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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成--篇完整的短文。
A Four-legged Guardian Angel
Snow had just melted off the ground that April day at our house in Regina Beach, Saskatchewan. I had just cleaned up the pool in preparation for selling the house. The year before, I had lost my job with the provincial government, and now our financial situation was grim. In despair, I had finally put the home on the market, and a real estate agent was due to show up later that day. Even worse, I would have to give up my beloved Great Dane (大丹犬), Brigitte, because I could no longer afford the cost of feeding it. The thought of losing the dog and our beautiful home was almost more than I could bear.
Deep in despair, I sat typing up resumes and cover letters. Out of the corner of my eye I could see my thirteen-month-old son, Forrest, as he lay on the carpet, playing near our big, gentle nanny-dog, Brigitte. It seemed as if Brigitte was always meant to be in this family and she turned out to be a perfect companion.
Brigitte came to our house on Christmas eve when the doorbell rang and I was sure some of my Christmas packages had arrived. I ran to the door and swung it open, but no one was there. I sensed something and looked down, only to find a beautiful Great Dane sitting there, looking up at me with big, intelligent eyes. There was no way that she could have rung the doorbell by herself, was there Perhaps, someone had found the puppy somewhere and left her there, and then rang the doorbell and ran away. They accurately guessed I would welcome an additional family member and take care of her.
Thinking of these, I couldn’t help heaving a sigh and went straight back to work. However, I hadn’t typed more than two sentences when Brigitte began barking furiously and running back and forth to the sliding glass door overlooking our pool.
I raced to see what was happening and noticed that the sliding door was slightly open. Suddenly, I realized Forrest was nowhere to be seen. In panic, I opened the door and ran outside.
注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
There I was surprised to see Brigitte, who was terrified of water, dive into the pool.
Finally, the doctor said Forrest was all right and could be released from hospital.
对于Brigitte的定位：
1.我的家人2.完美伴侣
守护天使
overshadowing：
intelligent eyes--The first paragraph describes how a dog saves my child, reflecting the word 'intelligent';
2.The dog saved my child, and I am grateful - unwilling to abandon - to stay;
3. I temporarily sold my house, but the dog's protection and companionship restored my confidence in life;
4.The melting of snow has symbolic meaning, which can be extended to various experiences in my life. With this event and the change in my mindset, it will also be melt in our heart
故事梗概：
I have lost my job and plan to sell my house, and the cute Great Dane is also preparing to abandon her because she can't afford it. Waiting for the agent to bring the buyer to see the house that day. Despite being sad, there is still a place where things are being done. In a moment, I heard Great Dane barking and running back and forth in front of the moving glass door, staring straight at the pool outside. I ran over quickly and found that my son Forrest was missing. I rushed out in a hurry.
创设续写情节
创设续写根据六要素和自己的想象，借助文本资源，两段故事的情节，创设画面要有动作、情绪、心理、环境等描写。
Paragraph 1:[开端]布丽告特跳进了游泳池。[故事发展1布丽专特跳勇敢地向“我”儿子游去->“我”也立刻跳进水里一“我”拨打了911，把儿子送到了医院治疗。
Paragraph 2:[高潮]儿子没事出院了一布丽特高兴地在家门外等待。[结局1布丽告特-一直陪伴着儿子一决心要让布丽吉特永远和“我”们在--起。[感悟1人与动物的和谈相处。
佳句翻译练习：
我感觉到了什么，低头一看，却发现一只美丽的大丹犬坐在那里，用一双聪明的大眼睛抬头看着我。(only to do...出乎意料的结果)
_________________________________________________________
她不可能自己按门铃。(There was no way that...相当于 It was impossible that...)
__________________________________________________________
参考范文一，
There I was surprised to see Brigitte, who was terrified of water, dive into the pool. Breathless and astonished, I watched Brigitte mustering her courage to swim towards my son, who was struggling desperately in the icy water. Almost meanwhile, I sprang into action. With every powerful stroke，I got close to where Forrest was floating. Fortunately, he was about to sink when I grabbed him by the arm and dragged him to the shallow end of the pool, with Brigitte paddling alongside, concern obvious in her big and intelligent eyes. The moment I got my boy out, our beloved dog bounced around him, constantly licking his pale face as if to warm him. Voice trembling, I called 911 and soon we were rushed to the nearest hospital. Every second counted！
Finally, the doctor said Forrest was all right and could be released from hospital. At this, I heaved a sigh of relief. On arriving home, our dog Brigitte leaped high up to give us warm and wet kisses, wagging her tail cheerfully. Looking directly into her eyes with gratitude and a bit of guilt, I scooped her up and held her close to my chest, unwilling to let her go for a single minute. It was then that I suddenly became aware that life sometimes can be cruel and miserable, but there was always someone or something guiding you, protecting you, and accompanying you with unconditional love and loyalty. Our dog was just our guardian angel, shattering my despair about losing our home and guiding us out of trouble. How could I leave her？
参考范文二
There I was surprised to see Brigitte, who was terrified of water, dive into the pool. An alarm screaming in my mind, I followed Brigitte to the pool to see Forrest struggling in the water. On seeing it, my mind turned blank and my feet were rooted to the ground, unable to move an inch. When I came to myself, I found Brigitte bite Forrest’s collar tightly and swim quickly toward me. Cold as it was, it never loosened but continued swimming. The moment it reached the ground, I ran forward and hugged Forrest tightly, who now cried bitterly from the shock. She was wet from head to toe and I, without hesitation, sent her to the hospital, followed by Brigitte.
