中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark
单元写作指导与演练
近三年考情分析
话题 考查热度
介绍自己的变化 ★★★★☆
介绍XX的变化 ★★★☆☆
本单元的话题是“谈论生活变化”。主要描述过去经常做的事，以及自己或他人过去的外貌、性格、爱好等等；描述生活中发生的变化，以及发生变化的原因。此话题主要从以下三方面设题：
①介绍自己现在和过去的变化；
②介绍家人、同学、朋友等发生的变化；
③对于身边发生的变化给出一些评论等。
体裁：说明文
时态：用一般现在时和一般过去时
人称：第一人称。
【词汇积累】
外貌：高个子，又大又强壮，有点重，超重(超重的), 中等身高/体格，瘦、短、轻、直/卷/长/短发，高/大鼻子，大/亮眼睛，戴眼镜
性格：风趣、友好/善良、外向、严肃、幽默、活跃、勇敢、乐于助人、受欢迎、健谈(健谈的), 沉默、安静、害羞、懒惰、随和/难以相处、乐于助人
兴趣与爱好：在学校音乐/。。。俱乐部，在篮球上/。。。团队，热爱/喜欢/喜欢（踢）足球/。。。，对…感兴趣/擅长。。。，不喜欢/无法忍受。。。
行为习惯：看电视/电影，听流行音乐/。。。音乐，讨厌体育/。。。上课，不吃很多蔬菜/。。。，不读很多书，害怕黑暗/高处/独自一人/在公共场合演讲。。。
学习：努力学习/工作，在考试中取得好成绩/成绩，在学校表现出色，擅长英语/。。。，对学习越来越不感兴趣，缺课，考试不及格，不擅长
衣着：黑色连衣裙/。。。，穿牛仔裤/。。。，打扮成男孩，打扮得漂亮/漂亮/不得体/简单/。。。
【句式积累】
1. 在过去的几年里，我的生活发生了巨大的变化。
2. 自从我还是个孩子以来，很多事情都发生了变化。
3. 在过去的几年里，我发生了多么大的变化！
4. 人确实变了，我也变了。
5.看来我变了很多。
6. 这些年来，我已经不是以前的我了。
【万能写作模板】
咨询模板
Everybody is sure to change, and so am I. However, my greatest change is...
外貌方面：I remember when ... I used to be short, but now
性格方面：I used to be shy and quiet, but
爱好方面：I used to hate reading, but now
The most important change in my life was becoming
Write about how you have changed. What did you use to be like Which change is the most important one, and why
Try to write two paragraphs.
Paragraph 1: General introduction about the changes in your life
Paragraph 2: The most important change and how it happened______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
一、汉译英：单词/短语
翻译下列短语
1．使自己被(别人)理解
2．写日记
3．陷入麻烦
4．在某方面努力工作
5．英语口语
6．犯困
7．当众;公开地
8．听磁带
9．想要放弃
二、完成句子
10．科学很有趣，影响着我们的日常生活。
Science is interesting, and it our .
11．我的老师鼓励我写一首打油诗，因为我总是说一些好笑的事。
My teacher me a poem because I am always funny things.
12．它是对毕加索艺术生涯的一个总结。
It is Picasso’s career.
13．你能告诉我怎样处理这个问题吗？
Can you tell me how to the problem
14．那位男子当众大声说话以引起别人的注意。
The man spoke loudly in order to attract others’ .
15．Nora为她的课业骄傲，因为她总是在化学考试中得高分。
Nora is her schoolwork because she always .
16．我希望我的父母终有一天以我为荣。
I hope my parents will me some day.
17．在公众场合你不可以大声说话。
You can’t speak so .
18．他们不敢告诉老师真相。
They the teacher the truth.
19．我过去在学校里不受欢迎。
I in school.
三、句子/对话改错
请从A、B、C中选出错误选项填在括号内，并将正确答案填写在横线上。
20．Have,A you given,B up to smoke,C？
21．The old,A man was interesting,B in,C the old film.
