中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
Unit 5 What are the shirts made of?
单元写作指导与演练
近三年考情分析
话题 考查热度
介绍产品 ★★☆☆☆
本单元以“中国制造的东西”为话题,围绕某种产品的材质、产地、用途及特殊性等信息而展开。与之相关的话题作文通常会涉及民间艺术以及文化传承。介绍特色产品。本话题适合记叙说明两种题材相结合。写作此类话题作文时,时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时,行文中注意准确捕捉写作的“精髓”,表达被描述的事物时,有可能要用到被动语态结构,写作时要立足事实,表达真情实感。
“总分总法”写产品介绍类的作文
1.总起点明产品的名称;
2.详细地描写产品的特征样式、质量、性能;
3.总结评价。
体裁:说明文
时态:介绍产品用一般现在时
人称:第三人称。
【词汇积累】
筷子、叉子、上衣、手套、玻璃
棉、钢、手提包、材料;生产,
加工,产品,本地,加热,制成
手工,屯成,覆盖 ,日常
活泼,出名,柔软,强壮,有趣,
流畅,真实,小,可爱,有用,乐于助人
【句式积累】
1. 我的城镇/国家以…而闻名。
2. 越来越受欢迎。
3. 这样更方便。
4.由…制成。
5. 因…而出名。
6.…用于
7.…之所以特别是因为。
8. 中国以…而闻名…
9. 中国如此擅长
10. …希望将来…
11. 这些通常试图表明。。。
它们被视为…的象征
【万能写作模板】
模板
引出话题Almost all people like...
外形介绍:They often have special designs.They are usually made of ...
用途方面: People used ... to....Today, they are used for ...
总结话题:In all,... make us strong and bring us happiness.
What are some special things that your town/city is famous for These can be food,artwork or
any other products.Write a paragraph about the product. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
一、完成句子
1.中国每一个不同的地方都有它自己独特的传统艺术形式。
Each different part of China has its own of traditional art.
2.汉语在全世界应用得越来越广泛。
Chinese is used all over the world.
3.天目湖以其开阔的空间和优美的环境而闻名。
Tianmu Lake .
4.袁隆平被认为是世界上最伟大的农业科学家之一。(regard)
Yuan Longping one of the greatest agricultural scientists in the world.
5.那带灯的鞋被用在黑暗的环境中以便看得见。
The shoes with lights are for in the dark.
6.叶子长好后被手工采摘,送去加工,包装后送往各地。
When the leaves are ready, they are picked by and then are sent for processing. The tea is and sent to different places.
7.这些女衬衣是棉质的,它们是中国生产的。
These blouses are of , and they were made in China.
8.孔明灯被视作幸福和美好祝愿的鲜明象征。
Sky lanterns as bright symbols of happiness and good wishes.
9.剪纸是一门古老的艺术。(cut)
is an ancient art.
10.在中国新疆,广泛地种植棉花。
Cotton in Xinjiang, China.
二、将所给单词连成句子
11.the handbag, what, of, made, is
12.you’ve, what, made, blouse, beautiful, a
!
13.made,are,your,of,cotton,shirts
14.tea leaves, picked, hand, are, by
.
15.made of, skirts, your, cotton, are
三、语篇翻译
阅读下面的短文,将划线部分译成英文或中文。
Tea culture is varied (使多样化) in different countries by the way tea is made and drunk, and by the places for tea drinking. 1. For example, some people like drinking tea at home, while some like drinking it at tea houses.
As part of culture, tea is commonly seen at social activities. Afternoon tea is a British custom. 2. 喝下午茶时, 家人或者朋友们能互相沟通。And in China, tea has remained a way of daily life.
Drinking tea has a lot of advantages. 3. It helps people relax and lose weight, and reduces the risk of heart disease.
4. 中国人善于用茶使其他食物变得美味。It was served as a medicine in ancient times. Now it is not just a kind of drink popular with many people, but also excellent seasoning (调味品). Here are two delicious dishes made with tea.
Tea Eggs:You can find them cooked and sold in street markets in almost every city in China.
