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2024人教版高中英语选择性必修第三册同步
Part 4 Writing
描写一个坚持不懈的人
写作题目
假定你是李华,你报名参加了学校举办的主题为“The person I respect most”的英文演讲比赛。请你根据以下内容,以我国农业科学家袁隆平的事迹为素材写一篇演讲稿。
1.出生时间和出生地(1930年,北京);
2.主要事迹和贡献(克服困难栽培出杂交水稻);
3.优秀品质。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: 杂交水稻 hybrid rice
Hello, everyone!
I'm Li Hua. I'd like to share the person I respect most with you.
Thanks for listening!
思路点拨
主题 人物介绍 体裁 演讲稿
布局 主体部分分为三段: 第一段:引出话题; 第二段:介绍人物基本信息以及事迹和贡献; 第三段:介绍人物的优秀品质。
人称 以第三人称为主 时态 以一般过去时为主
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.耐久力;忍耐力
2. n.坚持不懈;毅力;韧性
3. n.承诺;保证;奉献
4. 对……充满热情
答案 1.endurance 2.perseverance
3.commitment 4.be enthusiastic about
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第二段:介绍人物基本信息以及事迹和贡献
(1)他在上大学时,对自己的专业课程极富热情。
He his major course when he was in college.
(2)他克服了许多困难,并且不管前方有什么挑战他从不放弃,最终他研制出了杂交水稻。
He overcame a number of difficulties and he never gave up
might lie ahead. Ultimately, he developed the hybrid rice.
(3)杂交水稻产量高,有助于养活国内外的人们。
Hybrid rice has a high output and helps feed people
.
第三段:介绍人物的优秀品质
(4)袁隆平因他出色的忍耐力而出名。
Yuan Longping is distinguished for his outstanding .
(5)他百分之百地投入农业研究,他坚持不懈的精神对人们产生了深刻的影响。
He did agricultural research with one hundred percent and his spirit of has a deep effect on people.
答案 (1)was hugely enthusiastic about
(2)no matter what challenges (3)at home and abroad (4)endurance (5)commitment;perseverance
2.句式升级
(6)用such...that...改写句(3)
答案 (6)Hybrid rice has such a high output that it helps feed people at home and abroad.
连句成篇
参考范文
Hello, everyone!
I'm Li Hua. I'd like to share the person I respect most with you.
Yuan Longping is known as the “father of hybrid rice”. He was hugely enthusiastic about his major course when he was in college. He overcame a number of difficulties and he never gave up no matter what challenges might lie ahead. Ultimately, he developed the hybrid rice.Hybrid rice has such a high output that it helps feed people at home and abroad.
Yuan Longping is distinguished for his outstanding endurance. He did agricultural research with one hundred percent commitment and his spirit of perseverance has a deep effect on people.
Thanks for listening!
写作积累
描写励志人物的表达升级
1.在他上大学的时候
while he was in college→while in college
2.积极参加
take an active part in→be actively involved in
3.对……感兴趣
be interested in→be keen on
4.喜欢……
be fond of→be enthusiastic about
5.致力于
be devoted to→be committed to
6.不放弃
do not give up→refuse to acknowledge defeat(不服输)
7.坚持
insist on→persevere in
8.能胜任某事
be able to do sth.→be equal to (doing) sth.
9.全心全意地
heart and soul→with one hundred percent commitment
实战演练
假定你们班本周英语课前“一分钟演讲”的题目为“A Strong-willed Person”。请你写一篇演讲稿, 内容包括:
1.你要介绍的人;
2.你的理由;
3.对你的启示。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
A Strong-willed Person
Good morning, everyone!
That's all. Thank you.
答案与分层梯度式解析
UNIT 4 ADVERSITY AND COURAGE
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
A Strong-willed Person
Good morning, everyone!
Today I'd like to talk about a strong-willed person—J.K. Rowling.
When Rowling began the first Harry Potter story, she was too poor to own a typewriter or afford the heating at home, so she had to spend hours in a cafeteria, writing by hand. Rowling was so determined that she overcame all the difficulties and completed the novel in several years. Then after a total of twelve rejections, her first novel was finally published, leading her to great success.
J.K. Rowling is my idol, whose strong will always encourages me to carry on whenever I encounter challenges.
That's all. Thank you.
1.重点词汇
①determined adj.坚决的;坚定的 ②complete v.完成
③rejection n.拒绝 ④carry on继续做 ⑤encounter v.遇到
2.亮点句型
①Rowling was so determined that she overcame all the difficulties and completed the novel in several years.(“so...that...”引导结果状语从句)罗琳是如此坚定,她克服了所有困难,在几年内完成了这部小说。
②Then after a total of twelve rejections, her first novel was finally published, leading her to great success.(现在分词短语作结果状语)在一共被拒十二次之后,她的第一部小说终于出版了,这使她获得了巨大的成功。
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