22．I interviewed,A an,B 18 years old,C boy yesterday afternoon.
23．I believed,A that he used to have,B difficulty,C in his study.
24．It was exact,A what I wanted to tell,B you.Don't,C you believe me？
四、将所给单词连成句子
25．I, to, used, short, be
.
26．how, in, he, be, public, taught, to, polite, me
.
27．foot, he, goes, school, seldom, to, on
.
28．wear，she，use，did，to，glasses
29．shy，not，she，anymore，is
30．seems，has，lot，a，changed，it，that，she
31．my，caused，problems，seldom，any，brother
32．that，he，was，exactly，what，needed
1．上周你们班召开了一次“告别陋习，走向文明”的主题班会，班会上老师让你们谈谈身边同学的变化。请你根据表格里的内容，写一篇有关你的同学李华的文章。词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
过去的表现 现在的表现
经常和同学打架 与同学相处融洽
花很多时间玩电脑游戏 积极参加各种活动
经常吃垃圾食品 健康的生活习惯
在课堂上吃东西、睡觉 考试不及格 认真听讲，按时完成作业 各门功课都学得很好
Li Hua is my classmate. He has made great progress this term. In the past,
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2．进入初三后，你在生活、学习、爱好等很多方面都有了一些变化。当然也会遇到很多困难。而每个人面对困难时的态度会有所不同。你怎样面对你的困难呢 请以“Believe yourself , and you will win .” 为题，写一篇自己在学习或生活中遇到困难并战胜它们的短文。
要求：100词左右，要切合题意，内容完整，书写规范。
提示：1. 你遇到了什么困难
2. 你是如何克服困难的
3. 你体会到了什么
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．写作要求：根据提示，简要介绍你的朋友李连的成长变化。词数：60~80。
1）爱好：以前喜欢打乒乓球、看电视和聊天；现在喜欢弹钢琴、看书和散步；
2）外貌：过去个子矮，短发；现在个子高多了，长发；
3）性格：过去外向，现在有些内向。
要求：不要逐字逐句翻译，内容要合理通顺。
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4．某英文报举办以“家庭巨变”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下表提示，以“Changes in Mr. Zhang’s family”为题，写一篇征文稿介绍张先生家二十年来的变化。
二十年前 现在
房子 小而旧 又大又新
通讯方式 写信 使用电话或手机
交通方式 步行或骑自行车 开私家车
生活 贫穷但安宁 富裕但忙碌
要求：
1. 根据表格内容进行写作，可适当发挥；
2. 灵活运用本单元所学的used to结构；
3. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Changes in Mr. Zhang’s family
Great changes have taken place in Mr. Zhang’s family over the past twenty years.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．时光荏苒，转眼大家已经步入九年级。回想过去两年的初中生活，你是否觉得自己改变了许多？以“Some Changes in My Life”为题写一篇英语短文。谈一谈自从上初中后，你在哪些方面发生了变化。
提示：1. What did you use to be
2. What are you like now
3. How do you feel about these changes
要求：字数80词左右，包括以上内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
1．（2022·黑龙江·统考中考真题）转眼间，你已经是一名九年级学生了。你还记得刚升入初中时的自己是什么样子吗？这两年在你身上发生了哪些变化？请以“My changes”为题写一篇英语作文，请你根据下面的要求完成这篇作文。
要求:
1. 写你三个方面的变化，用上used to结构；
2. 紧扣作文题目、语言表达准确、语意通顺连贯；
3. 词数90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
My changes
I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot. First, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2021·贵州黔西·统考中考真题）假如你是振兴中学的学生。名叫张华。你校英文网站“Zhengxing English website”想报道近年来同学们家乡的变化。请你以“Changes in my hometown”为题对你的家乡进行一次采访，并将你的所见所闻用英文写一篇报道。向学校英文网站投稿。
内容包括：
1.家乡过去的情况（举2个例子）；
2.家乡现在的变化（举2个例子）；
3.乡村振兴开展以来你的感想和打算（2点 ）；
写作要求：
1.结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰 。
2.文中不得出现任何真实的人名和学校名称等信息 。
3.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数 。
参考词汇：
乡村振兴：rural revitalization
乡村致富：make our country rich and stronger
Changes in my hometown
We had a great victory in poverty relief（脱贫）in my hometown according to the local news report. A few days ago, I went back to my hometown.
