Unit 2 I think that mooncakes are delicious! 写作 专练（含解析）人教新目标(Go for it)版 英语九年级上册

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Unit 2 I think that mooncakes are delicious! 写作 专练（含解析）人教新目标（Go for it）版 英语九年级上册
1．请以“My favorite festival” 为题，写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的节日。90词左右。
My favorite festival
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2．Writing
94. Write at least 60 words on the topic “A person helped/encouraged… me before”（以“曾经 过我的人”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
很多人曾经出现在你的成长旅程中，他们或帮助你，或鼓励你，或爱护你，…
请你描述他（她）是怎样的人，以及发生在你和他（她）之间的故事，并谈谈他（她）对你的 影响。
3．万圣节快要到了，你准备亲手做一个南瓜灯，写出DIY的过程，字数70个左右。
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4．假设你叫李明，你们班级要选拔新班长，你想向班主任王老师推荐张航。请根据表格内容，写一封80词左右的推荐信给王老师。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
姓名 张航
特长 精通电脑，擅长演讲
性格、品质 自信、勤奋、谦虚、有条理、乐于助人
个人事迹 经常花很多时间组织课外活动，从不介意为班级做额外的工作，总是尽最大努力帮助同学，深受同学们欢迎。
Dear Mr Wang,
I’m writing to recommend Zhang Hang as our new monitor.
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5．Do you enjoy your winter holiday Tell us one of your unforgettable memories during the Spring Festival with the help of the spidergram below.
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6．请以美食节工作人员的名义写一篇题为The First Food Festival 的短文，内容包括：很多人来参加美食节，有人要北京烤鸭，有人要印度咖喱；所有食物都很可口；我工作最认真，卖了最多的炒饭；这一天很有趣等。
要求：80词左右。
The First Food Festival
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7．假如你叫李华，你和你美国朋友Betty经常通过邮件谈论各自的学习，她想了解你是如何练习英语口语的以便她学习汉语时借鉴。请你根据她的问题回复邮件。
提示词语：pronunciation， speak， classmate， retell
8．书面表达
请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇题为A good habit， a successful life 的短文，发表在学校的网站上。
要求：1. 文中不能出现真实的人名，地名和校名；2. 短文应包含提示内容，可适当发挥；3. 100词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
A good habit， a successful life
A habit is something that you do often almost without thinking， especially something that is hard to stop doing.
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9．书面表达
假定你是李华，你在美国的笔友Tom打算今年8月来中国，并前来莆田旅游，特来信询问一些有关情况。请你根据以下图示所提供的要点，用英文写一封回信，并期待他的到来。
注意：1.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校；
3.可以适当增加细节，使行为连贯；
4.词数90左右。
参考词汇：湄洲岛 Meizhou Island; 九鲤湖 Jiuli Lake; 方便的convenient
Dear Tom,
I’m so glad to receive your letter and know you are coming to China in August. ____________________
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10．假如你是李言，学校来了几名外国友人参加中外文化交流活动，校长请你写一封邀请函，邀请他们参加下个月在当地举行的端午节活动。
内容包含以下几点：
2.Activities during the festival;
3. Your invitation to them.
要求：1.词数不少于80；
2.词句通顺，意思连贯。
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11．假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Jack对中国传统文化很感兴趣，写信向你询问端午节的有关情况。请你根据以下提示给他回信。80词左右。
提示：
1. 中国的传统节日之一，已有2000多年的历史；
2. 为了纪念著名诗人屈原 (honor the great poet)；
3. 中国南方有赛龙舟的习俗；
4. 家人团聚吃粽子和其他美食；
5. 有三天假期，可以外出旅游。
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参考答案：
1．One possible version:
My favorite festival
My favorite festival is the Spring Festival. It is celebrated on the first day of the Chinese lunar calendar.
Before the festival, we clean the house and prepare some food. We also buy new clothes for the New Year. On the eve, we usually have jiaozi, a traditional Chinese food. On the first day of the New Year, children will get “lucky money”. That’s one of my favorite parts of festival. During the festival, we also visit our relatives and friends.
It’s my favorite festival because I enjoy spending time with my family. It makes me feel very comfortable and relaxed.
【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求以“My favorite festival”为题，写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的节日，要求包括节日的时间、这个节日我们会做什么等，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍自己最喜欢的节日时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
2．A person who helped me a lot before
A person who helped me a lot is my father.He gived me help in my study and life.
He helped me with my lessons and told me how to get good grades.When I failed my exam,he was not angry with me.Instead,he encouraged me to keep on.
He also took good care of my life.He does the housework every day and never complain about it.He tried his best to make me healthy and happy.He is not only my father but also my friend.He helped me to cope with all the difficulties.
