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Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes.
人教新目标版 九年级上
Section B3a-Selfcheck
写作优质公开课课件
Learning objectives
1. Talk about what you are allowed or not allowed to do at home.
2. Learn to write a diary entry to tell which rules you do not agree with and how you think the rules should be changed.
3. Review key vocabulary and functions presented in the unit.
What can you learn from this video
1.Our growth needs rules.
我们的成长需要规则。
2.Nothing can be done without rules.无规矩不成方圆。
3.A nation has its rule and a family also has one!
国有国法，家有家规！
Warming-up
What rules do you have at home
Do you have any rules about eating, sleeping, housework, homework, or making friends
Brainstorm
What rules do you have at home
eating
sleeping
homework
housework
eat at home every day, mustn’t eat junk food, …
get up at 7 a.m., don’t stay up late, …
make the bed, wash the dishes …
finish the homework on time, …
Do you agree with these rules Why or why not
2. Which one do you think should be changed Why
Discussion
With a partner, discuss some rules at home that you agree or disagree with. Make some notes in the chart.
Rule Why you agree or disagree with it How you think the rule should be changed
agree – sitting in front of the computer for hours playing games isn’t good
no need to be changed
can’t play computer games
Rule Why you agree or disagree with it How you think the rule should be changed
should be allowed to watch TV programs that have educational value (such as documentaries); should be allowed to watch TV programs on weekends
disagree –not all TV programs are bad for students; need to relax sometimes, rather than spend all the time studying
can’t watch TV
Rule Why you agree or disagree with it How you think the rule should be changed
should be allowed to have dinner with friends as long as I don’t stay out too late and it does not clash with any important family activity
disagree – takes away opportunities to spend time with friends; makes life uninteresting
must be home for dinner every day
Write a diary entry explaining which rule(s) you do not agree with at home and how you think the rule(s) should be changed.
Use the following expressions to help you:
I do not agree with …
I think I should be allowed to …
I would like to …
I could … if I …
内容：你认为哪一条家规不合理、理由及应该如何修改
文体：应用文(日记)；日记的主体部分为议论文
人称：以第一人称为主
时态：以一般现在时为主
可以使用表示列举的词first, second和third，使文章有条理
话题引出 →
（Beginning）
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不赞成的原因→2.
（Main Body） ↘3.
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总结观点→
（Ending）
Family rules you disagree
Why you disagree
How it should be changed
There are many rules in my house.
I do not agree with...
This is because...
I think I should...
I hope my parents will allow me to…
Outline
Writing
tips
Pay attention to the structure.
Beginning—Family rules you disagree
Body—Why you disagree
Ending -- How it should be changed
Try to make sentences differently.
I think I should be allowed to …
I would like to …
I could … if …
I do not agree with the idea that …
Try to use some linking words
First; next; however; what’s more;
in a word; all in all …
4th April, Sunday
There are many rules in my house. I do not agree with the rule that I must be home for dinner every day. This is because the rule affects my social life. It takes away opportunities for me to spend time with my friends. As a result, my life is quite boring sometimes. I think I should be allowed to have dinner with my friends once in a while.
For example, I would like to hang out with my classmates after dinner on some Fridays. I hope my parents will allow me to do this if I promise not to stay out too late and if there is no important family activity on those days.
本单元的话题是“Rules (规章制度)”。“规章制度”包括不同地方的规章制度；对规章制度的不同观点；如何遵守规章制度；制定相关的规章制度等几个方面。与之相关的话题作文主要是谈论“家规、校规和对规章制度的不同观点等。”
写作内容通常要求根据图表或文字提示介绍规章制度，或者针对不同的规章制度表达自己赞同或反对的观点，并给出合理的理由。
假如你叫李华, 是一名中学生。父母对你要求非常严格，你有很多家规。请以“My family rules”为题，根据提示，简要介绍你的家规，并谈谈你的看法。
提示：
1.不准穿耳洞，不准戴耳环，不准抽烟、喝酒；
2.先写作业再看电视;
3. 早睡早起，不准熬夜；
4.不和父母顶嘴, 关心家人和朋友，帮助父母做家务。
要求：
1.熟练运用所学知识，条理清楚，逻辑合理。
2.书写规范。
3.词数：80 左右
How many steps(步骤)of writing: _______
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
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5
1. Analyse the topic. “审”
2. List an outline. “列”
3. Connect sentences into an article. “连”
4. Correct the article. “改”
5. Copy it into the paper. “誊”
It’s time to write.
