中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
Unit 3 I’m more outgoing than my sister.
单元写作指导与演练
近三年考情分析
话题 考查热度
谈论人物的个性特征
人物的外貌和个性特征
本单元的话题是谈论人物的个性特征，本单元的写作题目与描写人物的个性特征相关。写此类短文时，要抓住所比较的人物的特点，从外貌特征(如tall, short, thin, fat, long/short hair等)、个性特点(如outgoing, funny, friendly, hard-working, smart等)等方面来描述。若要进行人物个性特征的比较，则要写出他们的相同点和不同点，并能够正确使用比较级进行表达。语言要精炼、准确，行文要流畅。
重点考查学生以下能力：
掌握并熟练使用一般现在时；
能使用一般现在时造句；
能熟练运用形容词及形容词比较级句型。
1.总分总结构。短文通常分为三个部分：
总------第一部分：开篇点题，引出话题。
分-------第二部分： 介绍相同之处与不同之处。
总——第三部分： 发表看法。
2.人称：第一人称，第三人称。
3.时态：一般现在时（注意单三）。
【词汇积累】
tall/thin/heavy/long hair/short hair高的/瘦的/长发/短发
funny/friendly/outgoing/hard-working/smart/lazy搞笑的/友好的/外向的/努力的/聪明的/懒惰的
be similar to与.......相似
be talented in在.......有天赋
like doing sth.喜欢做
be serious about 对.......认真
care about 关心
work hard努力学习
play sports做体育运动
be good at 擅长
as...as与.......一样
be different from与.......不同
bring out 使显示
the same as 和.......相同
as long as只要
【句式积累】
1.I have a best friend. His/her name is...我有一个好朋友，她/他的名字是....
2.She has long hair/short hair...她留着长发/短发......
3.But we have some differences...但是我们有一些不同.......
4.I am more outgoing than him.我比他外向。
5.She is not as...as I am.她不如我....
6.He is good at...他很擅长.......
7.We both like...我们都喜欢........
8.I work harder than her.我比她学习努力。
9.She is talented in music.她在音乐方面有天赋。
10.He likes to do the same things as me.他喜欢做和我一样的事情。
11.My friend truly cares about me.我的朋友真地很关心我。
12.We can talk about and share everything.我们可以互相交谈并且分享一切。
13.We enjoy studying together.我们喜欢在一起学习。
14.I think friends are like books-you don’t need a lot of them as long as they are good.我觉得朋友像书-不需要太多只要足够好。
15.It’s not necessary to be the same没必要一样。
16.I believe we will become better and better.我相信我们会变得越来越好。
17.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。
18.True friends are always there for you.真正的朋友会一直陪在你身边。
19.I will miss him.我会想念他。
20.I hope we will be good friends forever.我希望我们将永远是好朋友。
※ 开头句
①My best friend is Li Yun./Li Yun is my best friend.
②My friends and I have a lot in common，but we still have some differences.
③As the saying goes，“You don't need a lot of friends as long as they're good.”
※ 中间句
①She often wears a pink shirt and blue trousers.
②I think she is very kind-hearted.
③She is outgoing and always makes people around her happy and relaxed.
④Both of us like to make new friends and we also love to help other people.
※ 结尾句
①Even though we have differences，we are still very good friends.
②I feel happy to have such a good friend.
③I hope our friendship will last forever.
【谚语积累】
1．A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。
2．A friend is easier lost than found.得朋友难，失朋友易。
【万能写作模板】
我和我最好的朋友
介绍自己和朋友： My best friend is Linda . We became friends three years ago .
比较自己和好朋友的异同：In some ways we are the same . In some ways we are different .
总结：Although we have differences , we are good friends.
真正的朋友,在你获得成功的时候,会为你高兴;在你遇到不幸或悲伤的时候,会给你及时的支持;在你犯错误的时候,会给你正确的批评和帮助.这样的友谊才是真正可贵的.请你写一篇短文介绍一下你和你最好的朋友,80词左右.
体裁:记叙文 人称:以第三人称和第一人称为主
要求:
1.简要说明你的择友观;
2.简单比较一下你和好友之间的外貌、性格、爱好的异同点(要求使用比较级);
3.简述一件你们共同经历的事(如学校郊游、才艺表演等),体现好友对你的帮助.
注意:短文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息.
My best friend_________
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思路导引
表明自己的择友观→I don't think it's necessary for friends to be the same.
