课件16张PPT。九年级（全）Units 1-2 第三部分
高频话题写作指南学着如何学习
写作导图
从昆明近六年学着如何学习相关话题书面表达的命题来看，通常写学习的方法，如2014昆明。Let me tell
you how to
learn EnglishReasonsThe ways
to learn
English more important; to communicate with others…listen carefully, take notes, learn from others, discuss in a group, go over, review, be patient, be active, develop a good habit, work hard, ask classmates or teachers for help, make a plan, make full use of time 亮点句型速成
常用句型：You can solve the problems carefully.
推荐句型：→ ① You must be careful when you solve the problems.
→ ② You can’t be more careful while solving the problems. → ③When you solve the problems, you should be as careful /as possible /you can.
开头句：
There are three good ways that can help you to learn English well.中间句：
1. I think you should read a lot, practice more and ask others for help.
2. It is also a good idea to take notes because it can help you review the lessons. 3. You could try to improve your English by discussing in a group, developing good habits and making full use of time.
4. You should study hard and never give up. 5. You can study it by asking more and learning more from others.
6. Don’t be shy and never be afraid of losing face.
7. The method is so creative!结尾句：
1. Practice makes perfect.
2. Helping others means helping yourself.
3. Knowledge comes from communicating and questioning.
4. Think twice before you do it.
（更多常用词汇见“28天话题词汇分类速记表”话题（十八）语言学习）典例剖析（’14昆明）
A. A happy time
B. Let me tell you _______
要求：
1. 请从所给的A，B两个题目中任选其一作答，分值相同。如选B题，请把题目补充完整再作答，例如：你可以写“Let me tell you my dream”, “Let me tell you how to learn English”, “Let me tell you I love you, Mom”等。2. 注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范。
3. 不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用名字，请用Mike, Gina等英文名字，校名统一用Guangming Middle School。
4. 词数不少于60。【审题指导】
细读所给的文字提示，提取信息：1. 把题目补充完整，Let me tell you how to learn English； 2. 可以为说明文，也可以用具体事例来写成记叙文； 3. 注意写作时的前后顺序，使文章连贯； 4. 词数不少于60词，不得出现真实姓名、校名。【高分范文】
Let me tell you how to learn English
In our life, English is getting more and more important. But many people don’t know how to learn it. Now let me tell you some ideas to learn it.
If you want to use English well, first you should remember English words. Then youcan listen to English songs to improve your listening skills, and you can also talk with your classmates in English in order to improve your spoken English. If you do like this, maybe you’ll find your English is getting better.
If you have good ideas to learn English well, please tell me.【检测菜单】
1. _____________________________越来越重要
2. _________________想要做某事
3. _________________英语单词
4. __________听
5. ____________和……交谈
6. _____________记得more and more importantwant to do sth.English wordslisten totalk withremember课件34张PPT。九年级（全） Units 13-14第三部分
高频话题写作指南保护环境
写作导图
从全国近五年环境保护相关话题书面表达的命题来看，写作角度如下：
1. 记叙一次环保活动。如：2014邵阳志愿者活动，2013襄阳介绍环保活动；
2. 保护环境的措施。如：2014龙东保护水资源，2014贺州节约。亮点句型速成
常用句型：Everyone should protect the environment. And the world will become much more beautiful.
推荐句型：If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.常用句型：We should plant many trees, and we can live better and healthier.
推荐句型：→① We are supposed to plant more and more trees in order to live better and healthier in the future.
→② If we plant more and more trees, we will live better and healthier in the future.开头句：
1. We should not throw litter onto the ground.
2. We should not spit in a public place/cut down the trees.
3. We are supposed to plant more flowers and trees.
4. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin. 中间句：
5. Trees are very helpful and important for us.
6. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution.
7. It’s necessary to save water.
8. Recycling trash is also important.结尾句：
9. It’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment.
10. It’s our duty to protect our environment.
11. It is very important to take care of our environment. （常用词汇见“28天话题词汇分类速记表”话题（二十）世界与环境）写作模板
I’m writing to tell you about a 志愿活动 last week. We got the 火车站 at 8 o’clock on Saturday morning. My classmates and I 决定 to do something to make it更干净整洁. First, we cleaned the benches, and then we捡垃圾 and advised others not to throw rubbish here and there. At noon, we swept theground together and then we left.
We were a little tired after long hours of 努力工作, but we were still very happy. I hope everyone will做贡献 improving the 环境 of our city.