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3．（2022·江苏泰州·统考中考真题）我们在变化中成长，成长让我们的人生充满意义。回首三年初中时光，我们在学习、思想、性格、生活等方面发生了很多变化。你所在学校公众号的英语写作栏目正在开展“我的成长”征文活动，请分享你初中三年中的成长故事，具体讲述其中一个变化。
要点如下：
1.变化是什么？
2.变化过程是什么？
3.你从中得到了什么启发？
要求：
1.必须含有所有要点，并适当拓展；
2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
3.词数100左右。
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Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark
单元写作指导与演练
近三年考情分析
话题 考查热度
介绍自己的变化 ★★★★☆
介绍XX的变化 ★★★☆☆
本单元的话题是“谈论生活变化”。主要描述过去经常做的事，以及自己或他人过去的外貌、性格、爱好等等；描述生活中发生的变化，以及发生变化的原因。此话题主要从以下三方面设题：
①介绍自己现在和过去的变化；
②介绍家人、同学、朋友等发生的变化；
③对于身边发生的变化给出一些评论等。
体裁：说明文
时态：用一般现在时和一般过去时
人称：第一人称。
【词汇积累】
外貌：高个子，又大又强壮，有点重，超重(超重的), 中等身高/体格，瘦、短、轻、直/卷/长/短发，高/大鼻子，大/亮眼睛，戴眼镜
tall, big and strong, a little heavy, overweight (超重的), be of medium height / build, thin, short, light, straight / curly / long / short hair, high / big nose, big / bright eyes, wear glasses
性格：风趣、友好/善良、外向、严肃、幽默、活跃、勇敢、乐于助人、受欢迎、健谈(健谈的), 沉默、安静、害羞、懒惰、随和/难以相处、乐于助人
funny, friendly / nice / kind, outgoing, serious, humorous, active, brave, helpful, popular, talkative (健谈的), silent, quiet, shy, lazy, be easy / hard to get on / along with, be ready to help others
兴趣与爱好：在学校音乐/。。。俱乐部，在篮球上/。。。团队，热爱/喜欢/喜欢（踢）足球/。。。，对…感兴趣/擅长。。。，不喜欢/无法忍受。。。
in the school music / ... club, on a basketball / ... team, love / like / enjoy (playing) soccer / ..., be interested in / be good at ..., dislike / can’t stand ...
行为习惯：看电视/电影，听流行音乐/。。。音乐，讨厌体育/。。。上课，不吃很多蔬菜/。。。，不读很多书，害怕黑暗/高处/独自一人/在公共场合演讲。。。
watch TV / movies, listen to pop / ... music, hate P.E. / ... class, not eat a lot of vegetables / ..., not read a lot of books, be afraid of the dark / high places / being alone / giving a speech in public ...
学习：努力学习/工作，在考试中取得好成绩/成绩，在学校表现出色，擅长英语/。。。，对学习越来越不感兴趣，缺课，考试不及格，不擅长
study / work hard, get good scores / grades on one’s exams, do well in school, be good at English / ..., become less / more interested in studying, be absent from classes, fail the exam, be bad at / be poor in / be bored with / do badly in ...
衣着：黑色连衣裙/。。。，穿牛仔裤/。。。，打扮成男孩，打扮得漂亮/漂亮/不得体/简单/。。。
dress in black / ..., wear jeans / ..., be dressed as a boy, dress beautifully / nicely / poorly / simply / ...
【句式积累】
1. 在过去的几年里，我的生活发生了巨大的变化。
There have been great changes in my life in the last few years.
2. 自从我还是个孩子以来，很多事情都发生了变化。
Many things have changed since I was a child.