比较自己和好友之间的外貌、性格、爱好的异同点
Differences:
Linda: quieter, taller, long hair, does well in English and Chinese
Me: noisier, shorter, short hair, be good at math
Similarities: like doing homework together, help each other, like playing tennis
简述一件和好友共同经历的事,表达对好友的感情
I took part in the school talent show, felt so nervous
Linda encouraged me and kept helping me
did my best and won first prize
bring out the best in me, feel so lucky to have such a friend
词句积累
词汇 be the same as 和······相同 be different from与······不同 be good at擅长······ do well in 在······方面做得好 help each other 互相帮助 feel lucky感到幸运 bring out the best in me 把我最好的一面表现出来 win first prize 获得一等奖
句子 1.I don't think it's necessary for friends to be the same.我认为朋友没有必要一样. 2.We like to do our homework together after school and we always help each other.我们喜欢放学后一起做作业,我们总是互相帮助. 3.I'm good at... but Linda does well in...我擅长·····而琳达在······方面做得好. 4.I still remember when I...,I felt.., at first.我仍然记得当我·····时,一开始我感到······· 5.As soon as Linda knew my problem, she encouraged me and kept helping me.琳达一知道我的问题,就 鼓励我并一直帮助我. 6.At last, I did my best and won first prize.最终,我尽了最大的努力,并获得了一等奖. 7.She often helps to bring out the best in me.她经常帮我把最好的一面表现出来. 8.I feel lucky to have such a friend.我很幸运有这样一个朋友. 9.谚A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情.
佳作展示
My best friend Linda
①I don't think it's necessary for friends to be the same.
My best friend is Linda. ②She is very different from me. ②She is much quieter and taller than me. She always has long hair but I like short hair. ③I'm good at math but Linda does well in English and Chinese. We like doing our homework together after school and we always help each other. We both like playing tennis.
I still remember when I took part in the school talent show, I felt so nervous at first. I couldn't do my best on stage.④ As soon as Linda knew my problem, she encouraged me and kept helping me. At last, I did my best and won first prize. ⑤She often helps to bring out the best in me, and I feel so lucky to have such a friend.
名师点评
本文符合写作要求,条理清晰、结构严谨,运用了丰富的短语和句式,表明了自己的择友观以及自己最好的朋友Linda的情况.
①用＂it's(not) +adj. +to do sth."句式言简意赅地表明了自己的择友观.
②用 be different from 短语和＂比较级＋than"结构表明了作者和朋友的外貌以及性格差异.
③用 be good at和do well in 短语表明了自己和Linda 各自擅长的学科.
④用含有as soon as引导的时间状语从句的复合句,强调Linda对自己的关心和帮助.
⑤用bring out 短语表明 Linda对自己的帮助很大,同时体现了作者活学活用的能力.
一、词汇积累
(一)人物对比类短语
1. 与……不同 ________________________________
2. 与……相像的________________________________
3. 和……相同________________________________
4. 和……一样高________________________________
(二)人物描述类短语
1. 在某方面有天赋________________________________
2. 擅长于________________________________
(三)朋友相处类短语
1. 和某人相处得好________________________________
2. 真正关心我________________________________
3. 分享一切________________________________
4. 使我笑________________________________
(四)写出下列形容词或副词的比较级和最高级形式
1. tall → ____________________ →____________________
2. short →____________________ →____________________
3. late →____________________ →____________________
4. lazy →____________________ →____________________
5. funny →____________________ →____________________
6. early →____________________ →____________________
7. thin →____________________ →____________________
8. popular →____________________ →____________________
9. good →____________________ →____________________
10. bad →____________________ →____________________
二、句子积累
(一)佳句欣赏与模拟
1. My best friend Larry is quite different from me.
【quite为副词，可以用来修饰形容词，表示程度，意为＂十分＂】
我十分擅长英语。
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2. I’m shy so it’s not easy for me to make friends.
【it’s＋adj.＋for sb.＋to do sth.做某事对某人来说怎么样】
取得好成绩对我来说很容易。
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3. Larry is much less hard-working, though.
【much/a little/a lot＋比较级】
事实上，李明跑步比我快得多。
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(二)表达个人的择友观
1. 在我看来，有相同点是必要的。
In my view, it’s ____________________ to be the same.
2. 我真的不介意朋友是与我相同或是不同。
I don’t ____________________ ____________________ if friends are the same as me or different.
3. 我认为朋友就该像书——你不需要很多，只要他们好就行。
I think friends ____________________ ____________________ books — you don’t need a lot of them ____________________ ____________________ ____________________ they’re good.
(三)写作微技能：比较级的巧用
形容词和副词的比较级，能帮助你更具体、生动、形象地描述所要描写的人物，写出评价人物的文章。如：I’m more outgoing than my sister. I work as hard as my sister.你可以根据你的需要，用＂than，as... as＂等更具体、生动地描述人物间的相同点与不同点。
1. Lisa唱得比Sam好。
Lisa sings ____________________ ____________________ Sam.
2. 他和我一样外向。
He is ____________________ outgoing ____________________ me.
3. Peter学习不如Tom努力。
Peter doesn’t work ____________________ hard ____________________ Tom.
