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Unit3 Food and Culture
---Using language
Explore the title
What is the passage mainly about
Where is this text most likely from
A. A novel. B. A guidebook. C. A diary. D. A magazine.
What is the main purpose of the passage
A. To introduce a new diet to people.
B. To analyse the composition of food.
C. To explain the effect of sweet on health.
D. To tell readers what is a healthy diet.
Read each paragraph and underline the topic sentences.
1
2
3
4
5
A. Slow Eating is Good
B. Reducing Sweets is Key
C. The Real Killer is Sugar
D. The Way you look at Food is Most Important
E. Keep it Fresh and Balanced
1
2
3
4
5
Match the subheadings with the paragraphs.
Summarize the main idea
真正的杀手是糖
减少甜食是关键
保持食物 新鲜和平衡
慢食有益。
对待食物的方式是最重要的
Conclusion (Para 5)
Advice on healthy eating
(Para 2-4)
Introduce a topic or a phenomenon
(Para 1)
Read for the structure
How to make your advice convincing and persuasive
linking words
data
quotation
examples
make a comparison
research results
Supporting details
Explore the writing methods
Study the language and structure
Task 1: What are the key details that support each point
A. The real driver of poor health is not so much fatty food, as it is sugar.
Detail(s):
Heart disease is the number one killer of Americans. And in America, people who receive 25% of their daily calories or more through sugar are twice as likely to die from heart disease than people who receive less than 10% a day.
Read and study
Para 1:The Real Killer is Sugar
Give data(from authorities) ,
Make a comparison
B: Much of this extra sugar comes from sweets and sweet drinks.
Detail(s):
The average American gets 1/3 of his or her sugar through sweet drinks alone.
Para 2 Reducing Sweets is Key
Give data;
Quote recommendations from authorities
C: You can keep healthy by consuming different categories of fresh foods... rather than processed foods.
Detail(s) :_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Fruit and vegetables are full of vitamins and fibre.
Processed foods often contain less nutrition, and have higher quantities of sugar, salt, and fat than fresh ingredients.
Para 3
Make a comparison
D: A fundamental key to healthy eating is to eat slowly.
Detail(s):
Detail 1: People who chew too quickly end up eating too much food because they still feel hungry.
Detail 2: Eating slowly also allows your body to digest your food better and will allow you to enjoy your food more.
Para 4 Slow Eating is Good
Make a comparison
Find out the linking words in the passage that introduce another way of saying what was already mentioned in the previous sentence.
Circle the linking words in the passage which show that contrasting ideas are being introduced.
Task 2: What can we use to make the text coherent
Find the linking words in the passage which are used to list or add information.
Find the linking words in the passage which are used to give examples.
Summarize different connectors(连接词) and their functions.
put more simply
in other words
What this means is that
that is to say
to put it in another way
1.“换句话说”
重述前面的观点
however 然而
rather than 而不是
on the contrary 相反,而不是
rather 相反,反而
instead 而不是
unlike (用于对比)与…不同
2.“表对比”
引出,相反的观点或看法
besides
in addition
what is more
moreover
furthermore
additionally
3.“表递进”
增加更多的信息
for example
take ... as an example
for instance
such as
4.举例子
Para.2—Point of view
+
Supporting details
linking words
figures/data
examples
research results
quotation
make a comparison
Para.1—Introduction
Introduce a topic or a phenomenon
structure
Summary—How to organize a practical writing of a healthy diet
Para.3—Conclusion
近期,你校将举行一次关于“我的饮食习惯”的主题征文活动,请你结合自身的饮食习惯写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.是否吃甜食和垃圾食品;
2.饮食中各类食物所占比例;
3.一日三餐是否有规律;
4.你自身的感受。
注意:可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Time to practice
Para1:Introduce the topic
Para2:Talk about your personal eating habits
Para3:Your feelings.