Dragon Well Tea Shrimp(龙井虾仁): It’s one of the best-knowndishes in Hangzhou.
Before you drink tea, please check the following tips:
◆ Drink hot tea.
◆ The best time to drink tea is between meals. It is bad for your stomach if you drink tea just before meals, during meals or soon after meals.
◆5.Drinking too much strong tea is bad for your health.
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1.假如你是李华,你手工编织了一些中国结(Chinese knot),想让开网店的美国朋友Tom代卖,请以此给他写一封信,要点包括:1. 外观;2. 象征意义;3. 价格。词数100左右。
Dear Tom,
I am Li Hua. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2.根据以下表格中的内容,写一篇不少于80词的英文短文。
mobile phone
inventor Martin Cooper
time 20世纪70年代
be widely used in our daily life 1. 通话;2. 拍照;3. …
your opinion and reasons 至少两条…
…… ……
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.你校的校报“中国传统文化”栏目下期拟刊登一篇介绍“中国传统民间艺术——面塑”的文章,你打算投稿,请你根据下面表格中的内容写一篇短文介绍一下面塑,然后给该栏目投稿。
中国传统民间艺术——面塑 材料:面粉(flour)、糯米粉(glutinous rice flour)为主料,混合不同的颜料
工具:剪刀、刀、梳子(comb)等
外形:植物、动物、可爱的孩子或神话故事中的人物
用途:供食用或欣赏;用于节日或别的庆典活动中
意义:已成为中国文化和民间艺术重要的一部分
要求:1.内容应包括表格中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.语言表达要准确,语言要通顺、连贯;
3.不少于100词,短文的开头已给出,但不计入总词数。
Dough sculpture is one of the most popular traditional folk arts in China._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.请以“How is tea produced” 为题写一篇短文介绍你家乡的茶叶的生产情况。
1. 家乡以茶叶闻名; 2. 简述茶叶种植、采摘、生产的过程; 3.茶叶的好处。
How is tea produced
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.每个人都有自己喜欢的衣服,请根据提示语,以“My favorite__________”为题,写一篇短文,介绍一件你最喜爱的衣服。提示:
1. What does it look like
2. Why do you like it
3. When do you wear it
4. What is it made of/from
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1.(2019·湖北随州·中考真题)书面表达
茶是中国传统饮食文化的组成部分,是生活中不可或缺的饮品。作为中学生,我们应了解茶并传播茶文化。请根据以下要点提示,写一篇英语短文。
要点提示:1.历史悠久,约5000年前神农首次发现茶可以饮用;
2.种植广泛,安溪和杭州尤以茶闻名:
3.喝茶有很多好处:有利健康,醒脑提神等;
4.世界各地许多人喜欢喝茶并收集茶具。
写作要求:1.文章必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥以使行文连贯;
2.词数:80词左右;(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数)
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
China is famous for tea. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.(2019·广东深圳·统考中考真题)书面表达
假设你是李华,你的英国朋友 Tony 对"中国红"一词很感兴趣,想了解"中国红"在中国人日常生活中的体现,请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助他了解.
地位 最受欢迎的颜色之一
代表 幸福,可以带来好运
使用场所 婚礼,春节等
表达方式 剪纸,中国结,红包,灯笼
提示词:婚礼 wedding,中国结 Chinese Knot,红包 red packet, 代表 stand for
Dear Tony,
It's great to receive your letter. I'm writing to tell you something about Chinese red._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.
Yours,
Li Hua
3.(2022·山东枣庄·统考中考真题)假如你是李华,你的笔友Mark将要来你家做客,向你寻问如何在中国举止得当。请根据下面的提示,给Mark写一封80~100词的回信。把答案写在答题卡上相应位置。(可能用到的单词:chopsticks筷子)
1. 见面礼仪。 2. 餐桌礼仪。 3. 外出礼仪。
Dear Mark,
I am glad to hear that you are coming to China soon. I’d like to give you some suggestions on how to behave properly in China.
When you come to my house, __________________________________________________________
When you are eating with us, __________________________________________________________
Before you go outside, __________________________________________________________
A safe trip to you and I hope to meet you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
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Unit 5 What are the shirts made of?
