常考题型09 书信之慰问信和倡议信--2023-2024学年中考英语书面表达素材考点纲目

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常考题型09 书信之慰问信和倡议信
2023-2024学年中考英语书面表达素材考点纲目
慰问信
写作方法：
写慰问信时，一般要求情感真挚、措辞贴切、行文简洁，且态度诚恳，真切。除对遭遇不幸的对象表示同情外，还要表达祝福，表明自己希望对方一切安好的深切愿望。
第一步，表达惋惜或同情；
第二步，安慰或鼓励对方；
第三步，表达愿望和祝福。
【模板范文】
（2023·广东深圳·校考三模）假如你是初三某班的班主任李老师，你收到了学生小明的求助信。中考在即，小明情绪紧张，虽然努力学习，但成绩仍不理想，他不知道该怎么办。请你根据以下要点提示给小明写一封回信，帮助他解决困惑。
提示：
1. 制定良好学习计划，及时复习；
2. 适度锻炼身体；
3. ……（补充1-2条）
要求：
1. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
Dear Xiaoming,
I am very happy that you can think of me when you have problems.
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Yours,
Mr. Li
【答案】
Dear Xiaoming,
I am very happy that you can think of me when you have problems. I’d like to give you some advice.
Firstly, develop a good learning plan for all your subjects. At the same time, you should review what you have learned in time, which can help you build up your confidence. Secondly, take proper exercise regularly. Exercise can make you healthy and energetic. What’s more, you can communicate with your teachers or classmates after class to keep a good mood. Last but not least, don’t stay up late. It is very important to have a good sleep at night if you want to be energetic during the day.
I hope my advice will be helpful.
Yours,
Mr. Li
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：这是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：主要是一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，针对小明“情绪紧张、成绩不理想”给出建议；需要补充1-2点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，建议制定良好学习计划，及时复习；
第二步，建议适度锻炼身体；
第三步，建议保持好心情，保持良好睡眠。
[亮点词汇]
① develop a good learning plan for 为……制定良好的学习计划
② build up your confidence 建立你的自信
③ take proper exercise regularly 定期进行适当的锻炼
④ keep a good mood 保持好心情
[高分句型]
① It is very important to have a good sleep at night if you want to be energetic during the day.（it的固定句型）
② At the same time, you should review what you have learned in time, which can help you build up your confidence.（定语从句）
倡议书
写作方法：
第一步，说明为什么要发出倡议，即发出倡议的背景和目的；
第二步，说清楚倡议什么事情，即倡议的具体内容及所倡议事情的益处：
第三步，表明倡议者的决心和希望。
【模板范文】
（2022·安徽马鞍山·一模）假定你是李华，为了鼓励同学们积极参加劳动，获得足够的生活技能去面对成长道路上的挑战，学校英文社团请你写一封倡议信。内容包括：
倡议的原因 为了解决生活中的问题，我们必须学习一些生活技能（in our daily life...）
倡议的内容 1.帮助父母做家务（do some housework）；2.参加学校与社会劳动（take part in...，labour劳动）；3.珍惜现在来之不易的生活（cherish today’s life）。
发出倡议 我们不仅需要学习文化知识，还需要学习一些基本的技能（not only...but also...）。
【注意】
1.词数80-100。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Dear fellow students, We will finally grow up someday, leaving our parents and facing the challenges in life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear fellow students,
We will finally grow up someday, leaving our parents and facing the challenges in life. To solve the problems properly by ourselves in our daily life, we must learn some basic living skills and face the difficulties independently.
First, we should use our free time to help parents do some housework, which not only reduces the burden of our parents but also helps us master some skills to live better. Second, we should take part in some labour activities at school or in society, which is helpful to making friends with others and dealing with some problems more properly when facing them later. Finally, We should know about how hard the life is by doing labour so that we can cherish today’s life.
