2024届高考英语复习：概要写作入门指导课件(共24张PPT)
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| 名称 | 2024届高考英语复习：概要写作入门指导课件(共24张PPT) |  | |
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| 资源类型 | 教案 | ||
| 版本资源 | 人教版（2019） | ||
| 科目 | 英语 | ||
| 更新时间 | 2023-10-18 10:08:42 | ||
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(共24张PPT)
an example
John Snow was a famous doctor, who was devoted to helping ordinary people exposed to cholera. He suspected that people absorbed the disease into their body with their meals. To collect evidence , he made a map where he marked the location of the deaths, finding that the source of the water was to blame. In addition, another two deaths away from Broad Street contributed to this theory. So by cutting off the supplies of polluted water, cholera was finally defeated.
What is a Summary
A shortened passage (60words)
Rewrite the key points of the original
A restatement in your own words
A summary is a shortened passage which retains the key points of the original in your own words.
评分原则(the grading standard)
1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
2.评分时，先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3.词数少于40和多于80的，从总分中减去2分
4.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
6.如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次
How to get a high mark
《考试说明》中评分标准规定概要写
作阅卷时按5个档次给分，其中最高档次第五档（21-25points）：
理解准确，涵盖全部要点；
能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇；
完全使用自己的语言；
有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使完成的概要结构紧凑。
a good summary
all the key points
grammar, vocabulary
tight and coherent(连贯的)
your own words
about 60-80 words
right spelling, proper punctuation
How to Write a Good Summary
rewrite the key points with proper words;
1.structure
2. points
3. paraphrase
4. polish
analyze the structure of the original
find the key points of each part
connect words and polish it.
Discussion 1: the structure
para1
para4
para3
para2
Discussion 2: How to Get Key Points
1. : the topic sentence, key words
2. : topic sentence +
examples
supporting
ideas
Find
Combine
Read for Key Points
Para.1
We shouldn’t judge a person by their appearance but we do. In fact, the experts say that when we meet someone for the first time we make a decision about what that person is like in three seconds. But what do we look at One of the most important things is clothes, but it isn't the brand of clothes that people wear that is important. The important thing is to wear the right clothes for the occasion.
______________________
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Point 1
_______________________________________________
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Read for Key Points
Para.2
Schools have always understood this and a lot of them ask their students to wear a uniform. Why A lot of teachers think a uniform makes students feel that they are part of their school and that their uniform helps them to be serious about their studies. Teachers say that uniforms can help in other ways too. If all the students wear uniforms, they can't judge each other because of their clothes. It also avoids arguments about who or what is fashionable.
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____________________________________________________
____________________________
____________________________________
_______________________
Point 2
Read for Key Points
Para. 3
However, it is not only schools that want people to dress in a certain way. We all have fixed ideas about what the people in a certain profession should wear. If we visit a doctor, we expect to see respectable clothes under the doctor’s white coat. When we go into a bank we expect the staff to wear suits or dresses. Police officers wear uniforms to deter crime by establishing a visible presence while on patrol, to make themselves easily identifiable to non-police officers or their colleagues who require assistance, and to quickly identify each other at crime scenes for ease of coordination. In fact, a lot of companies have dress codes for their staff because they know that the customers expect to see them dressed in certain types of clothes.
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_________
________
________
____________________
Point 3
_____________________________________________________
_________________________________
Read for Key Points
Para.4
But can our clothes really tell people what we are like Maybe not, but they can show our attitude to what we are doing at the moment. When people see us in the right clothes, they think we are serious about what we are doing. Furthermore, if we are clean, smart and polite, people will have confidence in us.
___________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_______________
_______________________________________
_______________
Point 4
All the Key Points
Point1 …for the first time we make a decision… One of the most important things is clothes. The important thing is to wear the right clothes for the occasion.
Point2 Schools ask their students to wear a uniform. Their uniform helps them to be serious about their studies. Teachers say that uniforms can help in other ways too.
Point3 it is not only schools that want people to dress in a certain way. … a doctor…go into a bank …Police officers …a lot of companies …
Point4 …but they can show our attitude to what we are doing at the moment.. Furthermore, people will have confidence in us.
Discussion 3: How to Paraphrase
4. use synonyms(同义)
同义词，短语等
1. combine sentences
定语及状语从句，with 复合结构，非谓语动词 等
2. change the voice
the active voice the passive voice
3. change the sentence structure
It 做形式主语宾语， 强调句型 ，倒装，虚拟等
Paraphrase Key Points
Key point 1 …for the first time we make a decision… One of the most important things is clothes. The important thing is to wear the right clothes for the occasion.
Paraphrase
1. Wearing the right clothes is important because people look at our clothes.
2. Wearing the right clothes for the occasion is important if we want to leave a good impression on people.
3. Wearing proper clothes is important for first impressions.
Paraphrase Key Points
Key point 2 Schools ask their students to wear a uniform. A uniform makes students feel that they are part of their school and that their uniform helps them to be serious about their studies. Teachers say that uniforms can help in other ways too.