三、以读促写
根据所给汉语或首字母提示，写出空白处所缺单词的正确形式。每空限填一词。完成后请找出文中的比较级并思考其在文中的用法。
My Best Friend and I
My favorite 1 (谚语) is ＂Friends are God’s way of taking care of us.＂ It makes me think about my best friend Linda. We have known each other since we were in 2 (最初的) school. In some ways, we look 3 (相像的), and in some ways, we look different.
B 4 of us have black eyes and long black hair, but she is a little taller than I. I’m quiet and 5 (严肃的), so it’s not easy for me to make friends and get on with other 6 (小孩). However, Linda is not as quiet as me. She is 7 (外向的). She is so 8 (有才能的) in telling jokes that she always makes me l 9 . It’s so lucky to have a friend like her. As for study, both of us are 10 (辛勤的) and like to learn everything new. We enjoy studying together. But Linda is better at study and gets better g 11 than I do. She always tries her best to help me as l 12 as I have problems. With her help, I made great progress in my lessons. I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me. I think I 13 (应该) learn from her and try to help others just like her. In our free time, we often talk about and 14 (分享) everything. In f 15 , I think I’m a good listener and always there to listen.
16 (虽然) Linda is quite different from me, I don’t really 17 (在意) if my friends are the same as me or different. I 18 (真正) understand that a life without friendship is like a day without sunshine. Linda is my true friend who reaches my hand and touches my 19 (内心).
（一）
1．根据表格中提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍你和你的好朋友Tina的相同和不同之处。
要求：
1)文章内容应包含所有要点，并适当发挥；
2)开头已给，结尾自行补充；
3)条理清楚，语义连贯，字迹工整。词数80左右。
Differences Similarities (相似点)
Tina 1. funny (***); serious (*) 2. do sports (every day) 3. like ... 1. tall and thin 2. be good at math and English 3. ...
I 1. funny (*); serious (***) 2. do sports (hardly ever) 3. love …
Tina is my best friend. We have many similarities.
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2．假如你叫刘星。你择友的标准是：性格外向；擅长打乒乓球，并可以教你打乒乓球。最近你就结交了这样一位新朋友——赵鹏。
请根据表格提示，介绍一下你自己、你的新朋友以及你的择友观。
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3．假如你是张亮，请根据下面的表格信息，写一篇英语短文，介绍你和弟弟张翔的相同之处和不同之处，以便你们的美国朋友加深对你们的了解。
要求：1. 语句通顺，符合逻辑;
2. 包含表格信息的所有内容;
3. 70词左右，可适当发挥。
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4．今天网上讨论的主题是“My best friend and I”。假如你有一个最好的朋友Lucy，请根据表格所提供的信息进行跟帖，对你和Lucy的相同之处和不同之处做一个简单的描述。70词左右。
Name Lucy
Age 12 13
Height 1.5m 1.55m
Character quiet, smart, calm outgoing, good at sports
In common enjoy going to parties
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5．《学习周报》联袂阳光中学正在举行“我的闺蜜我来谈”活动。请你根据下面表格中提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍你和你最好的朋友Nancy的相同之处和不同之处。
要求：
1. 包括表格中提及的所有内容，语句通顺，条理清楚；
2. 80词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数），可适当发挥。
人物 不同点 相同点
Nancy 1. 比我高得多，更外向 2. 更擅长唱歌、跳舞 3. 喜欢去听音乐会 1. 喜欢运动 2. 学习努力，各门功课都学得好 3. 喜欢阅读，通常在周末一起去图书馆
Ⅰ 1. 喜欢上网 2. 喜欢旅游
对朋友之间异同点的看法：……（至少两点）
Nancy is my best friend. In some ways, we are the same.
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6．你们学校英语俱乐部拟招聘一名学生助手，帮助一些小学生学习英语。苏珊和朱迪想去应聘。请你根据下面表格中的信息写一篇短文，介绍她们的情况并对二者进行比较，说一说你认为谁更适合这份工作以及你选择她的理由。
要求：
1. 短文应包括表格中的所有内容，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右。
参考词汇：be patient with对……有耐心
Susan: quiet patient（耐心的） has good grades in English Judy: outgoing good with children stayed in England for a year good at speaking English
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1. （2023·福建·统考中考真题）某地“美丽乡村（Beautiful Village）”项目吸引了不少外宾，暑假期间需要数名擅长英语的小导游。假定你是李华，希望成为其中的一员。请你结合以下表格提示，给该项目的外事负责人王先生写一封英文自荐信。词数80左右。
What kind of person you are friendly, active…
What you are good at speak English, tell stories…
What you can do introduce local culture, help foreigners…
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Hua. I am glad to know that you are in need of some tour guides.
