中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
常考题型11 启事+通知+日记
2023-2024学年中考英语书面表达素材考点纲目
【题型分析与写作方法】
题型分析:
启事,是为了公开声明某事而刊登在报刊或贴在墙上的文字。这里的“启”是“说明”的意思,而“事”就是指被说明的事情。中考英语启事类书面表达的范围很广,包括;征稿启事,招聘启事,招领或者寻物启事等。
写作方法:
第一步,明确启事的格式和内容安排;
第二步,书写启事的正文;
第三步,给出联系方式或表达感谢。
【模板范文】
(2023·吉林松原·校联考模拟预测)假定你是李华,当前新冠防疫进入常态化,你受学生会委托,请围绕“从我做起,共同抗疫”这个主题,为校宣传栏《英语天地》写一封倡议书。
内容包括:
应该 ● 待在家,勤洗手;● 戴口罩 (wear masks);● 多吃蔬菜和水果;● 锻炼身体,可以增强 (strengthen) 免疫力 (immunity);● 保持社交距离 (keep social distance)。
不应该 ● 去人群密集的地方 (go to crowded places);● 聚集,去国外旅行 (travel abroad) 等。
写作要求:
1. 语言流畅,层次清晰,内容可以适当发挥;
2. 不少于70词;
3. 书写规范,卷面整洁;
4. 文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇:新型冠状病毒COVID-19
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【答案】
The fight against the COVID-19 will last for a long time. In order to keep safe and healthy, I will give you some advice.
Staying at home is the best way. You can keep in touch with your family and friends by video chat instead of getting together or having parties. When you go out, remember to wear masks. After you get home, wash your hands immediately. Besides, it’s a good idea to develop good living habits like eating more vegetables and fruit. It is also necessary for us to do exercise more, which will strengthen our immunity.
You’d better not go to the crowded places or go abroad. If you have to, remember to keep social distance. Hopefully, you can do as I suggest and I believe that we can make a significant difference.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总体介绍疫情期间为了安全要提出一些建议;
第二步,具体介绍应该做的事情;
第三步,最后介绍不应该做的事情。
[亮点词汇]
① keep in touch with sb与某人保持联系
② remember to do sth记得去做某事
③ go abroad出国
[高分句型]
① When you go out, remember to wear masks.(when引导的时间状语从句)
② I believe that we can make a significant difference.(that引导的宾语从句)
通 知
【题型分析与写作方法】
题型分析:
通知是一种适用范围很广的应用文体,分为口头通知和书面通知。口头通知所使用的语言具有明显的口语特征,通俗易懂。书面通知是正式的布告或公告,要求语言规范、简洁,表达正式。
写作方法:
书面通知一般由标题、正文、落款组成,而口头通知主要包括称呼和正文。因此写作时,应先分清是哪种类型的通知。
第一步,明确是口头通知还是书面通知;
第二步,具体阐明通知的内容(时间、地点、事件等);
第三步,提醒注意,要求参加。
【模板范文】
(2023·四川绵阳·统考模拟预测)你校英语角准备本周六组织一次徒步活动。同学们先在人民公园门口集合,然后开始徒步,沿途捡垃圾,终点是南山公园,并在那儿瞻仰烈士陵园(Visit the Martyrs’ Cemetery),献花(offer flowers)。请你用英语发一则通知,告知清楚时间、地点、路线的安排及所进行的活动。词数在100词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
地图提示:
NoticeBoys and girls,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________English CornerMarch 29th, 2023
【答案】
Our English Corner will go hiking this Saturday. We’ll go to Nanshan Park to visit the Martyrs’ Cemetery and offer flowers to those heroes.
Let’s meet at the gate of the People’s Park at 9:00 a.m. While we’re walking, we are about to pick up litter along the street. The route is: walk down Fucheng Road and turn left at the first crossing. Then walk along Jingzhong Street and then Nanhe Road. When we reach the crossing, turn left and go along Nanshan Road. Nanshan Park is on our right.