Paraphrase
1. Schools get students to wear a uniform because it helps them in many ways.
2. Students are required to wear a uniform because it benefits in various ways.
Paraphrase Key Points
Key point 3 However, it is not only schools that want people to dress in a certain way. …visit a doctor…go into a bank …Police officers …a lot of companies …
Paraphrase
1. However, not only schools but also places such as hospitals, banks, police stations and some companies want people to dress in a certain way.
2. Besides students, other people who work for hospitals, banks, police stations and some companies are also supposed to wear uniforms because of convenience.
Paraphrase Key Points
Key point 4 …but they can show our attitude to what we are doing at the moment.. Furthermore, people will have confidence in us.
Paraphrase
1. Our clothes can show our attitude, thus contributing to others’ trust in us.
2. Our clothes represent our attitude and help us win trust from others.
the paraphrased points
Point1 Wearing the right clothes for the occasion is important if we want to leave a good impression on people.
Point2 Students are required to wear a uniform because it benefits in various ways.
Point3 Students, other people who work for hospitals, banks, police stations and some companies are also supposed to wear uniforms because of convenience.
Point4 Our clothes can show our attitude, thus contributing to others’ trust in us.
Discussion 3: How to Connect and polish
转折but, yet, however, on the contrary, as，despite（尽管）in spite of(不管）nevertheless(然而) ,
因果because of these, as a result of…therefore, so that, thus doing,
并列递进meanwhile, on the other hand，as for, compared to, furthermore, in addition
顺序firstly/secondly/finally,
例证for example/such as，including，for instance，namely, that is to say(也就是说），as a matter of fact
总结 in short, to conclude，generally speaking
…
Connect Key Points
Point1 Wearing the right clothes for the occasion is important if we want to leave a good impression on people.
Point2 Students are required to wear a uniform because it benefits in various ways.
Point3 Students, other people who work for hospitals, banks, police stations and some companies are also supposed to wear uniforms because of convenience.
Point4 Our clothes can show our attitude, thus contributing to others’ trust in us.
For example,
To conclude,
Write and Edit
Wearing the right clothes for the occasion is important if we want to leave a good impression on people.(要点1) For example, for the benefit of students, schools get them to wear uniforms.(要点2) Besides , people from all walks of life, such as hospitals, banks, police stations and other companies, are also required to wear uniforms for work convenience.. (要点3) To conclude, the clothes we wear can show our attitude, contributing to others’ trust in us.(要点4)(73词)
an example
John Snow was a famous doctor, who was devoted to helping ordinary people exposed to cholera. He suspected that people absorbed the disease into their body with their meals. To collect evidence , he made a map where he marked the location of the deaths, finding that the source of the water was to blame. In addition, another two deaths away from Broad Street contributed to this theory. So by cutting off the supplies of polluted water, cholera was finally defeated.
What is a Summary
A shortened passage (60words)
Rewrite the key points of the original
A restatement in your own words
A summary is a shortened passage which retains the key points of the original in your own words.
评分原则(the grading standard)
1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
2.评分时，先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3.词数少于40和多于80的，从总分中减去2分
4.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
6.如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次
How to get a high mark
《考试说明》中评分标准规定概要写
作阅卷时按5个档次给分，其中最高档次第五档（21-25points）：
理解准确，涵盖全部要点；
能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇；
完全使用自己的语言；
有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使完成的概要结构紧凑。
a good summary
all the key points
grammar, vocabulary
tight and coherent(连贯的)
your own words
about 60-80 words
right spelling, proper punctuation
How to Write a Good Summary
rewrite the key points with proper words;
1.structure
2. points
3. paraphrase
4. polish
analyze the structure of the original
find the key points of each part
connect words and polish it.
Discussion 1: the structure
para1
para4
para3
para2
Discussion 2: How to Get Key Points
1. : the topic sentence, key words
2. : topic sentence +
examples
supporting
ideas
Find
Combine
Read for Key Points
Para.1
We shouldn’t judge a person by their appearance but we do. In fact, the experts say that when we meet someone for the first time we make a decision about what that person is like in three seconds. But what do we look at One of the most important things is clothes, but it isn't the brand of clothes that people wear that is important. The important thing is to wear the right clothes for the occasion.
______________________
______________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_____________
Point 1
_______________________________________________
____________________
Read for Key Points
Para.2
Schools have always understood this and a lot of them ask their students to wear a uniform. Why A lot of teachers think a uniform makes students feel that they are part of their school and that their uniform helps them to be serious about their studies. Teachers say that uniforms can help in other ways too. If all the students wear uniforms, they can't judge each other because of their clothes. It also avoids arguments about who or what is fashionable.
