Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark. 书面表达 专练（含解析）人教新目标(Go for it)版 英语九年级上册

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Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark. 书面表达 专练（含解析）人教新目标（Go for it）版 英语九年级上册
1．根据表格提供的信息，写一篇介绍Aunt Karen的短文。
2．请以“_____________________change（s）my life”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求：
1. 先把题目补充完整（空格处可以是单词、短语, 也可以是从句）；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名或人名等信息；
3. 80词左右。
_______________________ change(s) my life
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3．某英文报举办以“家庭巨变”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下表提示，以“Changes in Mr. Zhang’s family”为题，写一篇征文稿介绍张先生家二十年来的变化。
二十年前 现在
房子 小而旧 又大又新
通讯方式 写信 使用电话或手机
交通方式 步行或骑自行车 开私家车
生活 贫穷但安宁 富裕但忙碌
要求：
1. 根据表格内容进行写作，可适当发挥；
2. 灵活运用本单元所学的used to结构；
3. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Changes in Mr. Zhang’s family
Great changes have taken place in Mr. Zhang’s family over the past twenty years._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．
Friendship is the greatest pleasure in life. Francis Bacon once said “Friendship multiplies(加倍)joys and divides griefs.” All of us have friends, but how much do you know about them Would you hike to write something about your friend and let more people know him/her If so, get started! Teenage Magazine
Suppose Simon is your best friend, please write something about him
Name: Simon Age: 14 Height: 1.75 m Weight: 65 kg
Personalities: Helpful…humorous
Club: the DIY Club
Hobby: Travelling Last summer holiday, he…
注意:
1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，意思连贯。
2. 不得出现真实的姓名，校名等。
3. 词数90词左右。
My Best Friend
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5．我们在变化中成长，成长让我们的人生充满意义。回首三年初中时光，我们在学习、思想、性格、生活等方面发生了很多变化。你所在学校公众号的英语写作栏目正在开展“我的成长”征文活动，请分享你初中三年中的成长故事，具体讲述其中一个变化。
要点如下：
1.变化是什么？
2.变化过程是什么？
3.你从中得到了什么启发？
要求：
1.必须含有所有要点，并适当拓展；
2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
3.词数100左右。
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6．世界在发展，生活在变化，社会的进步让我们的生活越来越好。请通过以下4组图片，从信息来源、购物方式、居住环境、交流方式等方面，以“How life changes”为题写一篇短文。
In the past Now
① newspaper radio television mobile phone computer
② shop online shop
③ old and dirly house new and clean house
④ letter postcard email WeChat QQ
要求：1. 词数80~100；
2. 请先简要介绍表格中的4组图片，再根据生活实际列举1~2个方面，作适当发挥。
How life changes
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7．Ⅻ. 书面表达
你校英语俱乐部将举办题为“Great changes in communication”的征文活动。请你根据以下图片提示，写一篇应征稿描述今昔通讯方式的变化，以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。
要求：1. 根据图片提示进行写作，可适当发挥；
2. 运用本单元所学的used to结构(至少两处)；
3. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Great changes in communication
With the rapid development of science and technology, great changes have taken place in the way people communicate with each other.
In a word, people have an easier life nowadays with the development of communication.
8．林涛是学校“爱心俱乐部（Kind-Hearted Club）”的成员之一。请根据林涛的情况和图片的内容，用英语写一篇字数80字左右的文章介绍林涛。
提示：
a tall boy with thick black hair, a round face, two small eyes, a smiling mouth, look strong and healthy, get on well with..., get ready to help others, collect rubbish...
Lin Tao is a member of our school’s Kind-Hearted Club. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．如今，很多父母望子成龙心切，给孩子安排很多任务，导致孩子没有了自己的周末，如下图中的Jack。请分析图中的这种现象并谈谈你的看法，以“Weekend or Not ”为题，写一篇约110词的英语短文向Parents杂志投稿，让父母们通过阅读你的文章能有所启发。
注意: 文中不得出现“Jack”以外的人名或任何学校名称。
Weekend or Not
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10．假如你是李华，最近你们学校提供了课后延时服务。根据以下提示，请你用英文写一封信，告诉你的朋友Amy课后延时服务的好处及你的感受。写作要点：
延时服务前 放学后家长忙于工作，学生在家既不做作业也不读书，他们或者看电视，或者玩游戏，直到家长回来。
延时服务后 学生在学校能够及时完成作业，有问题时可以问老师，学生有更多时间从事自己的爱好和锻炼身体，学生有更充足的时间和家长交流。延时服务受到家长和学生的欢迎。
参考词汇
after-school service（课后延时服务），be busy with，either...or...，plenty of
写作要求
1. 参考提示表格，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数不少于80词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）
Dear Amy,
Our school has offered after-school service recently. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案：
1．Aunt Karen is 38 years old（in her late thirties）. She is slim, but not very tall. She has big, brown eyes and she wears glasses. Her hair, which she keeps at shoulder length, is dark and wavy. She usually dresses in comfortable clothes, and jeans is her favorite.
