Unit 2 Great People 写作 专练（含解析）冀教版 英语九年级上册

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Unit 2 Great People 写作 专练（含解析）冀教版 英语九年级上册
1．不论哪个时代, 哪个行业, 都会有留驻人心的英雄, 因而诗人说: “英雄儿女各千秋”。你的心中也一定有一位英雄, 他也许是阅兵场上的军人, 也许是攻克难题的科学家, 也许是一位感动大家的普通人, 亦或是你身边的守护者。请以“A Hero in My Heart”为题, 写写你心中这位英雄的故事以及他（她）对你的影响。
要求: 1. 语句通顺连贯, 条理清晰, 结构完整,书写工整；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数100左右。
A Hero in My Heart
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2．书面表达
在上个星期一的班会上，你班就学生该不该帮忙做家务的话题展开了热烈的讨论，请你以Should students help with housework 为题，就讨论的结果及你的看法，写一份大约80个词的报告。
观点 理由
支持 可以学会独立；使自己更健康和强壮；通过分担家务更理解父母和更爱父母。
反对 学生主要任务是学习，不是干家务；学生学习压力大，没时间做家务；学生太小，不必过早学做，长大以后自然会做。
你的观点 至少两个理由。
Should students help with housework
Last Monday, at the class meeting, we had a discussion on whether students should help with housework.
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3．书面表达
很多人都有一个同感：小时候，我们和朋友、家人尽情地奔跑游戏，跟同学快乐地学习、交往。但随着岁月的流逝，这一切都成为了过去——我们背负着巨大压力，整天疲于奔命。我们困惑“时间都去哪儿了？” 请你以Where has my time gone 为题，谈谈近五年你在学习、人际交往和生活几方面的变化以及你的想法。
（注:你可能用的着的词汇：in the past five years, on weekends, change, pressure, childhood, wish）
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4．3月5日是学雷锋纪念日，有的同学会选择去敬老院(the old people’s home)看望老人，有的同学会选择去儿童村(the children’s home)关怀孩子们，还有的同学会尽可能地帮助身边的人。不管用什么方式，同学们都在用自己的行为践行雷锋精神，向社会传递爱。请以“A Boy/Girl Who Is Like Lei Feng”为题写一篇作文，讲讲你身边像雷锋一样的一位男生或女生。
提示：
1.他/她学习成绩优异，经常在学习上帮助同学；
2.他/她乐于助人，在日常生活中多为他人着想；
3.他/她每周周末帮助隔壁独居的老人做家务。
要求：
1.参考提示内容，并进行适当发挥；
2.语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息；(姓名、校名和地名等)
4.不少于70词。
A ________ Who Is Like Lei Feng
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5．假如你是Tom，非常想学好英语，但进步缓慢，尤其是口语，你写信向你的好朋友Mike，把自己的困惑告诉他，希望得到他的帮助。
你的困惑：1.害怕在课堂上讲英语；2.在分组成派对活动时格外紧张，担心比别人差；3.碰到外宾时，更是害怕因错误而受到嘲笑。
要求：1.格式正确。2.探讨的内容包括以上所提供的要点；3.字迹工整，语句通顺，可适当发挥，80词左右。
6．假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Tom向你了解“国士无双钟南山”。请你根据以下信息，写封英文回信，介绍他的情况。
注意:1.回信需包括下图所有提示内容。
2.词数: 120 词左右(信的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数);
3.参考词:呼吸病: respiratory diseases非典: SARS
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7．书面表达。请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。
如今，越来越多的人喜欢养宠物，有些人甚至把宠物视为家庭的一名成员，而养宠物也引发了一系列的社会问题，下面四副图就是发生在Tom家的故事，请根据所给图画和文字提示，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。
提示词：狗叫：bark 扰乱：disturb 寄养：foster
根据图示和提示词，写成恰当的句子 8分
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8．Tom , basketball, now____________________________________________
9．work. for two years _____________________________________________
10．not litter ________________________________________________
11．go,by, tomorrow _________________________________________________
12．书面表达
第16届亚运会将于2010年11月12日至27日在中国广州进行，广州是中国第二个取得亚运会主办权的城市。北京曾于1990年举办第11届亚运会。广州亚运会将设42项比赛项目，是亚运会历史上比赛项目最多的一届。
在展示中国健儿飒爽英姿的同时，我们也有机会通过亚运会使更多的人了解中国，支持中国的发展。在亚运会即将到来之际，我们年轻人能做点什么呢？
你是想要做志愿者，还是会为亚运会捐款？你是能发挥自己的英语优势，还是为亚运会的筹办献计献策？请你号召班上的同学发扬爱心、发挥才智，为亚运会做点什么吧！
要求：
合理发挥，贴近生活。
语言流畅，表意清晰。
80词左右。
Dear Friends,
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13．
方志敏烈士简介：（1899年8月21日—1935年8月6日）， 江西省弋阳人，中国共产党的优秀党员，江西党组织的创始人之一，闽、浙、皖、赣革命根据地的创建者。他历任县委书记、 特委书记、省委书记、军区司令员、红十军政委、闽浙赣省苏维埃政府主席，中华苏维埃共和国中央主席团委员，党中央委员。
1934 年，红七军团和红十军团合编为北上抗日先遣队，方志敏任总司令。1935年1月27日，他不幸被俘人狱，在狱中坚贞不屈，写下了《可爱的中国》《清贫》等名著。1935年8月6日，方志敏在南昌英勇就义，时年36岁。
假如你是Daming， 昨天你刚看了电影《可爱的中国》（Cute China），深受感动。于是你想写封信告慰方志敏烈士。信中主要涉及三个方面：
1.问烈士：为什么这么多共产党员为了信仰选择牺牲而无所畏惧？(choose to die for Marxism without fear)今天你找到了答案；
2.告慰烈士：他的the Dream of Cute China 已经实现，现在的中国比他书中写的更美丽、更强大；