二、要点陈述,语言规范
1.用recently,a hot topic引出话题。
最近健康饮食是人们的一个热点话题,因为饮食在我们日常生活中起着重要的作用。
___________________________________________, for diet plays an important role in our daily life.
Healthy diet is a hot topic among people recently
2.根据提示依次写出三个自身的饮食习惯。
(1)首先,我很少吃甜食,更别说垃圾食品了。
Firstly, I rarely _______________________________ junk foods.
(2)其次,我的饮食中包含大量蔬菜和水果。
Secondly, my diet __________________________________________.
(3)蔬菜和水果能够提供我每日所需的维生素。
Vegetables and fruits can _____________________________________.
consume sweet foods, let alone
contains quantities of green vegetables and fruits
supply/provide me with necessary vitamins
(6)句式升级 [用非限制性定语从句连接句(2)和句(3)]
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Secondly, my diet contains quantities of green vegetables and fruits, which can supply/provide me with necessary vitamins.
(4)第三,我的饮食中也包含适量的肉类和丰富的奶制品。
Thirdly, ____________________________________________ are also included in my diet.
(5)第四,我每天在同一时间吃三顿饭,即使在假期也是如此。
Fourthly, I _______________________at the same time each day, regardless of holidays.
a modest amount of meat and rich dairy products
take three meals a day
用most fundamentally连接句(4)和句(5)。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thirdly, a modest amount of meat and rich dairy products are also included in my diet.Most fundamentally, I take three meals a day at the same time each day, regardless of holidays.
3.用personally来表达自身饮食习惯所带来的感受。
就我个人而言,坚持健康饮食帮助我保持体形。希望你能加入我的行列中来!
Personally, ___________________________ helps me stay in shape.Hope you can join me!
sticking to a healthy diet
参考范文:
Healthy diet is a hot topic among people recently, for diet plays an important role in our daily life.
As for me, I have a healthy diet. Firstly, I rarely consume sweet foods, let alone junk food. Secondly, my diet contains quantities of green vegetables and fruits, which can supply/provide me with necessary vitamins. Thirdly, a modest amount of meat and rich dairy products are also included in my diet. Most fundamentally, I take three meals a day at the same time each day, regardless of holidays.
Personally, sticking to a healthy diet helps me stay in shape.Hope you can join me!
skip breakfast/do sth without having breakfast
高脂肪的食物
有营养的食物
对……有害
从……获益
各种各样的食物
规律进餐
固定的饮食习惯
吃适量的食物
均衡饮食
fatty food
nutritious food
do harm to
benefit from
a variety of foods
have meals regularly
consistent eating habits
consume a modest amount of food
a balanced diet
不吃早餐
暴饮暴食
挑食
健康饮食类应用文“黄金”词句
be picky/particular/fastidious about food
eat and drink too much/eat like a horse
少油少盐
避免高脂肪食物
食用新鲜食物,减少加工或冷冻食物
avoid the dishes with high calories
which be less in oil and salt
...including less oil and salt
cut down on oil and salt
Have fresh food while reducing processed or frozen food
健康饮食类应用文“黄金”词句
1.最近健康饮食是一个热门话题,因为饮食在我们的日常生活中发挥着重要作用。
2.人们逐渐意识到健康是一个人能够拥有的最有价值的东西。
3.据说许多学生早上什么都不吃,这对他们的健康是有害的。
Healthy diet is a heated topic among people recently, for diet plays an important role in our daily life.
People come to realize that good health is the most valuable thing a person can have.
It’s said that many students do not eat anything at all in the morning, which is very bad for their health.
4.我认为你不健康的饮食和你的问题有很大的关系。
健康饮食类应用文“黄金”词句
I think your unhealthy diet is closely associated with your problems.
5.此外,我们应该注重饮食均衡,这能保证我们必要的营养。
Besides, we should focus on a balanced diet, which assures us the necessary nutrition.
建议...
My advice is that...
I think you ought to/should do...
I’d like to advise you to ...
It is suggested that you should...
You’d better...