专题01 近三年（2021-2023）中考英语作文真题--2023-2024学年中考英语书面表达素材考点纲目

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专题01 近三年（2021-2023）中考英语作文真题
2023-2024学年中考英语书面表达素材考点纲目
A
（2021·贵州黔南·统考中考真题）
美不仅在于外表，更在于内心。最美的人可以是为人类进步做出贡献的伟人，也可以是我们身边默默无闻的普通人。在你心目中谁最美？假如你是李华，学校将要开展以“The Most Beautiful Person in My Heart”为主题的征文活动，请你写箱不少于80词的征文投稿。
要求如下：
1.包含思维导图的所有信息；
2.重点谈谈这个人美在哪里，并举一个例子说明；
3.征文中不得出现考生真实的个人信息。
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【答案】
The Most Beautiful Person in My Heart
To be honest, Sherry is the most beautiful person I’ve ever met. Sherry is my best friend in my school. She has a round face. I think she is beautiful because she is always patient, kind and helpful. She likes helping others. Once I was sick, she told me not to worry about my homework and study. Then she taught me some new words. In addition, once I failed in my math exam, she encouraged me and told me not to give up. I felt confident.
As her best friend, I have learned that nothing is impossible and we should help others.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，以“The Most Beautiful Person in My Heart”为主题，写一篇文章介绍自己心目中最美的人。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时，叙述经历时采用一般过去时，以第三人称为主；第一段介绍自己心目中最美的人，包括这个人的外貌和性格，以及举例说明这个人美在哪里；最后一段说明自己从这个人身上学到了什么。保证叙述完整，条理清晰。
B
（2022·内蒙古鄂尔多斯·统考中考真题）
近日，教育部发布《义务教育劳动课程标准》，今年秋季，劳动课将正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。在生活中，做家务就是最常见的一种劳动。请以Let’s do housework为题写作，倡议更多的青少年加入到做家务的行列中来。
要点：
1.你能做的家务；
2.做家务的益处；
3.倡议更多的青少年加入到做家务的行列。
写作要求：
1.书写工整，卷面整洁，行文连贯，结构完整；
2.包含以上所有要点内容，可适当发挥；
3.词数：不少于 80 词；
4.文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。
Let’s do housework
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【答案】
Let’s do housework
In our daily life, doing housework is the most common kind of labor. I can do some kinds of housework, such as doing the dishes, sweeping the floor, cooking and making the bed.
Labor education has been included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think it’s necessary because it is good for our health. We can relax from the hard study by doing labor.
It’s also our duty to share some housework. Besides, doing some hard housework is a kind of physical exercise. As teenagers, we should take action to do what we can to help our family!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：要求以Let’s do housework为题，结合提示要点进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己能做的家务；
第二步，介绍做家务的重要性和好处；
第三步，建议更多的青少年加入到做家务的行列中。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②be good for对……有好处
③a kind of一种
④take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①I think it’s necessary because it is good for our health.（省略that的宾语从句和because引导的原因状语从句）
②As teenagers, we should take action to do what we can to help our family!（what引导的宾语从句）
C
（2023·青海西宁·统考中考真题）
为提高自理能力，适应未来发展，青少年应学会做日常家务，培养必备生活技能，如烹饪、洗衣、种花、打扫、整理等。请以“Doing Chores Makes Me Better” 为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，文中不得出现真实校名和姓名。
要点提示：1.你会做哪些家务？2.你想学哪些家务？为什么？3.对你有何帮助和意义？
Doing Chores Makes Me Better
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【答案】A possible version：
Doing Chores Makes Me Better
As teenagers, doing chores is one of the most important life skills in our daily life.
My mum always encourages me and teaches me to do chores. She wants me to learn more life skills and take good care of myself in the future. Thanks to her help, I can make simple food, tidy my room, wash clothes and take the dog for walks. Recently I have also learned to make cookies in my labor class at school. Later, I hope to learn how to cook beef noodles, because my family are fond of them. Flower arranging is another skill that I want to learn because it can keep me calm and improve my life. During learning, I can have a better communication with my parents.