Hope to write soon. Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Lei典例剖析 （’14邵阳）
假设你叫王磊，目前，我市正在开展创建“文明卫生城市”，学校也提出了“垃圾不落地，校园更美丽”的口号，为了积极响应学校号召，上周你和几位同学到火车站进行志愿者活动，贡献自己的一份力量。请把你所做的事写一封电子邮件告诉你的好朋友Bob。Place: train station;
Time: from 8:00 to 12:00 on Saturday morning;
People: you and some classmates;
Activities: clean the benches, pick up the rubbish, sweep the ground;
Feelings: a little tired but happy.【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：1. 文章为电子邮件，要求向朋友讲述在响应“文明卫生城市”“垃圾不落地，校园更美丽”的活动中，我和同学们一起到火车站进行志愿者活动（包括时间、地点、人物、 活动、感受）。2. 本文描述自己的经历，写作时用第一人称，其他人用第三人称。3. 回忆事件通常用一般过去时，抒发个人情感及感悟用一般现在时。语句通顺，书写规范，卷面整洁，语法正确。4.词数应不少于60词，不得出现真实姓名、校名。【高分范文】
Bob,
I’m writing to tell you about a voluntary activity last week. We got the train station at 8 o’clock on Saturday morning. My classmates and I decided to do something to make it cleaner and tidier. First, we cleaned the benches, andthen we picked up the rubbish and advised others not to throw rubbish here and there. At noon, we swept the ground together and then we left.
We were a little tired after long hours of hard work, but we were still very happy. Ihope everyone will make a contribution to improving the environment of our city.
Hope to write soon. Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Lei【检测菜单】
1. ____________告诉某人什么
2. _________捡起
3. _________________决定做某事
4. _____________有点累
5. __________________________为……做出贡献tell sb. sth.pick updecide to do sth.a little tiredmake a contribution to学校生活
写作导图
从昆明近六年学校生活相关话题书面表达的命题来看，此类作文命题角度主要集中在初中学习和生活以及校园中的人物事件等的描述,如2014昆明。亮点句型速成
常用句型: The homework is too much. I have no outdoor activities.
推荐句型：→① I can’t join in many outdoor activities because of too much homework.
→② There is so much homework that I don’t have enough time to take part in outdoor activities.常用句型： I have a happy school life.
推荐句型：→① With these special memories, I have a happy and colorful school life.
→② I have a happy school life which I will never forget.
常用句型：I like playing football.推荐句型：→① I like playing football on the playground.
→② I like playing football on the playground with great interest.
常用句型：I feel very sad today, because I didn’t pass the math exam again.推荐句型: →① I feel terrible today for I failed again in the math exam.
→② How terrible I feel today! I failed again in the math exam.
开头句：
1. My favorite subject is physics.
中间句：
2. It’s difficult but interesting. 3. Last week’s talent show in our class was
a great success.
4. Studying grammar is a great way to learn a language.
5. It is easy for me to understand...
6. Teenagers should be allowed to...
7. There are a lot of rules in my school.
8. You have given me so much help that I
will never forget... 9. The school life is very busy and exciting. There are many activities in our school, such as...
10. Our school where there are many trees and flowers around is clean and beautiful. 结尾句：
11. Our teachers have taught us a lot. They not only teach us how to learn, but also teach us how to be a useful person in society.
（常用词汇见“28天话题词汇分类速记表”话题（五）学校、话题（十八）语言学习）写作模板
A Talk to Myself
How time flies! I’m leaving school 多长时间. I really have 多少 to talk to myself.
Luckily, my teachers are very 描述人物的特点. They not only 老师教的知识 but also tell me 老师教的道理. And my classmates are 描述人物特点. We 总结所经历的事情 in our school life.
However, I’m also 遗憾 sometimes. I 遗憾没有做的事情 quite often because of 原因. I know对这件事的认识for me. I’ll 以后将会怎么做.
