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2024人教版高中英语选择性必修第四册同步
Part 4 Writing
以海洋探索为话题的写作
写作题目
最近,你班同学就“探索海洋是否值得”这一话题展开了一场讨论。请你根据下表提供的信息,用英语写一篇短文记录讨论的情况,并谈谈自己的看法。
30%的同学认为 70%的同学认为 你的 观点
1.不值得探索; 2.会对海洋造成污染; 3.一些人残忍地猎杀一些海洋动物,导致它们灭绝。 1.值得探索; 2.为了更好地了解我们的地球,必须进行海洋探索; 3.海洋拥有丰富的资源,有助于解决能源短缺问题。 ……
注意:词数80左右。
思路点拨
主题 探索海洋是否值得 体裁 议论文
布局 第一段:点明讨论话题; 第二段:陈述反对方观点及支持方观点,并给出理由; 第三段:表达个人观点。
人称 第一人称、第三人称 时态 以一般现在时为主
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. v.猎杀
2. adj.海的;海产的;海生的
3. adv.与此同时;(比较两方面)对比之下
4. vt.开发;利用;剥削
5. 残忍地
6. 为了……的利益
答案 1.hunt 2.marine 3.meanwhile
4.exploit 5.without mercy 6.for the benefit of
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:点明讨论话题
(1)最近我们班就海洋是否值得探索进行了激烈的讨论。
Recently our class have had a heated discussion on exploring.
第二段:陈述反对方观点及支持方观点,并给出理由
(2)我们中百分之三十的人认为海洋探索是不值得的。
30% of us think is not worthwhile.
(3)他们认为这样会污染海洋。
They that it will pollute the sea.
(4)一些人残忍地猎杀海洋动物,导致它们灭绝。
Some people and cause them to die out.
(5)然而,我们中百分之七十的人认为海洋值得探索,这对人类有好处。
However, 70% of us think the sea is , which is human beings.
(6)海洋富有各种资源。
The sea is abundant in resources.
(7)海洋使我们能够解决能源短缺问题。
The sea the problem of energy shortages.
第三段:表达个人观点
(8) 就我而言,为了子孙后代的利益,探索海洋是值得的。
, it’s worthwhile to explore the sea future generations.
(9)同时,我们应合理地开发海洋。
Meanwhile, we the sea properly.
答案 (1)whether the sea is worth (2)sea exploration (3)hold the opinion (4)hunt marine animals without mercy (5)worth exploring;beneficial to (6)a variety of
(7)enables us to solve (8)As far as I am concerned;for the benefit of (9)should exploit
2.句式升级
(10)用现在分词合并句(2)和句(3)
(11)用现在分词作结果状语改写句(4)
(12)用定语从句合并句(6)和句(7)
答案 (10)30% of us think sea exploration is not worthwhile, holding the opinion that it will pollute the sea.
(11)Some people hunt marine animals without mercy, causing them to die out.
(12)The sea is abundant in a variety of resources, which enables us to solve the problem of energy shortages.
连句成篇
参考范文
Recently our class have had a heated discussion on whether the sea is worth exploring.
30% of us think sea exploration is not worthwhile, holding the opinion that it will pollute the sea. Some people hunt marine animals without mercy, causing them to die out. However, 70% of us think the sea is worth exploring, which is beneficial to human beings. The sea is abundant in a variety of resources, which enables us to solve the problem of energy shortages.
As far as I am concerned, it’s worthwhile to explore the sea for the benefit of future generations. Meanwhile, we should exploit the sea properly.
写作积累
1.引出讨论话题
(1)Recently...had a heated discussion about whether...or not.最近……就是否……进行了热烈的讨论。
(2)People hold different opinions about...人们对……有不同的看法。
(3) With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that...随着科学技术的发展,越来越多的人认为……
(4) There is a wide discussion nowadays on the problem of...目前,关于……的问题展开了广泛的讨论。
2.对比双方观点及陈述理由
(1)表达支持的:
①Some are in favour of (are for/approve of/agree with/support)it.有些人赞成/同意/支持它。
②There are many advantages of...……有很多优点。
③...play(s) an important part in...……在……中扮演重要角色。
④be of vital significance有重要意义的
⑤benefit a lot from...从……中获益良多
(2)表达反对的:
①Others are against...其他人则反对……
②Some hold the different view that...有些人持不同的观点,认为……
③There are also some disadvantages of...……也有一些不利因素。
④On the problem,others maintain that...关于这个问题,其他人坚称……
⑤But others set forth a totally different argument against...但是其他人提出了一个完全不同的反对……的理由。
⑥...does/do more harm than good.……弊大于利。
3.表明自己的看法及理由
(1)In my opinion/In my view/Personally, it certainly...在我看来/就我个人而言,它当然……
(2)Taking everything into consideration, we should make good use of...综合考虑各方面,我们应该充分利用……
(3)Only in this way can we...只有这样,我们才能……
(4)The reasons for that are as follows...那点的原因如下……
(5)In conclusion, it is clear that...总之,很明显……
实战演练 答案见P123
(2022全国甲改编)
你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.海洋的重要性;
2.保护海洋的倡议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Our Oceans, Our Responsibility
June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day.
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Our Oceans, Our Responsibility
June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day. It aims to raise people’s awareness of protecting oceans.
Why should we protect oceans To begin with, they are a significant source of food. With the world population growing, we are relying on oceans more and more for survival. In addition, not only do oceans produce much oxygen, but they also absorb much carbon dioxide, which remarkably contributes to regulating the Earth’s climate.
However, oceans are being damaged. Huge as they are, they are more sensitive than we think. Thus, it is high time that we took effective measures to protect them. Otherwise, future generations will not forgive us.
1.重点词汇
①awareness n.意识;认识
②to begin with首先
③rely on依赖;依靠
④absorb vt.吸收
⑤remarkably adv.显著地;惊人地
⑥contribute to对……做出贡献;有助于
2.亮点句型
①In addition, not only do oceans produce much oxygen, but they also absorb much carbon dioxide, which remarkably contributes to regulating the Earth’s climate. (not only...but also...连接并列分句,且not only 放在句首,其后面的分句使用了部分倒装;which引导非限制性定语从句,指代前面整个主句的内容) 此外,海洋不仅产生大量的氧气,而且还吸收大量的二氧化碳,这对调节地球气候做出了显著贡献。
②Huge as they are, they are more sensitive than we think.(as引导让步状语从句;than引导比较状语从句) 尽管它们很大,但它们比我们想象的更脆弱。
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