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2024人教版高中英语选择性必修第三册同步
Part 4 Writing
关于艺术展览的写作
写作题目
假定你是李华,想邀请好友Jack一起参加中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封信,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.介绍中国剪纸。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
思路点拨
主题 邀请朋友参加剪纸展览 体裁 应用文
布局 主体部分可分为三段: 第一段:说明写信目的以及展览的时间和地点; 第二段:介绍中国剪纸; 第三段:表达期望。
人称 以第三人称为主 时态 以一般现在时为主
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.展览
2. adj.艺术的
3. adj.有很大影响力的
4. 喜欢
5. 尤其;特别
6. 值得
答案 1.exhibition 2.artistic 3.influential
4.be fond of 5.in particular 6.be worthy of
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:说明写信目的以及展览的时间和地点
(1)知道你喜欢中国传统艺术,我写信邀请你参加一个中国剪纸艺术展。
Knowing that you
, I am writing to invite you to attend a Chinese paper-cutting art exhibition.
(2)它将在下周日上午8点到下午5点在我们的市中心的艺术画廊举行。
It from 8:00 am to 5:00 pm next Sunday in our city center.
第二段:介绍中国剪纸
(3)在中国,剪纸是一种传统的艺术形式。
Paper-cutting is a traditional in China.
(4)它有着悠久的历史和很大的艺术价值。
It has a long history and holds .
(5)人们经常用剪纸来美化他们的家,尤其是在节日和婚礼期间。
People often with the paper-cutting,
during festivals and weddings.
(6)此外,还有一些有影响力的艺术家将现场表演如何剪纸。
In addition, there are who will perform how to make the paper-cutting on the spot.
第三段:表达期望
(7)总之,这真的值得你的关注。
All in all, it is really .
答案 (1)are fond of traditional Chinese art
(2)will be held in the art gallery
(3)art form
(4)much artistic value
(5)beautify their homes;in particular
(6)some influential artists
(7)worthy of your attention
2.句式升级
(8)用不定式作后置定语合并句(1)和句(2)
(9)将句(3)和句(4)合并为含有定语从句的句子
答案 (8)Knowing that you are fond of traditional Chinese art, I am writing to invite you to attend a Chinese paper-cutting art exhibition to be held in the art gallery from 8:00 am to 5:00 pm next Sunday in our city center.
(9)Paper-cutting is a traditional art form in China, which has a long history and holds much artistic value.
连句成篇
参考范文
Dear Jack,
Knowing that you are fond of traditional Chinese art, I am writing to invite you to attend a Chinese paper-cutting art exhibition to be held in the art gallery from 8:00 am to 5:00 pm next Sunday in our city center.
Paper-cutting is a traditional art form in China, which has a long history and holds much artistic value. People often beautify their homes with the paper-cutting, in particular during festivals and weddings. In addition, there are some influential artists who will perform how to make the paper-cutting on the spot.
All in all, it is really worthy of your attention. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作积累
关于艺术展览的写作
一、说明要举办的相关展览
1.Our school is going to hold an art exhibition, which will start from June 15th and last for three weeks.
2.An International High School Student Photography Show is going to be held in our school.
3.As scheduled, the activity will be held in the lecture hall at 9: 00 a.m. next Wednesday.
二、表示邀请或者告知
1.As I know, you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection.
2.Knowing that you are a classical music lover, I'd like to invite you to join me for a concert.
3.On behalf of the student union, I feel greatly honored to invite you to participate in the activity.
三、说明相关展览的目的、内容、参与人员、意义等
1.The theme of the show is how to protect the environment.
2.Any student who is interested is welcome to participate.
3.There are all kinds of activities which can satisfy different students.
4.Personally, it is a valuable chance to appreciate the talent of this musical genius.
四、表达期望
1.If you are available at that time, I really hope that you will come.
2.Please let me know in advance if you can come and I'm looking forward to your reply.