单元写作指导与演练
近三年考情分析
话题 考查热度
介绍产品 ★★☆☆☆
本单元以“中国制造的东西”为话题,围绕某种产品的材质、产地、用途及特殊性等信息而展开。与之相关的话题作文通常会涉及民间艺术以及文化传承。介绍特色产品。本话题适合记叙说明两种题材相结合。写作此类话题作文时,时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时,行文中注意准确捕捉写作的“精髓”,表达被描述的事物时,有可能要用到被动语态结构,写作时要立足事实,表达真情实感。
“总分总法”写产品介绍类的作文
1.总起点明产品的名称;
2.详细地描写产品的特征样式、质量、性能;
3.总结评价。
体裁:说明文
时态:介绍产品用一般现在时
人称:第三人称。
【词汇积累】
筷子、叉子、上衣、手套、玻璃
chopstick fork blouse gloves glass
棉、钢、手提包、材料;生产,
cotton steel handbag material produce
加工,产品,本地,加热,制成
process,product,local,heat,be made of,
手工,屯成,覆盖 ,日常
by hand, tun into,cover. . .with,everyday,
活泼,出名,柔软,强壮,有趣,
lively, be known for, soft, strong,interesting,
流畅,真实,小,可爱,有用,乐于助人
smooth, real,small,cute, useful,helpful
【句式积累】
1. 我的城镇/国家以…而闻名。
My town/city/country is famous for. . .
2. 越来越受欢迎。
. . .is becoming more and more popular.
3. 这样更方便。
It's more convenient for. . .
4.由…制成。
. . .is made of/from/by/in. . .
5. 因…而出名。
. . .is/are known for. . .
6.…用于
. . .is/are used for. . .
7.…之所以特别是因为。
. . .is/are special because. .
8. 中国以…而闻名…
China is famous for…
9. 中国如此擅长
It’s great that China is so good at...·
10. …希望将来…
…wish that in the future·will …
11. 这些通常试图表明。。。
These usually try to show....
它们被视为…的象征
They are seen as symbols of ...
【万能写作模板】
模板
引出话题Almost all people like...
外形介绍:They often have special designs.They are usually made of ...
用途方面: People used ... to....Today, they are used for ...
总结话题:In all,... make us strong and bring us happiness.
What are some special things that your town/city is famous for These can be food,artwork or
any other products.Write a paragraph about the product. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【佳作欣赏】
Dear Marcus,
How are you doing these days I'm excited to hear from you. I'd like to tell you something about kites in my city.
My city, Weifang in Shandong Province, is famous for its kites. An international kite festival is held here in April every year. Kites are loved by lots of people because they rise into the air with people's wishes for a better life. They are usually made of bamboo, paper or cloth or plastic and string. There are all kinds of kites and they are often painted with colorful drawings. And kites here often have special designs. People used kites to send a message in the old days. Today, they are used for fun and exercise.
Welcome to my city! I hope you will fly a kite here!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
亲爱的马库斯,
你最近怎么样?听到你的消息我很兴奋。我想告诉你一些关于我所在城市风筝的事情。
我所在的山东省潍坊市以风筝闻名。每年4月在这里举行国际风筝节。风筝受到许多人的喜爱,因为它们带着人们对美好生活的愿望升空。它们通常由竹子、纸或布或塑料和绳子制成。有各种各样的风筝,它们经常被画上彩色的图画。这里的风筝通常有特殊的设计。过去人们用风筝来传递信息。今天,它们被用来娱乐和锻炼。
欢迎来到我的城市!我希望你在这里放风筝!
最美好的祝福!
你的
李华
一、完成句子
1.中国每一个不同的地方都有它自己独特的传统艺术形式。
Each different part of China has its own of traditional art.
【答案】special form(s)
【详解】“独特的”为special;“形式”为form,此处单复数均可,故填special form(s)。
2.汉语在全世界应用得越来越广泛。
Chinese is used all over the world.
