中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
常考题型10 演讲稿+报道
2023-2024学年中考英语书面表达素材考点纲目
演讲稿
写作方法:
演讲稿一般由称呼、正文和结束语组成。开头和结尾有固定的格式,正文常分为三部分:直接提出本人的看法;说明理由;总结全文。
第一步,明确演讲主题;
第二步,分析问题,展开论述;
第三步,提出解决方法或期待。
【模板范文】
(2023·福建福州·福建省福州第一中学校考模拟预测)2023年5月30日,神舟十六号载人飞船的成功发射,是我国航天事业的又一重大里程碑。它不仅标志着我国航天业的飞速发展,更让我们对未来的探索和发展充满了期待和信心。假如你校将举办一场主题为“My Space Dream”的英语演讲比赛,请根据下列提示写一篇演讲稿,简单阐述近年来我国航天事业的发展情况并谈谈你为实现航天梦将做何准备。
提示:
(1)What do you think of our space industry
(2)What do you think of flying to the moon
(3)What are you going to do Why
注意:
(1)短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(3)词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:take exercise,get knowledge
Good morning, everyone. I’m glad to stand here to give a speech.
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Thanks for your listening!
【答案】
Good morning, everyone. I’m glad to stand here to give a speech. As we know, in recent years, China has made great progress in its space industry. We Chinese are all proud of it!
Since I was a child, I have been dream of becoming an astronaut, because flying into the moon is so cool. I know becoming an astronaut is not easy, but I will try my best to achieve it. So I am going to study hard and get more knowledge about space. What’s more, I plan to take more exercise to get a strong body.
As the saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” I strongly believe that as long as I keep on trying, my dream will come true one day.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:根据所给问题提示,介绍自己的航天梦以及为实现航天梦将做何准备,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,介绍近年来中国的航天事业的情况;
第二步,介绍自己的航天梦,以及为实现它该如何做;
第三步,表达自己的决心。
[亮点词汇]
①make great progress in...在某方面取得巨大的进步
②be proud of以……为傲
③try my best to do sth竭尽全力做某事
④keep on doing继续做某事
[高分句型]
①Since I was a child, I have been dream of becoming an astronaut, because flying into the moon is so cool. (since引导的时间状语从句;because引导的原因状语从句)
②Where there is a will, there is a way.(名言警句)
③I strongly believe that as long as I keep on trying, my dream will come true one day.(that引导的宾语从句;as long as引导的条件状语从句)
报 道
写作方法:
报道一般包含:标题、导语、主体和结语。
标题:浓缩概括全文的中心实质问题,提炼要点,吸引读者。
导语:揭示事件的核心内容。
主体:消息的主要部分,它用充足的事实表现主题,是对导语内容的进一步展开和阐释。
结语:一般是最后一段话或一句话,是对全文内容的概括性总结。
据此可遵循以下写作步骤:
第一步,提炼报道的要点并列出标题;
第二步,揭示事件核心内容的导语,
第三步,对主题进行扩展和解释;
第四步,对报道进行概括性总结。
【模板范文】
(2023·福建福州·模拟预测)假定你是李华,近日你校举办了以“文韵传承”为主题的第一届中国传统文化节。请根据以下思维导图的提示,用英文给校刊写一篇报导,并谈谈你的感想。词数80左右。
Date: June 1 Activities:1. Calligraphy(书法)2. Paper cutting3. embroidery(刺绣)
Place: the school hall Feeling(s): ...
要求:
(1)必须包含以上提示,可适当拓展。
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
School’s Traditional Chinese Culture Festival
The first School’s Traditional Chinese Culture Festival was a big success.
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【答案】
School’s Traditional Chinese Culture Festival
The first School’s Traditional Chinese Culture Festival was a big success. It was held on June 1st in the school hall. During the activity, we enjoyed a lot of traditional Chinese culture. Some students showed us their wonderful calligraphy. We learned about the origin, history and development of paper cutting. In addition, we also invited a master of embroidery to show us how to make beautiful embroidery. Through this activity, I really understand the beauty of traditional Chinese culture. I’m proud of my country.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要求已给出,学生不要遗漏题目中的要点,适当添加细节,写作时保持主谓一致,注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍传统文化节的时间及地点;
第二步,介绍传统文化节的具体活动点;
第三步,谈谈你的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of许多
②learn about了解
③In addition此外
④be proud of…为……感到骄傲
[高分句型]
①It was held on June 1st in the school hall.(一般过去时的被动语态)
【试题再现】
A
(2023·湖北襄阳·统考中考真题)
今年五一,襄阳凭借丰富的旅游资源和优质的服务,吸引了各地的游客前来“打卡”。在校园英语文化周,你将代表班级做关于“旅行”的英语演讲。请根据以下要点提示,结合你的旅游或出行经历,写一篇英语演讲稿。
1.要点提示:
(1)简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法;
(2)详述你的一次旅游或出行经历;
(3)根据你的旅行感受,为襄阳的旅游发展提出一条合理的建议或希望。
2.注意事项:
(1)词数90左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
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That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
Now more and more people are interested in travelling. I think trip is an opportunity for us to experience life and increase knowledge. At the same time, it can also broaden our horizon.
