常考题型02 图画类作文--2023-2024学年中考英语书面表达素材考点纲目

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常考题型02 图画类作文
2023-2024学年中考英语书面表达素材考点纲目
写作方法：
1.仔细审题，准确定位 （1)确定主题。（2)确定体裁。（3)确定人称。（4)确定时态。
2.认真读图，进行图文转换 考生应对图画进行全面而细致的研究，以便准确掌握图画所传达的信息。
3.确定段落，草拟提纲
寓意型图画类作文可采用三段式的模式来写提纲并确定段落：第一段描述图画并揭示寓意（寓意一般用一句话来概括即可），第二段分析图画内容并揭示原因，最后一段发表评论或提出建议，其中第二段、第三段是写作的重点。
4.斟词酌句，组句成篇
根据要点内容，确定文章结构，然后选择恰当的词语并结合要点 间的关系及文章的体裁，选择适当的句型将要点呈现出来。注意句与句及段与段之间的衔接。
5.检查与修改
重点检查是否有遗漏的要点、是否有错误的语法结构或短语、是否有拼错的单词等。
【模板范文】
（2023·山东济南·统考中考真题）新时代英语课堂的语言实践活动丰富多彩。学校英语社团开展了以Students’ Favorite English Class Activities为主题的调查，请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇英语短文向学校英文报投稿。
内容包括：
1.描述并评价调查结果；
2.陈述你的选择并说明理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
There are many practical learning activities in English class.
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【答案】
There are many practical learning activities in English class. Recently, our school club has made a survey on students’ favorite English class activities. Here are the results.
Of the four activities mentioned, about one third of the students say presentation is their favorite. The number of students who choose discussion and creative writing is almost the same, taking up 25% and 27% each. Only 17% of the students consider debate their favorite as they think it is challenging.
As far as I am concerned, presentation is the most useful. On the one hand, I am able to learn a lot while preparing for it. On the other hand, it helps to improve my English speaking ability as well as communication skills.
English class activities are important, so we had better make full use of them to make English learning more interesting and colorful.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山介绍以下是关于学生最喜欢的英语课堂活动的调查结果；
第二步，描述并评价调查结果；
第三步，陈述你的选择并说明理由；
第四步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①the number of……的数量
②as far as就……而言
③had better do sth.最好做某事
④make full use of充分利用
[高分句型]
①Here are the results.(倒装句)
②The number of students who choose discussion and creative writing is almost the same, taking up 25% and 27% each.(定语从句)
【真题再现】
A
（2023·山东青岛·统考中考真题）
观察图片，你想到了什么？请结合自己的经历，写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你的感悟。
要求：
1.词数80-100(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息。
From the cartoon, I can know________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
From the cartoon, I can know we should depend on ourselves. These days, we Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily lives. We can’t deal with difficulties by ourselves and we can’t take good care of ourselves. I seldom did housework in the past, because I thought it was our parents’ work. This is a wrong opinion. We should learn to do housework like sweeping the floor and taking out the rubbish. I hardly cooked either. When my mother was on business, I realized I must learn to cook by myself. After that, I find that cooking is not as difficult as it seems.
So it’s important for us to learn to manage our own lives.
When we get into senior high school, we need to adapt to the new environment as soon as possible. And we should make good use of time and get enough sleep. At the same time, we need to study seriously and make progress. To make more friends, we had better join clubs actively. Lastly, we should take up our hobbies in our free time to not only keep healthy but also keep our minds clear.
All in all, the earlier we manage our own lives, the better it is for our future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生应注意结合所给图片，谈谈自己的感悟，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。结合自身生活实际，谈谈依赖父母的现象；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。列举提升自我管理能力，更好地适应高中新生活的合理化建议。
第三步，书写结语。发出在未来生活中提高自我管理能力的号召。
[亮点词汇]
①depend on依靠
②seldom很少
③as difficult as和……一样难
④make good use of充分利用
⑤not only…but also… 不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①I find that cooking is not as difficult as it seems.(宾语从句)
②So it’s important for us to learn to manage our own lives.（It’s+形容词+for sb+to do sth.句型）
B
（2023·黑龙江牡丹江·统考中考真题）
假如你是Jack，你和Candy相约去新开业的职业体验馆（Future Star），但她不知道如何步行去那里。请你根据图片提示在微信中告诉她具体路线。词数30左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hi, Candy. Let me tell you the way to Future Star.
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Catch you there.
【答案】
Hi, Candy. Let me tell you the way to Future Star. First, go along Center Street. Then, turn right at the second crossing. After that, go across King Bridge. Future Star is on your left. It’s across from Green Park. You won’t miss it.
Catch you there.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点图片已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的要点，做到用词准确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，告诉对方要帮助对方知道具体路线；
第二步，根据出发点和目的地来具体介绍路线；
第三步，表示会在目的地等待对方。
[亮点词汇]
① turn right右转；
② across from在……对面
[高分句型]
① Then, turn right at the second crossing.（祈使句）
C
（2023·黑龙江·统考中考真题）
仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。
提示词：rain heavily, umbrella, be thankful to…
要求：1. 话题作文和图示作文任选其一。
2. 词数：80—100之间。
3. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
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【答案】
Last Friday afternoon, when Tom was on his way home after school, it rained heavily. He walked slowly in the rain with his umbrella. Suddenly, he saw an old man with a walking stick. He didn’t have an umbrella. Tom came up to him as quickly as possible and shared his umbrella with him. Tom took the old man to his home safely. The old man was thankful to Tom. After saying goodbye to the old man, he went home happily.
What a good boy Tom is!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据图片和提示词，把图中所示内容表达完整，条理清晰，意思连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据图片顺序和内容描述Tom帮助老人的全过程；
第二步，对Tom进行赞扬。
[亮点词汇]
①on one’s way home在某人回家的路上
②as quickly as possible尽快
③be thankful to感激
[高分句型]
①Last Friday afternoon, when Tom was on his way home after school, it rained heavily.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②What a good boy Tom is!(感叹句)
D
（2023·甘肃天水·统考中考真题）
假设你是李辉。你校英语报“Protect the Environment”专栏面向全校学生征集主题海报及宣传稿，需要用英语向大家宣讲环保的意义及作为中学生怎样保护环境。请你根据以下海报提示，以Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!为题，用英语给专栏写一篇稿件。
要求：1. 包括提示中所有的写作要点；
2. 条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
3. 稿件中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息；
4. 词数：80左右。题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。（不用抄写在答题卡书面表达作答区域。）
Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It’s crying for our help now.
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【答案】
Save the Earth: Let’s Do Our Part!
The earth is the only home for everyone on it. It’s crying for our help now. As middle school students, we have the power to make a difference and help save the earth!
To protect the earth, we can start by saving water, planting more trees, and reducing pollution. We can also save animals and recycle whenever possible.
We can also choose to ride a bike instead of driving a car to help stop pollution, and make sure to always throw trash in the proper bins. By doing our part, we can make a positive impact on the environment and create a better future for ourselves and generations to come.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，呼吁大家保护地球；
第二步，具体阐述作为中学生怎样保护环境；
第三步，最后宣讲环保的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①make a difference很有影响
②instead of代替
③make a positive impact on对……产生积极影响
[高分句型]
①To protect the earth, we can start by saving water, planting more trees, and reducing pollution.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②By doing our part, we can make a positive impact on the environment and create a better future for ourselves and generations to come.（动名词作宾语）
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