Life is a process of learning, during the process , we not only need to study knowledge but also need to learn some basic skills.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据表格内容提示，写一篇作文鼓励同学们积极参加劳动，获得足够的生活技能去面对成长道路上的挑战。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主；人称以第一人称为主。在写作时，涵盖表格所给要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯，确保语句通顺，无单词错误，条理清晰。
【高分素材之单词、短语】
more and more ，as, be concerned about, appeal to, more importantly, responsibility to, the habit of, make a big difference, take action, had better
【高分素材之句式】
★首段模板句式
1. As everybody can see. . .
2. As. . .hits our city, more and more people are concerned about. . .
3. I am here to call on all of you to...
4. Now we are appealing to you to. . . as a way to. . .
★篇中模板句式
1. I think it is high time that we should stop doing things like the followings.
2. There are some benefits of. . .
3. We should form the habit of. . .
★结尾段模板句式
1. If we take action now, we can make a big difference to the world.
2. It's everybody's responsibility to take action.
3. Let's take action from now on!
【试题再现】
A
（2023·贵州贵阳·统考三模）
俗话说，家和万事兴，家庭关系和睦对每个家庭成员都至关重要。假如你是李华，你的好朋友Mike给你写了一封信，最近他和家人的关系比较紧张，不知道应该如何与家人相处。请你给他写一封回信，并给他一些建议。
要求如下：
1. 包含思维导图所有要点；
2. 重点谈谈如何和家人相处；
3. 文中不得出现个人真实信息。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to hear that you have problem communicating with your family. Don’t worry. I also had the same situation in the past. Here is some advice for you.
First, you should communicate with your family as often as possible and tell them your feelings. I think they will understand you better. Second, you should spend more time with your family. For example, you can do some sports with them on weekends. Last but not least, prepare some gifts for your family when they celebrate birthdays.
I hope these suggestions are helpful and you will have a better relationship with them.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文，为应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，认为跟家庭成员关系紧张是很正常的情况；
第二步，针对对方的问题提出合理的建议；
第三步，提出希望。
[亮点词汇]
①have problem doing sth做某事有问题
②communicate with与……沟通
③spend time with sb与某人共度时光
[高分句型]
①Here is some advice for you.（倒装句）
②I hope these suggestions are helpful and you will have a better relationship with them.（宾语从句）
B
（2022·四川自贡·统考中考真题）
假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Mike来信说他在人际交往方面感到迷茫，希望得到你的帮助。请写封回信，内容包括：
1. 表示理解和安慰；
2. 建议：正确认识自己的不足；处理好和父母的关系；处理好与同学、朋友之间的关系；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How’s everything going
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
How’s everything going I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty getting along with others. It’s common to have the feeling. Take it easy. I’ll give you some advice.
First, you should get a thorough understanding of yourself: aware of your strength and weakness. Second, you should communicate with your parents. Tell them your feelings so that they will understand you better. Third, you can take part in some activities with your classmates. It will help you find more about your classmates and they can learn more about you too. Then you can become friends.
I hope these suggestions can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。针对Mike交友方面的问题提出合理的建议。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。分为三段式：第一段表达安慰和理解；第二段根据提示材料提出合理的建议；最后一段表达祝愿。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
C
（2021·辽宁沈阳·统考中考真题）
假定你是李华，为了鼓励同学们积极参加劳动，获得足够的生活技能去面对成长道路上的挑战，学校英文社团请你写一封倡议信，内容包括：
1.倡议的原因；
2.倡议的内容（如做家务、参加学校劳动、参与社会劳动等）；
3.发出倡议。
注意：
1.词数80-100,开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连 贯；
3.在文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Dear fellow students,
We will finally grow up someday, leaving our patents and facing the challenges in life.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear fellow students,
We will finally grow up someday, leaving our parents and facing the challenges in life. We need to learn and practise some basic life skills because they can help build our working spirit.
Firstly, we can help do some housework, such as washing clothes or sweeping floors. Therefore, we can become more positive to face the future life. Secondly, cleaning classrooms is our duty. It is comfortable for us to study in such a clean environment. Thirdly, it's also a good idea to help pick up litter in our neighborhood. This can help us become more responsible.
All in all, let's take action now. A small action can make a big difference.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是让你以李华的身份写一封倡议信，根据要点提示写作，鼓励同学们积极参加劳动。
2. 写作指导：本文写作时注意涵盖要点包括的三大项。主要以第一人称复数发出倡议，第三人称进行描述，时态以一般现在时为主。写作时注意层次分明，条理清晰，不要有拼写或语法错误。
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