Unit 1 How can we become good learners 写作 专练（含解析）人教新目标(Go for it)版 英语九年级上册

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Unit 1 How can we become good learners 写作 专练（含解析）人教新目标（Go for it）版 英语九年级上册
1．健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们非常重要，请以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇作文，谈谈你的看法。
提示：可以从饮食健康、锻炼身体以及良好的生活习惯等方面入手。
要求：1. 词数80左右。 2. 要点完整、层次清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯。
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2．《你好！李焕英》是贾玲为了感恩母亲献上的一部影片，表达了“子欲养而亲不待”的无奈。感恩是永恒的主题，孝敬父母是中华民族的传统美德，父母给予我们生命，抚养我们长大。请根据提示以“Be Thankful to Our Parents”为题写一篇短文。
提示：
(1) What do our parents do for us
(2) What should we do to thank for our parents
参考词汇： encourage 鼓励； respect 尊重
注意：
(1)短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
(2)80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Be Thankful to Our Parents
Our parents love us more than anyone else in the world. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All in all, we should always be grateful（感激的） to our parents and do what we can to thank them.
3．亲爱的同学，恭喜你已答到本套试卷的最后一题。在答题过程中，你一定对你的英语学习有所感悟吧。请以“My English Study”为题谈谈你在过去的英语学习中感到遗憾或不足的地方，并阐述在未来的英语学习中如何去克服并做得更好。
要求：①语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
②文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
My English Study
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4．良好的习惯对我们的学习、生活都有益处。你是否拥有良好的生活习惯？请根据下列提示，以“How to keep healthy ”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，开头已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥。
1．健康的饮食 多蔬菜水果，少垃圾食品
2．适当的运动 一星期至少三、四次运动
3．足够的睡眠 8—9小时
4．保持微笑(smile) 开心、乐观
提示词：good healthy habits, be happy and optimistic (乐观)
How to keep healthy
What can we do to keep healthy Here are some good ways for you.
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5．世界持续发展，文化不断交融，英语这门语言已经成为世界人民沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直讨论的话题，请以“How to Learn English Well”为题，从听、说、读、写四个方面谈谈你所采用的优秀的学习方法和学习习惯。
要求：
1.词数80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）：
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。
How to Learn English Well
As the world is developing,English has become an important part of people's life._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．假如你叫杨晨，你的美国笔友Tim目前正在学习中文。在学习中文的过程中，他遇到了下面一些困难，如下表所示，请你用英语给他写一封邮件，给Tim一些学习中文的建议。
困难 建议
上课听不懂老师讲的话 1. 可以让老师放慢语速
2. 通过看中文电影和听中文歌曲来提高听力
不懂一些中文的特殊表达 通过大量阅读中文书来了解这些特殊表达
要求：1. 必须包括全部要点，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右。
7．某中学对学生进行了英语口语能力问卷调查，以下是其中两个问题的调查数据。请结合下图数据和自身口语情况，写一篇短文。
要求：1. 90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数;
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：1. 描述问卷调查结果（频率、方法）;
2. 介绍自身口语情况（水平、打算……）;
3.……
The results of the survey show that 17% of the students hardly ever practise speaking English. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．阅读是同学们未来参与社会应具备的关键能力，无论你喜欢哪种阅读方式，它都能让你增长知识，开阔眼界。最近，某出版社在两万人中，针对人们喜欢的阅读方式做了一项调查，下图是相关的统计结果，其中包括电子阅读和纸质阅读的人数。
请你用两段话写一篇短文：第一段用百分比简要说明图表内容，第二段从图表中选出一项你喜欢的阅读方式，结合自己的经历，谈谈这种阅读方式的好处。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80；
2. 首句已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Recently, a survey was done among 20,000 people about the ways of reading. Here is what we have learned from it.
