常考题型03 图表类作文--2023-2024学年中考英语书面表达素材考点纲目

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常考题型03 图表类作文
2023-2024学年中考英语书面表达素材考点纲目
写作方法：
简要描述图表的直观内容
写好图表作文的第一步是分析图表中的数据变化所反映出来的问题或趋势，把直观看到的图表内容简单地描述出来，简要叙述图表所揭示的信息。这一部分简要概述即可，不需展开。
分析数据并阐述原因
分析数据变化的原因，并阐明理由，注意应使内容要点条理化、有序化。
提出解决问题的建议，得出结论
和提纲作文一样，图表作文的最后也要总结全文的观点，根据图表内容给出相应的建议或者评价，这一点类似于社会问题型作文的结尾。
【模板范文】
（2023·山东济宁·二模）健康是幸福的主要因素，锻炼是健康的重要保证。某英文报开展了一次关于初中生锻炼情况的调查活动。请你根据下列图表和相关文字提示，以“Exercising is important!”为题用英语写一篇短文。
调查数据 每天锻炼的时间 不常锻炼的原因
锻炼的意义 有益身体健康；保持思维敏锐；变得自信快乐。
你的建议 就如何更好地开展锻炼，提出你的建议（至少两点）。
注意：
1. 短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
2. 词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现可能透露考生真实身份的信息，如，真实姓名、学校等；
4. 参考词汇：敏锐的：sharp。
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【答案】
Exercising is important!
Recently, we have done a survey about students’ exercising. According to the survey, 68% of the students spend less than one hour every day doing exercise, while 32% of them spend over one hour. The reasons are as follows: Firstly, 46% of them have too much homework, so they don’t have enough time to do exercise. Secondly, 29% of them are not good at exercise. Thirdly, 25% of them are not interested in it.
As we all know, exercising is good for our health, which keeps our minds sharp and makes us relax and happy.
In my opinion, we should keep a balance between our study and exercising. Besides, we should develop a good habit of doing exercise.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以Exercising is important!为题，根据提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时主要以第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍调查的结果；第二段叙述锻炼的意义；第三段给出建议。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
【高分素材之单词和短语】
1.上升：rise, increase, go up
2.下降：fall, drop, decrease, decline, reduce, lessen
3.平稳：stable, steady, remain/maintain/keep/be the same as/similar to
4.占：occupy, take up, account for
5.而：while, however, whereas, on the other hand
6.相比：by contract, on the contrary, likewise, compared with
【高分素材之句式】
★说明图表的内容
1. The table/chart/diagram/graph shows that. .
.2. According to the table/chart/diagram/graph. . .
3. As is shown in the table/chart/diagram/graph. . .
4. As can be seen from the table/chart/diagram/graph/figures. . .
5. It can be seen that/We can see/It is clear from the figures/statistics that. . .
6. It is apparent from the figures/statistics/table/chart/diagram/graph that...
★常用总结句型
1. The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that. . .
2. As can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in...
3. From this year on, there was a gradual decline/reduction in.
【真题再现】
A
（2023·山东菏泽·统考中考真题）
假如你是李华，某英语报正在开展以“My Favorite English Homework”为题的征文活动，请你根据图表中的调查结果，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
要点如下：
1.描述调查结果；
2.介绍你最喜欢的作业形式并陈述理由。

学生最喜欢的英语作业调查结果(人数百分比)
要求：
1.字数：100词左右；
2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
My Favorite English Homework
There is a survey about your favorite English homework. Here is the result.
15% of students like copying English words and sentences, because they think it is very easy. 25% of students prefer to read English books from which they can learn a lot. 35% of students like to watch English movies so that they can learn a lot about foreign culture. Other students like to listen to English songs.
As for me, I like watching movies. It can only bring me happiness and fun, but also it can broaden my horizon.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的调查结构介绍自己最喜欢的英语作业。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，描述调查结果；
第三步，介绍自己最喜欢的作业形式并陈述理由。
[亮点词汇]
①prefer to do sth.更喜欢做某事
②as for至于
③not only...but also不但……而且
[高分句型]
①15% of students like copying English words and sentences, because they think it is very easy.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②25% of students prefer to read English books from which they can learn a lot.(which引导的定语从句)
B
（2023·湖南怀化·统考中考真题）
健康对每个人都很重要，我们应该学会如何保持健康。请以“How to keep healthy ”为题，写一篇英语短文，向学校校刊投稿。
要求：
1．文章必须包含以下表格中的至少4个要点信息，可适当发挥；
2．文中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名等信息；
3．词数80左右；文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
should (√) shouldn’t (x)
do sports every day refuse to exercise
keep a balanced diet have junk food
eat fruit and vegetables stay up too late
have enough sleep play computer games a lot
keep happy sit for a long time
... ...
How to keep healthy
Nowadays, people pay much more attention to health. It is necessary for everyone to learn some ways to keep healthy.
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【答案】
How to keep healthy
Nowadays, people pay much more attention to health. It is necessary for everyone to learn some ways to keep healthy.
We should do sports every day. We shouldn’t refuse to exercise. Running for an hour every day is good for health. We should keep a balanced diet. Eat more fruit and vegetables. We shouldn’t have junk food, because they are bad for health. We had better not stay up too late. Getting enough sleep is helpful. We shouldn’t play computer games a lot. It is bad for our eyes. Sitting for a long time is also bad for our health. We may feel pain in our shoulders and backs. We should have a happy mood. We can keep happy by listening to music and talking to our friends.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文“如何保持健康”的主题；
第二步，根据提示材料提出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to 注意
②keep healthy 保持健康
③refuse to do sth. 拒绝做某事
④keep a balanced diet 保持均衡饮食
⑤be bad for 对……有坏处
[高分句型]
①It is necessary for everyone to learn some ways to keep healthy.（动词不定式作主语）
②We shouldn’t have junk food, because they are bad for health. （because引导原因状语从句）
C
（2023·山西·统考中考真题）
青春期对于每个人来说都是最能彰显生命本色的特殊时期。为了引导同学们正确地认识自我，某校“阳光心理驿站”的老师们以“我发现自己真的很好”为主题，对1127名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是部分项目的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生，请结合以上图表信息以“I Find Myself Really Good”为主题，用两段话写一篇短文。内容包括：
1. 简要说明图表内容；
2. 从图表中任选一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2·文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
I Find Myself Really Good
Our school did a survey among 1,127 students on the topic of “I Find Myself Really Good”. Here are the results. ______________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
I Find Myself Really Good
Our school did a survey among 1,127 students on the topic of “I Find Myself Really Good”. Here are the results. 86 percent of the students believe they can see the world with kind eyes, while 53 percent consider themselves positive. 47 percent think they don’t like to complain.
As for me, I find myself really positive. Last month, I was chosen to play a role in an English show. It was difficult for me to memorize the lines in a short time. However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English. So I made an effort to practice. Finally, I made it and received high praise. In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为图表作文；
②时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求以“I Find Myself Really Good”为主题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍调查结果；
第二步，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①As for至于
②play a role in扮演角色
③made an effort to尽力去做某事
④all the time一直
[高分句型]
①I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English.（which引导的定语从句）
②In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time.（强调句）
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