3.告慰烈士：作为一名中学生，你的梦想和责任。
要求：1. 信件须语句通顺、意思连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 字数80。文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：
CPC members（共产党员）；faith(信念)；comrade(同志)；feel puzzled(困惑)；to realize the great rise of the Chinese nation(实现中华民族伟大复兴)
Dear Uncle Fang,
Do you agree I call you Uncle Fang I’m Daming, a 15-year-old student. Yesterday, I saw the movie Cute China. Your story deeply touched me. So I’m writing this letter to you(Later I’ll read it to you). It’s a pity you died at a very young age, and_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Peace to your soul!
参考答案：
1．A Hero in My Heart
Everybody has a hero in his or her heart. I have one in mind, too. She is my mother.
She is very kind and friendly. She is always ready to help others. Once, our neighbor had to leave for business, but her daughter had to be taken to piano lessons once a week. She asked if my mother would do this for her.My mother agreed without thinking twice. There are many other things about her helping others. The little things that my mother does for others are quite touching. She is my hero and I am proud that she is my mother.
I have learned from her that helping others is truly a wonderful thing. I hope I can follow in her footsteps.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，开头时点题，之后写事迹，最后写对自己的影响；注意突出是一个人，不要写群体或者多个人，人物身上要有闪光点。
2.写作指导：本文主要用第三人称来叙述故事内容，用第一人称抒发感想；时态采用一般过去时为主，讲述内心感受时用现在时；事件发生的起因、过程和结果等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰，突出事件人物的品质特点。
2．Should students help with housework
Last Monday, at the class meeting, we had a discussion on whether students should help with housework.
Some students think that we should help to do housework. By doing housework, we can learn to be independent. We will be stronger and healthier. More importantly, we can understand our parents better and love them more.
But some students disagree. They think， as students， our task is to study but not to do housework. We are too busy with our study every day. We are tired and we have no time to do housework. What’s more, we’ll be able to do housework by nature when we grow up.
As for me, I think we should help with housework. Our parents work hard every day. They are very tired with work. We should show our love to them by sharing housework. Also doing housework can help us feel relaxed after study.
【详解】试题分析：本题考查开放性作文，难度较大。完全需要考生自己梳理要点，同时也给了考生较大的发挥空间，可以让考生灵活运用自己所掌握的语法和词汇知识。可以一分为二的看待通过文章可知看出讨论的结果是分两部分的有支持的一面也有反对的一面。
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。这些句型We are too busy with our study every day；We should show our love to them by sharing housework.的运用也让文章增色不少。
考点：提纲作文。
3．One possible version：
Time goes by, my life in middle school will be end. On lookingback,Ifind thatsweetmomenthas tocometo an end and it is frustrationand setbacksthat canforgeyouinto maturity. When I am young, I had fun playing with my friends and family. During the past five years, I have done lots of meaningful things. One of the most important things I did was studying. I learned all subjects carefully.Step by step, I have been filled with knowledge.But I am under extrapressureto study better. To my mind, all work no play makes Jack a dull boy. So I often relaxed myself by watching TV. I think I have used my whole time as well as possible. When I go to the high school, I will put my time to good use by working hard. I will try my best to study and make my life more colorful. Easier said than done. I hope I can do what I said.
