人教版（2019）必修 第一册Unit 1 Teenage life Reading for Writing 建议信 讲义
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必修一unit1teenage life如何写建议信
写作指导
建议信属于应用文范畴,通过提供足够的信息和理论依据,让对方采取一定的行动或接受你的建议,改变对方的想法或做法。
写作时注意建议信的语气一定要委婉,而且一定要符合英语信件的基本格式。另外,还要注意所举例子的力度,也就是例子的说服力和可信度。说服力是指要用逻辑和论据让对方产生共鸣,从而赞同你的观点;可信度是指要用具体的事实证明你的观点或者建议是可靠的。
常用表达
You'd better do...
2. You should do...
3. You need to do...
4.If I were you, I would do...
5.If he were here, he would do...
6.Why not/Why don't you...
7.It would be a good idea if...
8.As/So far as I am concerned, I plan to...
9.For one thing...; for another...
10.In conclusion, I support the statement that...11. According to all the reasons/conclusions
above, it is clear/obvious that...
Taking all these factors into consideration/ account, we may reach the conclusion that...
素材积累
1.必备词块
①征求某人的建议：ask for sb’s advice
②在某方面给某人提建议:give / offer sb. advice / tips / suggestions on sth.③提出一些建议:make some advice / suggestions④接受某人的建议:accept / take / follow sb.’ s advice⑤在某方面有困难:have trouble / difficulty with sth.⑥做某事有困难:have trouble / difficulty (in) doing sth.⑦在某方面有问题:have problems with sth.
⑧在我看来:in my opinion; personally; as far as I'm concerned
2.必备句型
(1)表明写信目的
① I am sorry to hear that you have trouble in... Now I'd like to offer you some advice.
② Hearing that you have trouble in... , I' d like to give you some advice. / I'm very pleased to know that... Here are some of my suggestions.
③ Learning that... , I am writing to give you some suggestions on how to do it well.
(2)阐述建议
①As for the suggestions on... , first of all , ... Secondly , ... In addition,...
②From where I stand , ... Besides , ... Last but not least , ...
③ For one thing ,... For another , ... What's more ,...
(3)表达希望
①I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. / I hope you will find my advice helpful.②I hope that my suggestions prove to be useful in solving your problems.③ I will be happy if my suggestions turn out to be practical.
④I' ll be happy if you can take my advice / ideas into consideration.
典例
假定你是高一学生李华。班里有一名初中时一直很优秀的学生王毅,但进入高中后考试成绩不佳,他感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信:
1.帮他分析原因;
2.给他提出建议;
3.陈述你帮助他的具体打算。注意;1.词数 100 左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Wang Yi,
I'm very sorry to learn your present condition.
Yours,
Li Hua
审题
1.体裁:应用文
2.人称:以第二人称为主
3.时态:以一般现在时为主佳作展示
Dear Wang Yi,
I'm very sorry to learn your present condition. In my opinion[1],something must be wrong with your method of studies[2]. In addition[3],you are experiencing too much pressure,which does great harm to you[4] Therefore, you should change a bit. First[5], you should follow the teachers, and understand all they have taught in class. Second [5], you should make your own plan, and improve yourself bit by bit. Third[6], you should learn to relax. For example[6], you can walk, chat after class, or play table tennis sometimes. If you are willing to talk to me(7], you can call me or send me an email.
Hope you will get used to the new life and have your grades improved[8] soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评
[1]用In my opinion加以过渡，显得自然得体，
很顺畅地切入主题。
[2]用something must be wrong with...锁定其
中的一个原因,恰到好处。
[3]In addition 这一衔接短语较and略显高级，
引出了另外一个导致成绩不佳的原因。
[4]which引导的非限制性定语从句,使语句之
间衔接更紧密。
[5]采用First,Second 和Third这三个衔接词
提出建议,使得行文层次分明。 3.