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Yours,
Li Hua
2. （2022·四川·统考中考真题）假设你叫李平，你的姐姐李蓉今年七月要去伦敦Linda家住一段时间。请你根据表格信息，用英语给Linda写一封邮件，介绍你姐姐的基本情况。
姓名 Li Rong
年龄 16
外貌 中等身高、黑色短发
性格 随和、外向、友好
爱好 历史、博物馆、烹饪、打篮球
衣着 T恤、牛仔裤
注意：
(1)文中不得出现个人真实信息，如姓名、校名等；
(2)文中应包含表格所给信息，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
(3)词数80-100。
Dear Linda,
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Yours,
Li Ping
3.（2020·广西桂林·统考中考真题）初三年级将举行“最佳班长”评选活动，请你根据下列表格信息，以“Our Class Monitor”为题，写一篇短文，推荐你们班的班长Betty参加评选。
外貌 thin, tall, long hair, wear a pair of glasses
性格 kind, friendly, get on well with, help
特长 do well in, be interested in, win, prize, competition…
【写作要求】1、短文应包括以上信息，为使行文连贯可适当增加细节。
2、文章词数在70词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数，要求书写规范。
3、文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名。
Our Class Monitor
Now I'd like to introduce Betty to you.
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Unit 3 I’m more outgoing than my sister.
单元写作指导与演练
近三年考情分析
话题 考查热度
谈论人物的个性特征
人物的外貌和个性特征
本单元的话题是谈论人物的个性特征，本单元的写作题目与描写人物的个性特征相关。写此类短文时，要抓住所比较的人物的特点，从外貌特征(如tall, short, thin, fat, long/short hair等)、个性特点(如outgoing, funny, friendly, hard-working, smart等)等方面来描述。若要进行人物个性特征的比较，则要写出他们的相同点和不同点，并能够正确使用比较级进行表达。语言要精炼、准确，行文要流畅。
重点考查学生以下能力：
掌握并熟练使用一般现在时；
能使用一般现在时造句；
能熟练运用形容词及形容词比较级句型。
1.总分总结构。短文通常分为三个部分：
总------第一部分：开篇点题，引出话题。
分-------第二部分： 介绍相同之处与不同之处。
总——第三部分： 发表看法。
2.人称：第一人称，第三人称。
3.时态：一般现在时（注意单三）。
【词汇积累】
tall/thin/heavy/long hair/short hair高的/瘦的/长发/短发
funny/friendly/outgoing/hard-working/smart/lazy搞笑的/友好的/外向的/努力的/聪明的/懒惰的
be similar to与.......相似
be talented in在.......有天赋
like doing sth.喜欢做
be serious about 对.......认真
care about 关心
work hard努力学习
play sports做体育运动
be good at 擅长
as...as与.......一样
be different from与.......不同
bring out 使显示
the same as 和.......相同
as long as只要
【句式积累】
1.I have a best friend. His/her name is...我有一个好朋友，她/他的名字是....
2.She has long hair/short hair...她留着长发/短发......
3.But we have some differences...但是我们有一些不同.......
4.I am more outgoing than him.我比他外向。
5.She is not as...as I am.她不如我....
6.He is good at...他很擅长.......
7.We both like...我们都喜欢........
8.I work harder than her.我比她学习努力。
9.She is talented in music.她在音乐方面有天赋。
10.He likes to do the same things as me.他喜欢做和我一样的事情。
11.My friend truly cares about me.我的朋友真地很关心我。
12.We can talk about and share everything.我们可以互相交谈并且分享一切。
13.We enjoy studying together.我们喜欢在一起学习。
14.I think friends are like books-you don’t need a lot of them as long as they are good.我觉得朋友像书-不需要太多只要足够好。
15.It’s not necessary to be the same没必要一样。
16.I believe we will become better and better.我相信我们会变得越来越好。
17.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。
18.True friends are always there for you.真正的朋友会一直陪在你身边。
19.I will miss him.我会想念他。
20.I hope we will be good friends forever.我希望我们将永远是好朋友。
※ 开头句
①My best friend is Li Yun./Li Yun is my best friend.
②My friends and I have a lot in common，but we still have some differences.
③As the saying goes，“You don't need a lot of friends as long as they're good.”
※ 中间句
①She often wears a pink shirt and blue trousers.
②I think she is very kind-hearted.
③She is outgoing and always makes people around her happy and relaxed.
④Both of us like to make new friends and we also love to help other people.
※ 结尾句
①Even though we have differences，we are still very good friends.
②I feel happy to have such a good friend.
③I hope our friendship will last forever.
【谚语积累】
1．A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。
2．A friend is easier lost than found.得朋友难，失朋友易。
【万能写作模板】
我和我最好的朋友
介绍自己和朋友： My best friend is Linda . We became friends three years ago .
比较自己和好朋友的异同：In some ways we are the same . In some ways we are different .
总结：Although we have differences , we are good friends.
真正的朋友,在你获得成功的时候,会为你高兴;在你遇到不幸或悲伤的时候,会给你及时的支持;在你犯错误的时候,会给你正确的批评和帮助.这样的友谊才是真正可贵的.请你写一篇短文介绍一下你和你最好的朋友,80词左右.