3. 在过去的几年里，我发生了多么大的变化！
How greatly I have changed in the last few years!
4. 人确实变了，我也变了。
People sure have changed, and so have I.
5.看来我变了很多。
It seems that I have changed a lot.
6. 这些年来，我已经不是以前的我了。
These years, I’m not who I used to be.
【万能写作模板】
介绍模板
Everybody is sure to change, and so am I. However, my greatest change is...
外貌方面：I remember when ... I used to be short, but now
性格方面：I used to be shy and quiet, but
爱好方面：I used to hate reading, but now
The most important change in my life was becoming
Write about how you have changed. What did you use to be like Which change is the most important one, and why
Try to write two paragraphs.
Paragraph 1: General introduction about the changes in your life
Paragraph 2: The most important change and how it happened______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【佳作欣赏】
How I’ve Changed!
My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to be short, but now I’m one of the tallest students in my class. I used to be shy and quiet, but now I’m outgoing and I like to make friends. I used to hate reading, but now I have fallen in love with it.
The most important change in my life was becoming interested in reading. Last summer my best friend gave me an interesting book to read. I enjoyed it so much that I started to read other books. It was the most important change because reading gives me a lot of knowledge and makes me very happy. As a famous saying goes, “Reading makes a full man”.
我所发生的变化！
在过去的几年里，我的生活发生了很大的变化。我过去很矮，但现在我是班上个子最高的学生之一。我过去很害羞，很安静，但现在我很外向，喜欢交朋友。我过去讨厌读书，但现在我爱上了它。
我生活中最重要的变化是对阅读产生了兴趣。去年夏天，我最好的朋友给了我一本有趣的书。我非常喜欢它，所以我开始读其他的书。这是最重要的变化，因为阅读给了我很多知识，让我非常快乐。正如一句名言所说，“读书使人充实”。
一、汉译英：单词/短语
翻译下列短语
1．使自己被(别人)理解
2．写日记
3．陷入麻烦
4．在某方面努力工作
5．英语口语
6．犯困
7．当众;公开地
8．听磁带
9．想要放弃
【答案】1．make oneself understood 2．keep a diary 3．get into trouble 4．work hard at… 5．oral/spoken English 6．feel sleepy 7．in public 8．listen to tapes 9．feel like giving up
【解析】1．使：make；自己：oneself；被理解：understood，过去分词作宾语补足语。故填make oneself understood。
2．写：keep；日记：a diary。故填keep a diary。
3．陷入：get into；麻烦：trouble。故填get into trouble。
4．在某方面努力工作：work hard at，动词短语。故填work hard at...。
5．英语口语：oral/spoken English，固定搭配。故填oral/spoken English。
6．感到：feel；困：sleepy，形容词作表语。故填feel sleepy。
7．当众：in public，介词短语。故填in public。
8．听：listen to；磁带：tapes。故填listen to tapes。
9．想要：feel like doing sth；放弃：give up。故填feel like giving up。
二、完成句子
10．科学很有趣，影响着我们的日常生活。
Science is interesting, and it our .
【答案】 influences/affects daily life
【详解】影响：influence/affect；日常生活：daily life。句子时态是一般现在时，主语是it，谓语动词用三单形式。故填influences/affects；daily；life。
11．我的老师鼓励我写一首打油诗，因为我总是说一些好笑的事。
My teacher me a poem because I am always funny things.
【答案】 encouraged to write humorous saying
【详解】由题意可知，本句用一般过去时，encourage sb. to do sth.“鼓励某人做某事”；write a humorous poem“打油诗”；说：say，此处用现在分词和be动词构成现在进行时。故填encouraged；to write；humorous；saying。
12．它是对毕加索艺术生涯的一个总结。
It is Picasso’s career.
【答案】 a general review of
【详解】对……的一个总结：a general review of，固定用法。故填a；general；review；of。
13．你能告诉我怎样处理这个问题吗？
Can you tell me how to the problem
【答案】deal with
【详解】由汉语知所填空表达“处理”，how to deal with sth.“怎样处理某事”，deal with“处理，应对”，故填deal with。
14．那位男子当众大声说话以引起别人的注意。
The man spoke loudly in order to attract others’ .
