Unit 6 When was it invented 写作 专练（含解析）人教新目标(Go for it)版 英语九年级上册

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Unit 6 When was it invented 写作 专练（含解析）人教新目标（Go for it）版 英语九年级上册
1．书面表达
小小发明,大大改变。我们的生活因为各种科技发明而日益便捷,请你以“My Favorite Invention”为题,写一篇100词左右的英语文章,介绍你最喜爱的发明。
参考词汇:widely,be used for,convenient,communicate...
My Favorite Invention
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2．写作
1. 就你看过的书、电影以及听过的CD，写出评论。(about 70 words)
题目是： A review of _________.
2 . Write a reply to Lingling.
3．书面表达
俗话说：“予人玫瑰，手留余香”。在我们的日常生活中，我们会遇到各种困难，因此，我们会需要他人的帮助；但同时，我们也要学会帮助他人。其实，帮助他人就是在帮助自己。请你结合身边的事例，以“帮助”为话题，用英语写一篇短文。
注意：
①无需写标题，开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；
②文中要结合你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例；
③文中不得透露任何个人和学校的真实信息；
④词数为80左右。
As the saying goes, roses given, fragrance in hand. In our daily life, we will meet with a lot of trouble.
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4．根据以下表格中的内容，写一篇不少于80词的英文短文。
mobile phone
inventor Martin Cooper
time 20世纪70年代
be widely used in our daily life 1. 通话；2. 拍照；3. …
your opinion and reasons 至少两条…
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5．你知道火车是谁发明的吗？火车是由英国人乔治史蒂芬森(George Stephenson)发明的。请根据如下提示写一篇约80词的短文，描述一下火车的发明以及试运行过程。
发明者 George Stephenson
年代 1825年
概况 多次试验，运用蒸汽机。 第一天运行时，沿线的人听到声音，看它奔跑，认为它是妖怪，就跑回家，关上门，不敢外出了。
如今 最重要的交通工具之一
要求：
1.可适当发挥想象。
2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：do lots of experiments(试验), steam engine(蒸汽机)
I think the train is one of the greatest inventions in history. Do you know who invented it Let me tell you something about it. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．书面表达
如今的交通已经成了许多城市的主要困扰。假如你是一名工程师，请你设计一种交通工具，既可以解决部分交通运行的问题，又有助于环保。
要求：
1. 要展开大胆的想象，可以假设为一种空中交通工具，也可以是地上交通工具。
2. 内容要合理、完整、丰富与流畅。
3. 词数：不少于80。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
An Important Vehicle
As an engineer, I try my best to invent an important vehicle. It's________________________________________________________________________
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I hope my idea can come true one day, and everyone can be interested in it.
7．书面表达。
科学是推动人类发展最重要的因素，每一项发明的出现都可能对我们的生活产生重大影响，请根据下图写一篇80词左右的短文阐述你的观点。
8．假如你是李华，正准备参加学校举办的首届“用英语讲好中国故事”比赛，请根据下方图片提示，准备英文稿件，讲述“司马光砸缸”的故事。
要求：1. 语言规范，语句通顺；
2. 应包括图片所有要点，可适当发挥；
3. 字数：100词左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数。
可能用到的词汇：hide-and-seek捉迷藏；vat缸；shout for help大声呼救；lift a big stone举起一块大石头；be saved得救；learn from向……学习。
Sima Guang Breaking the Vat
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9．近些年，人们的交流方式有了许多改变，请根据图画写一篇80词左右的英语短文，描述今昔通信方式的变化，以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。
注意：1. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、地名。
参考词汇：communicate with (与……交流)，efficient (效率高的)
The Changes of the Way of Communication
Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in people’s life in recent years.
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In a word, people have an easier life nowadays.