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9．根据所给要求，写一篇80词左右的短文。下图是某校对八年级100名学生寒假活动的调查结果。请简要说明图表内容，并结合自身情况，谈谈该如何过一个充实又有意义的寒假。
要求：(1)词数不少于80词； (2)不得出现真实校名和人名。
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10．假如你是Li Ming，你的笔友Kangkang最近因为沉迷于网络，经常出现头晕的情况，学习成绩也直线下降。作为好朋友，请你根据以下要点和要求用英语给他写一封信，告诉他如何做一个身心健康的中学生。
1. 要点：1）网络有哪些不利因素；
　　　　 2）你是如何正确使用网络的；
　　　　 3）你还有哪些个人爱好。
2. 要求：1）根据要点适当发挥，文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
　　　　 2）词数100左右 （开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Kangkang,
I’m sorry to hear about your bad news. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
　　If you have more good habits, I believe you will be a good middle school student.
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Yours,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Li Ming
11．假如你是Zhao Lei，你的加拿大朋友Dave来信向你了解学习汉语的方法。请根据下表要点提示，用英语写一封回信。
Advice on Learning Chinese ①上中文课，学汉字
②看中文节目，读中文书报、杂志等
③…
④…
要求：
（1）回信必须包含表内要点，并另增加两条建议，使文章通顺、连贯；
（2）回信不得使用真实的人名、校名；
（3）词数：80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
注：Chinese characters（汉字）
Dear Dave,
I'm glad to hear from you. You asked me about how to learn Chinese well. Here is my advice.
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I hope you can learn Chinese well.
Yours,
Zhao Lei
参考答案：
1．例文：
How to Keep Healthy
As we all know, health is very important in our life. So how can we keep healthy
First, it is necessary to keep a balanced diet. We should eat more fruit and vegetables which are rich in vitamins. Also, we should have meals regularly. Second, to have a strong body, we should exercise more. If we don’t have much time to exercise, we can try to ride our bikes or walk to school. It’s also good exercise. Third, get up early and never stay up late. They are both good for our health. We must make sure we sleep at least eight hours a day. Besides these, we must keep away from some bad habits, such as smoking and drinking.
I believe if we can form good living habits, we are sure to live a healthy life.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写短文谈谈如何保持健康，要包括提示中的几个方面。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态采用一般现在时。文章可分为三段式：第一段点题；第二段给出具体方法；第三段收尾。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
2．例文
Be Thankful to Our Parents
Our parents love us more than anybody else in the world. They try to take good care of us in our daily life and help us with our lessons. They communicate with us and cheer us up when we are upset. They encourage us when we fail in the exam. When we meet difficulties, they are the first to come up and stand with us to solve the problems.
Thanks to them, we grow up healthily and happily. Learning to care for our parents is what we should do. First, we can help do more housework. Second, we should respect them and get on well with them. Then they may feel happy. Third, we are supposed to study hard and try not to make them worry about us.
All in all, we should always be grateful to our parents and do what we can to thank them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为说明文，来表达我们如何感恩父母。
②时态：本文时态为一般现在时。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，介绍父母为我们做过的事情。
②第二步，介绍我们应该为父母做的事情，包括做家务、努力学习等。
③第三步，总结全文，引出“我们应该感恩父母为我们所做的”。
[亮点词汇]
①take good care of 好好照顾
②come up 出现
③get on well with sb. 与某人相处得好
④be supposed to 应该做某事
[高分句型]
①When we meet difficulties, they are the first to come up and stand with us to solve the problems. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Third, we are supposed to study hard and try not to make them worry about us. (make+宾语+to do结构)
3．one possible version:
My English Study
Time flies! I have already studied English for several years. Looking back at the years, I have many regrets and thoughts in my English study.
I used to be afraid of speaking English in class. When my teacher asked questions, I just hid behind my textbook and never said anything. What's more, I couldn't remember some of the words. I didn't understand the meaning of the passages.
I will watch more English movies in the future to improve my spoken English. I will read more English newspapers to improve my reading skills. I hope I will do better in my English study.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，谈谈我在英语学习中的感悟。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体分析我在过去英语学习中感到遗憾或不足的地方，并阐述在未来的英语学习中如何去克服并做得更好；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
4．One possible version:
How to keep healthy
What can we do to keep healthy Here are some good ways for you.