【答案】 in public attention
【详解】根据中英文对比可知，空格处应填入意为“当众”和“注意”的单词或短语。in public“当众”，介词短语；attention“注意”，不可数名词，符合句意。故填in；public；attention。
15．Nora为她的课业骄傲，因为她总是在化学考试中得高分。
Nora is her schoolwork because she always .
【答案】 proud of gets high marks in chemistry exams
【详解】be proud of“以……为傲”；get high marks in sth“在……中取得高分”；chemistry exams“化学考试”，根据is可知，此句是一般现在时，主语she是第三人称单数形式，动词用三单，故填proud of；gets high marks in chemistry exams。
16．我希望我的父母终有一天以我为荣。
I hope my parents will me some day.
【答案】 be proud of
【详解】be proud of“以……而骄傲”，固定短语，空前有will，此处动词用原形，故填be；proud；of。
17．在公众场合你不可以大声说话。
You can’t speak so .
【答案】 loudly in public
【详解】根据中英文对比可知，第一空应填副词loudly“大声地”修饰动词“speak”，第二、三空应填介词短语in public“在公共场合”作地点状语。故填loudly；in；public。
18．他们不敢告诉老师真相。
They the teacher the truth.
【答案】 dare not tell
【详解】“dare do sth”意为“敢于做某事”，“dare”为情态动词，后接动词原形，否定应该在“dare”后加“not”；“tell”意为“告诉”。故填dare；not；tell。
19．我过去在学校里不受欢迎。
I in school.
【答案】didn’t use to be popular
【详解】“过去常常做某事”used to do sth；根据汉语可知，这里是否定句，要借助助动词didn’t完成，其后动词变回原形；“受欢迎的”popular。故填didn’t use to be popular。
三、句子/对话改错
请从A、B、C中选出错误选项填在括号内，并将正确答案填写在横线上。
20．Have,A you given,B up to smoke,C？
21．The old,A man was interesting,B in,C the old film.
22．I interviewed,A an,B 18 years old,C boy yesterday afternoon.
23．I believed,A that he used to have,B difficulty,C in his study.
24．It was exact,A what I wanted to tell,B you.Don't,C you believe me？
【答案】20．C smoking 21．B interested 22．C 18yearold 23．C difficulties 24．A exactly
【解析】20．C smoking
give up doing sth放弃做某事，故此处用动名词，故把C处的to smoke改为smoking。
21．B interested
be interested in“对……感兴趣”，故此处把B处的interesting改为interested。
22．C 18 –year-old
此处作为定语修饰名词boy，故用连字符连接单数名词，故把C处的18 years old改为18- years- old。
23．C difficulties
difficulty“困难”是不可数名词；“困难的事”是可数名词。此处表示他在学习上有一些困难的事，故用复数形式。因此把C处的difficulty改为difficulties。
24．A exactly
修饰动词was，故用副词，因此把A处的exact改为exactly。
四、将所给单词连成句子
25．I, to, used, short, be
.
【答案】I used to be short
【详解】根据所给标点可知应为陈述句句式，分析所给单词，I作主语；used to be过去是；short作表语。故填I used to be short“我以前很矮”。
26．how, in, he, be, public, taught, to, polite, me
.
【答案】He taught me how to be polite in public
【详解】短语teach sb. sth.表示教给某人……；这里是疑问词+to do的形式；how to be polite in public
表示在公共场合如何礼貌。根据题意，故填He taught me how to be polite in public。
27．foot, he, goes, school, seldom, to, on
.