Finally, the doctor said Forrest was all right and could be released from hospital. How grateful I was when I heard that. If anything happened to her, I must be in hell now. When Brigitte and I saw my daughter, it stood on its hinder leg instantly, licked her enthusiastically and wailed its tailor wildly, while Forrest giggled loudly and kissed it back. I hugged it, feeling guilty. How could I abandon such a loyal and kind family member.! She was the guardian angel of my family. That day, I took Brigitte back home and made my mind that no matter how poor we were, we would stick together and never part. The difficult dark time would pass eventually and the bond among family members persisted forever.
参考范文三
There I was surprised to see Brigitte, who was terrified of water, dive into the pool. This was utterly unusual, as Brigitte had always shied away from water. Then in my astonishment, it swam to the center of the pool and began biting something hard. It didn’t take me long to realize Forrest was floating, with her face down. In a state of sheer panic, I pulled Forrest out of the water and began administering CPR on her. Brigitte, still vigilant, stood by, her eyes filled with concern. Soon the ambulance arrived and rushed Forrest to hospital. I and Brigitte stood outside, waiting anxiously.
Finally, the doctor said Forrest was all right and could be released from hospital. Fortunately, he had a narrow escape thanks to Brigitte’s incredible instincts and bravery. From that day on, Brigitte became an even closer part of our family. She had not only saved my son’s life but also had provided us with an irreplaceable source of love and support during the toughest of times. She truly was our four-legged guardian angel, and her presence brought a glimmer of hope to our otherwise challenging journey.
A Four-legged Guardian Angel
Snow had just melted off the ground that April day at our house in Regina Beach, Saskatchewan. I had just cleaned up the pool in preparation for selling the house. The year before, I had lost my job with the provincial government, and now our financial situation was grim. In despair, I had finally put the home on the market, and a real estate agent was due to show up later that day. Even worse, I would have to give up my beloved Great Dane (大丹犬), Brigitte, because I could no longer afford the cost of feeding it. The thought of losing the dog and our beautiful home was almost more than I could bear.
Deep in despair, I sat typing up resumes and cover letters. Out of the corner of my eye I could see my thirteen-month-old son, Forrest, as he lay on the carpet, playing near our big, gentle nanny-dog, Brigitte. It seemed as if Brigitte was always meant to be in this family and she turned out to be a perfect companion.
Brigitte came to our house on Christmas eve when the doorbell rang and I was sure some of my Christmas packages had arrived. I ran to the door and swung it open, but no one was there. I sensed something and looked down, only to find a beautiful Great Dane sitting there, looking up at me with big, intelligent eyes. There was no way that she could have rung the doorbell by herself, was there Perhaps, someone had found the puppy somewhere and left her there, and then rang the doorbell and ran away. They accurately guessed I would welcome an additional family member and take care of her.
Thinking of these, I couldn’t help heaving a sigh and went straight back to work. However, I hadn’t typed more than two sentences when Brigitte began barking furiously and running back and forth to the sliding glass door overlooking our pool.
I raced to see what was happening and noticed that the sliding door was slightly open. Suddenly, I realized Forrest was nowhere to be seen. In panic, I opened the door and ran outside.
注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
There I was surprised to see Brigitte, who was terrified of water, dive into the pool.
Finally, the doctor said Forrest was all right and could be released from hospital.
对于Brigitte的定位：
1.我的家人2.完美伴侣
守护天使
overshadowing：
intelligent eyes--The first paragraph describes how a dog saves my child, reflecting the word 'intelligent';
2.The dog saved my child, and I am grateful - unwilling to abandon - to stay;
3. I temporarily sold my house, but the dog's protection and companionship restored my confidence in life;
4.The melting of snow has symbolic meaning, which can be extended to various experiences in my life. With this event and the change in my mindset, it will also be melt in our heart
故事梗概：
I have lost my job and plan to sell my house, and the cute Great Dane is also preparing to abandon her because she can't afford it. Waiting for the agent to bring the buyer to see the house that day. Despite being sad, there is still a place where things are being done. In a moment, I heard Great Dane barking and running back and forth in front of the moving glass door, staring straight at the pool outside. I ran over quickly and found that my son Forrest was missing. I rushed out in a hurry.