【答案】more and more widely
【详解】根据中英文对照,widely“广泛地”,副词修饰动词;more and more widely表示“越来越广泛”。故填more and more widely。
3.天目湖以其开阔的空间和优美的环境而闻名。
Tianmu Lake .
【答案】is famous for its open space and beautiful environment/is known for its open space and beautiful environment/is well-known for its open space and beautiful environment
【详解】因……而闻名be famous/known/well-known for,由句意知此句为一般现在时,主语“Tianmu Lake”为第三人称单数,be动词用is;它的its;开阔的空间open space,space作“空间”解为不可数名词,优美的环境beautiful environment,均作介词for的宾语。故填is famous/known/well-known for its open space and beautiful environment。
4.袁隆平被认为是世界上最伟大的农业科学家之一。(regard)
Yuan Longping one of the greatest agricultural scientists in the world.
【答案】is regarded as
【详解】空处缺少“被认为”,结合提示词可知,其对应的英文表达是be regarded as。句子是一般现在时,主语Yuan Longping是第三人称单数,be动词为is。故填is regarded as。
5.那带灯的鞋被用在黑暗的环境中以便看得见。
The shoes with lights are for in the dark.
【答案】 used seeing
【详解】be used for“用于……”,所以第一个空填used;see“看见”,因为空前有介词for,所以用动词ing形式,第二个空填seeing。故填used;seeing。
6.叶子长好后被手工采摘,送去加工,包装后送往各地。
When the leaves are ready, they are picked by and then are sent for processing. The tea is and sent to different places.
【答案】 hand packed
【详解】根据中英文对照可知,by hand表示“手工”;pack“包装”,和主语tea之间是被动关系,此处应用被动语态结构,动词用过去分词。故填hand;packed。
7.这些女衬衣是棉质的,它们是中国生产的。
These blouses are of , and they were made in China.
【答案】 made cotton
【详解】对比中英文,英文句子缺少“棉质的”表达。be made of“由……制成”,cotton“棉花”,名词作of的宾语。故填made;cotton。
8.孔明灯被视作幸福和美好祝愿的鲜明象征。
Sky lanterns as bright symbols of happiness and good wishes.
【答案】 are seen/regarded/considered
【详解】根据中英文对照可知,空处缺“被视作”的英文翻译。be seen as、be regarded as、be considered as均意为“被视作”,主语“Sky lanterns”为复数,题干阐述了客观事实,应用一般现在时。故填are;seen/regarded/considered。
9.剪纸是一门古老的艺术。(cut)
is an ancient art.
【答案】Paper cutting
【详解】paper cutting“剪纸”,在句中作主语。故填Paper cutting。
10.在中国新疆,广泛地种植棉花。
Cotton in Xinjiang, China.
【答案】is widely grown
【详解】根据中英文对照,grow“种植”,是动词,主语和动词之间是被动关系,结合句意可知此处是指一个事实,应用一般现在时的被动语态,主语是不可数名词,be动词用is;widely“广泛地”,副词修饰动词。故填is widely grown。
二、将所给单词连成句子
11.the handbag, what, of, made, is
【答案】What is the handbag made of
【详解】根据标点提示可知,本句是疑问句,分析所给单词,疑问词what放句首并大写首字母;the handbag作主语;be made of“由……制成”,is提到主语前。故填What is the handbag made of“这个手提包是什么做的”。
12.you’ve, what, made, blouse, beautiful, a
!
【答案】What a beautiful blouse you’ve made
【详解】根据标点可知,句子是以what开头的感叹句,符合结构:what a/an +adj+ n+主谓,a beautiful blouse“一件漂亮的衬衫”,you’ve made“你制作”,是句子的主语和谓语。故填What a beautiful blouse you’ve made“你做的衬衫真漂亮”。
13.made,are,your,of,cotton,shirts
【答案】Are your shirts made of cotton
【详解】根据所给词和标点可知,该句为一般疑问句。be动词are应大写首字母放在句首,短语be made of表示“由……制成”;your shirts“你的衬衫”,作主语;cotton“棉花”,作宾语。故填Are your shirts made of cotton“你的衬衫是棉的吗”。
14.tea leaves, picked, hand, are, by
.