10．假如你叫王芳，你给你的笔友Luke写了一封信，信的内容如下，可作适当发挥，词数90左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
内容要点：
1. 上周五在上海举行了国际机器人展览（International Robot Exhibition），展览会上有来自不同国家的各种各样的机器人；
2. 其中我最喜欢日本制造的机器人，因为它能帮助干家务，比如……
3. 将来我要专为老年人设计一种机器人，它能提醒老人吃药……
4. 机器人有好处也会带来麻烦，随着科技的发展，生活会因它变得更美好。
Dear Luke,
I’m glad to tell you something about robots.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m sure you will like it very much. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Wang Fang
11．假设你是张明。你的好朋友李磊上周给你写了一封信，信中和你分享了他上周科学课后对于人工智能AI ( artificial intelligence) 的一些观点，并表述了他对于人工智能即将代替人类的担忧。请以此为背景，根据写作提示写一封回信。
写作提示：
1.建议李磊不要过分忧虑；
2.在信中阐述人工智能的优点 (参考下表)：
人工智能的优点 可以代替人类从事危险工作，从而保证人类安全
可以代替人类进行单调重复的工作，从而从繁重工作中解放 (free v.) 自己，有时间去做一些感兴趣的事情
在我国科技领域扮演着重要角色，这就是政府更加关注的原因
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3.在信尾总结你对人工智能的看法。
写作要求：
1.要点齐全，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；语句通顺，书写规范；
2.100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现考生真实姓名和校名。
Dear Li Lei
I’m glad to receive your letter and get a chance to discuss artificial intelligence with you.
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Yours sincerely,
Zhang Ming
参考答案：
1．My Favorite Invention
The mobile phone is my favorite invention.As we all know,mobile phones are being more and more widely used in our daily life.They are used in many ways.
First,they offer fast and convenient service for communication.They are used for calling.We can talk with our friends or parents for a long time.It’s quite easy for us to carry them everywhere.They can also be used for sending short messages to show our feelings to our friends.What’s more,we can surf the Internet on mobile phones.And when we are tired,we can listen to music to relax ourselves.Our life becomes more colorful because of the invention of the mobile phone.
There is no doubt that the mobile phone plays an important part in our daily life.
【详解】作者首先介绍了自己最喜欢的发明—手机，然后介绍了手机在日常生活中的功能和作用：加强沟通和交流，在疲劳时，可以放松自己，使我们生活多彩。最后总结得出结论，手机在生活中起重要作用。
【点睛】短文按照总分总的思路展开，运用不同句式增强短文的多样性，并运用被动语态，让文章逻辑性强。
2．1. A review of Harry Potter
I like reading books that are interesting. My favorite book is “Harry Potter”. Harry Potter is a boy who is unusual. He can use magic. I think the story about Harry is exciting. J.K. Rowling is a great author who writes the Harry Potter. I like J.K. Rowling very much. But I think if I were her, I would write my books quickly, because a lot of people wait for the new stories about Harry Potter for a long time. Please be quick, Rowling!
2.
Dear Lingling,
I’m glad to hear from you. I went to Hong Kong when I was eleven. It’s a beautiful place. And people there speak Chinese and English. Also, I’d like to learn Chinese and English. Chinese is my mother tongue and English is important in our daily life.
You like quiet, traditional music. So do I. I love classical music, too. But I also like pop music. They often make me happy. I like Italian food, because it’s delicious. But my favorite is Chinese food because it’s not only delicious but also good for our health. I’ve never seen an Indian film. I think it might be interesting. I like action movies, because they’re exciting. How about you Do you enjoy watching action movies
Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Lucy
【详解】第一篇文章要求就看过的书、电影以及听过的CD写评论，本文选择了看过的书“Harry Potter”，运用所学过的语法定语从句，以及虚拟语气，是的表达根据特色，尤其运用所学的形容词，interesting，unusual，exciting，等让文章具有感彩。第二篇是写回信，注意了文体格式，运用一般现在时和一般过去时，语句通顺，符合逻辑。
3．As the saying goes, roses given, fragrance in hand. In our daily life, we will meet with a lot of difficulties and need others’ help. So it is necessary for us to help those who are in trouble.
I still remember I helped one of my classmates with his English when we were in the first term of Junior Eight. Li Hua, one of my classmates, was not good at English while I did well. One day, he asked me to help him. So from then on, whenever he had problems, he would ask me, and I was patient to explain them to him. Slowly, his English improved with my help. At the same time, I found my English improved too. Actually, helping others is helping ourselves.