My aunt is a very kind and caring person. She is always there to listen to my problems and offer her advice and support. She is also very patient. These qualities make her an excellent social worker.
In her free time, Aunt Karen likes reading and painting. She is actually a very good painter and sometimes sells her paintings. Although she is not very good at sports, she enjoys horse-riding.
My aunt is a special person who has helped me on many occasions. She is someone I can trust and depend on.
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，结合所给写作信息，以“Aunt Karen”为话题，对人物进行介绍。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般现在时态为主，注意人称和一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中使用了but, dress in comfortable clothes，listen to, in her free time，like doing，and, although，sometimes等词或固定搭配，使上下文意连接紧密, 过渡自然。同时，本文最大亮点是叙事条理、表达清晰；还使用了让步状语从句Although she is not very good at sports, she enjoys horse-riding，为文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。
2．范文：
Computers change my life
I think computers change my life. Before computers were widely used, I had to go to the library to look up information that I wanted. I often spent much time on it. But now, with the help of computers, my life has become more convenient and interesting. I can search for any information I want easily. I can communicate with my friends in many ways. Such as e-mail, QQ. I can listen to music, watch some interesting movies and do some shopping and so on. I can also play computer games in my spare time.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时首先把题目补充完整，然后根据题目，介绍电脑如何改变了自己的生活，包括查询信息、和朋友沟通和购物等方面。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时为主。在介绍内容时，力求语句通顺，内容完整，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。
3．例文
Changes in Mr. Zhang’s family
Great changes have taken place in Mr. Zhang’s family over the past twenty years.
They used to live in a small and old house. But now they have moved into a big and new apartment.
Mr. Zhang used to write letters to his friends, but now he uses a telephone or a mobile phone. Mr. Zhang has his own car and it’s easier for his family to travel. But they used to walk or ride bikes somewhere.
Mr. Zhang’s life used to be poor but quiet. But now things are different. He lives a rich but busy life.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“张先生家的变化”为题，介绍张先生家二十年来的变化。
2.写作指导：本文采用第三人称，描述过去的情况用一般过去时，描述现在的情况用一般现在时。从房子，通讯方式，交通方式，生活这四个方面介绍。注意保持主谓一致，逻辑性要强，句子要通顺。
4．例文
My Best Friend
I have many good friends. But Simon is my best friend. He is 14 years old.
He is 1.75 meters tall. He is 65 kg. He wears glasses. He has short black hair. He is helpful and humorous. He is in the DIY Club. He often makes things by himself. We like them very much. He likes traveling. Last summer holiday, he and I walked to climb a high mountain. I was tired and didn’t want to climb, but he encouraged me to continue climbing. At last we succeeded in reaching the top of the mountain.
We sang and danced there. From this activity, I learn that persistence is victory.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据提示材料介绍自己的好朋友。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍他的个人信息，爱好等等。
第二步，介绍和朋友在一起难忘的经历。
第三步，介绍从这次经历收获了什么。
[亮点词汇]
① by oneself 独自
② want to do sth. 想要做某事
③ at last 最终
[高分句型]
① Last summer holiday, he and I walked to climb a high mountain.（动词不定式作宾语）
② From this activity, I learn that persistence is victory.（that引导宾语从句）
5．例文
We grow up in change. Growth makes our life full of meaning. Looking back on the three years of junior high school, I have experienced many changes in my study, thoughts, personality, life and so on. The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading.
When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me books. Gradually, I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to enjoy my free time.
Books are my friends. And they will benefit me a lot.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示问题，分享自己初中生活以来的一个变化，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍变化是什么；第二段介绍变化过程是什么；第三段介绍从中得到了什么启发。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
6．One possible version :
How life changes
Great changes have taken place in our life for years. In the past, people read newspapers, listened to the radio and watched TV for news and other information. People kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or sending postcards. They would buy everything in the shop or market. Big families has to share small houses which were old and dirty. Children used to go to school by bicycle.