[6]用For example引出可行性建议。
[7]采用条件句配以be willing to do sth.短语，
使语气显得更亲切。
[8]have sth. done结构在此用得很恰当,非谓
语动词与上文多处出现的从句增强了行文的立体感。
迁移应用
假定你是李华，你的巴基斯坦笔友Muhammad准备明年来你校做交换生，写信向你咨询如何学习中文。请你用英语给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.提出学习中文的建议;
3.期待与祝福。
注意:
1.词数 80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Muhammad,
写作指导
建议信属于应用文范畴,通过提供足够的信息和理论依据,让对方采取一定的行动或接受你的建议,改变对方的想法或做法。
写作时注意建议信的语气一定要委婉,而且一定要符合英语信件的基本格式。另外,还要注意所举例子的力度,也就是例子的说服力和可信度。说服力是指要用逻辑和论据让对方产生共鸣,从而赞同你的观点;可信度是指要用具体的事实证明你的观点或者建议是可靠的。
常用表达
You'd better do...
2. You should do...
3. You need to do...
4.If I were you, I would do...
5.If he were here, he would do...
6.Why not/Why don't you...
7.It would be a good idea if...
8.As/So far as I am concerned, I plan to...
9.For one thing...; for another...
10.In conclusion, I support the statement that...11. According to all the reasons/conclusions
above, it is clear/obvious that...
Taking all these factors into consideration/ account, we may reach the conclusion that...
素材积累
1.必备词块
①征求某人的建议：ask for sb’s advice
②在某方面给某人提建议:give / offer sb. advice / tips / suggestions on sth.③提出一些建议:make some advice / suggestions④接受某人的建议:accept / take / follow sb.’ s advice⑤在某方面有困难:have trouble / difficulty with sth.⑥做某事有困难:have trouble / difficulty (in) doing sth.⑦在某方面有问题:have problems with sth.
⑧在我看来:in my opinion; personally; as far as I'm concerned
2.必备句型
(1)表明写信目的
① I am sorry to hear that you have trouble in... Now I'd like to offer you some advice.
② Hearing that you have trouble in... , I' d like to give you some advice. / I'm very pleased to know that... Here are some of my suggestions.
③ Learning that... , I am writing to give you some suggestions on how to do it well.
(2)阐述建议
①As for the suggestions on... , first of all , ... Secondly , ... In addition,...
②From where I stand , ... Besides , ... Last but not least , ...
③ For one thing ,... For another , ... What's more ,...
(3)表达希望
①I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. / I hope you will find my advice helpful.②I hope that my suggestions prove to be useful in solving your problems.③ I will be happy if my suggestions turn out to be practical.
④I' ll be happy if you can take my advice / ideas into consideration.
典例
假定你是高一学生李华。班里有一名初中时一直很优秀的学生王毅,但进入高中后考试成绩不佳,他感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信:
1.帮他分析原因;
2.给他提出建议;
3.陈述你帮助他的具体打算。注意;1.词数 100 左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Wang Yi,
I'm very sorry to learn your present condition.
Yours,
Li Hua
审题
1.体裁:应用文
2.人称:以第二人称为主
3.时态:以一般现在时为主佳作展示
Dear Wang Yi,
I'm very sorry to learn your present condition. In my opinion[1],something must be wrong with your method of studies[2]. In addition[3],you are experiencing too much pressure,which does great harm to you[4] Therefore, you should change a bit. First[5], you should follow the teachers, and understand all they have taught in class. Second [5], you should make your own plan, and improve yourself bit by bit. Third[6], you should learn to relax. For example[6], you can walk, chat after class, or play table tennis sometimes. If you are willing to talk to me(7], you can call me or send me an email.
Hope you will get used to the new life and have your grades improved[8] soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评
[1]用In my opinion加以过渡，显得自然得体，
很顺畅地切入主题。
[2]用something must be wrong with...锁定其
中的一个原因,恰到好处。
[3]In addition 这一衔接短语较and略显高级，
引出了另外一个导致成绩不佳的原因。
[4]which引导的非限制性定语从句,使语句之
间衔接更紧密。
[5]采用First,Second 和Third这三个衔接词
提出建议,使得行文层次分明。 3.
[6]用For example引出可行性建议。
[7]采用条件句配以be willing to do sth.短语，
使语气显得更亲切。
[8]have sth. done结构在此用得很恰当,非谓
语动词与上文多处出现的从句增强了行文的立体感。
迁移应用
假定你是李华，你的巴基斯坦笔友Muhammad准备明年来你校做交换生，写信向你咨询如何学习中文。请你用英语给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.提出学习中文的建议;
3.期待与祝福。
注意:
1.词数 80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Muhammad,