【答案】He seldom goes to school on foot
【详解】句意：他很少步行上学。根据句末标点“.”可知是陈述句。he单数第三人称，动词需用三单形式；goes to school去上学；on foot步行；seldom很少，否定副词。根据句意结构，可知填He seldom goes to school on foot。
28．wear，she，use，did，to，glasses
29．shy，not，she，anymore，is
30．seems，has，lot，a，changed，it，that，she
31．my，caused，problems，seldom，any，brother
32．that，he，was，exactly，what，needed
【答案】28．Did she use to wear glasses 29．She is not shy anymore． 30．It seems that she has changed a lot． 31．My brother seldom caused any problems． 32．That was exactly what he needed．
【解析】28．根据所给单词，本题可组成一般过去时态的一般疑问句“她过去戴眼镜吗？”,谓语动词使用原形use。did一般过去时态的助动词；she 人称代词，她, 在句中可作主语; 固定搭配used to +动词原形，过去常常；wear glasses戴眼镜。所以答案为：Did she use to wear glasses
29．根据所给单词，本题可组成一般现在时态的陈述句“她不再害羞了”。she 人称代词，她，可作主语; is是，be动词；固定搭配not...anymore, 意为“不再”；shy形容词，害羞的，在句中作表语。所以答案为：She is not shy anymore．
30．根据所给单词，本题可组成句型：It seems that+句子。she人称代词， 她，可作主语; has changed现在完成时态的谓语动词；a lot副词短语，修饰谓语动词。所以答案为：It seems that she has changed a lot．
31．根据所给单词，本题可组成一般过去时态的陈述句。my brother 我弟弟；可作主语; caused谓语动词，造成；seldom副词，很少；修饰谓语动词；any problems.任何问题。所以答案为：My brother seldom caused any problems.
32．根据所给单词，本题可组成一般过去时态的陈述句 “那正是他所需要的” 。that作主语；was 是，be动词； exactly副词，恰恰、确切地；what he needed他所需要的，在句中作表语。所以答案为:That was exactly what he needed．
1．上周你们班召开了一次“告别陋习，走向文明”的主题班会，班会上老师让你们谈谈身边同学的变化。请你根据表格里的内容，写一篇有关你的同学李华的文章。词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
过去的表现 现在的表现
经常和同学打架 与同学相处融洽
花很多时间玩电脑游戏 积极参加各种活动
经常吃垃圾食品 健康的生活习惯
在课堂上吃东西、睡觉 考试不及格 认真听讲，按时完成作业 各门功课都学得很好
Li Hua is my classmate. He has made great progress this term. In the past,
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[思路解读]：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根据所给表格里的内容写一篇关于李华的变化的作文。
[写作步骤]：本文时态应采用一般过去时和一般现在时；人称以第三人称为主。写作时注意不同时态的正确运用，保证无语法，单词上的错误，逻辑清晰，注意语言的规范性。
[满分作文]
Li Hua is my classmate. He has made great progress this term. In the past, he always fought with others. He used to spend time playing computer games. And he often ate junk food. In class, he either ate or slept. He could never pass any exam.
But now, he has changed a lot. He can get on well with other students. He takes an active part in all kinds of activities. He has healthy living habits. He always listens to the teachers carefully in class and finishes his homework on time. And he often does well in all subjects. We all like him now.
2．进入初三后，你在生活、学习、爱好等很多方面都有了一些变化。当然也会遇到很多困难。而每个人面对困难时的态度会有所不同。你怎样面对你的困难呢 请以“Believe yourself , and you will win .” 为题，写一篇自己在学习或生活中遇到困难并战胜它们的短文。
要求：100词左右，要切合题意，内容完整，书写规范。
提示：1. 你遇到了什么困难
2. 你是如何克服困难的
3. 你体会到了什么
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[思路解读]：该题目属于记叙文写作，提纲类作文。需要写具体的一个事例，叙述战胜困难的过程，以及你在战胜困难时的感受。
[写作步骤]：本文应该用第一人称来叙述具体的事例；时态采用一般过去时为主，在叙述现在感想时，需要使用一般现在时，注意时态的转换；描述事例时，场景应描写细致；并且事情发生的时间、起因和过程等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。写完以后，注意检查，保证单词拼写、语法和标点使用正确。
[满分作文]
Believe in yourself, and you will win.