But now people can get information on the mobile phones or computers almost at any place and at any time. They can buy things online at home. What’s more, people can contact others by email, WeChat or QQ, with which they can send and receive messages whenever they like. More and more people live in new and clean houses with several rooms. Some families are rich enough to send their children to school in their own cars. In a word, people live better than before.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍过去人们的生活方式；
第二步，介绍现在人们的生活方式。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②keep in touch with保持联系
③what’s more并且
④in a word总之
[高分句型]
①Big families has to share small houses which were old and dirty（which引导定语从句）
②people live better than before（比较级的结构）
7．Great changes in communication
With the rapid development of science and technology, great changes have taken place in the way people communicate with each other.
People used to keep in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone. But now everyone has his own mobile phone. People can communicate with each other anywhere and anytime. They send and receive e-mails by Internet. They send and receive messages on QQ or WeChat. With these changes, people's life has improved a lot. They know more about the outside world. It used to take several days or weeks to hear from each other, but now it takes only several minutes, even if they're in different countries.
In a word, people have an easier life nowadays with the development of communication.
【详解】试题分析：本次作文为看图作文，根据图片提示，写一篇应征稿描述今昔通讯方式的变化，以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。要求：1．以“Great changes in communication”为题，根据图片提示进行写作，可适当发挥；2．中心突出，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；3．运用本单元所学的used to结构(至少两处)；4.词数90字左右（开头已给出，不计入词数）。要注意时态运用，表达清楚，语法正确，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不要出现单词拼写错误。
【写作亮点】：本篇习作成功地完成了写作任务，表达顺畅，结构连贯，字数符合要求。准确运用时态，要点全面，语法正确，上下文意思连贯，适当发挥了想象。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动，例如keep in touch with，anywhere and anytime，days or weeks，hear from each other等。特别是运用了used to结构，例如People used to keep in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone.，It used to take several days or weeks to hear from each other, but now it takes only several minutes,使文章形成对比，能够彰显通讯方式带给人们的变化，凸显了中心，是一篇优秀的习作。
8．例文
Lin Tao is a member of our school’s Kind-Hearted Club. He is a tall boy with thick black hair. He has a round face, two small eyes and a smiling mouth. He looks strong and healthy. He is kind-hearted and gets on well with everyone. He always gets ready to help others. For example, he often helps his classmates with the lessons, helps old people cross the road. When he takes a bus, he often gives his seat to the people in need. To protect the environment, when he is free, he goes to the park to collect rubbish with his friends. Lin Tao is a good student. We should learn from him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所示图片完成写作，不能遗漏信息；以第三人称为主，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍林涛的外貌；
第二步，介绍林涛的性格和品质；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①kind-hearted 好心的
②get on well with 与……相处融洽
③in need 需要帮助的
[高分句型]
①When he takes a bus, he often gives his seat to the people in need.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②To protect the environment, when he is free, he goes to the park to collect rubbish with his friends.（动词不定式表目的）
9．例文
Weekend or Not
Jack has to attend lots of classes at weekends. He has little time for his favorite sport—soccer. Still, his parents are pushing him to do more tasks, which worries him a lot.
Nowadays, many students are under much pressure like Jack. Their parents believe it necessary for them to make full use of the weekends and learn as much as possible. As a result, some students are stressed out and therefore lose interest in learning anything. What’s worse, they may not be able to learn to manage their own life.
I do hope all the children can have the freedom to choose what they like to do and enjoy their weekends.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文以“Weekend or Not”为题根据图片所示内容进行写作，分析图中的现象并谈谈自己的想法，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以第三人称和一般现在时为主。第一段描述图片中的现象；第二段主要讲述自己对这种现象的看法；第三段进行总结。写作时需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰；同时，注意合理拓展，逻辑顺畅。
10．例文：
Dear Amy,
Our school has offered after-school service recently. It is really helpful. Now let me tell you something about it.
Before the service, parents were busy with their work and the students were alone at home. They neither did their homework nor read books. They either watched TV or played computer games until their parents came back.
Now students can finish their homework in time at school. They can ask the teacher questions when they need. Students not only have more time to work on their hobbies or sports but also have plenty of time to communicate with their parents.
The service is welcomed by both parents and students. I feel I have benefited a lot. I am sure the after-school service will help us make great progress in study and in our daily life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求我们作为李华，给朋友Amy介绍一下课后延时服务的好处及你的感受。
2.写作指导：本文以第三人称进行写作，先陈述写信目的，引出主题，再用一般过去时描述延时服务之前的情况，然后用一般现在时描述延时服务后学生的情况，最后表达自己的感受。写作时注意时态的变化和主谓一致，做到无拼写和标点错误。
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