假如你叫李华, 是一名中学生。父母对你要求非常严格，你有很多家规。请以“My family rules”为题，根据提示，简要介绍你的家规，并谈谈你的看法。
提示：
1.不准穿耳洞，不准戴耳环，不准抽烟、喝酒；
2.先写作业再看电视;
3. 早睡早起，不准熬夜；
4.不和父母顶嘴, 关心家人和朋友，帮助父母做家务。
要求：
1.熟练运用所学知识，条理清楚，逻辑合理。
2.书写规范。
3.词数：80 左右
1. Analyse the topic. “审”
style of writing(体裁):__________
tense(时态)：___________
person(人称): ______
key points(要点):__________________
I
一般现在时
说明文
family rules
假如你叫李华, 是一名中学生。父母对你要求非常严格，你有很多家规。请以“My family rules”为题，根据提示，简要介绍你的家规，并谈谈你的看法。
提示：
1.不准穿耳洞，不准戴耳环，不准抽烟、喝酒；
2.先写作业再看电视;
3. 早睡早起，不准熬夜；
4.不和父母顶嘴, 关心家人和朋友，帮助父母做家务。
要求：
1.熟练运用所学知识，条理清楚，逻辑合理。
2.书写规范。
3.词数：80 左右
2. Make an outline. “列”
My family rules
how many paragraphs(段落): ____
para.1: ______________________________
para.2: ______________________________
______________________________
para.3: ______________________________
3
My name is___. I’m a___. I have ___.
my family rules
opinions (I think/agree that...)
(First...second...third...finally...)
Linking words(连接词):
表并列：and, both...and...
表转折：but, however...
表因果：because, so, as a result...
表递进：not only...but also..., what’s more
表结果：so...that..., such...that...
表先后：first, second, third, next, finally...
表时间：when, while, after, before...
3. Connect sentences into an article. “连”
Time for writing
Possible Version:
My name is Li Hua. I am a middle school student. My parents are strict with me. There are many rules in my family. Let me tell you about them.
First, I can’t get ears pierced or wear earrings. I am not allowed to smoke or drink, either. Second, I have to finish my homework before watching TV. What’s more, I must go to bed and get up early. Staying up late is not allowed for me. Last, I must not talk back to my parents. I need to care about my family and friends, and I am required to help with housework at home.
I think some of my family rules are strict. However, I know that they are made to make me become better and better.
My Family Rules
4. Correct the article. “改”
Peer-evaluation check list Yes No
1. Can you picture the experience the writer wrote about
2. Does it have a correct structure
3. Are there any spelling mistakes and punctuation errors
4. Are the verbs in proper tenses
5. Does it include all the information required
Exchange your articles, evaluate it and then help each other correct them. 交换文章，先做出评价然后互相帮助修改。
I never go shopping with my dad.
It is not easy to achieve my dream.
It is not allowed to take photos here.
You have to make a choice right now.
I want to do part-time work this summer.
It is not allowed to get ears pierced in school.
1.Match the words in the two columns.
Choose five phrases to make sentences.
be solved
be kept
not be allowed
be put
not be encouraged
无论我们有多少困难，我相信最终所有问题都可以被解决。
在开会期间手机应该被关掉。
十八岁以下的青少年一定不被允许吸烟 或喝酒。
许多父母认为上学必须被放在第一位，因此青少年不应该被鼓励做兼职工作。
2. Complete the sentences using the correct forms of
the words in brackets.
1. No matter how many difficulties we have, I believe all problems can be solved in the end.
no matter“不管，不论”，后接疑问句，引导让步状语从句。
e.g. No matter where he may go, he will be happy.
No matter who you are, you must obey the rules.
“no matter+疑问词”结构，相当于“疑问词+ever”
e.g. No matter where he may go, he will be happy.
=Wherever he may go, he will be happy.
Language points
2. Mobile phones should be kept off during the meeting.
该句中keep off 意为“关闭状态”。
【拓展】
keep off 避开；不接近
e.g. Keep off the grass!
请勿践踏草地！
My doctor has warned me to keep off sugar.
我的医生劝我别吃糖。
Language points
1.Polish your passage.
2.Talk about your home rules with your classmates and exchange your views.
Homework
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