I believe 对以后生活的希望.典例剖析（’13云南）
A Talk to Myself
提示：在初中三年的学习和生活中，你有许多快乐，也有许多遗憾。在即将毕业之际，你想对自己说点什么呢？请根据所给题目用英语写一篇短文。
要求： 1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数
不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以
零分计。【审题指导】
1. 写作的对象是“我自己”,行文用第一人称。2. 从①三年中的快乐；②三年中的遗憾；③对自己说的话及对未来生活的希望三个方面陈述。3. 陈述“我”在学习生活中的快乐和遗憾时，用一般现在时态；如果表达对未来充满希望，则用一般将来时态。4. 短文应包括提示的全部信息：初中三年学习和生活中的快乐和遗憾；在毕业之际，要给自己说的话。5. 词数不少于60词，不得出现真实姓名、校名。【高分范文】
A Talk to Myself
How time flies! I’m leaving school soon. I really have a lot to talk to myself.
Luckily, my teachers are very friendly. They not only give me knowledge but also tell me how to be a man. And my classmates are helpful. We share happiness and sadness in our school life.
However, I’m also upset sometimes. I don’t take part in outdoor activities quite often because of too much homework. I know it’s not good for me. I’ll try my best to join in more.
I believe that my life in the future will be more and more beautiful.【检测菜单】
1. _________________时间过得真快!
2. ______________________不但……而且……
3. ________________如何做某事
4._____________ 参加
5. ____________________户外活动
6. 太多的家庭作业
7. _______________在将来
8. ___________________越来越……How time flies! not only...but also...how to do sth. take part inoutdoor activitiestoo much homeworkin the futuremore and more...课件16张PPT。九年级（全） Units 3-4第三部分
高频话题写作指南我们的变化
写作导图
昆明近六年未涉及相关话题，从云南近四年“我们的变化”相关话题书面表达的命题来看，此类作文命题角度如下：
1. 实现梦想的目标，心态的变化，如2012曲靖“珍惜眼下”；2. 成长的经历，如2011大理“成长”。亮点句型速成
常用句型：My teachers and classmates help me with my English. My English is good now.
推荐句型：→① Thanks to my dear teachers and classmates, my English becomes much better now than before. →② With the help of (Under the help of) my teachers and classmates, my English has improved a lot now.
→③ I have made much great progress on my English with the help of (under the help of) my teachers and classmates.常用句型：I liked playing computer games before. And I played it a lot.
推荐句型：→① I was interested in playing computer games before, so I played it a lot.
→② I used to be interested in playing computer games, so I always spent plenty time on them.中间句：
1. I used to be a bit shy, but now I become outgoing.
2. Day by day, I get on very well with my classmates.
3. My life has changed a lot in the past three years. 4. I was fat and short before I came to the middle school.
5. Now, I like sports and I often play basketball with my classmates after school.
6. So I become taller and stronger than before.
7. I am willing to care about others.结尾句：
1. Good habits help me to study better and keep healthier.
2. My parents and my teachers used to worry about me, but now they are both pleased with me.
（更多常用词汇见“28天话题词汇分类速记表”话题（一）个人情况、话题（三）居住环境）典例剖析（’11大理）
I Am Not a Child Any More
提示：在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮！但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么？是关心、帮助同学？是体贴、理解父母？是感恩、回报亲朋师长？还是……成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请以“I Am Not a Child Any More”为题记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事，表明你已不再是一个小孩了。要求: 1. 请根据所给的题目，用英语写一篇短
文。词数不少于60；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，
否则以零分计。【审题指导】
1. 对自己的现在和过去做比较，以此说明自己已经长大；
2. 写出自己在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事情，通过事例来证明自己的观点；
3. 作总结，再次突出主题；
4. 词数不少于60；文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。【高分范文】
I Am Not a Child Any More
I am a 16-year-old girl now. I have changed a lot. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am stronger and as tall as my mother. The most important thing is that I have learned to understand and care about others. It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, though it tasted salty. After supper, I found they were too tired. I got hot water for them. When my mother put herfeet into the water, with tears in her eyes she said, “Dear, you have grown up.”
It was the first time that I cared about my parents. I realized I was not a child any more.【检测菜单】
1. ____________过去常常
2. _________和……一样……
3. ____________直到……才
4. __________________从……回来
5. ___________长大 used to doas...as...not...untilcome back fromgrow up课件14张PPT。七年级 (上) Units 1-4(含Starter)第三部分
高频话题写作指南家庭
写作导图
昆明近六年未涉及此话题，从云南近四年家庭类相关话题书面表达的命题来看，通常写家庭成员之间的深厚感情，如2011玉溪“我爱我的家人”。the familyfamily
membersthe story between your familiesshow your love to your familywho, look, job, hobby, personalitywhen, how, who, where, your feelingsend a gift, write a card/letter, do housework or other things to help them亮点句型速成
常用句型: You do as I mentioned above. You can get on well with your parents.