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用过去时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文多次使用连接词so、whenever以及一些固定句型，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.
考点：话题作文。
4．例文
Mobile phones are without doubt one of the most useful inventions. It was invented by an American called Martin Cooper in the 1970s.
I should say that the mobile phones have really changed our lives. First, it's more convenient to communicate with others by using the mobile phones. Second, people are used to taking photos with mobile phones instead of cameras. And we can even go shopping, listen to music and watch movies on the phone. Third, we can easily learn something useful by surfing online. In this way, it helps us study.
In my opinion, we teenagers should be allowed to use mobile phones, but not on weekdays. And it's necessary to use them in the right way with the help of our teachers and parents.
【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生根据表格提示的内容要点，写一篇短文介绍手机的发明者、发明时间及手机用途，并谈论如何合理地利用手机，属于给材料作文。
2. 写作指导：审题可知，本文宜采用三段式：第一段介绍手机发明时间及发明者，第二段介绍手机的用途，第三段谈论如何合理地利用手机。人称用第一、三人称，时态以一般现在时为主，以一般过去时为辅。行文注意主谓一致和上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
5．参考范文：
I think the train is one of the greatest inventions in history. Do you know who invented it Let me tell you something about it.The train was invented by George Stephenson. He was an engineer from Britain. He did a lot of experiments and made the first train in 1825. A steam engine was used in this train. On the first day when the train ran, people along the way heard the noise and saw it running. They thought it was a monster. They ran back home, closed their doors and were afraid to come out. But now the train is one of the most important means of transportation in the world.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，火车是由英国人乔治史蒂芬森(George Stephenson)发明的。请根据表格提示写一篇约80词的短文，描述一下火车的发明以及试运行过程。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时态，写作时注意承接开头，可以适当用一些连词，短语或句型；使文章看起来层次分明。同时语言的表达也要符合语法要求，内容需包括每一个提示的要点，可适当发挥，注意语言的逻辑性。
6．An Important Vehicle
As an engineer, I try my best to invent an important vehicle. It's an air bus. You are right. It's a kind of special bus, and it can also fly in the air. When there are too many cars and buses on the street, it can fly in the air. It doesn't cause any accidents or trouble. At the same time, it is so convenient that lots of people will take it.
On the bus, there are enough seats for the passengers. What's more, it doesn't run on oil but a kind of special water. That's to say it will be very good for people to take it, because it doesn't produce any pollution at all.
I hope my idea can come true one day, and everyone can be interested in it.
【详解】这是一篇给材料作文。假如你是一名工程师，要求你展开大胆的想象，设计一种交通工具，可以假设为一种空中交通工具，也可以是地上交通工具；既可以解决部分交通运行的问题，又有助于环保。根据所给的提示材料可知本文时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一和第三人称。在写作时，要注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查字数是否符合要求。
【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
7．例文：
Science is the most important thing in the development of human beings. The great development in the field of the medicine has made it possible for us to live longer. The planes and trains have made our life more and more comfortable and provide convenient tools for business development. The computer, the greatest invention in the 20th century, is playing an important role in our daily life. We should work hard to make our life better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：表明自己对于科学发明的观点。结合图片进行描述，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。科学是人类发展过程中最重要的东西。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。根据图中的提示分别说明：药物的发展可以使人活得更久；飞机和火车使我们的生活更舒服，并且为商业提供了方便的工具；电脑是20世纪最伟大的发明，在我们生活中扮演重要的角色。
第三步，书写结语。发表自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①development发展
②invention发明
③playing an important role in在……中扮演一个重要的角色
[高分句型]
①The planes and trains have made our life more and more comfortable and provide convenient tools for business development.（比较级+比较级句型表示“越来越……”）
8．例文：
Sima Guang Breaking the Vat
Sima Guang was a great statesman and historian in ancient China. He was very clever from an early age.