3.If you can come, I'm sure you'll have an unforgettable experience.
实战演练
(2021浙江)
昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.观展感受;
3.推荐观展。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
读后续写
写作题目
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mother's Gift
I grew up in a small town where the primary school was a ten-minute walk from my house. When the noon bell rang, I would race breathlessly home. My mother would be standing at the top of the stairs, smiling down at me.
One lunchtime when I was in the third grade would always stay with me. I had been picked to be the princess in the school play, and for weeks my mother had rehearsed my lines so hard with me. But no matter how easily I acted at home, as soon as I stepped onstage, every word disappeared from my head. Finally, my teacher took me aside. She explained that she had written a narrator's(旁白员)part for the play, and asked me to change roles. Her words, kindly expressed, still hurt me, especially when I saw my part go to another girl.
I didn't tell my mother what had happened when I went home for lunch that day. But she sensed my pain. Instead of suggesting we practise my lines, she asked if I wanted to walk in the yard.
It was a lovely spring day and the rose vine was turning green. Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions(蒲公英)on the grass in clusters, as if a painter had touched our landscape with a bit of gold. I watched my mother casually bend down by one dandelion. “I think I'm going to dig up all these weeds,” she said, pulling it up by the roots. “From now on, we'll have only roses in this garden.”
“But I like dandelions,” I protested. “All flowers are beautiful—even dandelions.”
My mother looked at me seriously. “Yes, every flower gives pleasure in its own way, doesn't it ” she asked thoughtfully. I nodded, pleased that I had won her over. “And that is true of people too,” she added. “Not everyone can be a princess, but there is no shame in that.” Knowing that she had guessed my pain, I started to cry as I told her what had happened. She listened and smiled reassuringly(安慰地).
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
Paragraph 1:
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said,
Paragraph 2:
After the play, I took home the dandelion.
文本分析
初识文本
重点词汇
1.sense vt.觉察到
2.casually adv.随意地,漫不经心地
3.dig up挖出
4.protest v.反对;坚决地表示
5.shame n.羞耻;丢脸
障碍词汇
1.rehearse v.背诵;排演,排练
2.vine n.藤蔓;藤
3.cluster n.簇;团
4.win over说服,赢得……的支持
长难句剖析
原句 Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions on the grass in clusters, as if a painter had touched our landscape with a bit of gold.
分析 该句是一个主从复合句。as if引导方式状语从句,从句中使用了虚拟语气。
译文 在大树下,我们可以看到草地上成簇的黄色的蒲公英,仿佛是一位画家为我们的风景增添了一点金色。
故事要素
深研文本
预测情节发展
第一段:她说:“但你会成为一名出色的旁白员。”→妈妈又说了一些鼓励“我”的话→“我”接受了旁白员的角色,努力排练→“我”在演出前看到了妈妈送的一朵蒲公英,战胜了紧张→演出成功
第二段:校园剧结束后,“我”把蒲公英带回家→妈妈把这朵蒲公英保存起来留作纪念→带给“我”的感触
遣词造句
1.用适当的单词或短语填空
(1) a shining smile 带着灿烂的笑容
(2)be of vital 至关重要的
(3)go on 上台
(4)keep... 陪伴……
(5) 结果
(6) 注视
(7) v.记起,回忆起
(8) adj.宝贵的
答案 (1)wear (2)significance/importance
(3)stage (4)company
(5)turn out (6)gaze at
(7)recall (8)precious
2.完成句子
(1)“但你会成为一名出色的旁白员,”她说,一如既往地鼓励和安慰我。
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said, and me as she always did.
(2)“旁白员的角色同样重要,”母亲补充道,她温柔的脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
“The narrator's part is equally important,” my mother added,
on her soft face.
(3)时光飞逝,演出的那一天到了。
Time had and it reached the performance day.
(4)就在那一刻,我发现了一朵母亲塞进我口袋里陪伴我的蒲公英。
At that very moment, I found a dandelion
by my mother to .