推荐句型：→If you do as I mentioned above, you can get on well with your parents.
常用句型：The person is my mother.推荐句型：→①The person I love most is my mother.
→②The person who often encourages me is my mother.
开头句：The person I love most is.../ I want to introduce...to you.
中间句：1. She is a woman of medium build with long hair.2. My mother gets up the earliest in our family.
3. My father is one of my best friends, and I often talk with him if I have any problems.
4. They often encourage me when I’m in trouble.
5. How can I get on well with my brother?6. My loving grandfather spends most of his free time with me.
结尾句：1. I love my parents more than anyone else.
2. Thank you for everything you have done for me.
（常用词汇见“28天话题词汇分类速记表”话题（一）个人情况（二）家庭朋友与周围的人）典例剖析（’11玉溪）
提示：家是一个能让人感到温暖的港湾。在你的成长过程中，家给予了你很多，那么你是否曾用适当的方式对你的家人表达过关爱和回报呢？请以“I Love My Family”为题，写一篇英语短文，通过记叙一件你为家庭做过的事情来体现你对家人的爱。要求：
1. 词数不少于60；语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3. 不得以单纯介绍家庭成员的方式来撰写。【审题指导】
1.本篇作文的题材以记叙文为主，记叙自己为家人做过的一件事来体现自己对家人的爱；
2.主要是写事件来表达自己对家人的关爱，不仅仅是介绍家庭成员；
3.叙述家庭基本情况用一般现在时，描写自己做的事情用一般过去时；
4.词数不少于60，语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名。【高分范文】
I Love My Family
I have a happy family. Although my parents are very busy, they try their best to take good care of me. I think I should do something for them.
Yesterday was Sunday. I got up earlier than usual. After washing, I swept the floor, watered the plants and then I went to the kitchen to prepare breakfast. At around 9 o’clock breakfast was ready. Mum and dad got up. When they saw it, they were very happy. “Dear, thank you for your delicious breakfast.”
Hearing that, I was so happy and felt as if I had grown up. Mum and dad have done a lot for me. I should do what I can do for my family though I am very busy learning. The more I do for it, the happier my family will be.【检测菜单】
1. __________ 厨房
2. ____________ 早餐
3. _______________ 尽某人最大努力
4. _________________拖地
5. _____________ 为……感谢
6. _______________ 照顾kitchenbreakfasttry one’s bestsweep the floorthanks fortake care of课件15张PPT。七年级（上） Units 5-9第三部分
高频话题写作指南与朋友共度时光
写作导图
从昆明近六年与朋友共度时光相关话题书面表达的命题来看，此类作文命题角度如下：描述快乐时光，如2014昆明。亮点句型速成
常用句型: Thanks for staying with me.
推荐句型: →① Thanks for staying with me very much.
→② Thanks for staying with me very much during these days.
→③ Thank you very much for staying with me during these days and I do feel happy.常用句型：I blew out the candles.
推荐句型：→① I blew out the candles in a
breath.
→② To begin with, I blew out the candles in a breath.
→③ I blew out the candles in a breath while Cindy was coming in.开头句：
I’m glad to receive your letter.
中间句：
1. I can get/receive many/lots of presents/gifts.
2. I still remembered that we went to the movies together on Sunday. 3. I was very happy to go to the cinema with Mike last weekend.
结尾句：
1. I really enjoy that we got together during these days.
2. I hope/wish that I can have a wonderful party with you.
（常用词汇见“28天话题词汇分类速记表”话题（七）情感与情绪、话题（八）人际交往、话题（十）节假日活动）典例剖析（’14昆明）
A. A happy time
B. Let me tell you _____要求：
1. 请从所给的A，B两个题目中任选其一作答，分值相同。如选B题，请把题目补充完整再作答，例如：你可以写“Let me tell you my dream”, “Let me tell you how to learn English”, “Let me tell you I love you, Mom”等。2. 注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范。
3. 不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用名字，请用Mike, Gina等英文名字，校名统一用Guangming Middle School。
4. 词数不少于60。【审题指导】
细读所给的文字提示，提取以下信息：
本题给出的是命题作文，要求写出快乐的时光，应是记叙文；
着重写出快乐的事情的经过和为什么快乐；
文章是叙述过去的事情，用一般过去时；
词数不少于60，不得使用真实姓名和校名，紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范。【高分范文】
A happy time
After school this afternoon, I had a happy time with two foreign friends who lost their way.