One day, Sima Guang was playing hide-and-seek with several children in the backyard. There was a large water vat in the yard. It was full of water. When the kids were playing, one child accidentally fell into the vat. Other children were so frightened that they started to run, crying for help. However, Sima Guang was different. He thought it over and then had an idea. He picked up a big stone and threw it at the vat. “Bang!” The vat broke and the water ran out. The kid was saved.
In my opinion, I think we should learn from him. When we are in trouble, we should calm down and find a solution.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据题干中给出的四幅图片，按照时间发展顺序描写“司马光砸缸”的故事。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首段引入话题，介绍司马光；
第二步，按照所给图片的发展顺序描写，首先孩子们在院子里玩耍、然后一个孩子掉进水缸、司马光想出主意，拿石头砸向水缸、最后孩子得救；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的个人感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of充满，装满
②fall into掉入
③start to do sth.开始做某事
④pick up捡起
⑤in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①There was a large water vat in the yard.（There be句型）
②When we are in trouble, we should calm down and find a solution.（when引导的时间状语从句）
9．例文
The Change of the Way of Communication
Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in people’s life in recent years.
In the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone. But now almost everyone has his own mobile phone. People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time. What’s more, people can use the Internet to send and receive e-mails.
With these changes, our life is becoming better and better. People can work more efficiently. It used to take many days to hear from each other, but now it takes only a minute, even if they are in two different continents.
In a word, people have an easier life nowadays.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是写一篇人们交流方式的对比的文章，开头和结尾已给出。要求根据所给图片提示来写一篇今昔通信方式的变化，以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响的文章，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主，用一般过去时描述过去。描述内容时，内容应描写细致；要根据材料所给内容叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
10．例文：
Dear Luke,
I’m glad to tell you something about robots.
Last Friday, the International Robot Exhibition was held in Shanghai. There were all kinds of robots from different countries on show. Among all the robots, I like the one made in Japan best. It can help with the housework. It can do the washing, shopping, cooking and other housework. In the future, I would like to design a robot specially for the old people. It can remind the old people to take medicine. Sometimes it can call 120 when necessary. There are advantages of robots and trouble as well. But it is certain that our life will be better with the development of science and technology.
I’m sure you will like it very much. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Wang Fang
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据内容要点写一封信，信件的开头和结尾已给出，要求介绍上周五参加的上海国际机器人展览，及自己想要做的事情和关于机器人的看法。可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时可分为三段式，第一、三段已给出，第二段重点介绍上周五的活动、我最喜欢的机器人及其功能、我将要设计的机器人及其功能以及对机器人持有的看法。可使用第一、三人称，一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时相结合来写作，要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
11．例文：
Dear Li Lei
I’m glad to receive your letter and get a chance to discuss artificial intelligence with you. I don’t think you need to be too worried about it. AI will never completely take the place of human beings. Instead, it has more advantages than disadvantages. The following is my point of view regarding AI.
First of all, AI can be used to do dangerous jobs and keep workers safe. If people don’t want to repeat the same boring and tiring work day after day, they can use AI to help them as well. As a result, people can free themselves from over-work and spend more time on what they are interested in. AI can also help a lot in scientific development. AI plays an important role in the fields of science and technology in China. That’s why the government is paying more attention to it.
In my opinion, AI is a double-edged sword. Instead of worrying about its negative effects, you should learn more about how to use it properly. Do you agree I’m looking forward to you reply.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Ming
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题要求我们就人工智能AI向李磊回一封信，写作时应注意信件写作的格式。本题写作提示给出三点，我们可以围绕这三点用三段展开写作，一个写作要点为一段。
2. 写作指导：本文主要以陈述观点为主，时态主要采用一般现在时。写作提示的第一点和第三点概括性强，我们应该围绕其中心进行充分的自我发挥，这样既丰富文章内容又能达到字数要求。写作提示的第二点内容较多，可以使用连接词（First of all，also等）来进行写作，这样既使文章层次清楚又行文连贯。另外，文章需表达的内容较多，写作时应适当注意句式的丰富度，例如可以使用主从复合句等。最后检查作文时应注意是否有遗漏内容要点，英文句子的表达是否符合英文表达的习惯与规则。
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