【答案】Tea leaves are picked by hand
【详解】根据标点提示可知,本句是陈述句,分析所给单词,tea leaves作主语,are picked作谓语,by hand作状语。故填Tea leaves are picked by hand“茶叶是手工采摘的”。
15.made of, skirts, your, cotton, are
【答案】Are your skirts made of cotton
【详解】根据所给标点提示,是一般疑问句,直接把be动词提前,短语be made of...“由……构成”, your skirts“你的裙子”,作主语,是复数,be动词用are;cotton“棉花”,作宾语;故答案为:Are your skirts made of cotton“你的裙子是棉的吗”。
三、语篇翻译
阅读下面的短文,将划线部分译成英文或中文。
Tea culture is varied (使多样化) in different countries by the way tea is made and drunk, and by the places for tea drinking. 1. For example, some people like drinking tea at home, while some like drinking it at tea houses.
As part of culture, tea is commonly seen at social activities. Afternoon tea is a British custom. 2. 喝下午茶时, 家人或者朋友们能互相沟通。And in China, tea has remained a way of daily life.
Drinking tea has a lot of advantages. 3. It helps people relax and lose weight, and reduces the risk of heart disease.
4. 中国人善于用茶使其他食物变得美味。It was served as a medicine in ancient times. Now it is not just a kind of drink popular with many people, but also excellent seasoning (调味品). Here are two delicious dishes made with tea.
Tea Eggs:You can find them cooked and sold in street markets in almost every city in China.
Dragon Well Tea Shrimp(龙井虾仁): It’s one of the best-knowndishes in Hangzhou.
Before you drink tea, please check the following tips:
◆ Drink hot tea.
◆ The best time to drink tea is between meals. It is bad for your stomach if you drink tea just before meals, during meals or soon after meals.
◆5.Drinking too much strong tea is bad for your health.
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【答案】16.例如,一些人喜欢在家喝茶而一些人喜欢在茶馆喝茶。 17.Family and friends can communicate with each other while drinking afternoon tea. 18.它帮助人们放松、减肥和减少心脏病的风险。 19.Chinese people are good at using tea to make other food delicious. 20.喝太多的浓茶对你的健康不好。
【导语】本文主要介绍了不同国家的茶文化不同,茶作为文化的一部分,与历史、健康、教育、交流等有密切的关系。
16.分析句子可知,For example意为“例如”;some people意为“一些人”;“like drinking tea at home”意为“喜欢在家喝茶”;while意为“然而”,表转折;tea houses意为“茶馆”。故填:例如,一些人喜欢在家喝茶而一些人喜欢在茶馆喝茶。
17.分析句子可知,“喝下午茶时”为“while drinking afternoon tea”,为时间状语; “家人或者朋友们”为“Family and friends”,作主语;“与某人交流”为“communicate with sb.”;“互相”为“each other”。故填Family and friends can communicate with each other while drinking afternoon tea.
18.分析句子可知,help sb do sth意为“帮助某人做某事”;relax意为“放松”;lose weight意为“减肥”;reduces意为“减少”;the risk of heart disease意为“心脏病的风险”。故填:它帮助人们放松、减肥和减少心脏病的风险。
19.分析句子可知,“中国人”为“Chinese people”;“擅长做某事”为“be good at doing sth.”;“茶”为tea;“让某物变得美味”为make sth. delicious;“其他食物”为other food。故填Chinese people are good at using tea to make other food delicious.
20.分析句子可知,Drinking too much意为“喝太多”;strong tea意为“浓茶”;be bad for意为“对……有坏处”;your health意为“你的健康”。故填:喝太多的浓茶对你的健康不好。
1.假如你是李华,你手工编织了一些中国结(Chinese knot),想让开网店的美国朋友Tom代卖,请以此给他写一封信,要点包括:1. 外观;2. 象征意义;3. 价格。词数100左右。
Dear Tom,
I am Li Hua. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
[思路解读]:该题是写一封信,题目要求以“李华”的身份给美国朋友Tom写一封信,让Tom帮忙代卖中国结。写作时要注意书信格式。
[写作步骤]:本文应该采用第一人称来写作文本;时态采用一般现在时为主;第一段要简单提出自己的请求;第二段写出中国结的外貌、象征意义以及价格。写作时要注意叙述完整,保证条理清晰。
[满分作文]:
Dear Tom,
I am Li Hua. I myself made some Chinese knots. Can you help me sell them online They are very beautiful.