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。用第一人称。写出自己近五年在学习、人际交往和生活几方面的变化及想法。先列出提纲，写出有关的短语和固定表达备用，最后串联起来。
【亮点说明】本文做到了包含所有内容要点，语句通顺，标点符号运用正确。恰当地运用了一些短语，如have fun doing ；be filled with等。还用到了谚语all work no play makes Jack a dull boy和 Easier said than done。
考点：话题作文。
4．参考答案：
A Boy Who Is Like Lei Feng
March 5th is called Learn from Lei Feng Day in China. It is a day to help others. Now I will tell a story about a boy who is like Lei Feng. My best friend Tom is a top student in our class. He is good at every subject. What’s more, he always helps other students with their homework. He is also very kind and willing to help others. His neighbor lives alone. Every weekend, he helps his neighbor do housework. With the help of Tom, his neighbor feels happier than before.
I hope everyone can learn from Lei Feng and make an effort to make our world more beautiful.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“A Boy/Girl Who Is Like Lei Feng”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为两段，第一段引出话题，践行雷锋精神，介绍自己的朋友；第二段呼吁每个人都像雷锋学习，让世界更美好。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
5．Dear Mike,
I want to improve my spoken English, and I know that one of the best ways to improve it is to speak English as much as possible. But I am afraid to speak English at class. In addition, I feel afraid and anxious about behaving worse than others at the party or the grouping activities. When I meet foreigners, I also worry about being laughed at because of my making mistakes. I don't know what should I do. On the other hand, I eagerly want to learn English well. I hope you can give me some advice.
yours sincerely,
Tom
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。题目所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据题目要求可知本文一篇书信，内容主要是向对方述说自己在学习上的困惑，时态应用一般现在时态，主语是第一人称。写作中注意人称、时态以及主谓一致问题，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，使文章自然流畅。同时，使用了一些常用的句式和短语，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累，背诵一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
考点：提纲作文。
6．[例文]
Zhong Nanshan was born in Nanjing in October 1936. He grew up in a family of doctors. He graduated from Beijing Medical College in 1960. He is one of the most famous respiratory specialists in the 21st century. He loves sports and has a healthy lifestyle.
In the spring of 2003, in the face of SARS in China and across the world, he was known to China as the SARS hero. The “dare to cure and dare to speak” on the wall of his office is a true portrayal of him. This year, he also took a risk to Wuhan to lead the whole country to fight against COVID-19. After careful inspection, Zhong Nanshan admitted on Jan. 20 that the virus can be transmitted from person to person and advised people not to travel to and from Wuhan. The outbreak was eventually brought under control and thousands of lives have been saved.
He made great contributions to our China. I can never express our thankfulness too much for his selfless contribution. You are the most beautiful Chinese, thank you!
【详解】1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，短文主体框架已给出，从钟南山个人基本情况，两次抗击疫情的经历以及个人评价和感悟三个方面进行写作。学生可根据这三个方面将文章分成三段，即第1段介绍钟南山的个人基本情况，第2段介绍他的两次抗疫经历，第3段是学生个人评价和感悟，无具体要点提示，需要学生自行拓展。
2.写作指导：文章是介绍钟南山的，所以应以第三人称为主，时态应用过去时或现在时，涉及过往经历的部分用过去时，事实陈述方面用现在时。个人基本情况，两次抗击疫情的经历题目给出了详细的中文介绍，在写作时要尽量将这些介绍完整叙述出来，不要遗漏，个人评价和感悟则由学生紧扣主题，适当进行拓展。
7．Recently, more and more people like to keep pets. Some of them even regard their pets as one of their family members. They say that pets can help them do some useful things and bring them joy and happiness . I also like pets. Pets are our good friends. But I don’t think it’s good for people to keep pets at home. Why Because too many pets may cause a lot of problems. For example, Tom keeps a dog at home，it sometimes disturbs their daily life .Besides, the dog often barks .That makes their family tired. What’s more, sometimes the pets are dangerous to people. So Tom wants to foster the dog in the pet shop.
