牛津译林版（2019）必修 第一册Unit 3 Getting along with others祝贺信导学案-（无答案）

How to write a congratulatoin letter
Learning aims:
1.熟练掌握祝贺信文体结构特点。
2.正确运用祝贺信的功能性词句。
3.在限定时间内完成80 字左右的祝贺信
PART1.写作技法
祝贺信是向对方表示祝贺的信件,一般用于对方有什么喜事或取得了什么成绩以及节日寿诞等。具体写作结构为:
PART2.增分佳句
1吸引眼球开头句
1).Congratulations on your winning the first place in the Chemistry contest.
2).I am delighted to learn that you have won the first place in the English speech contest
3).I am writing to express my congratulations on your success in the College Entrance Examination.
4).I am writing to congratulate you on ...
5).I am writing to offer you my sincerest congratulations on sth. (your winning the prize
Make sentences with the useful expressions above
祝贺你在汉语演讲比赛中获得第一名.。
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得知你被北大录取我很高兴。
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我写这封信是为了表达对你们成功举办教师节晚会的祝贺
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我写信祝贺你今天高中毕业
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2.亮点出彩篇中句
1)It came as no surprise to me /is no surprise to me that you are the winner of ...
2) It was persistence and determination that led you, step by step, to your success.
是你的……导致你的成功。
3). You showed persistence in the competition, which contributed to your final success.
这是很久以来我听过的最令人高兴的消息。
4). There is no denying/doubt that your success partly lies in your talent for tennis.
5). You couldnt have made such remarkable achievements without your continuous effort.
Make sentences with the useful structure above
1)你在汉字听写大赛中获胜对我来说并不奇怪。（ it作形式主语）
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2)是你平时坚持不断的练习促成你今天的成功。（强调句型）
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3)你在比赛中表现出非凡的毅力和决心，这令人很钦佩（非限制性定语从句）
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4)没有平时不断的努力，你不可能取得如此非凡的成就（without含蓄虚拟）
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3.韵味无穷结尾句
1 ).Congratulations again, and I wish you further success!
2 ).Congratulations again and I’m looking forward to your further achievements
Part3典例示范：
假定你是校体育部部长李华,你校英国交换生Ivan在全市网球比赛中获得了第一名。请你用英语给Ivan写一封信,向他表示祝贺,内容包括:
表明得知Ivan获奖的消息;
对Ivan的成功进行积极评价;
表达衷心的祝贺。
注意:写作词数应为80左右;
满分范文
Dear Ivan,
I am much delighted to learn that you got the first place in the city tennis contest. I am writing to offer you my sincerest congratulations.
As we know,you are really talented in playing tennis,but undoubtedly,you couldn’t have made such remarkable achievements without your continuous effort. More importantly,you showed persistence in the competition,which contributed to your final success. We are all proud that you have won glory for our school.
Again,I’d like to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt congratulations and best wishes to you.I wish you greater success in the future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Part4.演练提能
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友John获得了在华高中留学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
祝贺获奖;
肯定付出;
再次祝贺并表示祝愿：
注意:写作词数应为80左右;
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