The knots are red, neat and grand. As we know, Chinese culture has influenced the world for a long period of time. And Chinese knots are one of the best handicrafts which represent China. I think there will be many people buying them. Also, Chinese knots mean good luck so they are very good to be gifts. These small handicrafts are not expensive. You can sell them at the price of 1 to 2 dollars.
I hope you can give me the help.
Yours,
Li Hua
2.根据以下表格中的内容,写一篇不少于80词的英文短文。
mobile phone
inventor Martin Cooper
time 20世纪70年代
be widely used in our daily life 1. 通话;2. 拍照;3. …
your opinion and reasons 至少两条…
…… ……
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[思路解读]:这篇作文要求考生根据表格提示的内容要点,写一篇短文介绍手机的发明者、发明时间及手机用途,并谈论如何合理地利用手机,属于给材料作文。
[写作步骤]:审题可知,本文宜采用三段式:第一段介绍手机发明时间及发明者,第二段介绍手机的用途,第三段谈论如何合理地利用手机。人称用第一、三人称,时态以一般现在时为主,以一般过去时为辅。行文注意主谓一致和上下文的过度,符合逻辑关系,保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
[满分作文]
Mobile phones are without doubt one of the most useful inventions. It was invented by an American called Martin Cooper in the 1970s.
I should say that the mobile phones have really changed our lives. First, it's more convenient to communicate with others by using the mobile phones. Second, people are used to taking photos with mobile phones instead of cameras. And we can even go shopping, listen to music and watch movies on the phone. Third, we can easily learn something useful by surfing online. In this way, it helps us study.
In my opinion, we teenagers should be allowed to use mobile phones, but not on weekdays. And it's necessary to use them in the right way with the help of our teachers and parents.
3.你校的校报“中国传统文化”栏目下期拟刊登一篇介绍“中国传统民间艺术——面塑”的文章,你打算投稿,请你根据下面表格中的内容写一篇短文介绍一下面塑,然后给该栏目投稿。
中国传统民间艺术——面塑 材料:面粉(flour)、糯米粉(glutinous rice flour)为主料,混合不同的颜料
工具:剪刀、刀、梳子(comb)等
外形:植物、动物、可爱的孩子或神话故事中的人物
用途:供食用或欣赏;用于节日或别的庆典活动中
意义:已成为中国文化和民间艺术重要的一部分
要求:1.内容应包括表格中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.语言表达要准确,语言要通顺、连贯;
3.不少于100词,短文的开头已给出,但不计入总词数。
Dough sculpture is one of the most popular traditional folk arts in China.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
[思路解读]:本文是一篇材料作文,文中主要介绍中国传统民间艺术——面塑,写作时要按照题目中提出的要求描写,要注意详略得当,要选用恰当的词汇和短语,可以适当发挥。
[写作步骤]:本文用第三人称来叙述;时态上主要采用一般现在时;注意文章描写要具体,分清主次,思路清晰,语言表达要准确,用词恰当,意思通俗易懂。
[满分作文]:
Dough sculpture is one of the most popular traditional folk arts in China.
The sculptures are made of flour and glutinous rice mixed with different kinds of paints. They are completed by hand and by using tools like scissors, knives and combs. They are made into different shapes. The most common ones are plants, animals, cute children or characters from Chinese fairy tales or historical stories. What’s more, the artists always make them colorful and lively. People can eat and enjoy them. And sometimes they are used at festivals or other celebrations. Dough sculpture has become an important part of Chinese culture and traditional folk art. It is loved by Chinese people and other people around the world.
