牛津译林版（2019）选择性必修 第一册Unit 2 The Universal Language Integrated Skills建议信+读后续写课件(共41张PPT)

(共41张PPT)
英语应用文写作
英语应用文
日 记
演讲稿
通 知
推荐信
感谢信
求职信
慰问信
求助信
投诉信
建议信
道歉信
邀请信
誊写
查单词拼写、时态
主谓一致等
①用过渡词(句)
连接句子和段落
②首尾段
审体裁、人称、时态
抓住要点
扩展要点
应用文写作
A letter of advice
高考应用文写作之建议信
写作步骤: 1. 审
怎么审题？
建议信特点及写作步骤
题型特点：建议信是针对某事或某个问题向收信人提出建议和忠告的信件，建议信通常简明扼要，目的明确，具有合理性和说服性。
写作思路与框架 ：“三段式”
第一段：陈述事由+写信目的
第二段：提出具体建议及理由
第三段：表达本人愿望
【篇首句】
①Knowing that you have some trouble in learning English, I am writing to give some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
② You are going to university in Beijing, so I’d like to express my warmest welcome to you. Here are some suggestions about choosing university and preparations for it.
1. You’d better do / You are supposed to do/You should do …
2. You need to do …
3. You can do …
4. It’s a good way to …
【篇中句】
【篇尾句】
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
①Thinking (审题）
②Outlining（列提纲,写要点）
③Expanding（扩词成句）
④Linking（连句成篇）
⑤Polishing（润色定稿）
How to Write a composition
假如你是李华，你的网友英国交换生Lily正在中国学习汉语。她发邮件向你诉说了她的困扰：不适应新的学习环境，很孤独。请给她回复邮件，内容包括：
表示理解给予安慰；2.提出建议并给出理由
注意： 1.词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
Thinking (审题）
Step 1
1、交换生an exchange student;
2、做某事很困难：have trouble doing sth./have problems doing sth;
3、适应新的学习环境：adapt to the new learning environment;
4、很孤独：You feel lonely.（You are alone你很孤单）
Para.1 开头
Para.2 正文
Para.3 结尾
Outlining （列出提纲，写要点）
Step 2
假如你是李华，你的网友英国交换生Lily正在中国学习汉语。她发邮件向你诉说了她的困扰：不适应新的学习环境，很孤独。请给她回复邮件，内容包括：
表示理解给予安慰；2.提出建议并给出理由
注意： 1.词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
表示理解并给予安慰+写信目的
建议，原因及相关做法
表达愿望
Dear Lily,
Knowing that , I’m writing to give you some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
Firstly, you’d better （建议1） . （建议1相关的做法及原因）Secondly, you should （建议2） . （建议2相关的做法及原因） Last but not the least, you need to （建议3） . （建议3相关的做法及原因）
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
正文：
建议及原因
Outlining （列出提纲，写要点）
Step 2
1. Studying:
（1）Plan your time and change your habits;
（2）Ask your teachers and classmates for help;
（3）Use a dictionary.
2. Life/Emotion:
（1）Make friends to share feelings with them;
（2）Take part in some activities to know about Chinese cultures.
（3）Go out to visit some places and enjoy Chinese food;
（4）Listen to music and go for a walk.
Knowing that you have trouble adapting to the new learning environment, I am writing to give you some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
Para 1（Beginning）
Expanding (扩词成句）
Step 3
1. You should plan your time/ take advantage of/ make the most of your time so that you will adapt to the new learning environment easily.
2. You can take part in some after-class activities, which will give you an opportunity to relax yourself.
3. You are supposed to use a dictionary that can help you understand some unfamiliar words.
Para2：建议及原因
Expanding (扩词成句）
Step 3
Para. 3（Ending）
Expanding (扩词成句）
Step 3
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
首先，……
To begin with, …
Firstly …
其次，……
Secondly/Thirdly
What’s more, …
In addition, …
最后，……
Finally/Last but not least, …
Linking (连句成篇）
Step 4
添加合适的过渡词：
Dear Lily,
Knowing that you have trouble adapting to the new learning environment, I am writing to give you some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
Firstly, you should plan your time/ take advantage of/ make the most of your time so that you will adapt to the new learning environment easily. It will be a good choice to make a list of all the homework you have to do. After quickly finishing your homework, you will have time to do what you want to do. Secondly, you need to make some friends, with whom you can share your feelings. Don’t be afraid to talk to others. They are friendly and willing to help you. What’s more, you are supposed to use a dictionary that can help you understand some unfamiliar words. Last but not least, ask your teachers and classmates for help, go out to visit some places and enjoy Chinese food, which will help me suit to the new environment quickly.
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack来信向你求助，说进入高中后因为考试压力大。晚上常要难以入睡或半夜易醒，睡眼问题对健康和学习产生了不良影响。请你用英语给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1.表示理解和安慰；
2.提出至少2条建议。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
Knowing that , I’m writing to give you some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
Firstly, you’d better （建议1） . （建议1相关的做法及原因）Secondly, you should （建议2） . （建议2相关的做法及原因） Last but not the least, you need to （建议3） . （建议3相关的做法及原因）
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Jack,
Knowing that you are having trouble getting a good night’s sleep as a result of stress from exams, I’m writing to give you some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
Firstly, you'd better have a balanced lifestyle with the right attitude. Go to bed and wake around the same time each day and avoid drinks that may keep you from sleeping, such as coffee and tea. Secondly, clear your head of stress and worry from your day before bedtime. Last but not the least, an exam is just a way to find the weaknesses in your learning process. Therefore, you don't have to worry too much about the results.
