专题02近三年（2021-2023）中考英语作文真题--2023-2024学年中考英语书面表达素材考点纲目

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专题02近三年（2021-2023）中考英语作文真题
2023-2024学年中考英语书面表达素材考点纲目
A
（2023·吉林长春·统考中考真题）
某报正在以“Challenge”为主题，举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇不少于80词的英语故事及体会来投稿。
要求：1.写一个自身或其他人的故事；
2.适当增加细节，行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
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【答案】
Challenge
Life is full of ups and downs. No one can lead a life without any challenges. However, I believe challenges make a better me. I was poor in English in Grade 7, which troubled me a lot. Then I made up my mind to learn English well. From then on I got up early to memorize new words and useful sentence patterns. Besides, I did many English exercises. Indeed it was not an easy job to catch up with my classmates, but I kept going and never gave up. At last, my hard work paid off, and I made great progress in English.
This taught me a lesson: Don’t be afraid of challenges, because they come hand in hand with achievements.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：题目要求以“Challenge”为题写短文投稿，结合自身或他人的故事来谈谈遇到的挑战及自己的感悟。
[写作步骤]
第一步，讲讲自身应对挑战的经历；
第二步，谈谈自己从这次挑战中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of 充满
②make up one’s mind to do sth. 下定决心做某事
③catch up with 赶上
[高分句型]
①I was poor in English in Grade 7, which troubled me a lot.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
②Don’t be afraid of challenges, because they come hand in hand with achievements.（祈使句的否定形式；because引导原因状语从句）
B
（2023·西藏·统考中考真题）
在全民阅读的浪潮中，阅读已成为我们生活中的一部分，青少年应该养成阅读习惯，以“Enjoy Reading”为题写一篇英语短文。
Enjoy reading What Kinds （种类）story books, newspapers...Favorite （最喜欢的）My favorite is...
Why Reasons （原因）be interested inget knowledge and open eyes
How Time （时间）: on weekends, in free timePlaces （地点）: at school, in the libraryWays （方式）: on the Internet, on paper
写作要求:
1）词数不少于70词，短文的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2）语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确；
3）写作要点齐全，可适当发挥；
4）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。
Enjoy Reading
Reading has become one of the most important parts in my daily life.
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【答案】
Enjoy Reading
Reading has become one of the most important parts in my daily life.
I like story books and newspapers. My favorite book is Journey to the West. Because I am interested in watching Sun Wukong beating bad people. Whenever I see Sun Wukong win, I am very excited. Besides, reading is also a good way to make me get knowledge and open my eyes. I usually read on weekends or in my free time. Sometimes I read in the library. I like to read on the Internet because there are a lot of books there. I am used to writing some good sentences on paper.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己喜欢什么种类的书以及自己最喜欢的书；
第二步，介绍自己喜欢读书的原因；
第三步，介绍自己读书的时间、地点和方式。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②a good way to do做某事的好方法
③be used to doing习惯做某事
[高分句型]
①Whenever I see Sun Wukong win, I am very excited. (whenever引导让步状语从句)
②I like to read on the Internet because there are a lot of books there. (because引导原因状语从句)
C
（2023·青海·统考中考真题）
积极健康、乐观向上的生活是我们共同追求的目标。通过正确合理的自我管理和自我提升，我们都能遇见更好的自己。请参考右图信息，以“How to become a better person”为主题，写一篇英语短文。
写作要求：
(1)语句通顺，逻辑清晰，书写规范；
(2)词数60—80左右；
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息。
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【答案】
Everyone wants to become a better person, so do I. I think the following suggestions can help me.
Firstly, making more friends will help me. It will not only offer me opportunities to learn from them, but it will also give me more chances to help others. Secondly, it is important for me to read more books. Because reading can help me open my eyes to the world and enrich my knowledge.
Action speaks louder than words. I will try my best to become a better person
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“How to become a better person”为主题，结合图示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出下文的建议；
第二步，具体介绍如何成为一个更好的人；
第三步，书写结语，表达决心。
[亮点词汇]
①learn from向……学习
②open my eyes to the world打开我的眼睛看世界
③enrich my knowledge丰富我的知识
[高分句型]
①It will not only offer me opportunities to learn from them, but it will also give me more chances to help others.（not only...but also...）
②Action speaks louder than words.（习语）
D
（2023·辽宁沈阳·统考中考真题）
为了传承和弘扬中华民族的优良家风，学校英文社团开展主题为“孝亲敬长”的英语征文比赛。假定你是李华，请你写一篇征文参加比赛。内容包括：
1.尊重的对象和原因；
2.具体做法；
3.发出号召。
【注意】
1.词数 80-100，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Show respect for elders
Showing respect for elders is one of the family traditions that Chinese people have kept for thousands of years.