Doing chores makes me more independent, confident and sociable. The more chores I can do, the better life I will have!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍做家务的重要性；
第二步，分享自己会做的家务以及希望学哪些家务，并说说明原因；
第三步，介绍做家务给我带来的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
②take good care of好好照顾
③be fond of喜欢
[高分句型]
①As teenagers, doing chores is one of the most important life skills in our daily life.（动名词作主语）
②The more chores I can do, the better life I will have!（the+比较级，the+比较级）
D
（2023·浙江衢州·统考中考真题）
善于合作是一种重要能力。近期你校英语社团将举办以 “Work Together，Enjoy Teamwork ”为主题的征文活动。请写一篇英语短文，介绍你与他人合作的一次活动经历并谈谈你的感受。活动内容可从下表中选择一项或自行确定。
Teamwork Activities
● take part in a ball match ● prepare for a party ● clean the classroom● make a poster (海报) ● make a survey (调查)● join in a relay race (接力赛)● do social practice (社会实践)● ...
注意：
（1）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息；
（2）词数：90 110。
参考词汇（仅供选择使用）：
teamwork （团队合作） work with （与……合作）
team spirit （团队精神） make an effort to （努力去……）
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【答案】
Teamwork is important for both teenagers and adults. The ability to work together with others as part of a team is not simply a skill needed at school. In fact, it is also an important skill used in all areas of life.
I remembered that I took part in a football match last month. At first, I thought I could score goals by myself. At last, we failed this game because of arrogance. After that, I realized this was a team sport. I should work together with other teammates.
All in all, teamwork can not only strengthen children’s social skills, but also develop their communication skills.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍团队合作的重要性；
第二步，讲述自己的经历和从中学到了什么；
第三步，总结概括。
[亮点词汇]
①be important for对……重要
②in fact事实上
③take part in参加
④all in all总的来说
[高分句型]
①The ability to work together with others as part of a team is not simply a skill needed at school.（动词不定式作定语）
② I remembered that I took part in a football match last month.（宾语从句）
E
（2021·山东淄博·统考中考真题）
你们学校将要举行“我心目中的英雄”主题演讲比赛。请你写一篇100词左右的英语演讲稿，介绍一位事迹突出、品格高尚、令人感动的人物，内容包括：
1. 他（她）的基本情况；2.他（她）的主要事迹；3.你的感悟。
注意：1.书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实区县、学校及姓名。
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【答案】One possible version:
Good morning, everybody! It’s my honor to speak here, and I am very glad to introduce the hero in my mind.
When people say the word “hero”, what will you think of Maybe your hero is a famous singer, a movie star or a great man. But my hero is around me. She is my mother.
My mother is a wise woman and she plays different roles in my life. As a mother, she takes good care of me. As a friend, she can listen to me. As a teacher, she encourages me instead of getting angry with my poor grades. She does nothing great, but what she does makes me so moved.
This is my mother, the hero in my heart!
Thanks for listening! That’s all.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于演讲稿写作。要求谈谈你心目中的英雄。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称和一般现在时来介绍。介绍心目中的英雄时，要交代清楚该人物的基本情况，主要事迹，并谈谈你的感悟。写作时注意保持主谓一致性，在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
F
（2022·广东深圳·统考中考真题）
假定你是李华，你和同学们拍了一个毕业活动视频，打算做成视频日志（vlog），参加主题为“青春飞扬”的国际中学生vlog作品展。请给该视频写一段解说词。
内容包括：
1. 海边活动：
下午：①沙滩排球；②……；
晚上：搭帐篷；聚餐和清理垃圾；分享会。
2. 活动感言。
注意：
1. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
参考词汇：冲浪surf 帐篷tent
Hi, everyone! I am Li Hua. It’s my great pleasure to present my vlog to you.
Last Saturday, we went to the seaside to celebrate our graduation. In the afternoon, _____________________
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So much for my video. I hope you have enjoyed it. Thank you.
【答案】
Hi, everyone! I am Li Hua. lt’s my great pleasure to present my vlog to you.
Last Saturday, we went to the seaside to celebrate our graduation. In the afternoon, we had a beach volleyball game. Then, we enjoyed the fun of surfing in the sea. Before dark, we picked up the litter on the beach. How meaningful it was! At night, we put up two tents and had a picnic. The food cooked by us was so delicious. Finally, all of us shared our feelings about this fantastic experience. Not only can it promote our friendship, but also it leaves us a valuable experience.
So much for my video. I hope you have enjoyed it.
Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇解说词，属于演讲稿写作；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示的要点介绍在海边的活动，包括下午和晚上的具体活动，要列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发活动带来的感悟并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①pick up the litter捡垃圾
②not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①How meaningful it was!（how引导的感叹句）
②The food cooked by us was so delicious.（过去分词作定语）
③Not only can it promote our friendship, but also it leaves us a valuable experience.（部分倒装结构）
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