常考题型08书信之申请信和推荐信--2023-2024学年中考英语书面表达素材考点纲目

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常考题型08书信之申请信和推荐信
2023-2024学年中考英语书面表达素材考点纲目
申请信
写作方法：
由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示，写作时除了应注意格式上的要求，还应注意审题全面，不能遗漏要点，并要注意人称和时态的变化，避免出现逻辑混乱，可以遵循“三段法”来写作。
第一段，简要说明信息来源，并陈述自己能胜任；
第二段，突出自己的特点，具体说明能胜任的原因，
第三段，请求尽快答复并给予机会。
【模板范文】
（2023·陕西西安·西安行知中学校考模拟预测）2022年第24届冬奥会在北京成功举办，我国热情友好、乐于助人的志愿者也得到了世界各地人民的好评。第19届亚运会（the 19th Asian Games）将于2023年9月23日在杭州举办。假设你是王鹏，你想成为本次亚运会的一名志愿者。请根据下列要求，从结构图的三个方面，用英语写一封自荐信。
参考词汇：be proud of, happy, be good at, communicate, help, experience, practise, training...
要求：
1. 可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Wang Peng. I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer for the 19th Asian Games.
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Wang Peng
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Wang Peng. I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer for the 19th Asian Games.
I want to be a volunteer because I like to help people, and would like to do something I can for the 19th Asian Games. I have some advantages that would help me be a good volunteer. First, I am a careful boy and I can do everything quickly and correctly. Second, I treat everyone equally and I am very friendly, so I can get on well with everyone. Third, I am good at English so I can communicate with most foreign athletes. If I become a volunteer, I will work hard and do everything well.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Wang Peng
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“想成为志愿者的原因，优势以及自己的打算”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我叫王鹏。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“想要成为志愿者的原因，自己的优势以及自己的打算”重点介绍我的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“我期待着你的答复。”的强烈愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① be good at擅长
② get on well with与……相处融洽
[高分句型]
① I want to be a volunteer because I like to help people, and would like to do something I can for the 19th Asian Games.（because引导的原因状语从句）
② If I become a volunteer, I will work hard and do everything well.（if引导的条件状语从句）
推荐信
写作方法：
第一步，自我介绍并说明推荐的人物，说明写信的目的;
第二步，介绍被推荐者，说明推荐理由；
第三步，表示谢意，期待对方回复。
【模板范文】
（2023·重庆沙坪坝·重庆八中校考模拟预测）阅读沁润人心，启智增慧，我们的书香校园处处飘香，风景独好。一年一度的“书香班级（Literary Class）”评选活动于本周正式拉开帷幕。假如你是一班班长李华，请你代表班级写一封参评推荐信，谈谈你们班书香教室的布置、班级师生对书籍的热爱与良好的阅读习惯，以及阅读给大家带来的益处。
要求：
字数不少于80词，文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
参考信息：
1.书香教室布置（a reading corner; a wall newspaper …）
2.班级阅读热情与习惯（bookcrossing（漂书）; group discussions…）
3.阅读益处（……）
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua from Class One. I am writing to recommend my class to be the “Literary Class”,
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【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua from Class One. I am writing to recommend my class to be the “Literary Class”,
There is a reading corner in our class, and there are different kinds of books so that students can read any time. There is also a wall newspaper. There are some calligraphy tablets there. We often read books three times a week and we often work group to discuss what we have read. There is also bookcrossing, which enables us to read different kinds of books.
Reading has a lot of benefits. It can open up our eyes because books are full of knowledge, and it makes us wiser in life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示内容推荐自己班级为“书香班级”，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己班书香教室的布置、班级阅读热情与习惯；
第三步，介绍阅读的益处。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of各种各样的
②enable sb. to do sth.使某人能够做某事
③be full of充满
[高分句型]
①There is a reading corner in our class, and there are different kinds of books so that students can read any time.(so that引导的目的状语从句)
②We often read books three times a week and we often work group to discuss what we have read.(what引导的宾语从句)
③There is also bookcrossing, which enables us to read different kinds of books.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【真题再现】
A
（2022·四川眉山·统考中考真题）
本周日上午，一些外国学生将到三苏祠参观，现三苏祠急需招募十名志愿者。假定你是李华，请写一封电子邮件推荐自己。要点包括：
1. 自荐目的：成为志愿者；
2. 个人信息：身份，年龄，性格（外向、善于与人相处），本周日上午有空；
3. 个人优势：擅长英语，……；
4. 表达期望：获得机会并能做好，请本周五前回复。
注意：
1. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
参考词汇：三苏祠Sansu Temple
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to see your notice Volunteers Wanted. Some foreign students
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to see your notice Volunteers Wanted. Some foreign students will visit Sansu Temple this Sunday morning. I’m willing to be a volunteer.
