常考题型06 书信之邀请信和感谢信--2023-2024学年中考英语书面表达素材考点纲目

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常考题型06 书信之邀请信和感谢信
2023-2024学年中考英语书面表达素材考点纲目
邀请信
写作方法：
邀请信一定要将活动的时间、地点、内容写清楚，用词须准确、简洁，写作过程中不要遗漏要点，可以遵循以下写作套路。
第一段，简要说明活动并邀请对方，含：（1)问候；（2)自我介绍；（3)写信背景；（4)写信目的。
第二段，具体介绍邀请的原因，含：（1)活动的时间、地点及参与人员；（2)活动的主题、方式、组成部分；（3)活动的意义。
第三段，期待对方接受邀请，并表示感谢，含：（1)希望对方能来；（2)感谢对方读信； （3)期待回复。
【模板范文】
（2023·吉林长春·校联考模拟预测）假如你是班长李华，你班的外教老师Ms. Steen即将回美国，你们将在下周五为她举行欢送会（send-off party）。请你给她写一封不少于40词的邀请函。
要点：1.时间：晚上6点；
2.地点：学校音乐厅
3.活动内容：品尝中国传统美食和欣赏学生民族舞表演（folk dance）；
4.期待 Ms. Steen 参加。
要求：字句工整；语法正确；信息齐全；简练得体。
Dear Ms. Steen,
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Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ms. Steen,
We have heard that you are going back to America. We will hold a send-off party for you at 6 o’clock next Friday evening in the school concert hall. We will taste traditional Chinese food and enjoy the students’ folk dance performance. We sincerely look forward to your participation. If you have any questions, you can send me an email.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为邀请函；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：要求包含所有提示要点，注意信的格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动的时间地点；
第二步，介绍活动内容；
第三步，表达自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①go back to回到
②look forward to期盼
[高分句型]
①We will taste traditional Chinese food and enjoy the students’ folk dance performance. (and并列句)
②If you have any questions, you can send me an email. (If引导的条件状语从句)
感谢信
写作方法：
感谢信的写作，可以分以下三段进行：
第一段，简述写信的目的，诚挚地表达谢意，
第二段，表明感谢的原因，回顾对方所做的具体事情，
第三段，再次向对方表示感谢并表达希望回报对方的愿望。
【模板范文】
（2023·湖北武汉·统考模拟预测）假如你是李平，三年的初中生活就要结束了。老师们都很好，你最想感谢Mr. Jin。他在学习上、生活上甚至在你犯错误的时候给予你帮助，请你根据以下内容提示写信给他用英语写封信，表达自己的感激和依依惜别之情。
内容提示：
Why do you write this letter
What did Mr. Jin do to help you
How do you feel about your mistake
Something more about your experience.
…
注意：字数60-80字；内容要连贯得体，不要逐条翻译；表达流畅、书写整洁，信的首尾已给出，不计入总字数；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
Dear Mr. Jin,
I will graduate soon. Looking back at the past three years, I have a lot to say.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
【答案】
Dear Mr. Jin,
I will graduate soon. Looking back at the past three years, I have much to say to you. You helped me with my lessons when I didn’t do well in my study. You asked me to wear more clothes to keep warm. You have given me so much help and encouragement. But I have done many things that made you angry. Last term, when we had classes online, I spent too much time playing computer games. I got bad grades without doubt. You tried your best to help me and formed my study habits.
You always told me I could do better. I’ve changed a lot. I think I should say sorry and thanks to you. Best wishes to you and your family.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”，“现在完成时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中我（李平）最想感谢Mr. Jin在学习上、生活上甚至在我犯错误的时候给予我帮助的介绍。表达自己的感激和依依惜别之情。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍三年的初中生活就要结束了，为感激老师而写这封信；
第二步，介绍在学习上、生活上甚至在自己犯错误的时候老师给予自己的帮助；
第三步，表达自己因做错事抱歉的感受以及感激和依依惜别之情。
[亮点词汇]
① do well in擅长，在……干得好
② keep warm保温
③ had classes online在线上课
④ without doubt毫无疑问
[高分句型]
① But I have done many things that made you angry.（定语从句）
② Last term, when we had classes online, I spent too much time playing computer games.（when引导时间状语从句）
③ I think I should say sorry and thanks to you.（宾语从句）
【真题再线】
A
（2023·内蒙古赤峰·统考中考真题）
假如你是李华，你校英文校刊上发布了一则暑期夏令营活动信息，请你给爱尔兰笔友Karry写一封信，从以下三个夏令营中选择一个向他推荐，并邀请他参加。
要点如下：
1.介绍你选择的夏令营活动内容，并说明推荐理由；
2.邀请Karry参加。
Summer Camps
注意：
1.词数为80词左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.可适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Karry,
How are you doing
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Karry,
How are you doing Summer holiday is coming and there are three summer camps for us to choose. I chose Clothes Design Camp. Let me introduce something to you.
Clothes Design Camp will last five days from July 19th to 23rd. We will watch fashion shows. We will have classes given by famous designers. I will design a dress for my mother. I think it will be a special surprise for my mother. I am sure she will like it.
I sincerely recommend you join this camp. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，向对方介绍自己要参加的夏令营活动；
第二步，具体介绍要做什么活动；
第三步，邀请对方参加。
[亮点词汇]
①introduce sth to sb向某人介绍某事
②a special surprise特别的惊喜
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
I think it will be a special surprise for my mother.（省略that的宾语从句）
B
（2023·山东烟台·统考中考真题）
假定你是李华，在外教Mr. Brown的指导下，你在学校组织的英语戏剧大赛（English Opera Competition）中获得了一等奖。请给Mr. Brown写一封感谢信，主要内容包括：
l. 对Mr. Brown表示感谢；
2. Mr. Brown的帮助、你取得的进步及比赛的结果；
3. 邀请Mr. Brown到家里做客。
要求：
1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯；
3. 信中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。
Dear Mr. Brown,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am very excited to tell you something about the English Opera Competition I took part in last week in our school.
I got First Prize out of 40 competitors, which was totally beyond my imagination. When I heard the final result, I couldn’t believe my ears and jumped with joy.
It’s because of your efforts that I have made such rapid progress in my spoken English. Before the contest, whenever you had free time, you would help me practise my spoken English. Besides, you communicated with me as much as possible, and corrected my pronunciation and intonation. What’s more, you taught me some helpful speaking skills and made me full of confidence. Without your help, I wouldn’t have achieved such a good result. Also, I have benefited a lot from this competition. All in all, I really appreciated your help.
Thank you again for your advice and kind help. I sincerely invite you to my home for dinner and have a good time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示向外教表示感谢，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，告知他这个好消息以及比赛的结果；
第二步，详细介绍他对你的帮助以及你取得的进步；
第三步，再次表示感谢并邀请他到家里做客。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with和某人交流
②full of充满
③all in all总的来说
[高分句型]
①I got First Prize out of 40 competitors, which was totally beyond my imagination.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②It’s because of your efforts that I have made such rapid progress in my spoken English.(强调句)
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