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华，你的英国朋友San发来Email说，考试临近时，他总会感到焦虑，请你给他回复， 内容主要包括：
1. 向Sam表示问候和安慰。
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
Knowing that , I’m writing to give you some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
Firstly, you’d better （建议1） . （建议1相关的做法及原因）Secondly, you should （建议2） . （建议2相关的做法及原因） Last but not the least, you need to （建议3） . （建议3相关的做法及原因）
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
24
Dear San,
Knowing that you feel anxious before exams, I’m writing to give you some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
Firstly, you should plan your time. Only in this way can you arrange time efficiently and know how long a single reviewing task will take. If you can review all the knowledge, you won’t be so concerned. Secondly, you need to keep a positive attitude. That is to say, you need to have confidence in yourself and look at everything positively. Thirdly, it is advisable for you to listen to music, take exercise and communicate with your friends, which helps you to get rid of pressure. In addition, clear your head of stress and worry from your day before bedtime. Last but not least, an exam is just a way to find the weaknesses in your learning process. Therefore, you don't have to worry too much about the results.
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack来信向你求助，说进入高中后因为考试压力大。晚上常要难以入睡或半夜易醒，睡眼问题对健康和学习产生了不良影响。请你用英语给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1.表示理解和安慰；
2.提出至少2条建议。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
Knowing that , I’m writing to give you some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
Firstly, you’d better （建议1） . （建议1相关的做法及原因）Secondly, you should （建议2） . （建议2相关的做法及原因） Last but not the least, you need to （建议3） . （建议3相关的做法及原因）
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Jack,
Knowing that you are having trouble getting a good night’s sleep as a result of stress from exams, I’m writing to give you some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
Firstly, you'd better have a balanced lifestyle with the right attitude. Go to bed and wake around the same time each day and avoid drinks that may keep you from sleeping, such as coffee and tea. Secondly, clear your head of stress and worry from your day before bedtime. Last but not the least, an exam is just a way to find the weaknesses in your learning process. Therefore, you don't have to worry too much about the results.
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华，你的网友英国交换生Lily正在中国学习汉语。她发邮件向你诉说了她的困扰：不适应新的学习环境，很孤独。请给她回复邮件，内容包括：
表示理解给予安慰；2.提出建议并给出理由
注意： 1.词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
1、交换生an exchange student;
2、做某事很困难：have trouble doing sth./have problems doing sth;
3、适应新的学习环境：adapt to the new learning environment;
4、很孤独：You feel lonely.（You are alone你很孤单）
Dear Lily,
Knowing that , I’m writing to give you some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
Firstly, you’d better （建议1） . （建议1相关的做法及原因）Secondly, you should （建议2） . （建议2相关的做法及原因） Last but not the least, you need to （建议3） . （建议3相关的做法及原因）
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Lily,
Knowing that you have trouble adapting to the new learning environment, I am writing to give you some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
Firstly, you should plan your time/ take advantage of/ make the most of your time so that you will adapt to the new learning environment easily. It will be a good choice to make a list of all the homework you have to do. After quickly finishing your homework, you will have time to do what you want to do. Secondly, you need to make some friends, with whom you can share your feelings. Don’t be afraid to talk to others. They are friendly and willing to help you. What’s more, you are supposed to use a dictionary that can help you understand some unfamiliar words. Last but not least, ask your teachers and classmates for help, go out to visit some places and enjoy Chinese food, which will help me suit to the new environment quickly.
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华，你的英国朋友San发来Email说，考试临近时，他总会感到焦虑，请你给他回复， 内容主要包括：
1. 向Sam表示问候和安慰。
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
Knowing that , I’m writing to give you some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
Firstly, you’d better （建议1） . （建议1相关的做法及原因）Secondly, you should （建议2） . （建议2相关的做法及原因） Last but not the least, you need to （建议3） . （建议3相关的做法及原因）
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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Dear San,
Knowing that you feel anxious before exams, I’m writing to give you some advice. Here are some suggestions that may be helpful.
Firstly, you should plan your time. Only in this way can you arrange time efficiently and know how long a single reviewing task will take. If you can review all the knowledge, you won’t be so concerned. Secondly, you need to keep a positive attitude. That is to say, you need to have confidence in yourself and look at everything positively. Thirdly, it is advisable for you to listen to music, take exercise and communicate with your friends, which helps you to get rid of pressure. In addition, clear your head of stress and worry from your day before bedtime. Last but not least, an exam is just a way to find the weaknesses in your learning process. Therefore, you don't have to worry too much about the results.
I hope my advice will be of some value to you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
读后续写
好难
不想写
看不懂
不会写
无从下手
看到读后续写的你
“两个读，一个写”
一读前文理情节
二读段首续发展
三写后文重表达
“读”什么？
(5W1H)
When it happened
Where it happened
Who is involved
What happened
Why it happened？
How to solve the problem
The vendor reached them just before the taxi could take off. He knocked on the door of the taxi constantly. Seema tried to ignore him, but something caught her attention. When she looked at the vendor, she saw that he was holding a bracelet, and she immediately recognized it. It was her daughter's bracelet. Seema rolled down the window of the taxi, and immediately, that vendor handed over the bracelet to Seema through that window and said, “Madam, your daughter lost her bracelet. It is valuable.” Seema took the bracelet automatically.
Having got back her daughter's bracelet, Seema didn't feel happy but sorry. Before she could say anything, the vendor had left. Seema realized her mistake and learned an important lesson for life. She felt sorry for thinking wrongly of that vendor just because of his poor appearance. Seema asked the taxi driver to wait a moment and made her way back to the vendor. She said sorry to the vendor for wronging him and bought some snacks from him her to express her thanks.
Homework
1、背诵模板，今晚，明早，后早抽背，没背出来的同学，抄10遍;
2、复习单词和固学案。
THANKS