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【答案】
Show respect for elders
Showing respect for elders is one of the family traditions that Chinese people have kept for thousands of years.
We are supposed to show respect for our parents because they are the most trusted elders and help us solve problems when we are in trouble.
Here are some things we can do to show our respect. First, we can offer to help with housework such as leaning the dishes or sweeping the floor so that they can have a rest after a day’s work. Second, don’t make them angry and try to take their advice when we disagree with each other. Third, share your happiness and sorrow with them as they were once like you and have more experience than you expect.
Small actions can make a great difference. Let’s show respect for our parents from now on!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，介绍敬老是很重要的优良传统；
第二步，介绍应该尊敬父母的原因以及如何表现自己的尊敬；
第三步，发出号召。
[亮点词汇]
①be supposed to应该
②such as例如
③each other彼此
[高分句型]
①First, we can offer to help with housework such as leaning the dishes or sweeping the floor so that they can have a rest after a day’s work.（so that引导目的状语从句）
②Third, share your happiness and sorrow with them as they were once like you and have more experience than you expect.（as引导原因状语从句）
E
（2023·江苏泰州·中考真题）
泰州是著名的教育之乡。你的英国朋友想了解泰州的教育，想请你用英语介绍一下，你列出如下提纲：
1. 良好的教育环境（校园美丽，名人众多……写1-2点）；
2. 优秀的老师；
3. 自己的学习表现。
要求：
1. 包含所有要点，表达清晰，过渡合理，衔接自然，可适当拓展；
2. 不得使用真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
3. 词数 100 左右。
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【答案】
I am proud to be a student in Taizhou. There is a good educational environment. The campus here is beautiful, and there are many celebrities, such as Hu Yuan, Wang Anshi and so on. There are also many libraries and famous universities.
The teachers here are also excellent. Most of them are teachers who graduated from famous universities, and some even returned from studying abroad. They have advanced teaching methods and teaching ideas. They also produce a large number of excellent students.
In addition to learning cultural knowledge, I also join many clubs, such as basketball club, chess club, dancing club and so on. Here I not only learn cultural knowledge, but also learn a lot of life philosophy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍泰州的教育，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍泰州良好的教育环境；
第二步，介绍优秀的老师；
第三步，介绍自己的学习表现。
[亮点词汇]
①be proud of为……感到自豪
②graduate from毕业于
③a large number of许多
[高分句型]
①Most of them are teachers who graduated from famous universities, and some even returned from studying abroad.（who引导的定语从句）
②Here I not only learn cultural knowledge, but also learn a lot of life philosophy.（not only...but also...连接并列结构）
F
（2023·广东广州·统考中考真题）
你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题（theme）为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动，交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件，向他介绍活动的安排。
Theme Healthy You and Me
Time 8:30 a.m.—11:30 a.m.
Place Sports Center
Activities …
Purpose …
注意：
1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 词数80词左右（邮件的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday. Let me introduce something about the activity to you.
The theme of the activity is “Healthy You and Me”, and it will be held from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. next Saturday. It will be held in the Sports Center. There are many interesting activities. First, there will be a sports history show. It will be held in our school hall. Besides, “Healthy You and Me” speech will be on, too. If you want to take part, please let us know before this Friday. There will be different kinds of after-school exercise classes, such as football, basketball, tennis and so on. You can choose the one you like.
The main purpose is to increase students’ interest in sports, and encourage students to take exercise actively. I am looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意结合表格提示内容介绍活动的安排。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出对活动的重点介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“主题、时间、地点、活动”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，介绍活动的目的并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①introduce...to...介绍……给……
②from...to...从……到……
③different kinds of各种不同的
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①The theme of the activity is “Healthy You and Me”, and it will be held from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. next Saturday. （and连接并列句）
②The main purpose is to increase students’ interest in sports, and encourage students to take exercise actively.（不定式结构作表语和作宾语补足语）
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