体裁:记叙文 人称:以第三人称和第一人称为主
要求:
1.简要说明你的择友观;
2.简单比较一下你和好友之间的外貌、性格、爱好的异同点(要求使用比较级);
3.简述一件你们共同经历的事(如学校郊游、才艺表演等),体现好友对你的帮助.
注意:短文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息.
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思路导引
表明自己的择友观→I don't think it's necessary for friends to be the same.
比较自己和好友之间的外貌、性格、爱好的异同点
Differences:
Linda: quieter, taller, long hair, does well in English and Chinese
Me: noisier, shorter, short hair, be good at math
Similarities: like doing homework together, help each other, like playing tennis
简述一件和好友共同经历的事,表达对好友的感情
I took part in the school talent show, felt so nervous
Linda encouraged me and kept helping me
did my best and won first prize
bring out the best in me, feel so lucky to have such a friend
词句积累
词汇 be the same as 和······相同 be different from与······不同 be good at擅长······ do well in 在······方面做得好 help each other 互相帮助 feel lucky感到幸运 bring out the best in me 把我最好的一面表现出来 win first prize 获得一等奖
句子 1.I don't think it's necessary for friends to be the same.我认为朋友没有必要一样. 2.We like to do our homework together after school and we always help each other.我们喜欢放学后一起做作业,我们总是互相帮助. 3.I'm good at... but Linda does well in...我擅长·····而琳达在······方面做得好. 4.I still remember when I...,I felt.., at first.我仍然记得当我·····时,一开始我感到······· 5.As soon as Linda knew my problem, she encouraged me and kept helping me.琳达一知道我的问题,就 鼓励我并一直帮助我. 6.At last, I did my best and won first prize.最终,我尽了最大的努力,并获得了一等奖. 7.She often helps to bring out the best in me.她经常帮我把最好的一面表现出来. 8.I feel lucky to have such a friend.我很幸运有这样一个朋友. 9.谚A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情.
佳作展示
My best friend Linda
①I don't think it's necessary for friends to be the same.
My best friend is Linda. ②She is very different from me. ②She is much quieter and taller than me. She always has long hair but I like short hair. ③I'm good at math but Linda does well in English and Chinese. We like doing our homework together after school and we always help each other. We both like playing tennis.
I still remember when I took part in the school talent show, I felt so nervous at first. I couldn't do my best on stage.④ As soon as Linda knew my problem, she encouraged me and kept helping me. At last, I did my best and won first prize. ⑤She often helps to bring out the best in me, and I feel so lucky to have such a friend.
名师点评
本文符合写作要求,条理清晰、结构严谨,运用了丰富的短语和句式,表明了自己的择友观以及自己最好的朋友Linda的情况.
①用＂it's(not) +adj. +to do sth."句式言简意赅地表明了自己的择友观.
②用 be different from 短语和＂比较级＋than"结构表明了作者和朋友的外貌以及性格差异.
③用 be good at和do well in 短语表明了自己和Linda 各自擅长的学科.
④用含有as soon as引导的时间状语从句的复合句,强调Linda对自己的关心和帮助.
⑤用bring out 短语表明 Linda对自己的帮助很大,同时体现了作者活学活用的能力.
一、词汇积累
(一)人物对比类短语
1. 与……不同 ________________________________
2. 与……相像的________________________________
3. 和……相同________________________________
4. 和……一样高________________________________
(二)人物描述类短语
1. 在某方面有天赋________________________________
2. 擅长于________________________________
(三)朋友相处类短语
1. 和某人相处得好________________________________
2. 真正关心我________________________________
3. 分享一切________________________________
4. 使我笑________________________________
(四)写出下列形容词或副词的比较级和最高级形式
1. tall → ____________________ →____________________
2. short →____________________ →____________________
3. late →____________________ →____________________
4. lazy →____________________ →____________________
5. funny →____________________ →____________________
6. early →____________________ →____________________
7. thin →____________________ →____________________
8. popular →____________________ →____________________
9. good →____________________ →____________________
10. bad →____________________ →____________________
二、句子积累
(一)佳句欣赏与模拟
1. My best friend Larry is quite different from me.
【quite为副词，可以用来修饰形容词，表示程度，意为＂十分＂】
我十分擅长英语。
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2. I’m shy so it’s not easy for me to make friends.
【it’s＋adj.＋for sb.＋to do sth.做某事对某人来说怎么样】
取得好成绩对我来说很容易。
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3. Larry is much less hard-working, though.
【much/a little/a lot＋比较级】
事实上，李明跑步比我快得多。
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(二)表达个人的择友观
1. 在我看来，有相同点是必要的。
In my view, it’s ____________________ to be the same.
2. 我真的不介意朋友是与我相同或是不同。
I don’t ____________________ ____________________ if friends are the same as me or different.
3. 我认为朋友就该像书——你不需要很多，只要他们好就行。
I think friends ____________________ ____________________ books — you don’t need a lot of them ____________________ ____________________ ____________________ they’re good.