创设续写情节
创设续写根据六要素和自己的想象，借助文本资源，两段故事的情节，创设画面要有动作、情绪、心理、环境等描写。
Paragraph 1:[开端]布丽告特跳进了游泳池。[故事发展1布丽专特跳勇敢地向“我”儿子游去->“我”也立刻跳进水里一“我”拨打了911，把儿子送到了医院治疗。
Paragraph 2:[高潮]儿子没事出院了一布丽特高兴地在家门外等待。[结局1布丽告特-一直陪伴着儿子一决心要让布丽吉特永远和“我”们在--起。[感悟1人与动物的和谈相处。
佳句翻译练习：
我感觉到了什么，低头一看，却发现一只美丽的大丹犬坐在那里，用一双聪明的大眼睛抬头看着我。(only to do...出乎意料的结果)
_________________________________________________________
她不可能自己按门铃。(There was no way that...相当于 It was impossible that...)
__________________________________________________________
参考范文一，
There I was surprised to see Brigitte, who was terrified of water, dive into the pool. Breathless and astonished, I watched Brigitte mustering her courage to swim towards my son, who was struggling desperately in the icy water. Almost meanwhile, I sprang into action. With every powerful stroke，I got close to where Forrest was floating. Fortunately, he was about to sink when I grabbed him by the arm and dragged him to the shallow end of the pool, with Brigitte paddling alongside, concern obvious in her big and intelligent eyes. The moment I got my boy out, our beloved dog bounced around him, constantly licking his pale face as if to warm him. Voice trembling, I called 911 and soon we were rushed to the nearest hospital. Every second counted！
Finally, the doctor said Forrest was all right and could be released from hospital. At this, I heaved a sigh of relief. On arriving home, our dog Brigitte leaped high up to give us warm and wet kisses, wagging her tail cheerfully. Looking directly into her eyes with gratitude and a bit of guilt, I scooped her up and held her close to my chest, unwilling to let her go for a single minute. It was then that I suddenly became aware that life sometimes can be cruel and miserable, but there was always someone or something guiding you, protecting you, and accompanying you with unconditional love and loyalty. Our dog was just our guardian angel, shattering my despair about losing our home and guiding us out of trouble. How could I leave her？
参考范文二
There I was surprised to see Brigitte, who was terrified of water, dive into the pool. An alarm screaming in my mind, I followed Brigitte to the pool to see Forrest struggling in the water. On seeing it, my mind turned blank and my feet were rooted to the ground, unable to move an inch. When I came to myself, I found Brigitte bite Forrest’s collar tightly and swim quickly toward me. Cold as it was, it never loosened but continued swimming. The moment it reached the ground, I ran forward and hugged Forrest tightly, who now cried bitterly from the shock. She was wet from head to toe and I, without hesitation, sent her to the hospital, followed by Brigitte.
Finally, the doctor said Forrest was all right and could be released from hospital. How grateful I was when I heard that. If anything happened to her, I must be in hell now. When Brigitte and I saw my daughter, it stood on its hinder leg instantly, licked her enthusiastically and wailed its tailor wildly, while Forrest giggled loudly and kissed it back. I hugged it, feeling guilty. How could I abandon such a loyal and kind family member.! She was the guardian angel of my family. That day, I took Brigitte back home and made my mind that no matter how poor we were, we would stick together and never part. The difficult dark time would pass eventually and the bond among family members persisted forever.
参考范文三
There I was surprised to see Brigitte, who was terrified of water, dive into the pool. This was utterly unusual, as Brigitte had always shied away from water. Then in my astonishment, it swam to the center of the pool and began biting something hard. It didn’t take me long to realize Forrest was floating, with her face down. In a state of sheer panic, I pulled Forrest out of the water and began administering CPR on her. Brigitte, still vigilant, stood by, her eyes filled with concern. Soon the ambulance arrived and rushed Forrest to hospital. I and Brigitte stood outside, waiting anxiously.
Finally, the doctor said Forrest was all right and could be released from hospital. Fortunately, he had a narrow escape thanks to Brigitte’s incredible instincts and bravery. From that day on, Brigitte became an even closer part of our family. She had not only saved my son’s life but also had provided us with an irreplaceable source of love and support during the toughest of times. She truly was our four-legged guardian angel, and her presence brought a glimmer of hope to our otherwise challenging journey.