I do love my father.I am very grateful to him.
【详解】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。
考点：提纲作文。
3．例文：
How to make a pumpkin lantern
Halloween is coming soon. I want to make a pumpkin lantern myself. Do you know how to make a pumpkin lantern Let me tell you briefly.
First, select a big, round and nice pumpkin, wash it up and dry it up. Second, put it on a piece of paper. Dig a hole from the top of the pumpkin with a knife. Put a hand into it and clean up the pulp and seeds. Then, cut out the eyes, the nose, the mouth and sharp teeth. At last, put a candle in it. That’s it.
If you like DIY, you can try it by yourself to make a special pumpkin.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，写DIY南瓜灯的过程；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，写出制作南瓜灯的具体步骤过程。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出要介绍制作南瓜灯的过程；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，分步骤介绍制作的过程；
第三步，最后总结，希望喜欢DIY的朋友能自己制作南瓜灯。
[亮点词汇]
① wash up清洗
② clean up清理
③ a piece of一张
[高分句型]
① Do you know how to make a pumpkin lantern （疑问词+不定式的结构）
② If you like DIY, you can try it by yourself to make a special pumpkin. （if引导的条件状语从句）
4．I think he has some strong qualities for this position. Zhang Hang is confident. He is good at making speeches. He also does well in computers. He is hard-working, modest and organized. He often spends lots of time organizing after-school acivities.
He is very helpful, too. He never minds doing extra work for our class. He always tries his best to help other students. He is very popular with us.
I think Zhang Hang is the most suitable person to be our monitor.
【详解】本文属于材料作文，向老师推荐张航做我们的班长。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be good at, do well in, spend+时间+doing, too, mind doing, try one’s best to do, be popular with等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
5．例文
An unforgettable memory
Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. It’s to celebrate the lunar calendar. In many places, people like to set off firecrackers. Dumplings are the most traditional food. Children like the festival very much because they can have delicious food and wear new clothes. They can also get some money from their parents. This money is given to children for good luck. People put New Year scrolls on the wall for good fortune. The Spring Festival lasts about 15 days long. People visit relatives and friends with the words “Have all your wishes”. People enjoy the Spring Festival. During this time they can have a good rest.
I want to share my last Spring Festival. In the evening before the Spring Festival, families got together and had a big meal. I went shopping with my parents, grandparents, aunts, uncles, and cousins. It was a rare occasion because we hardly only get together a few times a year as a big family. On the way to the shopping mall, we watched the lion dance. Overall, we had an unforgettable day.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容介绍难忘的春节回忆。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为两段，第一段介绍春节；第二段介绍自己的经历。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
6．例文
The First Food Festival
We had the First Food Festival yesterday, and it was very successful.
Many workers and students came for it. Some people ordered Beijing Roast Duck. Some people would like Indian curries. All the food smelt nice and tasted delicious, too. Michael sold 20 cheese pies and Jane sold 13 hamburgers. I sold the most bowls of fried rice. We worked very carefully, and I worked the most carefully.
What an interesting day it was!
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求以The First Food Festival为题写一篇英文短文；要求包含所有内容提示。
2. 写作指导：此作文时态以一般过去时为主；人称以第一人称为主；可采用3段落格式，第一段：阐述昨日有一个美食节；第二段：阐述美食节有哪些食物以及自己的工作内容；第三段：总结全文，美食节很有趣。
7．Hi! Betty，
I’m glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about my English study.
Once I was not good at English， I was afraid of speaking English in front of people because of my poor pronunciation. My English teacher， Miss Li， noticed my problem. She had a talk with me patiently and taught me how to learn English well. After that， I often read English aloud and retell it as much as I can. And talk with my classmates in English after class. On the weekend I go to an English club to improve my speaking skills. At the same time I often keep a diary in English and listen more English. Now I not only do well in English but also try to help others with their English when they are in trouble. I hope this can help you with your Chinese.
Yours，
Li Hua
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，主题为“英语口语练习”。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，尽量将提示的内容利用上；以提示的问题作为写作的主线，结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般过去时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点：本文紧扣材料，要点完整，表达清晰流畅。文中用到了很多短语，如：be good at ，be afraid of， not only…but also等等。此外，句子之间用了一些连词，使逻辑更紧密，如but，and， at the same time，等。另外时态运用非常准确，语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，没有任何语法错误。
考点：话题类作文。
8． A good habit， a successful life
A habit is something that you do often almost without thinking， especially something that is hard to stop doing.
We should develop good habits of learning. For example， we should put our attention in class， which will help us better understand what teachers say. Also， we are supposed to make the best of the time for study， which can improve our ability to learn by ourselves. Finally， we are encouraged to finish homework alone.