Please get to the People’s Park on time with your rubbish bags. That’s all.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,一个通知;
②时态:本文的时态为一般现在时和一般将来时;
③提示:注意在描述路线及进行的活动时,语言衔接要顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总述活动的主办方及参加的人;
第二步,详细介绍会面的地点,路线及活动内容;
第三步,结束语,要求按时到达。
[亮点词汇]
on time按时
offer flowers献花
[高分句型]
When we reach the crossing, turn left and go along Nanshan Road. (时间状语从句)
日 记
写作方法:
以叙事为主的日记有看图写日记和看文字写日记两种,写作时要注意描写顺序以及事件的相对完整性,做到情节连贯。
第一步,认真审题,理顺故事情节、人物关系等,确定主题;
第二步,遵循一定的顺序具体描述,详略得当;
第三步,合理选择叙述方式(顺叙、倒叙、插叙、夹叙夹议等);
第四步,进行总结或发表感想。
【模板范文】
(2023·甘肃平凉·校考三模)根据下列提示,请你写一篇日记,记述五月一日(星期五)你和李明一起参观科技博物馆的事情。
1. 天气:晴。
2. 距离:离家约一公里。
3. 交通工具:自行车。
4. 时间:早八点半出发,十一点回家。
5. 内容:见到了很多照片、实物等,学到了很多东西。
6. 游人:见到很多父母和孩子、学生、老师等。
7. 参考词汇:科技博物馆the Science and Technology Museum ,公里kilometer,实物things
注意:1. 词数:60—80左右。日记的格式已给出;
2. 可根据内容适当发挥。
Friday May 1, 2009 Fine
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【答案】
Friday May 1, 2009 Fine
It was a sunny day today. Li Ming and I went to visit the Science and Technology Museum. It is about one kilometer away from my home. So we decided to go there by bike. We set off at 8:30 in the morning. At the museum, we saw many photos and other interesting things. We learned a lot. We also saw a lot of students, teachers and many children with their parents. We got home at eleven o’clock and we had a great time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇日记;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容介绍自己去科技博物馆的一天,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己去了哪里;
第二步,具体介绍做了什么;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①away from距离
②decide to do sth决定做某事
③set off 出发
④have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
We got home at eleven o’clock and we had a great time.(and连接并列句)
【试题再现】
A
(2023·湖北·统考中考真题)
尊老敬老是中华民族的传统美德。东东的爸爸妈妈把乡下的爷爷接到了城里一起生活。假如你是东东,请结合图片提示,发挥你的想象,用英文写一篇80词左右的日记。文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
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【答案】
Today, Grandpa came to my house. We had a big dinner together.
After dinner, Grandpa told interesting stories to my brother and me. We drank tea and played chess together. We had a good time.
At about 9:00 in the evening, my mother told us it was time for bed. In order to help Grandpa sleep well, Mom decided to let him sleep in my room, and made me sleep with my brother.
Looking after Grandpa is our duty. The better Grandpa lives, the happier we are.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇日记;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍介绍爷爷到我家来了;
第二步,具体介绍爷爷在我家的饮食起居等安排;
第三步,最后总结照顾爷爷是我们的责任。
[亮点词汇]
① a big dinner大餐
② play chess下象棋
③ look after照顾
[高分句型]
① The better Grandpa lives, the happier we are.(the+比较级……,the+比较级……)
② Mom decided to let him sleep in my room, and made me sleep with my brother.(and连接的并列句)
B
(2022·黑龙江·统考中考真题)
Writing(注意:文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名,否则不得分)
假如你是李华,你是一名九年(6)班的学生。6月2日下午在学校操场上拾到一个书包,内有:一本英语书、一双蓝色的运动鞋、一个篮球。电话:632-5267。请根据以上提示,用英语写一则招领启事。
Found
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Li Hua
【答案】
Found
I found a schoolbag on the school playground on the afternoon of June 2nd. There is an English book, a pair of blue sports shoes and a basketball in it. If it is yours, please come to Class 6, Grade 9 or call me at 632-5267.
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:题目要求写一篇失物招领启事,要求包含所有提示内容。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主;人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。可采用一段落格式,阐述失物是什么,联系电话等。注意语句要通顺,无单词语法错误。
C
(2022·吉林长春·统考中考真题)
本周日,同学们将去民俗博物馆(the Folklore Museum)参观。假如你是学生会主席,请根据下面要点和要求,用英文向你校国际交换生发布一则不少于40词的通知。
要点:1.早8:00在学校集合;
2.带笔和笔记本;
3.馆内有英文导游;
4.做好记录,为参观后的讨论做准备。
要求:要点齐全;表述通顺;简洁得体。
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【答案】
Dear students,
This Sunday we will go to the Folklore Museum. We will meet at 8:00 am at the school gate. Please don’t be late. You had better bring a pen and a notebook. There are some English guides in the museum. If you have any question, you can ask her for help. You should take notes carefully, and get ready for further discussion.
Hope you will have a good time.
Student Union
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一则通知。介绍去民俗博物馆的注意事项。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般将来时,人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。分为两段式:第一段介绍集合的时间,地点以及需要带的物品;最后一段表达祝愿。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
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