(三)写作微技能：比较级的巧用
形容词和副词的比较级，能帮助你更具体、生动、形象地描述所要描写的人物，写出评价人物的文章。如：I’m more outgoing than my sister. I work as hard as my sister.你可以根据你的需要，用＂than，as... as＂等更具体、生动地描述人物间的相同点与不同点。
1. Lisa唱得比Sam好。
Lisa sings ____________________ ____________________ Sam.
2. 他和我一样外向。
He is ____________________ outgoing ____________________ me.
3. Peter学习不如Tom努力。
Peter doesn’t work ____________________ hard ____________________ Tom.
三、以读促写
根据所给汉语或首字母提示，写出空白处所缺单词的正确形式。每空限填一词。完成后请找出文中的比较级并思考其在文中的用法。
My Best Friend and I
My favorite 1 (谚语) is ＂Friends are God’s way of taking care of us.＂ It makes me think about my best friend Linda. We have known each other since we were in 2 (最初的) school. In some ways, we look 3 (相像的), and in some ways, we look different.
B 4 of us have black eyes and long black hair, but she is a little taller than I. I’m quiet and 5 (严肃的), so it’s not easy for me to make friends and get on with other 6 (小孩). However, Linda is not as quiet as me. She is 7 (外向的). She is so 8 (有才能的) in telling jokes that she always makes me l 9 . It’s so lucky to have a friend like her. As for study, both of us are 10 (辛勤的) and like to learn everything new. We enjoy studying together. But Linda is better at study and gets better g 11 than I do. She always tries her best to help me as l 12 as I have problems. With her help, I made great progress in my lessons. I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me. I think I 13 (应该) learn from her and try to help others just like her. In our free time, we often talk about and 14 (分享) everything. In f 15 , I think I’m a good listener and always there to listen.
16 (虽然) Linda is quite different from me, I don’t really 17 (在意) if my friends are the same as me or different. I 18 (真正) understand that a life without friendship is like a day without sunshine. Linda is my true friend who reaches my hand and touches my 19 (内心).
【参考答案】
一、词汇积累 (一)人物对比类短语 1. be different from 2.be similar to 3.the same as 4.as tall as (二)人物描述类短语 1.be talented in 2.be good at (三)朋友相处类短语 1. be good with sb. 2.truly care about me 3.share everything 4. make me laugh (四)写出下列形容词或副词的比较级和最高级形式 1.taller；tallest 2. shorter；shortest 3.later；latest 4.lazier；laziest 5.funnier；funniest 6.earlier；earliest 7.thinner；thinnest 8. more popular；most popular 9. better；best 10.worse；worst 二、句子积累 (一)佳句欣赏与模拟 1. I am quite good at English. 2. It’s easy for me to get good grades. 3. In fact, Li Ming runs much/a lot faster than me. (二)表达个人的择友观 1.necessary 2.really care 3.are like；as long as (三)写作微技能：比较级的巧用 1.better than 2.as；as 3.as；as 三、以读促写 1. saying 2. primary 3. similar 4. Both 5. serious 6. kids/children 7. outgoing 8. talented 9. laugh 10. hard-working 11. grades 12. long 13. should 14. share 15. fact 16. Though/Although 17. care 18. really 19. heart
（一）
1．根据表格中提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍你和你的好朋友Tina的相同和不同之处。
要求：
1)文章内容应包含所有要点，并适当发挥；
2)开头已给，结尾自行补充；
3)条理清楚，语义连贯，字迹工整。词数80左右。
Differences Similarities (相似点)
Tina 1. funny (***); serious (*) 2. do sports (every day) 3. like ... 1. tall and thin 2. be good at math and English 3. ...
I 1. funny (*); serious (***) 2. do sports (hardly ever) 3. love …
Tina is my best friend. We have many similarities.
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【解题思路】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的要点，写短文介绍自己和好朋友Tina之间的相同和不同之处。
【写作步骤】
第一步，介绍与好朋友Tina的相同之处；
第二步，介绍与好朋友Tina的不同之处，适当使用比较级作对比；
第三步，简单收尾。
【满分作文】
Tina is my best friend. We have many similarities. We are both tall and thin. We both like math so we are both good at it. We also like English and we usually get good grades, so some classmates say we are talented in them. However, we are truly different in many ways. Tina is funnier than me. She can make people laugh. I’m more serious than Tina. That’s why I study harder than she does. Tina does sports every day but I hardly ever do sports. So she is healthier than me. She likes music and sings well. And I am more interested in drawing. I hope to be an artist in the future. I think she’s a good friend, because she always helps to bring out the best in me.