4.请以“How is tea produced” 为题写一篇短文介绍你家乡的茶叶的生产情况。
1. 家乡以茶叶闻名; 2. 简述茶叶种植、采摘、生产的过程; 3.茶叶的好处。
How is tea produced
[思路解读]:这篇作文要求我们以How is tea produced为题目,写一篇作文介绍自己家乡生产茶叶的情况。题目中给出了短文中的主要内容,应包括三个部分:首先介绍自己的家乡以茶叶闻名,这个内容用一句话点明即可;第二部分简述茶叶种植、采摘、生产的过程,具体的内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力,进行详细的介绍;最后介绍茶叶的好处,这部分的具体内容也应需要学生自主补充。写作时应注意合理安排三部分内容所占的篇幅,分清主次。通过审题可知,这篇短文应使用一般现在时来叙述,注意谓语动词的正确形式。同时注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的,不能逐词翻译,应从句子的整体结构出发,写完整的句子。如可以使用常见的主谓宾或主系表结构,这样的句子结构简单,叙述清晰、明了。穿插使用并列句或复合句,调整文章结构,提升作文档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯。
[写作步骤]:这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求介绍了自己家乡生产茶叶的情况。首先短文内容完整,包括了题目中要求的所有信息,并对一些细节进行补充,使文章更加丰富、充实。短文从三个方面进行介绍,首先是引出文章的话题;然后重点介绍茶叶从种子到采摘再到生产的过程;最后简单介绍了茶叶的好处。整篇文章的结构很清楚,叙述主次分明。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,用词准确。词汇、短语和句型都符合英语的表达习惯。句子结构以简单句为主,也使用了并列句、状语从句、被动语态等结构,句式富于变化。
[满分作文]
How is tea produced
Though our hometown is a small town, it is very famous. It’s known for tea. The tea named Anxi is very popular with people in China. But tea producing isn’t so easy. At first tea plants are grown on the sides of mountains by people and are taken good care of. When leaves are ready, they are picked by hand and then are sent for processing. After doing that, tea is packed and sent to many other countries and places around China.
Tea is good for our health. So it is very popular with people.
[高分句型]:
Though our hometown is a small town, it is very famous.、At first tea plants are grown on the sides of mountains by people and are taken good care of. 、When leaves are ready, they are picked by hand and then are sent for processing.、After doing that , tea is packed and sent to many other countries and places around China.等。
5.每个人都有自己喜欢的衣服,请根据提示语,以“My favorite__________”为题,写一篇短文,介绍一件你最喜爱的衣服。提示:
1. What does it look like
2. Why do you like it
3. When do you wear it
4. What is it made of/from
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[思路解读]:题目要求以“My favorite__________”为题,写一篇短文;要求根据提示内容介绍最喜爱的衣服。
[写作步骤]:此作文时态以一般现在时为主;采用第一人称口吻;此作文可采用2段落格式,第一段:阐述最喜欢的衣服是什么、它的外观、材质、喜欢的原因以及什么时候穿;第二段:阐述对这件衣服的感受。
[满分作文]:
My favorite T-shirt
Among all my clothes, I like one of the T-shirts best. It is blue. It is made of silk, so it’s very comfortable. I like it because I wore this T-shirt and took a photo with my best friend. It’s a special gift from him. He sent it to me last year for my 14th birthday. It makes me think of the time we two spent together. I often wear the T-shirt when I have parties with my friends.
This is my favorite T-shirt. It brings me a lot of happy memories. I truly hope my best friend will never leave me.
1.(2019·湖北随州·中考真题)书面表达
茶是中国传统饮食文化的组成部分,是生活中不可或缺的饮品。作为中学生,我们应了解茶并传播茶文化。请根据以下要点提示,写一篇英语短文。
要点提示:1.历史悠久,约5000年前神农首次发现茶可以饮用;
2.种植广泛,安溪和杭州尤以茶闻名:
3.喝茶有很多好处:有利健康,醒脑提神等;
4.世界各地许多人喜欢喝茶并收集茶具。
写作要求:1.文章必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥以使行文连贯;
2.词数:80词左右;(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数)
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
China is famous for tea. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
[思路解读]:茶是中国传统饮食文化的组成部分,是生活中不可或缺的饮品。作为中学生,我们应了解茶并传播茶文化。请根据以下要点提示,写一篇英语短文。这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态,主语是第三人称单数,注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中正确使用比较形式,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
[满分作文]
China is famous for tea.Chinese tea has a long history.It's said that Shen Nong was the first to discover tea as a drink about 5,000 years ago.Tea is produced in many different areas Anxi and Hangzhou are widely known for their tea.