At the same time， good habits of living are also good for our life. Healthy eating along with exercise is probably the only way to become fit. What is more， enough sleep every night is also important for our health， for it makes us feel energetic and well prepared for the day to come.
Good habits have a positive effect on our life. Once a good habit is formed， it will give us power to control ourselves and be away from bad habits. If we insist on behaving ourselves properly， we are sure to live a successful life.
【详解】试题分析：根据本文内容应以一般现在时态叙事为主。文章应灵活采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
写作亮点： 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如: For example，are supposed to ， along with， makes us feel energetic ， prepared for，be away from，insist on，are sure to 等；而词汇 At the same time， What is more等使文章的表达更有逻辑性、更富有条理；同时语言流畅、内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。
考点：话题作文。
9．Dear Tom,
I’m so glad to receive your letter and know you are coming to China in August. I’d like to introduce you something about Putian.
Putian lies in the southeast of Fujian, which lies to the west of the Taiwan Straits. There are so many well-known places of interest, Meizhou Island, Jiuli Lake, Guanghua Temple and so on. The climate is so nice all the year round that you can taste some special fruits. Besides, the snacks and seafood are rich and delicious.
As for the traffic, you can take a high-speed train, which can make your trip more pleasant and convenient. People in Putian are both kind and hard-working. I’m sure you will have a good time during your stay in Putian.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely.
Li Hua
【详解】试题分析：本题要求给笔友介绍一下莆田旅游的一些信息。首先，这是一封书信，要注意书信的基本格式，及书信的语言特征；根据图表提示，短文要从有关莆田的地理信息、景色、交通、气候、食物等等方面给朋友作介绍。短文要注意语言要热情，语句要充满感情。短文用一般现在时态。
写作亮点：本范文开头，首先表示对收到朋友来信及知道朋友要来旅游的高兴，接着直奔主题：我要介绍一些有关莆田的信息给你。两个不定式：be glad to do sth 及would like to do sth运用准确恰当；第二、三段，短文分别从莆田的地理位置，著名景观，气候，特色，交通，人文等方面对莆田作全方位的介绍，包含了图表提示的所有信息要点，叙述清楚，中心突出。其中用到的定语从句，lie to, so that等等复杂句式及短语句型，为本文增色不少。最后用look forward to doing sth表达对朋友到来的期盼，语言表达准确，语气恰当。是一篇较好的范文。
考点：考查图表作文。
10．Dear friends,
Welcome to our school. Next month will be one of the most traditional Chinese festivals—the Dragon Boat Festival. It falls on the lunar calendar of May 5th. This festival is to show our respect to a famous poet, Qu Yuan. We will have dragon boat races and dragon dance that day. We will also eat a kind of traditional food called zongzi.
I hope all of you can come and join us that day. We will be very glad to meet you there. We are looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Yan
【详解】本题是一篇书信作文，也是话题作文。话题是谈论端午节活动。注意书信格式要正确。本文给出了写作提示要点。根据提示要点列出本文的写作提纲。本文人称主要第一和三人称，时态主要是一般现在时和一般将来时。短文必须包含提示中的所有内容，并做适当发挥。字数应在80-100词。应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：
亲爱的朋友们，
欢迎来到我们学校。下个月将是中国最传统的节日之一——端午节。它在农历5月5日。这个节日是为了表达我们对著名诗人屈原的敬意。那天我们将举行龙舟比赛和龙舞。我们还将吃一种叫粽子的传统食物。
我希望你们那天能来和我们在一起。我们很高兴在那儿见到你们。我们期待着您的到来。
你的，
李艳
【点睛】书面表达题要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，语言要规范，时态运用要正确，应用文注意格式正确，叙述清楚条里，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。要学以致用，本文运用了重要句型和短语有We will also eat a kind of traditional food called zongzi./ We are looking forward to your coming.等。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。 （5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
11．例文
Dear Jack,
How’s it going I am very glad to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to you. It is one of the Chinese traditional festivals which has over two thousand years of history. The festival is celebrated to honor the great poet Qu Yuan. On that day, people often get together with their family to eat zongzi and other delicious food. In the southern parts of China, people often have Dragon Boat races. It is so exciting to watch this activity on TV. Besides, we also have a 3-day holiday during the festival. So we can have a short journey to relax ourselves. How interesting the Dragon Boat Festival is! I like it very much.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据题干要求，向英国笔友Jack介绍下中国的传统节日——端午节。
2.写作指导：本文应以第一人称为主；时态采用一般现在时为主。注意按照提示的五句话进行写作。可采用分段的形式，使文章结构清晰。最后保证语言通顺，行文连贯；注意语法正确，无标点和大小写错误。
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