning
2. Why is breakfast important
3. What should we eat for breakfast
4. What is your opinion of having breakfast
Not everyone has breakfast in the morning. ________________________________________
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3．俗话说：“人是铁，饭是钢，一顿不吃饿得慌”，写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍你的饮食习惯。
要求：(1)紧扣主题，意思连贯，书写规范，卷面整洁。
(2)不得使用真实姓名和校名，如在作文中出现真实姓名将以零分记。如需使用名字，请用Mike，校名统一使用Guangming Middle School。
(3)词数不少于60个。
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4．书面表达。写作
请你以张明的名义给英国笔友Brian写一封感谢信，要点提示如下：
二年前你来到新的学校：
没有朋友；
感到孤独；
不愿学习；
……
二年中Brian多次给你写信：
鼓励你多交朋友；
告诉你学好英语的方法；
和你分享快乐；
……
近年来盐城发生很大变化，你邀请他来盐城游玩。
参考词汇：(1)分享快乐 share happiness (2)鼓励某人做某事 encourage sb. to do sth.
要求：(1)词数：90字(2)信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥
Dear Brian，
How time flies! We have been friends for two years. I’m writing to thank you for your help!
Two years ago
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Hope to see you soon!
Yours,
Zhang Ming
5．请你为Li Hua新开张的面馆写一篇英文推介词。
要点如下：
1. 店面整洁卫生，服务热情周到；
2. 各种面食，各种口味应有尽有；
3. 特价牛肉煎饼和红茶值得品鉴；
4. 价格公道，生日当天送长寿面；
5. 请自行补充一至两点相关内容。
表达要求：书写整洁、整齐、清晰；表达流畅；不得逐词翻译；篇幅60词左右。
提示词汇：thoughtful adj. 周到； black tea红茶； long noodles长寿面
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6．假如你是七年级3班的李华，你和你的家人将要参加一档美食节目。现节目组要求你用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己和家人的职业和饮食喜好，具体信息见下表。
Job Favourite food
Li Hua Student Noodles and meat
Father Doctor Fish and tomatoes
Mother Teacher Fruit and vegetables
注意：(1) 短文必须包括表内所有信息，可适当发挥。
(2) 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校信息。
(3) 词数：60词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．This is me!
Name David Age 14
Appearance(外貌) 短发，不戴眼镜 School 北京阳光中学
Class 七年级8班 Birth place 南京
Living place 北京 Favourite subject 数学
Favourite sport …… Hobbies ……
提醒：注意人称！请勿在文中出现自己的真实信息，否则答题无效！
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8．书面表达
我们要提倡节约和健康饮食，反对浪费。请结合图片，联系实际，以“Save Food and Eat Healthily”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Save Food and Eat Healthily
Now the government has called on us to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy a happy life. We should do something for it.
To save food, we ________________________________________________________________________
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9．假如你是康康。你的英国朋友迈克(Mike)非常喜欢中国美食，他写信给你，想要你介绍一下中国的一些饮食习惯和一些特色菜。请根据要求给他写一封回信。
要求：1.字迹工整，语句通顺；
2. 80 词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：Chinese food; different from; breakfast; lunch; dinner
Dear Mike,
I am very glad to get your letter.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Kangkang
参考答案：
1．例文
My name is Susan. I come from Canada. I live in China with my parents now. We like to eat different kinds of food.
My father likes eggs and jiaozi. He doesn’t like bread at all. My mother likes rice and chicken, but she doesn’t like milk. I like fish and noodles and I don’t like apples. We always eat at home and we all like Chinese food a lot.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：结合自身的家庭情况，谈谈你一家人的饮食爱好，注意语句通顺，逻辑清晰，表达准确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍自己及家庭的情况，并引出主题；
第二步，具体介绍自己家里每个人的饮食爱好。
[亮点词汇]
①come from来自
②different kinds of不同种类的
③not...at all一点也不
[高分句型]
①My mother likes rice and chicken, but she doesn’t like milk. (含but的并列复合句)
②We always eat at home and we all like Chinese food a lot.(含and的并列复合句)
2．Not everyone has breakfast in the morning. But scientists say it the most important of the three meals. For one thing, it can serve the purpose of energy. For another, in the course of a day, morning is the period of time in which we work with most efficiency. Finally, the constant lack of breakfast can contribute to stomach trouble. Therefore, to keep healthy, we must have breakfast every day. It can be a cup of milk with bread, or something else. I think a good breakfast can not only ensure our good health but also make a good beginning for a new day.