First, we should have healthy eating habits. We need to eat more vegetables and fruits. They are good for our health, and eat less junk food. Second, we should do more exercise every day. It’s good for our mind and body. We can do it at least three or four times a week. Third, enough sleep is important, too. We need 8—9 hours a day, so don’t stay up late. And we should go to bed early and get up early. Fourth, keep smile. We should be happy and optimistic every day.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏表格中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍保持健康要有健康的饮食和适当的运动；
第二步，介绍应该要有足够的睡眠，同时要保持微笑。
[亮点词汇]
① eating habit饮食习惯
② be good for对……有好处
③ at least至少
[高分句型]
We need 8—9 hours a day, so don’t stay up late. （so连接因果句）
5．例文
How to learn English well
As the world is developing, English has become an important part of people’s life. How can we learn it well Here are my suggestions.
Firstly, we should often listen to English songs, the tapes and English programs. It’s also helpful for us to watch English movies. Secondly, we should speak English as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. We’d better join the English club and practice with others. Thirdly, we can read more English magazines and newspapers. It’s good for us. Finally, we should keep diaries and recite some good passages.
All in all, if we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“How to Learn English Well”为题，从听、说、读、写四个方面谈谈你所采用的优秀的学习方法和学习习惯。适当添加细节，并突出写作重要。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。要给出关于学好英语的建议；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“听、说、读、写”四个方面重点介绍你所采用的优秀的学习方法和学习习惯；
第三步，书写结语。总结“如果我们多听、说、读、写，我们就能学好英语。”。
[亮点词汇]
①as much as possible尽可能多
②be afraid of害怕
③make mistakes犯错误
④All in all总而言之
[高分句型]
①It’s also helpful for us to watch English movies.（It固定句型，It作形式主语）
②The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make.（The+比较级...，the+比较级...）
6．Dear Tim，
I'm sorry to hear that you have some trouble in learning Chinese. But it doesn't matter. I believe I can help you.
First，it's difficult for you to understand what your Chinese teacher says in class. In my opinion，you should tell your teacher about it so that she can speak more slowly. On the other hand，you can try to improve your listening by watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs.
Second，you find there are some special expressions and you can't understand them. I think you can learn about them by reading lots of Chinese books. The more you read，the more you can understand.
I think the best way to learn a language is to use it. It's my secret when I learn English. So try to use Chinese as often as possible.
I hope my suggestions can help you.
Yours，
Yang Chen
【详解】本篇作文属于材料作文，主要向你的美国笔友Tim提一些学习中文的建议。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用了时态语态和主谓一致，特别是一些亮点词句，如I am sorry to hear that, have trouble in doing sth, in my opinion, on the other hand, the+比较级，as often as possible等，增加了逻辑关系，增强了上下文的意思连贯性，用词准确，句子通顺。
【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
7．例文
The results of the survey show that 17% of the students hardly ever practise speaking English. 45% of the students usually practice speaking English, and 38% of the students practise speaking English sometimes. How do you practise speaking English Most students speak more only in class. Some of the students talk with friends in English. Some students practise speaking English in other ways.
In my opinion, we should talk with our partners in English as much as we can. Also, we should often listen to English stories in order to improve our understanding of English. Never be afraid of speaking English in front of others! This is quite important. Over and above, we should learn more English words. Only in this way, can we be good English speakers!
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一个看图作文，图中列出了对学生进行的英语口语能力的调查问卷，包括两个问题，一个是“你多久练习说一次英语”；另一个是“你怎样练习说英语”。学生们应仔细观察图表中的信息，将这两个问题的调查结果表达出来。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。文章采取两段式结构，第一段主要介绍该问卷调查的结果，包含了图表中的所有信息，没有遗漏要点，且各部分内容安排合理，有层次；第二段是自己的口语情况，以及对如何提高口语能力的建议。用词准确，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。
8．例文
Recently, a survey was done among 20,000 people about the ways of reading. Here is what we have learned from it.
60% of the people like to read on mobile phones or e-readers, while only 38.4% choose to read paper books. So we can know that more and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books. However, whatever way of reading we choose, it can help increase our knowledge and open our eyes.