One night in August when I was doing my physics exercise, I met a difficult problem. Forty minutes passed I still couldn’t work it out. The answer was on the last few pages of the book. How I wanted to see the answer! But our teacher told us to do our homework by ourselves! My sister was in Senior Two. Then she wanted to help me. But I refused. I studied the note and read my textbook again and again. Finally, from one example my teacher gave us, I worked the problem out! How happy I was! Now friends, always remember “Believe in yourself, and you will win.”
3．写作要求：根据提示，简要介绍你的朋友李连的成长变化。词数：60~80。
1）爱好：以前喜欢打乒乓球、看电视和聊天；现在喜欢弹钢琴、看书和散步；
2）外貌：过去个子矮，短发；现在个子高多了，长发；
3）性格：过去外向，现在有些内向。
要求：不要逐字逐句翻译，内容要合理通顺。
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[思路解读]：题目要求根据提示内容，介绍朋友李连的成长变化，要包含爱好、外貌和性格三方面。
[写作步骤]：写作时要以第三人称为主，时态结合一般现在时和一般过去时，要使用used to do sth.，but now等来体现明显的今昔对比。要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
[满分作文]：
Li Lian is my good friend. He is now different from what he used to be like. He used to like to play ping-pong. But now he enjoys playing the piano. He used to watch TV or chat with others after supper, but now he usually reads books or has a walk. He is much taller than before. He used to have short hair, but now it’s long enough. He is a little quiet now, and not outgoing any longer.
4．某英文报举办以“家庭巨变”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下表提示，以“Changes in Mr. Zhang’s family”为题，写一篇征文稿介绍张先生家二十年来的变化。
二十年前 现在
房子 小而旧 又大又新
通讯方式 写信 使用电话或手机
交通方式 步行或骑自行车 开私家车
生活 贫穷但安宁 富裕但忙碌
要求：
1. 根据表格内容进行写作，可适当发挥；
2. 灵活运用本单元所学的used to结构；
3. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Changes in Mr. Zhang’s family
Great changes have taken place in Mr. Zhang’s family over the past twenty years.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
[思路解读]：本文是一篇话题作文。以“张先生家的变化”为题，介绍张先生家二十年来的变化。
[写作步骤]：本文采用第三人称，描述过去的情况用一般过去时，描述现在的情况用一般现在时。从房子，通讯方式，交通方式，生活这四个方面介绍。注意保持主谓一致，逻辑性要强，句子要通顺。
[满分作文]
Changes in Mr. Zhang’s family
Great changes have taken place in Mr. Zhang’s family over the past twenty years.
They used to live in a small and old house. But now they have moved into a big and new apartment.
Mr. Zhang used to write letters to his friends, but now he uses a telephone or a mobile phone. Mr. Zhang has his own car and it’s easier for his family to travel. But they used to walk or ride bikes somewhere.
Mr. Zhang’s life used to be poor but quiet. But now things are different. He lives a rich but busy life.
5．时光荏苒，转眼大家已经步入九年级。回想过去两年的初中生活，你是否觉得自己改变了许多？以“Some Changes in My Life”为题写一篇英语短文。谈一谈自从上初中后，你在哪些方面发生了变化。
提示：1. What did you use to be
2. What are you like now
3. How do you feel about these changes
要求：字数80词左右，包括以上内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
[思路解读]：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Some Changes in My Life”为题，根据要点提示内容，写一篇英语短文。谈一谈自从上初中后，你在哪些方面发生了变化，以及你对这些变化的感悟；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]：本文主要采用第一、第三人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时和现在完成时，辅以一般过去时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
[满分作文]
Some Changes in My Life
How time flies! It has been two years since I entered the middle school. I find that there have been two main changes in my life during the past two years.
First of all, I have become better at dealing with others. It used to be difficult for me to make new friends. Then I found out the reasons. Now, I have a lot of friends. Besides, I have become much more confident. In the past, I was worried that I couldn’t do well in my lessons. However, with the help of my teachers and classmates, now I do well in all the subjects.