Do you have a good friend Can you tell me about your friend
【亮点词汇】
①be good at 擅长
②be talented in 在某方面有天赋
③hardly ever 几乎从不
④do sports 做运动
⑤be interested in 对……感兴趣
【高分句型】
①We also like English and we usually get good grades, so some classmates say we are talented in them.（so连接表因果关系的并列句；省略that的宾语从句）
②I think she’s a good friend, because she always helps to bring out the best in me.（省略that的宾语从句；because引导的原因状语从句）
2．假如你叫刘星。你择友的标准是：性格外向；擅长打乒乓球，并可以教你打乒乓球。最近你就结交了这样一位新朋友——赵鹏。
请根据表格提示，介绍一下你自己、你的新朋友以及你的择友观。
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【解题思路】
写作时要以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态主要采用一般现在时。正文可分为三部分：第一部分介绍自己的信息；第二部分描述自己的择友标准，第三部分介绍自己的新朋友赵鹏。文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。
【满分作文】
My name is Liu Xing. I’m fifteen years old. I’m quiet and good at English. I like friends who are more outgoing than me and good at playing table tennis. So they can teach me to play table tennis. I’m very happy to have such a new friend now. His name is Zhao Peng. He is 14 years old. He is younger than me. He is more outgoing than me. He plays table tennis very well.
3．假如你是张亮，请根据下面的表格信息，写一篇英语短文，介绍你和弟弟张翔的相同之处和不同之处，以便你们的美国朋友加深对你们的了解。
要求：1. 语句通顺，符合逻辑;
2. 包含表格信息的所有内容;
3. 70词左右，可适当发挥。
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【解题思路】
这是一篇介绍型作文，时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主，要注意谓语动词的三单形式。这里是对两个人进行对比描写，可知句型主要以比较级句型为主，要注意形容词的比较级形式的转换。
【满分作文】
Zhang Xiang is my brother. He is younger than me, but he is as tall as me. His hair is long, but my hair is longer than his. He is much more outgoing than me, so he has many friends. He often goes out with them. However, I like to stay at home. He has cooler clothes than me. He is less hard-working. So he often gets worse grades than me.
4．今天网上讨论的主题是“My best friend and I”。假如你有一个最好的朋友Lucy，请根据表格所提供的信息进行跟帖，对你和Lucy的相同之处和不同之处做一个简单的描述。70词左右。
Name Lucy
Age 12 13
Height 1.5m 1.55m
Character quiet, smart, calm outgoing, good at sports
In common enjoy going to parties
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【解题思路】
本文采用第一人称和第三人称形式，以一般现在时为主；根据表格提示内容，从年龄、身高、性格等方面介绍自己和Lucy的不同之处，以及表明自己和Lucy的共同之处。可适当发挥，保证叙述完整，条理清晰，正确使用比较级结构。
【满分作文】
My best friend’s name is Lucy. She is 12 years old, and I am one year older than her. Lucy is shorter than me. She is 1.5 meters tall and I’m 1.55 meters tall. Lucy is quiet and calm. She is good at thinking of ideas. She is smarter than me, but I am more outgoing. I like to play sports and I’m good at them. We have something in common, for example, we both enjoy going to parties.
5．《学习周报》联袂阳光中学正在举行“我的闺蜜我来谈”活动。请你根据下面表格中提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍你和你最好的朋友Nancy的相同之处和不同之处。
要求：
1. 包括表格中提及的所有内容，语句通顺，条理清楚；
2. 80词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数），可适当发挥。
人物 不同点 相同点
Nancy 1. 比我高得多，更外向 2. 更擅长唱歌、跳舞 3. 喜欢去听音乐会 1. 喜欢运动 2. 学习努力，各门功课都学得好 3. 喜欢阅读，通常在周末一起去图书馆
Ⅰ 1. 喜欢上网 2. 喜欢旅游
对朋友之间异同点的看法：……（至少两点）
Nancy is my best friend. In some ways, we are the same.
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【解题思路】
本文应该采用第一和第三人称叙述，时态采用一般现在时，在叙述时应按照表格中所给的内容认真组织语言，做到语句通顺，条理清楚，在最后阐述自己的观点时应有理有据，言简意赅，在写作的过程中，注意语言符合英文表达的习惯。
【满分作文】
Nancy is my best friend. In some ways, we are the same. Both of us like sports. We are both hard-working and good at all subjects. We both like reading, and we usually go to the library together on weekends.
But in some ways we are different. She is taller and more outgoing than me. She is better at singing and dancing. She likes going to the concert. For me, I like surfing the Internet. And I love traveling. In fact, I don’t really care if my friends are the same as me or different from me. I think my best friend can help me bring out the best in me.