As for me, I am still used to reading paper books. Whenever I open a paper book, the smell of paper reminds me of the stories in the books from my mom when I was a little kid. Just because of this, I got into the habit of reading. So when I read paper books now, they always bring me the old feelings. On the other hand, compared with the electronic devices, reading paper books is good for eyes. So you see, I believe e-books won’t take the place of paper books in my heart.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为看图作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生要注意要点中的“从图表中选出一项你喜欢的阅读方式”来谈谈这种阅读方式的好处，这是本篇写作的重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要说明图表内容；
第二步，从图表中选出一项自己喜欢的阅读方式，结合自己的经历，谈谈这种阅读方式的好处。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① more and more 越来越多
② increase 增长
③ as for 关于，至于
④ remind sb. of 使某人想起……
⑤ compared with 与……相比较
[高分句型]
① So we can know that more and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books.（prefer to do sth. rather than do sth. 宁愿做某事而不愿做某事）
② whatever way of reading we choose, it can help increase our knowledge and open our eyes. （whatever引导的让步状语从句）
9．例文
A school did a survey among 100 students about their activities for winter holidays. Here are the results.
16 percent of the students learned a new skill, such as cooking, tidying the room and so on. They think these basic skills can help them develop their independence. 22 percent of the students helped their family like doing housework. Their parents felt happy to see their children’s changes. 62 percent of the students played for fun such as watching TV, travelling and so on. As for me, I did community volunteer work during the winter holiday. How can we spend a meaningful holiday
First, we should learn some basic skills. Second, we should keep exercising to stay healthy. Last but not least, we can take up some hobbies. So you can live a meaningful and enjoyable holiday.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示材料介绍学生们的寒假活动以及如何度过一个有意义的寒假，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍学生们的寒假活动以及自己的寒假活动；
第三步，介绍如何度过一个有意义的寒假；
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②as for至于
③take up开始从事
[高分句型]
① Here are the results.（倒装句）
② Second, we should keep exercising to stay healthy （动词不定式作目的状语）
10．例文
Dear Kangkang,
I’m sorry to hear about your bad news. As your good friend, I hope you will get well soon. And now I want to tell you something about my habits.
First, the Internet is not perfect. If you work on the Internet too long, it will make you have a headache and sore eyes. Second, in our daily life, I often use the Internet to study and listen to music. And I usually spend less than 1 hour on the Internet every day. Third, in my free time, I often play football with my friends. Playing football is my favorite hobby. I think it is an exciting sport. I can make friends and keep fit all the time.
If you have more good habits, I believe you will be a good middle school student.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是一封书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本题要求我们根据写作要点，用英语给笔友Kangkang写一封信，告诉他如何做一个身心健康的中学生。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，首先对Kangkang的情况表示遗憾，然后给出建议；
第二步，具体阐述网络有哪些不利因素，你是如何正确使用网络的以及你还有哪些个人爱好；
第三步，最后进行总结，表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①in one’s daily life在某人日常生活中
②listen to music听音乐
③keep fit保持健康
[高分句型]
①If you work on the Internet too long, it will make you have a headache and sore eyes.（If引导的条件状语从句）
②Playing football is my favorite hobby.（动名词作主语）
11．例文：
Dear Dave,
I'm glad to hear from you. You asked me about how to learn Chinese well. Here is my advice.
First, as a foreigner, you need to have Chinese lessons. You can learn Chinese characters from your teachers and practice them with classmates. And the most important thing is to remember as many Chinese characters as possible.
Second, you’d better read Chinese books, newspapers and magazines. You can also watch the Chinese TV programs or DVDs.
Third, singing or listening to Chinese songs helps you learn more Chinese characters as well.
Finally, you can make some Chinese friends. Your friends can teach you a lot of Chinese songs and introduce some Chinese festivals to you, too. You can learn more about China.
I hope you can learn Chinese well.
Yours,
Zhao Lei
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，以Zhao Lei的名义给Dave写一封信，介绍学习汉语的方法。要根据表格中提示提出一些建议，包括上中文课、看中文节目等；此外需另外提出两点建议，使文章通顺、连贯。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时、第二人称，注意主谓一致问题；写作时可使用First、Second等逐条列出建议，保证文章通顺有条理。
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