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2024人教版高中英语选择性必修第四册同步
Part 4 Writing
介绍标志性动物
写作题目
假设你是李华,请你给你的澳大利亚好友Jim写一封邮件介绍中国的国宝——大熊猫,内容包括以下几个方面:
1.大熊猫的特征;
2.大熊猫目前的状况;
3.采取的保护措施。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
思路点拨
主题 介绍大熊猫 体裁 应用文(邮件)
布局 第一部分:大熊猫的特征; 第二部分:大熊猫目前的状况; 第三部分:采取的保护措施及取得的效果。
人称 以第三人称为主 时态 以一般现在时为主
遣词造句
Ⅰ. 用本单元所学单词填空
1. adj.符号的;图标的;象征性的
2. n.领域;领土;范围
3. adj.位于
4. n.哺乳动物
答案 1.iconic 2.domain 3.located
4.mammal
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:大熊猫的特征
(1)大熊猫是中国的标志性动物。
The panda is of China.
(2)大熊猫有一身黑白相间的皮毛。
The panda has .
第二段:大熊猫目前的状况
(3)它是地球上为数不多的存活了数百万年的哺乳动物之一。
It is have been surviving for millions of years on earth.
(4)然而,它已成为濒危物种。
However, it has become .
第三段:采取的保护措施及取得的效果
(5)目前,一个位于四川省的自然领地已经被开辟出来。
Nowadays, a natural domain has been opened up.
(6)大熊猫可以在那里愉快地享受生活。
Pandas can happily there.
(7)大熊猫受到很好的保护。
Pandas .
(8)大熊猫的数量每年都在增加。
The number of pandas every year.
答案 (1)an iconic animal (2)a black and white coat (3)one of the few mammals that (4)an endangered species (5)located in Sichuan Province (6)enjoy their life (7)are well protected (8)is increasing
2.句式升级
(9) 把句(1)和句(2)合并成含有which引导的非限制性定语从句的主从复合句
(10)把句(5)和句(6)合并成含有where引导的非限制性定语从句的主从复合句
(11)把句(7)和句(8)合并成含有which引导的非限制性定语从句的主从复合句
答案 (9)The panda is an iconic animal of China, which has a black and white coat.
(10)Nowadays, a natural domain located in Sichuan Province has been opened up, where pandas can enjoy their life happily.
(11)Pandas are well protected, the number of which is increasing every year.
连句成篇
参考范文
Dear Jim,
I am glad to tell you something about pandas. The panda is an iconic animal of China, which has a black and white coat. It has a body shape typical of bears. Its favorite food is bamboo.
It is known as the national treasure of China. It is one of the few mammals that have been surviving for millions of years on earth. However, it has become an endangered species.
Nowadays, a natural domain located in Sichuan Province has been opened up, where pandas can enjoy their life happily. They are well protected, the number of which is increasing every year.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作积累
亮点短语
feed on以……为食
be native to原产于……
on the edge of dying out处于灭绝的边缘
take active measures采取积极的措施
prevent...from being hurt防止……受到伤害
be polite and friendly to visitors对游客有礼貌和友好
亮点句式
1.It has a wide distribution throughout the country.它在全国各地分布广泛。
2.They spend a lot of time eating, sleeping and hanging onto tree trunks.它们花很多时间吃饭、睡觉和挂在树干上。
3.They are about the size of...and look like...它们大约有……那么大,看起来像……
4.Its nose looks like..., it has feet like...and it’s covered in hair.它的鼻子看起来像……,它的脚像……,它全身长满了毛。
5.The giant panda has become popular in the form of a cultural icon.大熊猫以文化标志的形式流行起来。
6.Almost all of...live in high mountains and prefer a quiet life.几乎所有的……都住在高山上,喜欢安静的生活。
7.As is well known to us, elephants are highly social and intelligent animals.众所周知,大象是高度社会化和聪明的动物。
8.As we all know, pandas are treasures of our country.众所周知,熊猫是我国的国宝。
9.Today the species is on the edge of extinction.现在这个物种濒临灭绝。
10.To protect these endangered species, we should take measures to set up more nature reserves.为了保护这些濒危物种,我们应该采取措施建立更多的自然保护区。
11.It’s time for...to protect them from dying out.是……保护它们免遭灭绝的时候了。
12.Due to the destruction of the natural habitat, the number of...has declined sharply.由于自然栖息地的破坏,……的数量急剧下降。
实战演练 答案见P114
(2022福建福安月考)
根据以下要点,写一篇有关濒危动物——金丝猴的短文。
1.栖息地:大部分金丝猴生活在中国。
2.外貌:金黄色和灰色的毛;尾巴几乎和身体一样长。
3.生活环境:高山密林。
4.生活习性: 主要在树上生活,群居,吃水果、坚果、树叶等。
5.它们的数量减少及原因,呼吁人们保护金丝猴。
注意:
1.词数 80 左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
The Golden Monkey
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
The Golden Monkey
Golden monkeys, which are mostly distributed in China, are lovely animals covered in golden and grey hair, with their tails about the same length as their bodies. As they live in groups in the thick forests of mountainous areas, most of their activities occur in the trees. They generally feed on fruits, nuts as well as leaves. Now this endangered animal is suffering from habitat loss and their population is decreasing, for which they are under our country’s first class protection. It is urged that the public should promote their awareness of protecting this rare animal.
1.重点词汇
①distribute v.分布;分配
②mountainous adj.多山的
③habitat n.栖息地
④promote v.提高
⑤awareness n.意识
2.亮点句型
①Golden monkeys, which are mostly distributed in China, are lovely animals covered in golden and grey hair, with their tails about the same length as their bodies. (which引导非限制性定语从句;with复合结构)金丝猴主要分布在中国,它们非常可爱,全身覆盖着金色和灰色的毛,尾巴和身体差不多长。
②It is urged that the public should promote their awareness of protecting this rare animal.(主语从句)敦促公众提高保护这种稀有动物的意识。
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