___________
____________________________________________________
____________________________
____________________________________
_______________________
Point 2
Read for Key Points
Para. 3
However, it is not only schools that want people to dress in a certain way. We all have fixed ideas about what the people in a certain profession should wear. If we visit a doctor, we expect to see respectable clothes under the doctor’s white coat. When we go into a bank we expect the staff to wear suits or dresses. Police officers wear uniforms to deter crime by establishing a visible presence while on patrol, to make themselves easily identifiable to non-police officers or their colleagues who require assistance, and to quickly identify each other at crime scenes for ease of coordination. In fact, a lot of companies have dress codes for their staff because they know that the customers expect to see them dressed in certain types of clothes.
__________
_________
________
________
____________________
Point 3
_____________________________________________________
_________________________________
Read for Key Points
Para.4
But can our clothes really tell people what we are like Maybe not, but they can show our attitude to what we are doing at the moment. When people see us in the right clothes, they think we are serious about what we are doing. Furthermore, if we are clean, smart and polite, people will have confidence in us.
___________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_______________
_______________________________________
_______________
Point 4
All the Key Points
Point1 …for the first time we make a decision… One of the most important things is clothes. The important thing is to wear the right clothes for the occasion.
Point2 Schools ask their students to wear a uniform. Their uniform helps them to be serious about their studies. Teachers say that uniforms can help in other ways too.
Point3 it is not only schools that want people to dress in a certain way. … a doctor…go into a bank …Police officers …a lot of companies …
Point4 …but they can show our attitude to what we are doing at the moment.. Furthermore, people will have confidence in us.
Discussion 3: How to Paraphrase
4. use synonyms(同义)
同义词，短语等
1. combine sentences
定语及状语从句，with 复合结构，非谓语动词 等
2. change the voice
the active voice the passive voice
3. change the sentence structure
It 做形式主语宾语， 强调句型 ，倒装，虚拟等
Paraphrase Key Points
Key point 1 …for the first time we make a decision… One of the most important things is clothes. The important thing is to wear the right clothes for the occasion.
Paraphrase
1. Wearing the right clothes is important because people look at our clothes.
2. Wearing the right clothes for the occasion is important if we want to leave a good impression on people.
3. Wearing proper clothes is important for first impressions.
Paraphrase Key Points
Key point 2 Schools ask their students to wear a uniform. A uniform makes students feel that they are part of their school and that their uniform helps them to be serious about their studies. Teachers say that uniforms can help in other ways too.
Paraphrase
1. Schools get students to wear a uniform because it helps them in many ways.
2. Students are required to wear a uniform because it benefits in various ways.
Paraphrase Key Points
Key point 3 However, it is not only schools that want people to dress in a certain way. …visit a doctor…go into a bank …Police officers …a lot of companies …
Paraphrase
1. However, not only schools but also places such as hospitals, banks, police stations and some companies want people to dress in a certain way.
2. Besides students, other people who work for hospitals, banks, police stations and some companies are also supposed to wear uniforms because of convenience.
Paraphrase Key Points
Key point 4 …but they can show our attitude to what we are doing at the moment.. Furthermore, people will have confidence in us.
Paraphrase
1. Our clothes can show our attitude, thus contributing to others’ trust in us.
2. Our clothes represent our attitude and help us win trust from others.
the paraphrased points
Point1 Wearing the right clothes for the occasion is important if we want to leave a good impression on people.
Point2 Students are required to wear a uniform because it benefits in various ways.
Point3 Students, other people who work for hospitals, banks, police stations and some companies are also supposed to wear uniforms because of convenience.
Point4 Our clothes can show our attitude, thus contributing to others’ trust in us.
Discussion 3: How to Connect and polish
转折but, yet, however, on the contrary, as，despite（尽管）in spite of(不管）nevertheless(然而) ,
因果because of these, as a result of…therefore, so that, thus doing,
并列递进meanwhile, on the other hand，as for, compared to, furthermore, in addition
顺序firstly/secondly/finally,
例证for example/such as，including，for instance，namely, that is to say(也就是说），as a matter of fact
总结 in short, to conclude，generally speaking
…
Connect Key Points
Point1 Wearing the right clothes for the occasion is important if we want to leave a good impression on people.
Point2 Students are required to wear a uniform because it benefits in various ways.
Point3 Students, other people who work for hospitals, banks, police stations and some companies are also supposed to wear uniforms because of convenience.
Point4 Our clothes can show our attitude, thus contributing to others’ trust in us.
For example,
To conclude,
Write and Edit
Wearing the right clothes for the occasion is important if we want to leave a good impression on people.(要点1) For example, for the benefit of students, schools get them to wear uniforms.(要点2) Besides , people from all walks of life, such as hospitals, banks, police stations and other companies, are also required to wear uniforms for work convenience.. (要点3) To conclude, the clothes we wear can show our attitude, contributing to others’ trust in us.(要点4)(73词)