Unit 4 Stories and poems 写作 专练（含解析）冀教版 英语九年级上册

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Unit 4 Stories and poems 写作 专练（含解析）冀教版 英语九年级上册
1．某英文报刊开辟中学生栏目，请你以Reading Comic Strips(连环漫画) Is________为题写一篇小短文，为报社投稿(词数80－100)。
1．确定主题，并在文中说明原因；
2．围绕主题，进行叙述；
3．讲述一段与主题有关的故事或经历。
要求：
1．补全标题(参考词汇：interesting；popular；useful；boring；my pleasure等)；
2．字迹工整，内容完整连贯，语言准确规范；
3．鼓励写出真情实感，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予以扣分。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事；
5．作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Reading Comic Strips Is________
There are many kinds of stories in comic strips. In my opinion，reading comic strips is________________________________________________________________________
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2．书面表达
树木对我们很重要，离开了树木我们就无法生存。有了树木我们可以乘凉，我们可以从它们那里得到果实。它们的绿叶对我们也很有用。而有些人砍伐树木来制作纸张、木料，破坏了我们的生存环境。我们应该保护树木。
请你用诗歌的形式来说明树木的重要性。
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3．书面表达
随着《中华诗词大会》和《朗读者》的开播，全国上下再一次掀起了阅读的热潮，请以“Let's Read More！”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要求：1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2.词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：获得知识 get knowledge; 让我们聪明快乐 make us clever and happy; 鼓励某人做某事 encourage sb. to do sth.
Let's Read More!
Reading is very important in our daily life.
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书面表达
假如你是育才中学的学生刘海,你和同学张红一起向学校吴校长推荐同学李涛为学生会主席,请用英语写一篇推荐稿,内容要点如下:
基本信息 李涛，男，九年级一班班长，
个人品质 自信，聪明，从不炫耀.
特长与喜好 不怕当众演讲，组织能力强，喜欢蓝色，给身心带来安宁
相关经历 几次数学竞赛得奖，成功组织多次班会
推荐者观点 我们认为…(2-3句话)
注意：
4．推荐信须包含表格内所给要点， 并作适当发挥， 要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
5．词数90个。推荐信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
Dear Mr Wu,
I’m writing to recommend Li Tao as the chairperson of the Students’ Union.. I think he has many good qualities for this position.
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Yours sincerely,
Liu Hai Zhang Hong
6．同学们即将毕业，成为一个高中生了，请谈谈这些年来你较之过去的成长和变化。80词左右。（用used to 表达）
7．书面表达：
某英语报开展“How to Deal with the Exam Stress（考试压力）”征文比赛，请你根据图片和表格中提示的内容，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。
注意：（1）词数80-100左右，短文首句已给出，不计入总词数
（2）文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名
适当的压力 积极思考，认真学习 按时复习，防止遗忘
过重的压力 无法入睡，非常疲倦 害怕考试，导致失败
应对的措施 合理计划，准备充分 …… (至少2条)
How to Deal with the Exam Stress
Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us. _____________________________________________________________________________
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8． Writing.
(注意:文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和老师名，否则不给分)
（A）话题表述
下列表格中所列内容是老师对张旭同学的评价和希望。假设你是老师，请围绕这些内容为张旭同学写下毕业赠言。（提示句已给出）
评价 Clever
Hard-working
Do well in the exams
Like to help others
希望 Do some sports
要求：1）词数30---40
2）不要出现真实人名和校名
De Dear Zhang Xv, You’re one of my favourite students. In my eyes,_________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ Regards, Mr Mrs. Guo
（B）当今社会，环境破坏严重。尽管政府采取了一系列的措施去改善，但效果并不明显。请你以“What Do You Think We Should Do to Improve Our Environment ”为话题，写一篇短文，如何保护好环境，应从哪些方面做起。不少于80个词。题目自拟.
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参考答案：
1．例文
Reading Comic Strips Is Interesting
There are many kinds of stories in comic strips. In my opinion，reading comic strips is interesting. I like reading comic strips since I was very young.
When I was in Grade One，I was very interested in all kinds of comic strips.I read many comic strips and I had lots of comic strips of my own .I bought them with my pocket money.Once in English class，I was reading a comic book when the teacher came up to me and took away my comic book.
Reading comic strips developed my thinking ability. I have learned much from reading comic strips.
【详解】题干解读：本文是议论类的话题作文，要求以“Reading Comic Strips Is________”为题写一篇小短文，注意补全标题、说明原因并讲述一段与主题有关的故事或经历。
例文点评：本文包含议论类话题作文的三步四要素。三个步骤：明确了话题(以“Reading Comic Strips Is Interesting”为话题)；确定出论证部分的时态(一般过去时)；并在最后做出总结。四个要素：论点(第一段)；论据和论证过程(第二段)；结论(最后一段)四部分。
高分亮点：
短语：in my opinion；be interested in；of my own；pocket money；take away；
句型：①In my opinion, reading comic strips is interesting.