【详解】这是一篇话题作文，谈论的是吃早饭的重要性。作文要围绕四个问题去完成写作：1. 大家早上都吃早饭吗？2.早餐为什么重要？3. 我们早餐应该吃什么？4. 你对吃早餐有什么看法？注意写作时必须包含所有要点提示，并适当发挥，时态为一般现在时。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
3．One possible version:
I like porridge and eggs for breakfast. I have rice, carrots and chicken for lunch. In the afternoon, I eat some fruit, such as apples, oranges, bananas and so on. I have rice and vegetables for dinner. I like them because they are good for me. But I don’t like junk food, bread and ice cream because they are bad for my health. Do you agree with me
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生注意文中不能出现真实姓名和校名。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍早餐、午餐、下午和晚餐吃的食物；
第二步，阐述喜欢吃这些食物的原因，以及自己不喜欢吃的食物以及原因；
第三步，书写结语。询问“你是否赞成我的观点”。
[亮点词汇]
①have sth. for breakfast/lunch/dinner早/中/晚餐吃……
②such as比如
③and so on等等，诸如此类
④be good for对……有益
⑤be bad for对……有害
[高分句型]
I like them because they are good for me.（because引导原因状语从句）
4．Dear Brian,
How time flies! We have been friends for two years. I’m writing to thank you for your help!
Two years ago I came to the new school. I had no friends here and often felt lonely. As a result, I didn’t put my heart into my study. I just thought I wouldn’t fit this new environment.
Later I began to write to you. We became good pen pals. You encourage me to make more friends and tell me good ways to study English. So my English study has been improved greatly. With your help and encouragement, I become happier. I begin to accept my new classmates and become friends with them. I would like to share my happiness in my letter.
Now great changes have taken place in Yancheng. Welcome to come to my hometown to visit. I’d like to be your guide.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours,
Zhangmin
【详解】这篇作文要求我们以张明的名义给Brian写一封感谢信。题目中给出了我们信中的具体内容，主要包括三个部分，一是两年前你刚来到学校时的情况；二是两年来和Brian交朋友后，Brian给你的帮助；三是邀请Brian来盐城玩。我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来，最后分段来写，这样会使短文有层次，结构清晰。写作时需要注意，短文的第一部分需要用一般过去时态，因此要注意每句话的谓语动词的形式。可以适当增加一些内容，使短文更加完整，但要注意增加的内容要符合全文的整体逻辑。多使用好的句型和短语，使文章的表达流畅完整。
写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的要求完整的将这封信的内容表达了出来。短文内容完整，结构清晰。首先作者写了自己两年前刚来到这个新学校时的情况，I had no friends here and often felt lonely、As a result, I didn’t put my heart into my study；接下来作者写的是和Brian成为朋友后的情况，You encourage me to make more friends and tell me good ways to study English，这一部分中用到的短语和句型有encourage sb. to do sth.、good ways to…, with one’s help等；最后作者向Brian发出邀请，Now great changes have taken place in Yancheng. Welcome to come to my hometown to visit。全文语言准确，意思连贯。
5．例文
My friend Li Hua has opened his noodle house. The service from Li Hua and the waitress is warm and thoughtful. The noodle house is clean and tidy. It has all kinds of noodles with different tastes. The special beef pancakes and the black tea are worth ordering. The prices of all the noodles are popular. What’s more, the persons on birthday are offered long noodles for free. I hope all my friends can enjoy meals here.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
提示：本文主要是介绍朋友新开的面馆，题干已给出要点，所以写作时注意不要遗漏要点，书写时可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，介绍朋友开的面馆。
第二步，从“服务，环境，产品，价格”四方面来具体介绍面馆。
第三步，结尾，欢迎大家前来品尝。
[亮点词汇]
①all kinds of 各种各样的
②different 不同的
③be worth doing 值得做某事
④what’s more 另外
[高分句型]
①What’s more, the persons on birthday are offered long noodles for free.(介词短语作后置定语，被动语态)
②I hope all my friends can enjoy meals here.(宾语从句)
6．例文
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I am a student of Class 3, Grade 7. My favourite food is noodles and meat. My father is a doctor and he likes fish and tomatoes best. My mother is a teacher and her favourite food is fruit and vegetables.