Let me introduce myself to you. I’m a middle school student aged 15. I’m an outgoing girl/boy who can always get on well with others. As for the time, I will be available this Sunday morning. My oral English is so excellent that I have no difficulty communicating with foreign friends. More importantly, I know a lot about Sansu culture. I’m sure I can help them have a better understanding of it.
I believe I can manage it if you give me a chance. Please reply to me by Friday!（103 words）
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容，写封邮件自荐成为三苏祠的志愿者，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍自荐的目的，自己的信息和优势，以及自己的期望。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
B
（2023·湖南湘潭·统考中考真题）
湘潭市博物馆正在为“讲好湘潭故事，传播本土文化”的大型宣传活动招募英语讲解员。假设你是李华，你想参加此次活动，请根据以下提示用英语向活动负责人写一封自荐信。
要点提示：
（1）个人基本情况（姓名、年龄等）；
（2）自荐的原因（性格、特长等）；
（3）对活动的认知（感想或意义等）。
注意：
（1）字数在80词左右，可适当发挥（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息（如校名，个人姓名等）。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’d like to be a volunteer in this “Telling Xiangtan Stories, Spreading Local Culture” activity.
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’d like to be a volunteer in this “Telling Xiangtan Stories, Spreading Local Culture” activity.
My name is Li Hua. I am 14 years old. I’m such an outgoing boy that it’s easy for me to communicate with others. In addition, I’ve got varied hobbies, such as reading books, doing sports and performing the cross talk. I am interested in Chinese traditional culture. I often read books about them. And I also take part in many activities like this. I think this activity is very meaningful. It can make more people learn about our local culture. It can help to promote cultural exchanges and development. If I am chosen to be a member of this activity, I will try my best to do it.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，表达想成为一名志愿者的意愿；
第二步，介绍自己的个人情况，自荐原因以及对活动的认知；
第三步，期待对方的回信。
[亮点词汇]
①in addition另外
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①I’m such an outgoing boy that it’s easy for me to communicate with others.（such…that引导结果状语从句）
②If I am chosen to be a member of this activity, I will try my best to do it.（if引导条件状语从句）
C
（2023·福建·统考中考真题）
某地“美丽乡村（Beautiful Village）”项目吸引了不少外宾，暑假期间需要数名擅长英语的小导游。假定你是李华，希望成为其中的一员。请你结合以下表格提示，给该项目的外事负责人王先生写一封英文自荐信。词数80左右。
What kind of person you are friendly, active…
What you are good at speak English, tell stories…
What you can do introduce local culture, help foreigners…
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Hua. I am glad to know that you are in need of some tour guides.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Hua. I am glad to know that you are in need of some tour guides. I’d like to be one of them. I think I am suitable for the job.
First of all, I am friendly and patient. I am active in many activities. Besides, I speak English well and have won several prizes in English speaking competitions. I am also good at telling stories. So I can introduce local culture to foreigners in English. Most importantly, I have visited the beautiful village many times and I can help foreigners better understand the life of the village.
I would be thankful if I could be given the chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封自荐信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍自己想成为“美丽乡村”项目的英语小导游；
第二步，具体阐述自己具备的品质和擅长做的事；
第三步，最后书写结尾，再次表达希望成为小导游中的一员。
[亮点词汇]
①be suitable for适合于……
②introduce sth to sb向某人介绍某物
③Most importantly最重要的是
[高分句型]
①I think I am suitable for the job.（省略that的宾语从句）
②I would be thankful if I could be given the chance.（if引导的条件状语从句；被动语态）
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