For I knew the road, I decided to take them to their hotel. On the road, we talked a lot. I told them about the great changes in the city, such as the wider road, the more convenient transportation, the fresher air and so on. I also introduced that now Chinese students liked learning English. In their spare time, they could watch English movies, sing English songs and take part in English activities. The foreigners told me a lot as well. It was late when I got home, but I was very happy. Because I not only had a good time, but also realized the importance of learning a foreign language well.【检测菜单】
1. __________ 外国的
2. _____________ 方便的
3. ___________ 活动
4. __________ 意识到
5. ________________迷路
6. _____________空闲时间
7. ______________参加foreignconvenientactivityrealizelose one’s wayspare timetake part in课件14张PPT。八年级（上） Units 8-10第三部分
高频话题写作指南制定计划
写作导图
昆明近六年未涉及此话题，从云南近四年制定计划相关话题书面表达的命题来看，此类作文命题角度为学习计划、人生计划、奋斗目标或理想等长远的计划以及表达某种愿望或期待。如：2014云南。亮点句型速成
常用句型：He wants to relax and learn something in the countryside.
推荐句型：→① He wants to not only relax but also learn something in the countryside.
→② He prefers to stay in the countryside so that he can relax and learn something there. →③ He wishes to go to the countryside in order that/so that he can relax and learn something there.
常用句型：I have to do some research to make a plan.
推荐句型： →① To work out a plan, I have to start with some research. →② In order to work out a plan, I have to start with some research.
→③ I have to start with some research if I want to work out a plan.
开头句：The summer vacation is coming and I prepare to visit my grandparents in the countryside.中间句：
1. My classmates decided/made a decision to help the people in the old home.
2. I hope/wish/want to go abroad for further study.
3. He planned to go sightseeing.
4. To work out a plan, one has to start with some research. 5. I have arranged a one-day trip to Chongqing for you.
6. We will climb the mountain if the weather is fine.
结尾句：
1. I am looking forward to seeing you this summer vacation.
2. Let’s make a plan for the coming vacation together.（常用词汇见“28天话题词汇分类速记表”话题（九）计划与安排）典例剖析 （’14云南）
My Plan for the Coming School Year
提示：难忘的初中生活即将结束，请以“My Plan for the Coming School Year”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你初中结束后一学年内的打算。
要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：
1. 仔细研读所给书面表达的标题及提示内容，可知要求写出初中毕业后一学年内的计划。描述将来的计划要用一般将来时，人称用第一人称。
2. 所写计划内容尽量丰富、全面，可以涉及学习、生活、交友等方面内容，不要局限于某一点。
3. 根据内容使用“总—分—总”式构思，开头点明主题，中间分点谈论计划，最后表决心，呼应主题。力求做到语言流畅、结构完整、层次分明。【高分范文】
My Plan for the Coming School Year
How time flies! I have finished my study in the junior high school and will start my new life in a new school. Now I’d like to share my plan with you.
First, it is important to do well in all subjects, especially some new subjects. I’llwork harder at them to improve my grades. Second, I’ll try to take part in some after-class activities and make more friends. Third, to have a strong body, I’ll do as much exercise as I can.
I’m sure I can do better in the coming school year.【检测菜单】
1. _______v.完成
2. ____________adj.重要的
3. __________v.提高
4. _____________擅长
5. ______________参加
6. ________________交朋友finishimportantimprovedo well intake part inmake friends课件14张PPT。八年级（下） Units 1-2第三部分
高频话题写作指南健康与急救
写作导图
昆明近六年未涉及健康话题，从云南近四年健康与急救相关话题书面表达的命题来看，命题角度以如何保持健康的建议类话题为主。如2012昭通的话题为怎样保持健康。Don’t stay upHow to keep
healthyDietExerciseSleepDon’t eat too much rich food, like meatEat fruits and vegetablesDrink milkNo junk foodRunPlay basketballDo yogaGo to bed and get up early亮点句型速成
常用句型：A nurse gave me an injection. It was a little painful.
推荐句型：→ A nurse gave me an injection which was a little painful.
常用句型：You mustn’t smoke. It’s bad for your health.