6．你们学校英语俱乐部拟招聘一名学生助手，帮助一些小学生学习英语。苏珊和朱迪想去应聘。请你根据下面表格中的信息写一篇短文，介绍她们的情况并对二者进行比较，说一说你认为谁更适合这份工作以及你选择她的理由。
要求：
1. 短文应包括表格中的所有内容，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右。
参考词汇：be patient with对……有耐心
Susan: quiet patient（耐心的） has good grades in English Judy: outgoing good with children stayed in England for a year good at speaking English
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【满分作文】
本文应该用第三人称为主来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时为主。在介绍内容时，力求语言通顺，语法正确，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。
【满分作文】
Both Susan and Judy want to be a student helper to help the primary students with their English in the English club. Susan is a quiet girl, and she is very patient with children. Judy is more outgoing than Susan and she is good with children. Both of them are good at English. Susan always has good grades in English. However, Judy can speak English better than Susan because she stayed in England for a year. So I think Judy should get the job.
1. （2023·福建·统考中考真题）某地“美丽乡村（Beautiful Village）”项目吸引了不少外宾，暑假期间需要数名擅长英语的小导游。假定你是李华，希望成为其中的一员。请你结合以下表格提示，给该项目的外事负责人王先生写一封英文自荐信。词数80左右。
What kind of person you are friendly, active…
What you are good at speak English, tell stories…
What you can do introduce local culture, help foreigners…
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Hua. I am glad to know that you are in need of some tour guides.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【解题思路】
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封自荐信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
【写作步骤】
第一步，承接开头，介绍自己想成为“美丽乡村”项目的英语小导游；
第二步，具体阐述自己具备的品质和擅长做的事；
第三步，最后书写结尾，再次表达希望成为小导游中的一员。
【满分作文】
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Hua. I am glad to know that you are in need of some tour guides. I’d like to be one of them. I think I am suitable for the job.
First of all, I am friendly and patient. I am active in many activities. Besides, I speak English well and have won several prizes in English speaking competitions. I am also good at telling stories. So I can introduce local culture to foreigners in English. Most importantly, I have visited the beautiful village many times and I can help foreigners better understand the life of the village.
I would be thankful if I could be given the chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点词汇】
①be suitable for适合于……
②introduce sth to sb向某人介绍某物
③Most importantly最重要的是
【高分句型】
①I think I am suitable for the job.（省略that的宾语从句）
②I would be thankful if I could be given the chance.（if引导的条件状语从句；被动语态）
2. （2022·四川·统考中考真题）假设你叫李平，你的姐姐李蓉今年七月要去伦敦Linda家住一段时间。请你根据表格信息，用英语给Linda写一封邮件，介绍你姐姐的基本情况。
姓名 Li Rong
年龄 16
外貌 中等身高、黑色短发
性格 随和、外向、友好
爱好 历史、博物馆、烹饪、打篮球
衣着 T恤、牛仔裤
注意：
(1)文中不得出现个人真实信息，如姓名、校名等；
(2)文中应包含表格所给信息，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
(3)词数80-100。
Dear Linda,
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Yours,
Li Ping
【解题思路】
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据表格内容介绍姐姐的基本情况，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“介绍姐姐”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“姓名、年龄、外貌、性格、爱好和穿着”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。表达希望对方帮忙，姐姐不会给对方添麻烦。
【满分作文】
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to write to you. Today I want to introduce my sister Li Rong to you.
She is 16 years old. She is of medium height and she has short black hair. She is easy-going, out-going and friendly. She likes history because she thinks it helps her learn about the history and culture of the past. She likes to go to museums and she likes the cultural atmosphere of the museum. She likes cooking and she always cooks for us. She likes playing basketball and she often plays basketball on weekends. She often wears T-shirts and jeans.
I hope you will help her and she won’t give you any trouble.
Yours,
Li Ping
【亮点词汇】
①introduce...to...向……介绍……
②of medium height中等身高
③learn about学习关于……
④on weekends在周末
【高分句型】
①She likes history because she thinks it helps her learn about history and culture of the past.（because引导的原因状语从句和省略that的宾语从句）
②I hope you will help her and she won’t give you any trouble.（and连接并列句）
3.（2020·广西桂林·统考中考真题）初三年级将举行“最佳班长”评选活动，请你根据下列表格信息，以“Our Class Monitor”为题，写一篇短文，推荐你们班的班长Betty参加评选。
外貌 thin, tall, long hair, wear a pair of glasses
性格 kind, friendly, get on well with, help
特长 do well in, be interested in, win, prize, competition…
【写作要求】1、短文应包括以上信息，为使行文连贯可适当增加细节。
2、文章词数在70词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数，要求书写规范。
3、文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名。
Our Class Monitor
Now I'd like to introduce Betty to you.
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【解题思路】
本文以“写人”为主，重点介绍其外貌、性格及特长；人称为第三人称单数，时态为一般现在时，注意主谓一致问题；写作时注意要点齐全，条理清晰，使读者一目了然。
【满分作文】
Our Class Monitor
Now I'd like to introduce Betty to you. Betty is our class monitor. She is a thin and tall girl with long hair. She often wears a pair of glasses. She is friendly and she gets on well with everyone in our class. Betty is also kind. She does well in English, so she often helps us learn English. She is interested in playing the piano and has already won some prizes in piano competitions. I think she will be the best.
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