②Reading comic strips developed my thinking ability.
2．Trees
We need the trees for shelter，
We need the trees to feed us，
We need a place to stay，
We need them to survive.
Somewhere to raise our children，
They have the fruits and leaves.
Somewhere to hide away，
We need to stay alive.
You want the trees for paper，
You want the trees for timber，
You want the trees every day.
You want wood to build.
You use it just a little.
But logging is the reason.
And then throw it all away.
Many of the trees are killed.
【详解】试题分析：本篇书面表达以诗歌的形式表达“树木的重要性”，结合所给的写作材料，阐述树木对人们生活带来的好处。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用和诗歌语言特点。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练, 时态运用准确。文中need sth. to do, and, but, hide away， stay alive，a little，throw it all away.等词(组)的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密, 语言流畅，要点齐全，内容丰富，这是一篇不错的范文。
3．Let's Read More!
Reading is very important in our daily life. We can get knowledge by reading a lot of good books. It can not only open our eyes but also make us clever and happy. Our study can be improved if we read more important books. Reading also helps us grow up better.
However, many activities take up much of our reading time, such as listening to music, watching TV and surfing the Internet. What a pity! So I would like to suggest that everyone should borrow more books and read good books. It will be very helpful to us!
Let's start reading now!
【详解】话题作文写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式，谓语动词形式要有根有据，选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。英语作文要注意人称和时态，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。
4．He is 5．years old. He is confident and clever. He has won several maths competitions, but he never shows off. He is not afraid of speaking in front of many people. He is very organized. He has successfully organized many class meetings. His favourite colour is blue. He thinks it can bring peace to our mind and body.
We think Li Tao is the most suitable person to be the chairperson of the Students’ Union. We hope that you agree with us. We’re looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Liu Hai Zhang Hong
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。本文要写的材料比较具体，一是介绍李涛的基本情况，二是给出自己的观点。我们要做的就是运用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。我们要好好选用词汇和短语，可以适当发挥。根据材料内容可知主要是一般现在时态，。
【亮点说明】这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当。
考点：表格作文。
6．I will graduate from my middle school.A few months later, I’ll become a senior middle school student.In the past three years, I have been very happy and changed a lot than before.I used to be a small boy.But now I’m taller and stronger.I used to dislike talking to others and have no friends.With the help of my teachers and classmates, I’ve grown into an outstanding and sunny boy.I have many friends and get on well with others now.I’m also better at my studies.I believe in the future I will be better and better.
【详解】试题分析：这篇短文要求我们谈谈这些年来你较之过去的成长和变化。根据题目要求，我们可以主要从以下几点进行表达：一是过去与现在外貌的变化；二是过去与现在性格的变化；最后是学业成绩等的变化等。提纲虽然已经列好，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者根据以上所列出的内容，讲述了自己的变化与不同，层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如I will graduate from my middle school.A few months later, I’ll become a senior middle school student.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如I believe in the future I will be better and better.等。
考点：话题类作文。
7．How to deal with the exam stress
Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us. If we have proper stress, we can think actively and work harder. Besides, it can remind us to go over our lessons in time to remember them. So we can pass the exams easily.
However, if we have too much stress, we can’t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired. We may be always in fear of the exams and fail in the end.
In my opinion, to deal with stress, we’d better plan and prepare well. We should also develop some good habits, such as enough exercise and healthy diets. Then we’ll feel relaxed and do well in the exams.
【详解】试题分析：这篇作文叫小作者就“怎样处理考试压力”进行论述，小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如Besides, it can remind us to go over our lessons in time to remember them. So we can pass the exams easily. However, if we have too much stress, we can’t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired. We may be always in fear of the exams and fail in the end.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
考点：考查提纲类作文。
8．1.Dear Zhang Xv,
You’re one of my favourite students. In my eyes you are clever and hard-working. You often do well in the exams. you like to help others. I hope that you can do more sports from now on. It is good for your health.
Regards,
Mrs. Guo
2.How to Protect Our Environment
Our environment is becoming worse and worse day by day. Now we can’t see blue sky in the cities in the daytime. There is no fish in the dirty rivers or lakes. Even worse, a lot of people can’t drink clean water. It’s time for us to do something to protect the environment. As a student, we should ride a bike or walk to school every day. We shouldn’t pour waste water into rivers. And don’t throw rubbish here and there. If everyone makes contribution to the environment, it will get cleaner and tidier soon.
【详解】试题分析：第一篇是利用图表的给材料作文。要求根据图表内容写毕业赠言。第二篇是话题作文要求介绍如何保护好环境，应从哪些方面做起。学生可以发挥的空间较大，为了不免错误，我们应该尽量选择我们熟悉的句式句型来写要避免汉式英语的出现。
【亮点说明】这篇短文能把要求的要点表达清楚，意思连贯，内容切题。一些句型的应用使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理如：It’s time for us to do something to protect the environment.， As a student, becoming worse and worse day by day等。
考点：表格作文。
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