We all have a healthy and balanced diet. It helps us stay fit.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍自己和家人的职业和饮食喜好，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己和家人的职业和饮食喜好；
第二步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①like...best最喜欢……
②healthy and balanced diet健康均衡的饮食
③stay fit保持健康
[高分句型]
①My father is a doctor and he likes fish and tomatoes best.（并列句）
②My mother is a teacher and her favourite food is fruit and vegetables.（并列句）
7．This is me!
Hi, everyone! My name is David. I am fourteen years old. I have short black hair. My eyesight is very good, so I don’t wear glasses. I come from Nanjing, but now I live in Beijing and I study in Yangguang Middle School. I’m in Class Eight, Grade Seven. My favourite subject is math. I am good at playing basketball and I do well in swimming. I like reading books very much in my spare time.
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: be good at擅长、do well in在…方面做得好；I like reading books very much in my spare time.我喜欢在业余时间读书等,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.
考点：话题作文。
8．Save Food and Eat Healthily
Now the government has called on us to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy a happy life. We should do something for it.
To save food, we shouldn't waste any of our food. We should eat up all the food. We shouldn't order more food than we can eat while dining out, because many people in the world don't have enough food to eat. To eat healthily, we shouldn't eat junk food. It's good for us to have a balanced diet. We'd better not eat in small restaurants, because the food and the oil they use are probably not clean or healthy enough. We'd better eat at school or at home if we have time.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文作者就“节约食物健康饮食”发表观点，属于议论文写作。短文开宗明义Now the government has called on us to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy a happy life. We should do something for it；然后介绍自己的观点。
2.例文点评：这篇习作是“总分”结构，用第一和第三人称叙述，时态是一般过去时和一般将来时；观点明确，内容充实，结构完整，表达条理，是一篇优秀的习作。
3.高分亮点：
高分短语：call on, save food, so that, enjoy a happy life, eat up, dining out, in the world, be good for, had better, at school/at home.
高分句型：
1). Now the government has called on us to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy a happy life（目的状语从句）
2). To save food, we shouldn't waste any of our food.（非谓语动词结构）
3). We shouldn't order more food than we can eat while dining out, because many people in the world don't have enough food to eat（原因状语从句）
4). We'd better eat at school or at home if we have time.（条件状语从句）
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。例如最后一句，运用We'd better eat at school or at home if we have time.条件状语从句，提出建议。
9．例文：
Dear Mike,
I am very glad to get your letter. You ask me about Chinese food. Now, I will tell you something about it. Of course, Chinese food is different from English food. We think breakfast is very important. For breakfast, we have porridge and eggs. Sometimes we have some noodles. For lunch, we usually have a bowl of rice, and some good dishes such as mapo tofu, gongbao chicken and so on. After lunch, we may drink some water or tea. For dinner, besides rice, we often eat some dumplings. Sometimes we have noodles, too. I like dumplings with mutton best. Would you like to have a try Welcome to China.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Kangkang
【详解】1.题干解读：本篇书面表达是一篇书信作文。要求我们作为康康，给英国朋友迈克(Mike)写一封回信，来介绍一下中国的一些饮食习惯和一些特色菜。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；要求包含题干中的要点，需要提到中国的一些饮食习惯和一些特色菜；写作时需要用到题干所给出的参考词汇，适当扩充句子；注意符合英语语法规范，逻辑清晰，条理清楚。
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