【详解】试题分析：这篇作文要求我们根据所给图片，来介绍一下养宠物引发的一系列问题。图片用在Tom家发生的事为例体现了养宠物的问题，我们应用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。这些信息包括了养宠物会发生的危险，我们应该怎么办等，写作时，我们可以根据需要将这些信息进行重新整理和安排，使文章的意思衔接更自然。而且一些相关的词汇和句型，是学生们比较熟悉的，所以将平时的积累发挥出来就可以。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文意思连贯，更出彩。
写作亮点：这是一篇非常优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的要求，给我们介绍了图片中的人物、地点和事情发展的过程，结构清晰，要点全面。短文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范，而且作者还使用了一些较好的句式，如文章运用了一定的复合句和重点句型，显示了作者的基本功，如：They say that pets can help them do some useful things and bring them joy and happiness。But I don’t think it’s good for people to keep pets at home.另外，运用了Why，For example，Besides，What’s more等插入语使得文章衔接紧凑，过度自然。
考点：看图类作文。
8．Tom is playing basketball now. 9．The doctor has worked in the hospital for two years. 10．Don’t throw litter around. 11．Lily will go to Beijing by plane tomorrow.
【分析】试题分析：
8．句意：现在汤姆在打篮球。据now 故句子用现在进行时态，play basketball打篮球.
9．句意：这名医生在医院工作两年了。根据for two years可知，句子用现在完成时has worked.
10．句意：不要到处扔垃圾。据题意句子是祈使句的否定句，句式是Don’t+do.
11．句意：Lily明天要乘飞机去北京。根据tomorrow可知句子用一般将来时will+do,go to Beijing by plane乘飞机去北京.
考点：看图完成句子。
12．Dear friends,
The 16th Asian Games are coming on November 12th, 2010. Guangzhou is the second city which held the Asian Games in China after Beijing. It has the most events in the games in history—42 events. It’s not a chance for the athletes, but also an opportunity for all the Chinese people. We can introduce China to the world and make them know more about Chinese cultures and histories. We can make great impress to them and hope them to support China. As teenagers, I think we can be volunteers to help the foreigners or work for the games. We can be their tour guide and lead them to experience the true Chinese life. And we can donate money for the games and help our country to hold it better. Now, I urge all the students in our class to do something useful for it! Thank you!
【详解】试题分析：这篇作文要求我们根据提示写一篇作文，内容是关于第16届亚运会将在广州举行。他们中给了我们详细的信息，我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。通过分析可知，这篇作文我们应主要使用一般现在时态，第一人称复数的形式。首先我们要先点明第16届亚运会的举办城市；然后再来简单介绍一下亚运会的情况；接下来是举办亚运会对我们国家，对我们的影响；最后呼吁同学们为亚运会做点什么，例如当志愿者，去帮助外国的运动员和游客，或者去为比赛服务等等。表面看来，我们只需按照题目要求，逐句翻译即可，但其实写作时，我们还需要特别注意表达的流畅和意思的连贯。利用我们平时积累的词汇和句型，使文章有节奏感和表现力。
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的范文。作者按照题目所列出的主要内容，将这篇呼吁信表达了出来。首先作者先点明了亚运会将在广州举行，The 16th Asian Games are coming on November 12th, 2010.，这句话用了…are coming，比较有新意；接下来介绍了亚运会的一些情况和举办亚运会对我们的影响，Guangzhou is the second city which held the Asian Games in China after Beijing……. It’s not a chance for the athletes, but also an opportunity for all the Chinese people. 、We can make great impress to them and hope them to support China。这里作者使用了定语从句、not only…but also、make great impress to等短语和句型，表达非常流畅；最后作者呼吁同学们行动起来，为亚运会做点事情，We can be their tour guide and lead them to experience the true Chinese life、and we can donate money for the games and help our country to hold it better，这几个提议都非常符合这个情景。整篇短文内容完整，意思连贯，语言准确，有新意。
考点：提纲类作文。
13．One Possible Version:
Dear Uncle Fang,
Do you agree I call you Uncle Fang I’m Daming, a 15-year-old student. Yesterday, I saw the movie Cute China. Your story deeply touched me. So I’m writing this letter to you(Later I’ll read it to you). It’s a pity you died at a very young age, and thousands of your comrades followed your steps too. So one question has puzzled me for a long time. That is: why so many CPC members chose to die for Marxism without fear Was it worthy Today I seem to have the answer. Because all you men had faith, all you men had the Dream of Cute China. You did all this for a new China. Today I’m proud to tell you all that the Dream of Cute China has already come true! Today’s China is among the greatest countries in the world! She is more beautiful and powerful than what you described(what she was like) in your book. As a Chinese student, I also have a Cute China Dream. That is to realize the great rise of the Chinese nation. We are sure that we can make it.
Peace to your soul!
Daming
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示内容，写封信告慰方志敏烈士。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时综合使用三个人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文要从以下几方面入手：问烈士为什么这么多共产党员为了信仰选择牺牲而无所畏惧，告慰烈士现在的中国比他书中写的更美丽、更强大以及作为一名中学生，你的梦想和责任。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
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