推荐句型：→ You mustn’t smoke because it’s bad for your health.开头句:
1. It’s easy to have a healthy lifestyle, and it’s important to eat a balanced diet.
2. It is very important for everyone to keep healthy, especially for us students.中间句:
1. We should eat the healthy food.
2. In the doctor’s office, the doctor looks
me over carefully.
3. The doctor asks me to take the medicine three times a day.结尾句：
1. It is good for us to drink milk before bedtime.
2. A lot of vegetables help you to keep in good health.
3. We should do more exercise to stay healthy.
4. Don’t get stressed out. It’s not healthy.（常用词汇见“28天话题词汇分类速记表”话题（十三）卫生与健康）典例剖析（’12昭通）
How can we keep healthy
要求：1.词数不少于60个；
2. 注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计。如需使用姓名，请用Mike, Gina等英文名字，校名统一使用Guangming Middle School；
4. 短文必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。【审题指导】
1. 从饮食、运动和睡眠三大角度写出如何保持健康的建议；发表自己的观点；
2. 词数不少于60个；文中不得使用你的真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计。如需使用姓名，请用Mike, Gina等英文名字，校名统一使用Guangming Middle School。【高分范文】
How can we keep healthy
It is very important for everyone to keep healthy, especially for us students. How can we keep healthy? Here is some advice.
We can’t eat too much rich food, like meat. We should try to eat more fruits andvegetables. It is good for us to drink milk before bedtime.
As for junk food, don’t eat it too much. It is bad for us. Besides, it is important for us to do more exercise. It can give us enough energy to study. It can also help us to sleep well, and enough sleep is very necessary, too. We can’t stay up too late at night. It’s important to have a healthy lifestyle, and let’s keep healthy.【检测菜单】
1. ______________ 保持健康
2. ___________ 特别；尤其
3. ______________ 尝试
4. ______________ 对……有好处keep healthyespeciallytry to do sth. be good for课件14张PPT。八年级（下） Units 5-6第三部分
高频话题写作指南难忘的事
写作导图
昆明近六年书面表达的命题与难忘的事相关的话题属于高频话题，此类话题主要是描写一件难忘的事。如：2012昆明。An
unforgettable
thingThe things
that are unforgettable What the
unforgettable
thing isThe description of the thingWhen, where, who, how, whyYour
feelingsExcited, moved, happy, sad, angry…亮点句型速成
常用句型：I will never forget the class. It gave me an important lesson.
推荐句型：→① I will never forget the class because it gave me an important lesson.
→② I will never forget the class which gave me an important lesson. →③ The class which gave me an important lesson is unforgettable.
常用句型：I am deeply moved by what Mike did.
推荐句型：→① I am deeply moved by the things that Mike did.
→② What Mike did moved me deeply /a lot.开头句：
I still remember the day last summer when I went for a picnic with my father.
中间句：
There is no doubt that parents have given me a lot since I was born.结尾句：
1. These magic words touched my heart and I will never forget him.
2. In my opinion, friends are the persons who can share happiness and sorrow with us.典例剖析（’12昆明）
A. A true story
B. As a student, I should _____要求:
1. 请从所给的A、B两个题目中任选其一作答，分值相同。如选B题，请把题目补充完整再作答。
2. 注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范。
3. 不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用名字，请用Mike, Gina等英文名字，校名统一用Guangming Middle School。
4. 词数不少于60。【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：
1. 本题是命题作文。题目是“A true story”。着重写出自己经历的某件真实的事情以及对于这件事情的感受。
2. 本篇作文的体裁以记叙为主，主要是记叙过去的真实事件，时态用一般过去时，侧重描述给你留下深刻印象的那一瞬间。
3. 紧扣主题，词数不少于60个，文中不得出现真实姓名、校名及地名。【高分范文】
A true story
I’d like to tell you a true story which made me feel moved.
Last Friday, I went home by bus. After I sat down on the bus, I saw an old woman sitting beside me. Her hair was already white and she looked small and thin. To mysurprise, there was a big bag which was full of eggs on her lap. At that moment, the conductor asked her to buy the ticket. For the woman didn’t have enough money, the conductor was angry with her. Then a young man gave his money to the conductor in the end.
I thought it’s our duty to help otherswherever we are. If we help the one in trouble more often, the world can become more beautiful.【检测菜单】
1. ________感动的
2. __________________使某人惊讶的是
3. ___________________在那时
4. ____________最后；最终
5. _________________________ 做某事……的责任movedto one’s surpriseat that momentin the endIt’s one’s duty to do sth.