There are lots of advantages of drinking tea.It's good for health.A cup of ca can make you relaxed and fresh.It seems that many people all over the world love drinking tea and collecting tea scts.
As middle school students,we should kmow about tea culture and spread it around the world.
[高分句型]:There are lots of advantages of drinking tea.It's good for health.A cup of ca can make you relaxed and fresh.It seems that many people all over the world love drinking tea and collecting tea scts.这些给文章增色不少。
2.(2019·广东深圳·统考中考真题)书面表达
假设你是李华,你的英国朋友 Tony 对"中国红"一词很感兴趣,想了解"中国红"在中国人日常生活中的体现,请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助他了解.
地位 最受欢迎的颜色之一
代表 幸福,可以带来好运
使用场所 婚礼,春节等
表达方式 剪纸,中国结,红包,灯笼
提示词:婚礼 wedding,中国结 Chinese Knot,红包 red packet, 代表 stand for
Dear Tony,
It's great to receive your letter. I'm writing to tell you something about Chinese red._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.
Yours,
Li Hua
[思路解读]:本文属于书信作文,向你的英国朋友介绍“中国红”,包括地位、代表、使用场所以及表达方式。注意时态的准确运用,灵活运用所学的单词、短语以及句型。切记不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
[满分作文]
Dear Tony,
It's great to receive your letter.I'm writing to tell you something about Chinese red.Chinese red, considered as the symbolic color of China,is extremely popular with Chinese people.It usually represents happiness,and we believe that it can bring us good luck.
People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events.For instance,in a wedding,you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding room is decorated with red.What's more,the houses are also filled with red paper cuts,lanterns and Chinese Knots during the Spring Festival.Children will get red packets for best wishes as well.Obviously,Chinese red plays a significant role and enjoys the highest popularity in China.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.
Yours,
Li Hua
[高分句型]:
for instance, be decorated with, what’s more, be filled with, as well以及play a significant role等。
we believe that it can bring us good luck中,that引导的宾语从句。
3.(2022·山东枣庄·统考中考真题)假如你是李华,你的笔友Mark将要来你家做客,向你寻问如何在中国举止得当。请根据下面的提示,给Mark写一封80~100词的回信。把答案写在答题卡上相应位置。(可能用到的单词:chopsticks筷子)
1. 见面礼仪。 2. 餐桌礼仪。 3. 外出礼仪。
Dear Mark,
I am glad to hear that you are coming to China soon. I’d like to give you some suggestions on how to behave properly in China.
When you come to my house, __________________________________________________________
When you are eating with us, __________________________________________________________
Before you go outside, __________________________________________________________
A safe trip to you and I hope to meet you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
[思路解读]:本文是一篇书信作文。根据提示内容,给Mark一封信,告诉他如何在中国举止得当。
[写作步骤]:本文时态采用一般现在时;人称以第二人称为主。写作时需包含三个要点:见面礼仪;餐桌礼仪;外出礼仪。承接作文每段开头,展开叙述,确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误。
[满分作文]
Dear Mark,
I am glad to hear that you are coming to China soon. I’d like to give you some suggestions on how to behave properly in China.
When you come to my house, you need to buy some small gifts, such as some fruit. This is the basic etiquette for Chinese guests when they visit others.
When you are eating with us, you should let the elders move their chopsticks first before we eat. Don’t make too much noise while eating. It’s impolite to point at others with your chopsticks or stick your chopsticks into the food.
Before you go outside, you need to say goodbye to others. It’s polite.
A safe trip to you and I hope to meet you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
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