I like these changes. They have made my life better than before.
1．（2022·黑龙江·统考中考真题）转眼间，你已经是一名九年级学生了。你还记得刚升入初中时的自己是什么样子吗？这两年在你身上发生了哪些变化？请以“My changes”为题写一篇英语作文，请你根据下面的要求完成这篇作文。
要求:
1. 写你三个方面的变化，用上used to结构；
2. 紧扣作文题目、语言表达准确、语意通顺连贯；
3. 词数90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
My changes
I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot. First, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
[思路解读]：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“我的改变”写一篇短文，要求从三个方面描写自己的变化。
[写作步骤]：本文采用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。本文分为两段式：第一段从身形，英语学习以及性格方面介绍自己的变化；最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
[满分作文]
My changes
I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot. First, I used to be thin, but now I am a little fatter. I used to have curly hair, but now I have short straight hair, because I am busy with my study. Second, I have made much progress in English, I used to be weak in it. But with my English teacher’s help, now I often get good scores on my English exams. What’s more, I’m more outgoing than I used to be. I used to be afraid of speaking in front of people. But now I can give a speech in public. I’ve also made many friends.
These are my changes. What about yours
2．（2021·贵州黔西·统考中考真题）假如你是振兴中学的学生。名叫张华。你校英文网站“Zhengxing English website”想报道近年来同学们家乡的变化。请你以“Changes in my hometown”为题对你的家乡进行一次采访，并将你的所见所闻用英文写一篇报道。向学校英文网站投稿。
内容包括：
1.家乡过去的情况（举2个例子）；
2.家乡现在的变化（举2个例子）；
3.乡村振兴开展以来你的感想和打算（2点 ）；
写作要求：
1.结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰 。
2.文中不得出现任何真实的人名和学校名称等信息 。
3.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数 。
参考词汇：
乡村振兴：rural revitalization
乡村致富：make our country rich and stronger
Changes in my hometown
We had a great victory in poverty relief（脱贫）in my hometown according to the local news report. A few days ago, I went back to my hometown.
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[思路解读]：该题目属于应用文——报道的写作，在写作时应承接短文开头，根据汉语提示的内容，叙述家乡的变化。内容包括：家乡过去的情况、家乡现在的变化以及乡村振兴开展以来自己的感想和打算等。
[写作步骤]：本文应该用第三人称为主来叙述内容，时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时为主，在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证提示内容完整，条理清晰。
[满分作文]：
Changes in my hometown
We had a great victory in poverty relief in my hometown according to the local news report. A few days ago, I went back to my hometown. I found our hometown has changed a lot. People’s life becomes much better.
In the past, most of the people lived in old and dark houses. And the rivers were very dirty. People had to work on foot or by bike. The roads were very narrow, too. And the living conditions were very bad.
But now, people have already lived in high and bright buildings. The rivers and streams are clear. People usually work by bus or by car. On the other hand, the living conditions and the environment are not only comfortable but also very clean.
Thanks to the government’s efforts, my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful. We should try our best to make our country rich and stronger
3．（2022·江苏泰州·统考中考真题）我们在变化中成长，成长让我们的人生充满意义。回首三年初中时光，我们在学习、思想、性格、生活等方面发生了很多变化。你所在学校公众号的英语写作栏目正在开展“我的成长”征文活动，请分享你初中三年中的成长故事，具体讲述其中一个变化。
要点如下：
1.变化是什么？
2.变化过程是什么？
3.你从中得到了什么启发？
要求：
1.必须含有所有要点，并适当拓展；
2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
3.词数100左右。
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[思路解读]：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示问题，分享自己初中生活以来的一个变化，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍变化是什么；第二段介绍变化过程是什么；第三段介绍从中得到了什么启发。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
[满分作文]
We grow up in change. Growth makes our life full of meaning. Looking back on the three years of junior high school, I have experienced many changes in my study, thoughts, personality, life and so on. The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading.
When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me books. Gradually, I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to enjoy my free time.
Books are my friends. And they will benefit me a lot.
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