Last Wednesday, we went on a trip to Yixing. Yixing is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest. It was a fine warm day. In the morning, we climbed the hill in the Bamboo Park. On the way, we met an Australian. He was kind and patient. We had fun practising speaking English. In the afternoon, we rowed boats along the underground river in the Shanjuan Cave. It was a great day.
I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据内容提示,介绍自己的旅游经历和感受,不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法;
第二步,详述你的一次旅游或出行经历;
第三步,提出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②at the same time同时
③places of interest名胜古迹
[高分句型]
①Yixing is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest.(非限制性定语从句)
②I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.(宾语从句;if引导的条件状语从句)
B
(2023·湖北十堰·统考中考真题)
三年的初中生活,你一定有许多收获,也会有一些不足。展望未来,你肯定有许多美好的期待。假如你被邀请在班会上发言,请你根据以下表格信息,写一篇发言稿。
提示内容 提示词
回顾过去 1.性格上的改变2.学习上的成就3.反思不足 1. outgoing, get on with2. learn from, make progress3. waste time, not understand
展望未来 未来的期望 come true
要求:
1.发言稿需涵盖表格中所有内容,可适当发挥;
2.行文连贯,条理清楚,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3.文中不可出现真实人名和校名等相关信息:
4.词数80-100,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear students,
How time flies! Looking back at these past three years, I have improved a lot.
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Good luck!
【答案】
Dear students,
How time flies! Looking back at these past three years, I have improved a lot.
I used to be very shy, not daring to express myself in public. But with the encouragement from my teachers, I not only become more outgoing but also get on well with all the people around me. Besides, I often learn from my classmates so I have made great progress in my study. However, I also wasted much valuable time in playing computer games. What’s worse, I couldn’t really understand my parents, always talking back to them loudly. But now, everything has changed. I make a decision to study harder to make my parents proud of me. I believe that my dream will come true and I will have a bright future.
Good luck!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态综合使用“一般过去时”,“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总述过去的三年有很大的变化;
第二步,回顾过去,包括性格、学习的变化并反思自己的不足;
第三步,展望未来,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in public在公共场合
②get on well with与……相处融洽
③make great progress取得很大进步
④make a decision做决定
[高分句型]
①But with the encouragement from my teachers, I not only become more outgoing but also get on well with all the people around me.(not only...but also,,,结构)
②I believe that my dream will come true and I will have a bright future.(that引导的宾语从句)
C
(2021·安徽·淮南市龙湖中学二模)
你校上个月就“What should a good friend be like?”这个话题进行了热烈讨论,请根据下表讨论的结果写一篇英文报道,同时发表你的个人观点。
What should a good friend be like
40% students think 好的朋友应该学习成绩好,学习刻苦;好的朋友需待人友好,在校受欢迎。
60% students think 好的朋友应该乐于助人,关心朋友;好的朋友是良好的倾听者,愿意分享。
I think 至少两条观点。
注意:
1.词数80—100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Last month, our school had a heated discussion about what a good friend should be like. _________________
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What do you think of this topic Write to me and tell me your opinion.
【答案】
Last month, our school had a heated discussion about what a good friend should be like. Here is the result.
40% of the students think that a good friend should have good grades and study hard. He/She is supposed to be kind to others and popular in school. 60% of the students think that a good friend should be a good listener who is willing to care about friends. Meanwhile, he/she is supposed to be helpful and happy to share. As for me, a good friend must be honest. What’s more, he/she can be good at something like singing, playing sports and so on.
What do you think of this topic Write to me and tell me your opinion.
【详解】
1. 题干解读:该题属于材料作文,作文已经给出首句和尾句,写作时注意内容的承接。题目给出的表格为写作要点,主要包括40%同学的意见、60%同学的意见和“我”的意见。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导:由于作文主要描述调查结果,再结合表格中给出的英文信息提示可知,该作文时态为一般现在时。写作时,描述他人观点用第三人称,表达自己观点用第一人称。作文可以采用“三段式”结构,第一段介绍调查内容,以题干给出的首句为主,第二段描述调查结果,即表格中涵盖的所有内容,注意按表格顺序依次写好,第三段以题干已给出的尾句结尾。作文完成后注意检查语法、单词拼写和标点。
【万能模板之高分素材】
【高分素材之单词、短语】
take part in, encourage, enrich, organize, set out, in high spirits, joyful, energetic, outdoor, looker-on cheerful, delighted
【高分素材之句式】
★篇首模板句式
1. In order to enrich...
2. Reports from. . .say that. . .
3. The surveys show that . . . is growing across the world.4. In order to celebrate..., they held a party.
★篇中模板句式
1. All the way they were. . .
2. Years ago, some of them paid no attention to environment protection.
3. What impressed us was. . .
★篇尾模板句式
1. Details of what happened are still unclear.
2. What a wonderful time!
3. We are looking forward to a more beautiful surrounding.
4. Further details will be reported when it becomes available.
5. So far there is no word on...
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