(5)妈妈仔细地注视着那朵蒲公英,轻轻地把它夹进一本字典里,像往常一样笑了。
Mom carefully the dandelion, gently
a dictionary and smiled as usual.
(6)虽然几十年过去了,但我总是记起我们一起度过的宝贵的午餐时光。
Though decades has passed, I
we were together.
(7)我很感激母亲脸上的微笑和她的体贴。
I the smiles on my mother's face and her kindness.
答案 (1)encouraging; comforting
(2)wearing a shining smile
(3)flown by
(4)put into my pocket; keep me company
(5)gazed at; placed it into
(6)constantly recall the precious lunchtime
(7)was grateful for
3.句式升级
(8)用强调句型强调时间状语改写句(4)
(9)用形容词作状语合并句(6)和句(7)
答案 (8)It was at that very moment that I found a dandelion put into my pocket by my mother to keep me company.
(9)Though decades has passed, I constantly recall the precious lunchtime we were together, grateful for the smiles on my mother's face and her kindness.
连句成篇
Paragraph 1:
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said,
Paragraph 2:
After the play, I took home the dandelion.
参考范文
Paragraph 1:
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said, encouraging and comforting me as she always did. “The narrator's part is equally important,” my mother added, wearing a shining smile on her soft face. I began to accept that the narrator was of vital significance and rehearsed even harder. Time had flown by and it reached the performance day. Before going on stage I still felt nervous, but it was at that very moment that I found a dandelion put into my pocket by my mother to keep me company. The play turned out to be a great success.
Paragraph 2:
After the play, I took home the dandelion. Mom carefully gazed at the dandelion, gently placed it into a dictionary and smiled as usual. We were perhaps the only people who would keep such a sorry-looking weed. Though decades has passed, I constantly recall the precious lunchtime we were together, grateful for the smiles on my mother's face and her kindness.
写作积累
环境描写
一、环境描写的手法
1.借助感官(视觉、听觉、嗅觉、味觉、触觉)来进行环境描写。如:After the rain, the lotus flowers in the pond are in full blossom. They give off a faint scent.(借助视觉和嗅觉进行描写)
2.从时空的角度进行环境描写,例如,由上到下、由远及近等方式。如:I saw many kids who were laughing happily on the lawn. Then I glanced up and saw a pair of kites, red with long blue tails, soaring in the sky.(采用由下到上的方式进行描写)
二、环境描写的素材
the blue sky蓝天,the songs of birds鸟鸣,the raining evening 雨夜,the green grass绿草,the setting/rising sun落日/冉冉升起的太阳,a gust of wind一阵狂风,the soft and cool wind柔和且凉爽的风
答案与分层梯度式解析
UNIT 1 ART
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
A fantastic Chinese painting exhibition hosted by our school is scheduled to run from June 10th to June 15th in the School Art Hall.
I paid a visit to the exhibition yesterday, which deeply impressed me by those extraordinary artworks of talented students. The exhibition is not only one of the most unforgettable events for us students but also a platform to display the charm of Chinese culture.
I highly recommend a visit to the exhibition,which will provide both a visual feast and a deep insight into a culture of great diversity. Don't miss it!
1.重点词汇
①be scheduled to do sth.预计做某事 ②pay a visit to...参观…… ③impress sb. by sth.用某物给某人留下深刻印象 ④display v.展示
2.亮点句型
①I paid a visit to the exhibition yesterday, which deeply impressed me by those extraordinary artworks of talented students. (which引导非限制性定语从句)昨天我参观了展览,它用才华横溢的学生们的那些非凡的艺术作品给我留下了深刻的印象。
②The exhibition is not only one of the most unforgettable events for us students but also a platform to display the charm of Chinese culture.(not only...but also...连接两个并列的表语)这次展览不仅是我们学生最难忘的活动之一,也是展示中国文化魅力的平台。
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